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HI PEOPLE!!!!!!!! This is my new drawing. I think this time i did better with proportions and drawing comeparded to last time. My other pictures from last time are here. http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=12647 Here is my new one! http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x287/AerithRoses/girlwithpurse.jpg Please tell me what to work on!
These are some drawings i made......dont hurt be if they suck....I would like some comments about them and how to make them better....... And the face isnt on the second one, frankly because i stink at faces, hands and feet..... Here they are in all their glory:
In my opinion, this is one of the crappest poems i have written so far, but it was the only one i could find *shrugges* Enjoy.......... I guess............... Life is a game, In the beginning there are no winners, no losers, No teams, everyone plays fair, All of that had vanished, There are teams, Winners and losers are everywhere, People play dirty, people get hurt, The goal is to win and people will do anything to get it, To impress, to have the cool dress, Drugs are on the Court; People are lost in the Game, All we have is our friends, In the end, no one wins, Its just the way Life is, Everyone dies one way or another, Strong, Weak, Young, Old, Some people die before their time, When the dust has cleared, everyone has died Is this what we want? For us, for our kids? The answer is NO, I don’t know how we can live, In this world of madness, In the Game Of, Life. Please Comment :D
This is a poem i wrote awhile ago when my friend went out with a boy that was using her for his advantage and i felt like i was losing her to him (in the end she figured out wat was going on and broke up with him. Now we're BFF again :) ) New winds are blowing, Hopes are growing, Friendships fall apart, An Unknown Secret art, I’m lost, I’m losing friends at an unbearable cost I’m losing them to boys, She’s just another collectable toy, We were excited for a while, Then it’s the denial, I’m all alone, I feel like I’ve been shown, What it’s like to die, It’s just all these stupid guys, I might be a little sly, But I’m about to cry, I can’t take much more, I want my friends to come back to shore, Come back from the Sea, Please come back to me. In my poetry i use alot of ocean stuff so thats y the part about the sea is in there COMMENT
Beginning Of a Heartless Hi I'm beginning a new story and this is my first time so ANY comments are apprechated and if it stinks im sorry. Again, ANY comments are apprechated. Enjoy! (I hope. :D ) Prolog It had always been the three of us. I had never wanted it to change. It was always Riku, Sora and I, and we had been best friends for as long as I could remember. We did EVERYTHING together. Wherever you would find one of us, you were sure to find the rest of us near by. We had gone swimming in the crystal clear ocean, looked for shells on the beach, and once even planned to go sailing off together to search and explore all the worlds around us. All of that changed when we were separated to different worlds. But even then we were all searching for each other, all wanting to see each other again. After two long adventures we found everyone and we all headed back to the islands. Riku and Sora had always liked me. But now they like me more than ever (I think its just hormones). They fight over who will sit next to me, and whom they will share their cookie with and I have and always will like the flattery. When I’m alone in my room, I secretly wish that one of them would just say that they liked me and get it over with, but after 6 months of being on the island, they haven’t said anything. Then suddenly, someone else came and nothing was ever the same. A new person to be in our trio. A new GIRL. Chapter 1 Destiny Islands Her name was Aura. She was our age, around 16. She arrived on the island mysteriously, no parents only some clothes. We meet her the day after she moved on to the island. I was walking in-between Riku and Sora along the beach, occasionally splashing each other for the fun of it when she came running up. She came from the direction of the secret cave, one of the in my opinion, the creepiest place on the island. She long black hair wisped in the wind and her bare feet pounded on the grainy sand. She wore a small black mini skirt and a baby blue t-shirt that matched the ocean. She ran up to us and excitingly said " Hi, I'm Aura!!!!!" Riku just stared at her hair, Sora just wasn’t speaking, and finally I picked up the courage to say, "Hi, I'm Kairi, this is Riku and this is Sora." "So YOU'RE the brave heroic keyblade master!" She pushed me away from Sora so SHE was standing next to him. I feel over in the sand and landed on my elbow. HARD. I stayed now on the ground wincing and holding my right elbow. Sora faced turned as bright red as my hair "Ya, I'm the Keyblade Master" She turned to Riku "And you must be the master of darkness who came back to the light side. I'm SO glad that you helped Sora defeat Xemnas. It was SO brave of you." Riku put his arms behind his head. "Ya that might have been me." He flash her a flawless smile that he always flashes at me. ME! NOT HER! I was beginning to get mad. First, Riku had given her my smile, and second, no one had noticed I had stayed on the ground the whole entire time. And my arm was beginning to swell up to the size of a rock and was throbbing like heck. “Hey Sora, Riku yesterday when I was exploring I found this REALLY cool thing that I would like to show you. Come on!†She grabbed their elbows and dashed off. Pulling Riku and Sora with her. She turned her head around looked me straight in the eye with her bright blue eyes and winked at me. SHE WINKED AT ME! Then she gave me one of those “ I would hate too be you right now†smiles and ran off with Riku and Sora. I clenched my right fist. “OW!†I cried out in pain forgetting that my elbow REALLY, REALLY hurt. I could feel my heart pounding in and out of my chest as I picked myself up and stomped home. The Black Room “She’s doing a great job isn’t she†A deep voice said. “The Princess is showing more anger than we though†A laugh echoed though out the room, “Who would have known she cared so much about them? They’re just boys after all†“At this rate the plan should be ready for action in a few more days. I need you to go meet with our agent and tell her the new plan†“Yes master†The voices said in unison. “Good. Soon we should be ready to attack the Islands.†He laughed. “Good show Aura, good show………†:D Teehee Edit: Chapter 2 link http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=10318 :) Edit: Chapter 3 link http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=10342
I'm wondering if you guys think that this is a good story and if you think i should keep going. AND TELL ME THE TRUTH :D EDIT: You people need to post not just look at it. The point of posting it was to get feedback EDIT 2: Chapter 1 is up! http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=10259 EDIT 3: Chapter 2 is up! http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=10318 Edit 4: CHAP 3!!!!!!!!! http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=10342 here it is; It had always been the three of us. I had never wanted it to change. It was always Riku, Sora and I, and we had been best friends for as long as I could remember. We did EVERYTHING together. Wherever you would find one of us, you were sure to find the rest of us near by. We had gone swimming in the crystal clear ocean, looked for shells on the beach, and once even planned to go sailing off together to search and explore all the worlds around us. All of that changed when we were separated to different worlds. But even then we were all searching for each other, all wanting to see each other again. After two long adventures we found everyone and we all headed back to the islands. Riku and Sora had always liked me. But now they like me more than ever (I think its just hormones). They fight over who will sit next to me, and whom they will share their cookie with and I have and always will like the flattery. When I’m alone in my room, I secretly wish that one of them would just say that they liked me and get it over with, but after 6 months of being on the island, they haven’t said anything. Then suddenly, someone else came and nothing was ever the same. A new person to be in our trio. A new GIRL. And no the GIRL is NOT namine'. Also i need a title.......... tell me what u think! :)
