Roxas's days in the Organization (Chapter Four) Ok, now let’s see what Xemnas has in store for the two people that drove Saix berserk. This chapter is longer than the previous ones. Remember, PLEASE COMMENT AT THE END, GOOD AND THE BAD Here's the rest of my story in case ya missed it Chapter one http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9948 Chapter Two http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=10009 Chapter Three http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=10107 ________________________________________________________ Chapter 4 Day 3 *Right after Xemnas found out Axel and Demyx did it* ~Demyx’s Bedroom~ “AXEL!!! DEMYX!!!†Axel and Demyx were still laughing hysterically. Roxas giggled a bit. The sound of heavy footsteps stomping up the stairs was heard. Demyx perked his head up with the look of horror in his eyes. Axel was lying on the ground, his arms sprawled out. The door was flung open with an extremely mad looking Xemnas standing in the doorway. His eyes flashed dangerously, and his fists were clenched tightly. He slowly raised his arm, his index finger extended towards them. “You…†He stomped forward and grabbed Demyx’s hair and yanked him up off the ground. He threw him into Roxas and then bent down to grab Axel’s hair. He wrenched him off of the ground and threw him into Demyx. Xemnas opened his mouth to speak with his finger still pointing at them. Nothing came out. Demyx’s face was twisted in horror while Axel was staying calm and rubbing the spot on his head where his hair was just pulled. “Go downstairs now! The three of you!†Was all the Superior could get out. The three of them walked downstairs into the dinning room. Saix was sitting in the right corner of the room being fanned with a paper plate by Luxord. His face was sweaty and his eyes were rolling around. The long dinning room table was broken entirely in half in the middle, and there were many holes in the wall. Marluxia had a big slash running down his head, blood pouring out of it. Zexion was leaning over him, soaking up blood with a towel. Upon seeing this havoc, Axel snickered, Demyx gasped, and Roxas stood there silently. Xaldin turned around and saw them. He marched over to them and grabbed Axel’s and Demyx’s collars, lifting the smaller Demyx into the air. Roxas turned around to see Xemnas walking into the dinning room rubbing his forehead. “What made you think that you could do this to him?!†Xaldin hollered in their faces. Axel still remained calm, but Demyx was shaking. “Xaldin, throw them into the meeting room. I’ll deal with them there.†Xemnas said, popping an Advil into his mouth and swallowing it with water. Xaldin pushed the two forward and they began to walk into the meeting room. Roxas followed. Down the hallway Axel began to laugh. Demyx looked at him crazily. “Did you see Saix? Wow, I didn’t think he’d go THAT berserk after eating a little sugar. The dinning room table was cut in HALF!!! In HALF!!!†Axel laughed some more. Demyx hit his arm. “Did you see Marluxia?! He could have gotten really hurt!†Axel shrugged it off. “Nobodies can’t feel pain! He’ll be fine!†Roxas looked at the ground. They walked into the all white meeting room and warped to their chairs, Roxas now sitting in his newly made chair for the first time. Xemnas appeared on the highest chair in the room. He moved his hair back. “I’m not giving you a lecture today. You know what you did wrong. As for your punishment…†He sighed. Axel sighed. Demyx sighed. Roxas stared. “We’ll all take care of the dinning room, so don’t worry about that. Your punishment is having to clean the ENTIRE castle, along with…†He smiled an evil Xemnas smile. “Doâ€- he began, “NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!†Demyx yelled on top of his lungs, holding his head in horror. Axel shook his head smiling. Xemnas gave him a what-are-you-stupid kind of look. “Doing everyone’s laundry, cooking every meal, taking out the garbage every day, cleaning the dishes, and all that other good stuff.†They all sighed while Xemnas smiled. “In addition, Axel and Demyx you cannot use your elements to help you with anything. AND, Demyx, you can’t play your sitar for an entire week. Axel you can’t play your vedio games for a week either.†Demyx slumped down in his seat. “That’s not fair! We didn’t do anything that bad!†Axel yelled at his boss, lunging forward in his chair. Xemnas smirked. “I don’t care. I’m just that evil.†“You can’t take away our stuff! Why is Roxas getting blamed? He didn’t do anything either!†Axel yelled back. Xemnas sighed. “Axel, you really need to learn how to control yourself. Your not one to tell me what I can and cannot do, and as long as you sleep until the roof of this castle and wear the coat of this organization, you will do what I say.†He said, ignoring the comment made about Roxas. Axel was silent and leaned back in his chair. Roxas could tell that he was hurting inside. Xemnas began again. “This is not the first time you’ve pulled a trick on another member. It will be your last.†Xemnas’s golden eyes looked at Axel, who sat in his chair with his arms crossed and facing away from the Superior. “You will do everything I just mentioned for a week straight.†He warped off of his chair and started to walk down the hall. Demyx sobbed quietly to himself and got off of his chair. Axel clenched his fist and banged it down onto the arm of his seat before jumping off and landing cat-like on the ground. Roxas followed him, safely opening a Corridor of Darkness to get on the ground. He walked up to Axel. “You ok?†He asked him. Axel shook his head. “No, I’m not ok. I hate being bossed around like his little lackey! All I was trying to do was get some revenge for Demyx, and he ended up in trouble.†He hammered his arm into the wall next to him, making a loud thump. Roxas looked at the floor. They both walked down the hallway, passing the dinning room where only Luxord stood, overlooking the damage done. They walked up the stairs and into Axel’s bedroom. Roxas didn’t get to take a good look at Demyx’s bedroom early, since he was so rapped up in everything going on. Axel’s bedroom was almost completely different than his own. Roxas supposed everything in the bedroom started off being white, but now the furniture in his room was an ashy gray. The edges of his bedspread were singed, as with some parts of the carpet. What used to be his dresser was now a mound of ash, sitting in a pathetic heap next to piles of organization robes. The curtains covering his window were covered in soot, and Roxas could even make out fingerprints in the soot on them. Roxas guessed that Axel’s hot temper cause him to take it out on things such as his furniture. He then noticed how Axel didn’t associate with many of the people in this organization. If he did, it wasn’t friendly. Axel sat on his bed and buried his face in his hands. Roxas continued to look around. He heard Axel muttered to himself, “I hate this place.†“If you hate everyone so much, and if you dislike this place then why don’t you just leave?†Roxas said at him, quite annoyed with how the way he was acting. Axel looked up at him, a mean look on his face. “I wouldn’t have anywhere to go.†He said before looking to the side. Roxas bit his lip and walked out. Part of his sympathy went to Axel, the other part to himself. They were both nobodies, therefore they were rejects everywhere. Once in his room, he looked at the clock on his nightstand. It was 1:00 P.M., way too early for him to go to sleep. He spent the rest of the day in his bedroom, either staring at the ceiling and thinking, or reading. Day 4 ~What was left of the Dinning room~ Saix had calmed down and was now gazing at the remains of the dinning room. He shook his head silently. Lexaeus was picking up the pieces of the dinning room table and hauling them away outside with Xaldin helping him. Today they planned to fix the room up. When Roxas walked into the room still tired, he looked around for Axel to see if he was feeling any better. He wasn’t there. He did spot Demyx though, huddled in a corner alone. He didn’t walk over to him, due to the fact that Xemnas blocked his path. “About what I said yesterday, you too must do all the chores that the other two must do. I really can’t take anything away from you yet. I don’t know for sure if you were in the scheme to begin with, but you still followed their lead, thus involving you in the predicament.†Roxas nodded. Xemnas walked away to go and talk to Xigbar. Roxas went over to Demyx. He looked hurt. Upon seeing Roxas, he smiled weakly and then looked down at his feet. “Sorry to get you in trouble, too.†He said to him. Roxas shrugged. “Don’t worry about it. At least we got the revenge we wanted. Hey, uhm, have you seen Axel?†Demyx looked up and around. He shook his head and frowned. Roxas sighed. As he was beginning to walk away, Demyx grabbed his shoulder. “Oh, that’s right, he went off with Zexion to go and get things to fix the dinning room walls with. He left a while ago, and should be back any moment now.†“K, thanks†Roxas said, sitting next to Demyx. He watched everyone haul the rubble out until Axel returned. Finally, a Corridor of Darkness appeared in the center of the room and Axel and a man with grayish-bluish hair appeared (whom Roxas assumed was Zexion). Axel was carrying a few long pieces of wood and Zexion had a few small shovel-looking things along with some plaster molding. Everyone (Except for Marluxia cause he wasn’t there) grabbed one of those flat-headed-shovel-looking-thingys (*no idea what they are called =P*). Luxord poured the plaster molding into the smaller dents in the wall. A few people began to smooth it out and make it perfect with the wall. For the big holes in the walls, Axel and Lexaeus had to reconstruct the wall over again with new wood. They then put the plaster over it and smoothed it out. A few other members painted over the plaster. By the time the entire dinning room was finished and new furniture was put in, it was 5:00. Most people retired to their rooms or walked around the castle. Axel and Roxas warped to Twilight Town where Axel fetched some sea salt ice cream and they sat on top of the station tower together. Everything was silent until Roxas spoke up. “I guess Xemnas let us get off easy today. He didn’t make us do any chores.†“Yeah, but don’t be so sure. He’ll be on us tomorrow about it.†Axel said. “What do you have against him?†Axel sighed and cocked his head to the side. “He never liked me. He was never nice to me, I mean, not that he’s supposed to be. I don’t have anything against him. I just don’t like him.†“Why don’t you like anyone else?†Roxas said, looking at him. Axel looked at the horizon, clearly deep in thought. “The rest of the organization is just cut-and-dry. You can’t sit down and have a conversation with any of them like I can with you. They don’t think past the idea that they can actually think on their own.†He smiled to himself, finally able to get that nagging feeling off of his back. He not only has someone to talk to, but someone that would listen. “For them, and I guess the rest of us, living without a heart and a purpose is just too much to handle. It starts to overwhelm us, making them believe that it’s the only thing that they really can believe.†He added. Roxas nodded. “I don’t want to sound cheesy, but things have really changed since I met you.†Roxas looked at him, confused. “Really? How is that?†Axel smirked, a bit errassed. “I can’t feel emotion, but I do remember what it was like. You see, when I’m around you, I don’t remember hate or anger anymore. I remember something different,†he added. Roxas didn’t know what he meant. “What feeling is that?†“The feeling of having a friend.†_________________________________________________________________ Hopefully the end there didn't sound TOO gayish... :) :) REMEMBER, PLEASE COMMENT, GOOD AND BAD:) :)
I like the story, but you have alot of fragments as sentances that don't make sense. Watch out for those. I do like this story though. Very interesting :) :) :)
='( I was going to write a fanfic about something like this soon too ='( Oh well Yeah, you can use some work on making it a bit more clearer, and you had some grammar problems. I thought it was pretty good, but theres room for improvment. Read it over a few times before you post it to make sure that it sounds good. Good job though :) :) :)
I love this series!!! make a whole lot more!!! I thought that the KH-vids thing was funny and clever. Make a new one soon! :D :D :D
Ohhhh Yummy! I'm starting to hate this girl as much as Kairi is!!! She should kill her!!! She should murder her in her sleep!! >=D Anyway, good job so far. And there seems to be a little plotting against someone in here... >=)
Wow, I thought that that was really good. You really portraid Larxene's and Axel's personality very well and described everything amazingly. I liked it.
as soon as I found out that she was a girl around Roxas's age, I knew something was going to happen between the two!!! =) Once again, you pulled off another great story and I'll be right here waiting for the rest of the chapters.
I love this story, I waited so long for you to come out with the 6th chapter after I read the first one. =) Great work, and keep it up. Your writing style reminds me of my own ;) *P.S.* I like your new avatar ^_^ *
you stole my idea ='( I was going to write a story similar to this. :) But oh well, great minds think alike I guess... The story its self is good. You have some grammar problems and some sentances that don't make sense. Read your story over a few times outloud to yourself once your done writing it before you post it, that way if things don't sound right to you you can change them. Good work on this story though, and I'll defently read chapter 2. :D
It sounds really interesting, I think you should continue it. If you do, I'll be sure to read it. As for the title, I can't really help you there, I'm horrible at them. But yes, I do think you should continue this! :D :D :D
Awwww poor Demy ='( Great Story so far, I'll have to read the next ones :D
Whoa, that flash back was kinda... harsh. Man, I hear about parents killing their kids but that was just pure insanity... wow I love your stories of course too :D
I love Axel when he's drunk! hahahaha he's so funny!!! Great story too:D :D :D
Thanks so much! =D :D :D :D
Roxas's days in the Organization (Chapter three) Woo, chapter three is up =) don’t worry, the story will (hopefully) get more interesting as time goes on… Anyway, here’s another chapter…. remember, PLEASE comment, good and the bad Chapter 3 End of Day 2 ~Station Tower~ “That was a horrible thing for Saix to do to Demyx.” Roxas said, looking forward into the horizon. “Yeah, I guess.” Roxas looked at Axel strangely. “You guess? That kid almost had his heart ripped out…” This was getting too much to handle. Every where he turned he was constantly being reminded about being a nobody. He shook his head and continued to eat his ice cream. In the corner of his eye, he saw Axel put his head down. “He deals with it. He’s been through worse.” Axel said softly. Roxas stood up and opened a corridor of darkness. Earlier in the day, Zexion had taught him how to summon one. Axel looked at him. “What are you doing?” He asked quickly. Roxas finished the last bit of ice cream on his stick and tossed it over the edge. “What is wrong with you people?” he said to Axel before walking into the darkness and appearing in his room. ~Roxas’s room~ Roxas sat on his bed looking around the room. A million thoughts buzzed in and out of his mind. He wasn’t supposed to feel any emotion. He knew deep down inside of him, that it was not emptiness he was feeling. He didn’t get it. Everyone else didn’t have any true sympathy for Demyx, they only pretended that they did. If Roxas couldn’t feel emotions, then what was it that made him get out of his chair to go help his friend out? What was it that left him speechless when he saw him crying? Axel warped into his room. He put his hand behind his head and looked at Roxas. “Look, what I said might of sounded cold earlier, but”- “You are cold, Axel. The first thing you tell me is that I don’t exist, and you expect me to take it perfectly fine!” Axel moved his hand out from behind his head and pointed at Roxas. “Never said that”- “You treat Demyx as if it’s ok for people to put him down all the time,” “Never said that either”- “He’s the only one who actually tries to seem happy despite his position, and you people hate him for that,” “Never said I hated him, c’mon Roxas, let me explain”- “Explain what? Explain to me again how we’re not really here, and how I don’t have emotions or a heart?!” Roxas yelled at Axel, getting off of the bed and stepping closer to him. Axel rubbed his forehead. “If you don’t calm down, I’m going to have to make you, now Roxas”- Axel said to him, trying to keep his temper down. “Calm down?! Why am I angry in the first place?! I can’t feel anger!” That was the last words Roxas spoke out before Axel grabbed his arms and slammed him down on the bed. Roxas looked at Axel’s eyes. They were dancing like flames. “Ya’ goin’ to calm down now?!” Axel yelled in his face. Roxas nodded quickly. After a short moment, Axel sighed and released him. Roxas breathed deeply. Axel looked away from him. “I didn’t expect you to takethe whole, Nobody thing lightly. I don’t think its right for people to pick on Demyx all the time. I don’t hate him either. Me, like the rest of the organization, don’t like living without a heart. Therefore, we’re constantly trying to find ours again.” He sighed, looking back at Roxas. Roxas was sitting on the bed holding a white pillow tightly. “Look, I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to freak out, I just couldn’t let you start going crazy on me. Did I hurt you?” He asked, guilty. Roxas slowly shook his head. Axel nodded and took one last look at Roxas before walking out of his room and going down the hallway. Roxas stayed there for a moment or two before releasing the pillow and lying down on his bed. He still didn’t get it. Was that not the feeling of guilt that drove Axel back into his room in the first place? He felt he’ll never find the real answer between all of it. Day 3 ~Roxas’s Bedroom~ Once he’s eyes were adjusted to the light, he got up and walked out into the hallway, sitting at the same chair he sat in yesterday at the dinning room table. This time, Axel was sitting in his own chair, his head in his hands. Everyone was sitting in their own seat, except for Xaldin who was cooking again. Larxene, the blonde haired girl that sat next to him, actually smiled at him today when he sat down. He didn’t smile back. Xaldin came into the dinning room with a big plate of French toast. He served everyone two pieces before sitting down. There was a big bottle of regular syrup in the middle of the table, and next to that sat a smaller bottle of sugar free syrup. Roxas saw Axel whisper some words to Demyx and look in the direction of Saix. “Oh my god! What is that thing?!” Vexen’s cries where heard all around the room as a small shadow heartless stood in the doorway, cleaning its antennas. Everyone looked and stared at it, except for Axel, Demyx, and Roxas. Roxas watched as Axel grabbed the sugar free syrup and replaced it with another syrup bottle when everyone's attention was on the heartless. It had a yellow label on it that said, SUGAR FREE written in blue crayon. Axel hid the real syrup underneath the table. Xigbar summoned his guns and shot one laser bullet out of it, hitting the heartless. The heartless disappeared into air. “How in the world did that get in here?” Xemnas asked everyone loudly. Axel and Demyx shrugged at the same time. Everyone got back to eating. Saix reached for the small syrup. He opened the tip, and poured the syrup all over his French toast. Demyx and Axel watched intensely. Saix noticed them. “Do you mind?” The two looked back at their plates and started to pick at their breakfast. Saix took a piece of French toast with his fork. He moved his fork closer and closer to his mouth. The fork was inside his mouth. He closed his mouth around it… “OKAY, We gotta go now!” Axel sat, shooting up from his chair, with Demyx at his side. “What’s your excuse?” Xemnas said, his mouth full of chewed up French toast. Axel opened his mouth to speak but nothing came out. Excuse? He wasn’t expecting that one… “We...have to…show Roxas around the castle!” Demyx said, looking in the direction of Roxas. Roxas looked at the two. He nodded slowly, and stood up. “Y-yeah. I never had a proper tour around this place.” Roxas said, trying to go along with them. Out of the corner of his eye, he saw Saix shoveling massive amounts of French toast smothered in syrup into his mouth. Axel walked around the table and grabbed Roxas’s arm, leading him down the hallway with Demyx behind him. Once they were out of hearing range, Axel and Demyx started laughing hysterically. “What’s so funny? What did you do to Saix?” Roxas asked, completely clueless. Axel controlled himself enough for him to talk. “Do you know what happens to Saix when he eats sugar?” He asked Roxas. Roxas shook his head. “He goes berserk!” Demyx said, rolling around on the floor. Roxas still didn’t know what they meant by berserk… A loud bang was heard from inside the dinning room. They heard a glass break, and Axel and Demyx began to crack up hysterically again. “ARRRRGHHHHHHHH, AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!” Saix was heard throughout the entire castle. Demyx grabbed Roxas’s arm and the three of them ran up the stairs and into Demyx’s bedroom. Axel closed the door behind them, falling on the floor from being so weak from laughing so hard. Roxas giggled a little bit. A few more bangs were heard and then a few more yells. Next, it was Xemnas’s time to yell. “WHO GAVE HIM TOO MUCH SUGAR?! WHO DID IT!” The sound of Xemnas banging his fists on the table was heard, along with a few people trying to grab a hold of the savage Saix. “Aw man Axel, we are going to be in soooo much trouble!” Demyx managed to speak since he was out of breath from laughing and running. Axel wiped away his tears of laughter and nodded. Roxas guessed Xemnas found the real syrup bottle because he got mad at the right people. “AXEL!!! DEMYX!!!” *They are going to get in MAJOR trouble in the next chapter*
Uhm, hmmm.... Well, Axel did say his birthday was comming up, maybe in the future you can throw a big birthday party for him! And maybe Larxene will let him drink for the special celebration, Axel's funny when he's drunk :p I love the story too btw :D
Yummy! Keep it up! I thought it was awesome :D
hahahahahah! Stupid Axel!! yeah, I think she should forgive him though, it would of been funny if she did get raped!! =P Oh, man, I'm terrible hahahahah :p
NOOOOOOO Axel was susposed to marry me!!!!!1 :( :( (hahahah just kiddin) Oh well, I'm just an overly obsessed fangirl, but great story though!
awwwww I feel bad ='(. I would never think of Zexion as someone who would cry like that. I love Xiggy in this story, too. I'm starting to like him more as I read. :D
