It's cool. You certainly do better them me, mark or not.
Interesting. Nicely written. Improve your grammar a bit, but otherwise, it's okay. Great story. Try getting a little more different paragraphs too.
Sephiroth appeared behind Seymour, his eyes glinting. "Place Aerith in the dungeon," he ordered, having a surprising large amount of knowledge of the castle. Turning, he wandered down the empty corridors, and teleported to the place where Rosso and Saix were. "Everything is going quickly and correctly," he said, trying to cover up the fact that Kairi had escaped.
Sephiroth nodded, and disappeared in a flash of black light and feathers. Namine smirked at Luxord, and said, "If you were smart, then you will come back with us." She too disappeared in a dark portal.
"We already have Aerith," Sephiroth growled, bristling with anger. "And now Kairi has vanished." Namine appeared beside the two of them. "Where is Seymour?" she asked. "Bringing Aerith back to The World That Never Was," Sephiroth answered.
Saix was a ghost, which seemed odd. He was dressed in his usual Organization cloak, but his lower torso was a misty trail of nothing. Tseng hadn't changed, except for the fact that his clothing were torn and stitched and all. Saix looked himself over, and then looked at his claymore. He growled, unable to fight. "At least there is a moon," he said, glancing at the sky.
Sephiroth ran through the streets with card-people, and he slashed them in half, searching for Kairi. "You can run, but you can't hide fro me!" he roared, leaping into the air and flying to search for Kairi.
Saix was reading reports; Xemnas Reports. He was reading with inhuman speed, and was somewhat irked at some bad grammar and misspelling. "Third paragraph, third sentence, second word, third letter," he said, distracted. He frowned, and blue fire started to bloom around him. "Misspelling, and grammar mistake. XEMNAS! YOU MISSPELLED SOMETHING!" He stood up, and almost shredded the report with anger.
OOC: Okay, you're in. BIC: Namine smirked. "SEPHIROTH! KAIRI IS GETTING AWAY!" she screeched, and Sephiroth instantly jerked, accidentally stabbing another random pedestrian. There was a flutter of black feathers, and Sephiroth was racing after Kairi. Namine smirked. She was a back-stabber, and proud of it. "Now, to go and warn some good people to provoke them. I guess someone other then those two will do." OOC: Is ANYONE going to play more then Kairi or Aerith? We need more protagonist.
Crap, crap, crap, crap! Tseng thought, leaping up and firing an entire round of bullets. His gun ran out, and he quickly reloaded it. WE ARE SO DEAD! Saix calmly summoned his claymore, and glanced at the sky. "Can't we go somewhere more convenient?" he asked, and snapped his fingers. A Corridor of Darkness opened, and he stepped through it, closely followed by Tseng and everyone else (other then Xemnas). "Like Halloween Town?"
OOC: Should we post intros?
"Why are we here?" Saix demanded, wiping the blood off his teeth and hands. His fingernails were coated with it. Tseng spat out the gun, wiping the metallic taste of his tongue. Never hold a gun in your mouth again, he thought, spitting in disgust.
Namine sighed and poked Kairi. "Wake up," she hissed quietly. "Hurry run, before Sephiroth sees that you are missing." Sephiroth was stabbing everything in sight, obviously waiting for Cloud or Sora to come. Already, a massive pile of burned corpse were growing, so large that they could be seen over the tops of the houses. Hollow Bastion had better have a lot of random pedestrains.
Namine smirked. "I'm Kairi's Nobody," she said. "But I separated from her a few days after she came back to the island with Sora and Riku. I sensed my place was here, where I could affect things more easily." Namine pulled out her sketch book, and flipped through several pages. "To answer your question, I'm evil, but not in the most noticeable way." Sephiroth stabbed another few ten pedestrians, and burned them with one of his many pyro attacks.
I don't think so.
"She has strong Cetra powers, although they do not work here," Namine said, watching Sephiroth peer around a corner and stab a rather unfortunate pedestrian. "Her light is strong, and her heart is fairly strong. She is a close friend of Cloud's, and Cloud is a close friend of Sora's. Its a chain; put Aerith in danger, which will agitate Cloud and make him run after her, and then Sora will come following like an obedient puppy."
Saix(Roxas) growled and glared at Namine(Larxene). "That was an ORDER, Number Twelve," he said softly and dangerously, forgetting who he was for a couple of minutes. "And I expect orders to be followed."
OOC: What did I miss? Ah, never mind, I'm leaving this chat. Can't keep up with it.
Bad kids. They should be punished for such a foul and immature prank.
Can I be Zexion?
