Don't forget XigbarxSquall (it was actually pretty amusing!) and MarluxiaxAerith. Well in my opinion, Xaldin is the sort of person that hangs around the library or any other location that is quiet. Xigbar (imo) is someone who wanders around a lot, because a place without Xigbar is a SAD, DEPRIVED PLACE (lol). And when they interact they have some sort rivalry-thing going (well friendly, but sometimes-pushing-it sort of thing), at least in my opinion. So uhhh, getting any ideas yet? Off-Topic: Do any of you have a y!gallery account? o_O
Well what genre is it? It's rather broad o_O. Depends on how its written.... but LuxordxXigbar could work....they're both pretty collected, but they're two different aspects of being calm, Xigbar = Laid-Back/Arrogant, Luxord = Refined/(Supposively) sophisticated.... I think it was originally an element pairing (Time and Space). It could work, just depends on the writer. XD
*This is actually a general statement that could apply to the past, present, and if it doesn't change, the future as well. Politics are generally a sticky subject, please try to be rational when making your statements and if possible or applicable, quote a reliable source before criticising someone or something. As many times when the running of a country is going sour...specifically here in America, everyone seems to be blaming the president, as if it is his sole responsiblity, and superficially a majority would be correct. However, we have a little thing called the checks and balances (aka the Seperation of Powers) system, in which there are THREE BRANCHES. Skipping general history/social science information, why is it that in generally grim situations, the president gets the blunt of the blame? (whether or not it really is his fault is only addressing a THIRD of the problem) As stated earlier, the Presidential (Executive) powers are technically, only a third of the political system, one third is Congress (Legislative) and the final third is the Supreme Court (Judicial). Where the hell are they in all this when the metaphorical sh*t hits the fan? A majority of people seem to forget to share the deserved "fault" with the other two parts (majority) of why this country is even in a crisis. This isn't even taking into account the different parties either and how they deal with the problem- or lack thereof depending on your point of view. Anyway, what do you think about the fairness of the current polictical system? Please don't just give a one-lined statement, put some thought into it, after all, politics, like it or not are probably going to be what dictate your life as long as you live in a 'modern-day society'. Another thing to note is that all of these people in power, were at one point or another....voted in by the majority and scruntinized by a series of systems (you can scoff at it all you want but they still had to go through the same filtering system).
Yes please! <33
OH YES <3 <3 Actually if it's not too much can I put in a request too? Specifically for MarluxiaLuxord and/or ZexionSaix.....OH YES I HAVE SUCH STRANGE TASTES. So hard to find if it exists at all. 8D As for recommending.....there's the epic Stygian Solace. Has Sora/Riku and Cloud/Leon/??? to the side! And then there's Life in the Hollow Bastion Restoration Committee Which has Cloud/Leon and some side cracktastic pairings that are actually as awesome as they are funny. The other big ones have already been mentioned... I shortstory/drabbled some yaoi (ZexionDemyx and XemnasSaix) and am working on a giftfic with Vexen and RikuReplica (nothing creepy mind you!). But there are better ones out there, so I won't post those links here. *IGNORE THAT LINK DAMMIT* >8D
Thank you! I rather enjoy any feedback and it is a rare treat to receive something so detailed. Yes, I will admit that the first half is quite droll, but I'm probably not going to remove it- its unfortunately somewhat necessary. But I have no problems with refining it...only problem is how..... ....I'm a little confused...but I will take your words gladly....so thanks anyway! But really, you should give yourself more credit in terms of the value of your word. :]
So you agree that its all up to our interpretations? Since I'm just repeating myself a lot, and with even less supporting details as it goes on...*because of laziness* I feel idiotic for not noticing this sooner, but I will plead....THE NOMURA LOOPHOLE. He said in his interviews he wanted to leave it up to the fans to interpret , so let's just do that. There, everyone is happy. [Plus this came from the CREATOR, so you can't say that its NOT canon- the whole "up to the fans to interpret", its here on the site too in the interviews section. :\] Side-Note: I never said I didn't like either pairing, I only stated that the Sora/Riku ones were usually better written. And for what feels like the billionth time, I'm telling you people, I THINK the most canon "pairing" is Riku/Kairi/Sora with Sora being too dense to really figure it out anyway! :\ NOW LETS MOVE ON.
Genre: Romance Rating: At most T+ Pairing: ???? This is actually just a snippet from something I'm working on. In it's entire context, its based on the prompt 'Night'; however I think this is strong enough to stand on its own. (This is also to show the others what I've been working one while neglecting Marluxia's backstory.) [This can be found on ff.net under the same penname and the story titled "A Little Extra"] Any feedback, reactions or criticisms, lemme know! Enjoy! --------------------------------------- In their reclusive world that had abandoned the sun and moon, there was nothing to truly dictate night or day. In light of this, an instinctive hour system had been implemented based on the members that milled about in the main hall of the castle. Early morning is when Lexaeus and Xaldin are typically the most notably active. Usually they talk with each other while they minutely spruce up the castle from the previous day's disorder. They are the first ones up because they systematically take turns breaking out the materials necessary for breakfast rather then relying on the Dusks or other Nobody Underlings. They consider a 'human touch' necessary when it comes to activities such as making food. Also because the Nobody Underlings for the most part do not possess opposable thumbs and it would be most unwise if things that lacked proper grip were left with sharp objects and a far from lucid thought process. The following phase is dubbed the in-between of early and late morning. The next group that emerges from their sleeping lairs are Xigbar, Demyx and Zexion. Xigbar and Demyx converse with each other loudly enough to give a fanatic stadium decent competition. Amidst this, Zexion pretends to devote his attention to nursing a muffin or piece of cold toast for breakfast. Despite his outer facade of indifference, he actually takes a twisted interest in their capricious chatter. No matter how ridiculous he usually tries to pass off their random topics, he finds the two extroverts entertaining. By late morning, everyone has more or less been woken up. The only difference is where their presences are in the main hall. The late morning group consists predictably of Axel toting along a grumpy and groggy Roxas. They usually settle into playing some sort of trivial game for the majority of the day. Demyx is also present during this, sometimes watching Axel and Roxas bicker over their table games of wars or trying to occupy his compulsively artistic self. Every once in a while, Demyx disappears from the main hall during the late morning, no one typically knows where he goes until some time later- usually with an extremely irate Vexen in tow. However, despite the others’ half-baked concern, it’s a magic trick of his that they prefer not to know. Around the vague noontime Xemnas finally finds reasonable excuse to come out of his fortified study. He prowls around the main hall and assigns orders to the other twelve from noon until the afternoon. Zexion can intermittently be found talking with Lexaeus as well as Luxord over statistics and the odd conundrum from the worlds they explore. Once more, Vexen resurfaces from his lab for a mental break and talks with usually Zexion, Lexaeus, Luxord and ruefully, Xemnas himself. At the afternoon, Axel and Roxas are just about closing their games which inevitably end in an 'ongoing draw' as Axel likes to perpetuate. The entire Organization in fact gathers in the main hall at the practiced prospect of dinner. Usually Demyx or Xigbar do the honors of kindly screaming at the top of their lungs to cajole the group into the main hall as they wait for supper like good little children. On a daily basis two members draw straws for who makes dinner for that particular day. Often times, the three who are in charge of cooking is some combination of Saïx, Vexen and Xaldin- coincidentally the three who have the best cooking skills in terms of dinner cuisine. Not that anyone complains about this unless Vexen is in a particularly a foul mood from Demyx being too blunderingly intrusive in his labs. After dinner is completely done it is what would most accurately be deemed sunset. The dishes and mundane cleanup is left to the Dusks and the other Nobody Underlings. Saïx drifts off from the dining room to hang around in the previously deserted main hall. He then embarks on his favorite pastime, staring wordlessly out of the window, a reference text in his hand and an expression rivaling a child wondering where St. Nick has gone on Christmas. During this time is when Marluxia for once, stays in the main hall long enough to have a reasonable discussion with Luxord until Larxene decides to ruthlessly chip in her two cents. The elder members surprisingly are the ones that begin the procession back to their own rooms. Xaldin and Lexaeus are the first and foremost abiders of 'early to bed and early to rise'. Xemnas is also prompt in his departure, but no one knows when or if he even sleeps in his study given his rather infamous bouts of wandering through the castle at ungodly hours and moments. Vexen has an erratic sleep schedule but he always scurries back to his room (which is really the lab), roughly half an hour after dinner ends. Zexion hovers around to eavesdrop on the others before yawning loudly and stalking back to his room. Almost uncharacteristically, Xigbar is the one that plays the part of the responsible chaperon and ushers many of the younger members back to their rooms. Specifically Axel, Demyx, Luxord, Marluxia and Roxas, and in a manner that gives new meaning to 'human endangerment'. He leaves Saïx and Larxene alone because of the pet-like favoritism Xemnas has for the berserker and for the bitter rivalry Xigbar has with the prankster. Larxene merely continues to sit in the main hall, lounging in one of the many couches, a book caressed in her lap. She's engrossed in her book and doesn't offer a word to any of the others regardless of the manner in how they are filtered out one by one. An hour mirthlessly rolls by and the hall is soaked with the veil of an utterly dead void save for her and Saïx by the window. She remains frozen like a perfect statue only breaking the illusion when she has to turn a page. Larxene continues to gravely read and plot her slow acts of vengeance like any properly evil young lady up until Saïx pads off to sleep. A nonexistent bell tolls a resonating twelve times, and true nighttime falls upon their caged off world. It is during this time when not even the Dusks or Creepers are stirring that she indulges in what she considers her darkest vice. Today's particular book is actually one that she stole from Zexion's quarters. One that ironically talks about a very proper man who maintains a scandalous double life. His foremost persona plays by starched rules and the other epitomizes contrasting brutality and selfishness. She scoffs at reading the last page of the book and how Dr. Jekyll met his own experimental end. Larxene shuts the book with a cold snap. The idea that the book is somewhat reflective of her own situation mildly irks her, but the self-comforting devil in her reminds her that bookworm Zexion's choices in reading material aren't the best. She stretches and lets out an unrestrained yawn as best she can in her current position. She has been sitting sideways so that her boot heels hang over the chair's arm. In flexing she sends a series of tired and chilling tingles through her joints and she ends up dropping the book over the edge of the chair. It claps pathetically to the floor, but she doesn't care much for a book that would be better categorized as a paperweight in her opinion. Larxene eases back into her odd seating on her comfy throne. Blearily she looks back at the eternally boring interior of the main hall that is even more lifeless now that she is all alone and without an obscure distraction. Reflexively she wants to check her wrist for the time despite how she knows she has no watch. None of them do, not even Luxord who is supposed to be the master of the element. So instead she glares angrily at the black of her glove to pass her idleness. As if on cue the patter of a set of boots break the crisp silence. She sluggishly gets out of her seat and carefully dusts the wrinkles off her cloak. As expected, a familiar black-hooded stranger is approaching her with even boot claps. He stops before her and bows lowly. One hand is tucked under where he bends at the waist and the other gloved hand is held open to accept hers. He never says anything, but she knows what he is asking for. Every time she always takes his hand and they begin their unreal ritual of practiced foot steps to an imaginary but synchronized melody. They twirl around fluidly through the entire body of the main hall. Boots lightly tap and clack over the sheenless surface of a floor pretending to play the part of a ballroom. His hand holding hers, its mate cupping the perfect small of her leather clad back. While they spin she unbars the locks that hold back her only true smile that had been buried since she'd lost her heart. It is the one true smile of happiness and unadulterated joy whose sanctity she holds on the same level as her pride. They could almost be called as inviting as angels but they shared nothing in common with the Romantic fairytale of a concept. They continue to bob and weave their dance mimicking ravens and other graces associated with the advocates of gloom. Upon the last reverberating note of their invisible orchestra, they slow to a stop. The silent music dies off, but they still are within each other's physical duet of an embrace. Larxene already knows the part that always follows after the conclusion of their dance. It’s the event that exhilarates her yet she despises and dreads. The conclusion of their custom ends with what should be a kiss, but rather he flees from her into the caressing chills of darkness. Today she ponders a bitter question that crosses her mind as they stand there in each other's arms silently. 'Will he run away again?' The hiss of leather acts as a preamble for him to retreat. She grasps the sleeve of his jacket with the tightest ferocity. Larxene glowers at him, eyes narrowing into a sharply accusing glare. "Coward..." she forces out in an abrupt breath. The lip of his hood bobs back as if her words had struck him. One of her hands sweeps out from its perch and latches onto the silver drawstrings of his hood. He pulls back but they swiftly reach their limit and he's shoved into an inescapable corner of his own garments. She forcefully drags him down and meets his lips in a desperate gnash of entanglement. She can taste nothing from him, only the sensation of their mouths pressing agonizingly together. He stops moving as the finality of their broken taboo sinks into his reality. Slowly Larxene draws away from him and half glowers at him with the silent question of 'Now will you tell me who you are?' Much to her memory of frustration, he takes small back steps from her and towards the door. Her brows draw together, an infuriated growl escapes from her throat. He doesn't pick up the pace, but he continues his backwards tread. A familiar crackle and metal weight forms into her hand. She throws it at him and he narrowly dodges. Her phantom has his hand held open to the side as if to call forth his own weapon to the battle in retaliation. The darkness dances on his hands, but he appears to will it back away. She glares bitterly at him and the slightly disheveled hood that isn't perfecting its job at concealing his identity. She can see something signature peeking out from under the shadow of his cloth helm. "Blue eyes eh?" She curses at him from across the stagnant room. He merely tugs the hood back down and bows apathetically. "Still won't talk?" Her knives assemble blindingly into her hands and she lunges forward at her accused. Larxene lets out a yell and slashes savagely at him. Her knives and hands pass through nothing. Oily wisps of ether trail along her arms and a light perfume of unforgiving sin wafts past her. She frowns once more. Him. The blonde glares at the floor until it begins to bleed in focus. She stows her weapons back into the void. 'What a waste of time!' She doesn't spend away more precious moments in the defiled hall, She travels back to her room, the journey is a blur. She throws herself to the bed and for a while she stares at the luminescent ceiling. Larxene holds up her splayed hand to the opposing nature of the room. 'Why him of all people?' It isn't until the day restarts again that she is back to her unforgiving self. The course of the hours run through their routine of morning, noon and sunset. She sees her target talking with his usual companions. She slips easily back into the ingrained pattern of the day and walks over to him. The gambler with superficial airs is deep in his own babbling by the time she reaches him, "-but Marly, you simply must try Bordeaux's Rose Wine! It is the very elixir of the gods-!" The brunette scoffs in his usually impassive manner, "Is that before or after you waste the entire bottle?" He pauses and stiffens his previously lax posture at noticing her. He grins contemptuously at her presence, "How pleasant of you to join us miss sunshine." Larxene flashes an arrogant smirk at him and traces suggestive fingertips around the side of his face. His eyes widen and he follows her digits out of the corner of his eyes, but he doesn't react otherwise. Luxord stares in a way that would appear to be gawking on any less of a refined person at seeing the cryptic exchange between the two. The blonde turns from him in a way only a weightless feather can upon water. As she walks away, Luxord's inquisitions can already be heard echoing after the event. "What the bloody hell was that all about? Marly are there some cardinal relationships roughing about that I was left unaware of? Marly??" Unlike the countless days before, Larxene doesn't wait in the hall for night to fall. Instead she obediently returns to her room to sleep. She smiles conflictingly to herself as her eyes slide shut for her danceless dreams. 'It was worth it, that look on your face...'
Well La Sofa you can go back and re-read all of the other points myself and others have pointed out....or I can just make you a tiny list. 1. KH1: he forsakes Kairi on the island to look for Riku whom he doesn't even know is still there, EVEN AFTER ALL OF THE STUFF RIKU PULLED IN KH1 2. He doesn't even believe in the power of the papou, so that means the picture should have less meaning. (You SoKai'ers seem to harp about this one the most) Big whoop, according to the rocks he also drew chocobos and other scribbles. Apparently when you draw a picture this is the same as getting your wedding vows. (I will also add that they first STARTED the picture when they were little children!) 3. Even when they get back on the island, rather then giving her the papou he just finishes the darn picture. (WTF, if he loves her he'll give her the freaking fruit, even DISNEY allows for a little peck on the cheek, or a symbol of love!) 4. Kairi = Hug, Riku = CRY (by the way children, he doesn't even know its been an entire year until later!) (Also a point the SoRi'ers seem to harp about) 5. Throughout all of KH2, Sora is always asking everyone where the hell RIKU is. There, at least 5 points that I was willing to retype, again. :\ *Nomura could have easily make Riku a chick....easily. :\
And please don't dramatize, I don't hate you (I never said it, nor implied this) for your standpoint unless you're purposely trying to patronize me in the most degrative way possible. According to cutsecenes they also started it when then were 8 (really little kids) or something- you know back when they didn't know "I can only be with one person for eternity". But it is only ONE EVENT. Unless he proposes to her right there (he only had a billion chances to do it to), its a terribly small event for "proof". It's only a picture you know, and actions speak louder then pictures. Now if he had thrown her the Papou, I would say "well that's set in stone" but he didn't. And yet he supposively doesn't even "believe in the papou", BUT YET HE STILL DID THE PICTURE. Oh Sora you paradox. :\ Besides, my official standpoint on all this is "whichever one is pulled off better". So far the ratio of WELL-EXECUTED PAIRINGS leans in favor of the Sora/Riku one, that and I have already said all my other supporting points already, but I'm sticking with this as my main one.
Tells me you're rather selective of certain scenes as well as neglectful of information and some logic. 1. Kairi has been captured once before (had her heart stolen no less), and at hearing a VILLIAN (who is EVIL) say "yes we have her" why wouldn't he be alarmed? You don't have to love someone in order to want to save them. :\ 2. He saw Riku (or at least he thought he saw him) running around in the Land of Dragons (happens before the scene with Kairi being mentioned), and he KNOWS Riku isn't in any immediate danger....nor is Riku ever mentioned as being captured. So how would asking an Organization member to take him to Riku HELP HIM? PST, he actually asked the King and various allies from various worlds!!! 3. Hey, do you remember the ending from KH1? Sure Sora could have stayed with Kairi and completely given up on Riku- but he could have ALSO BROUGHT HER WITH HIM. But he didn't. Hell, I'm fairly certain that he continued to wander around for the SOLE purpose of FINDING RIKU. Here's the brief solution that should satisfy most people: THEY'RE ALL BEST FRIENDS FOREVER. *gasp*
Meh lets just do all of them! Xemnas: Desperate (for an identity), confused, angry, spiteful and misled Xigbar: Loyal, braggart, know-it-all, mocking and experienced (he moves around a lot and shoots a lot, breaks out the big guns when necessary, etc.) Xaldin: Stern, drastic (come on, SIX LANCES he must REALLY WANT TO STAB SOMETHING) and old-fashioned ("no one can love a beast") Vexen: Afraid, objective, thirsts for knowledge, and jaded Lexaeus: Patient, actions > words, level-headed and merciless Zexion: Two-faced, cooly arrogant, tries to appease the few he respects for approval (am I the only one who saw this?!) and callous Saix: Dogmatic, slightly insane/obessesive, has....strange fixations and is probably a sociopath Axel: Capricious, self-serving, self-sacrificing, very selective of his friends and sentimental Demyx: In denial, pacifist, emotional, light-hearted and...pouty (I DUNNO) Luxord: Superficial, compulsive, caustic, has a dictionary probably stowed in his cloak somewhere and a british accent Marluxia: Tyrannical, power-hungry, greedy, threatening, conniving and deceptive(dude for a guy who is supposed to use flowers, his attacks sure look a lot more like DARKNESS TEAR YOU TO PIECES BWAHAHAHAHA *scythe scythe*) Larxene: Contemptuous, cheerful, sniping, flirty, spoiled and forceful Roxas: lost, used, quiet and has bad luck.
Roxas: LEAVE ME ALONE I don't have your nose!
Ah thanks! Can't wait to see it as well. Thank you very much! Check back at the front for the link to the previous animation....Currently working on a Larxene and Marluxia one. :] I'm sure she can...she's magical o_o
Certainly! Mind if I see it when its done?
He'll take her to the Castle, put her in a pie and EAT HER. o_O It only took 3 frames. o_o Thank you by the way! And yes there will be a Larxene one, she's sharing it with Marluxia. Also if you liked the animation you can look around for the Vexen and Axel one here in the forums. :]
really? I thought Saix was one of the most parodied people. o_o But thank you!
I don't know? Wait I have magic powers? *tries to zap something* 8D Why yes she is! XD Saix is happy because his idea of trick-or-treating involves stealing people. 8D
*assumes you mean eighty* I'll be lucky if I can even see the page properly by then!
I'd try to offer help, but I'm not really a good example. c___c To the future!