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  1. dancecat120
    Okay the story is going fast. Wow. What will happen when Kairi confronts both Riku and Sora together? Only reading this chapter will tell :)

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    Chapter Three

    Kairi was annoyed. She could hear the Sora was shouting at her to come back but she decided to ignore him. She wanted to see Riku. She wanted to talk to him and figure out what was going on!

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    After searching for him for ten minutes she found him sitting on the beach. The sand was damp still from yesterday’s rain. Now the sky had cleared up some. The sky was a pale blue with scattered white puffy clouds. “Hey Riku, do you mind if I sit with you?” Kairi questioned.

    Riku smiled. “No, I don’t mind. I would like it a lot if you sat with me. Come sit down,” Kairi carefully sat down next to Riku. He continued to smile and continued. “So, you’ve mad your decision?” He asked her and ever so slow placed his arm around her shoulder.

    Kairi glared at him and then when he didn’t get off she started to squirm. “Riku, get off of me!” Riku quickly took his arm off. Kairi continued talking. “Why do you want me to choose between you and Sora? You are both my friends! What do you want me to do?”

    Riku laughed. “Kairi, you don't get it. We are done with sharing you. Of course I want you to pick me, and why wouldn’t you?”

    Kairi was definitely annoyed with him. “Riku, go get Sora and meet me back in my room. I want to talk to both of you!” Riku got up and ran to go find Sora.

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    Kairi’s Room

    “Wow.” Sora exclaimed. “So this is what Kairi’s Room looks like.”

    Riku laughed. “Wait, you’re serious, you’ve never been in here before?”

    Kairi stood up. Neither Riku nor Sora had seen her. “Riku, when have you been in my room?” Kairi questioned.

    Riku smiled and winked. “Oh, sorry I didn’t know that you didn’t want Sora to know about that.”

    “About what?” Sora yelled, suddenly quite defensive.

    “Relax Sora.” Kairi said to him. “Riku has never been in my room. He was just trying to make you jealous. Okay, will one of you please tell me why I have to choose? I mean you’re such good friends, why fight. What ever I end up saying, one of you will hate my and I really would not want that to happen!”

    Riku decided to start. “Well you don’t have to choose.”

    Kairi instantly smiled. “I don’t?”

    Riku smiled. “Of course you don’t! I mean you don’t need to choose, because you already know you’re going to pick me. Look at Sora. He’s is so tiny! And he’s an immature, crying baby.”

    Sora looked up his mouth quivering, on the verge of tears. “I am not!”

    Kairi laughed and then looked serious. “Do you know how immature you sound when you say that?”

    Sora smiled. “Yeah”

    Kairi was annoyed. “Shut up Sora, you are just as immature.” Both boys looked up. They were angry. “You both have to realize that the more you put each other down, the more I don’t like you, either of you. And who knows. Maybe I won’t choose either of you” She smirked.

    Sora was confused. “Who else is there?”

    Kairi was still annoyed. “Well, maybe I’m not going to tell you.”

    Riku decided to talk after a while. “Relax Sora, there’s no one else. But why does it matter. We both know perfectly well that she’s picking me.”

    Kairi looked up in confusion and said. “What?”

    Sora was mad for real now. “Yeah, I mean she’s hugged me, twice. That’s more that you can say.”

    Kairi had it with them. “You guys just don’t get it! You both need to stop it! You two stay here and settle this. I’ll be in my room until you two have talked it over!”

    Sora looked. “Um Kairi, this is your room.” Riku stopped him from saying anymore and dragged him out of her room.

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    Okay I hoped you liked it. Please vote on the poll and comment :D
    Thread by: dancecat120, Apr 13, 2007, 10 replies, in forum: Archives
  2. dancecat120
    thanks for the opinion! usually I try to incorperate comments into the next chapter but I can't exactly do that because the whole story kind of needs them wanting her to choose :)
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 13, 2007 in forum: Archives
  3. dancecat120
    Thanks! I am done my homework so now I am about to start chapter three!:D
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 13, 2007 in forum: Archives
  4. dancecat120
    That you :D

    I am about to start working on chapter three so I will be out in maybe 2 hours!
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 13, 2007 in forum: Archives
  5. dancecat120
    Thanks! The next one wont come out till later today due to home work (which is much harder to write than this story)
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 13, 2007 in forum: Archives
  6. dancecat120
    Yay, that was nice.

    The next chapter is up but after that another one might not come up till later in the after noon (its 10:10 here now) I have to do some home work but at least one more chapter should be up today :D
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 13, 2007 in forum: Archives
  7. dancecat120
    Sorry it took so long for this one to come out. I had to do this stupid thing called sleeping. I have taken into consideration of the comments I have recieved. There will be more spaces and longer chapters! In this chapter Kairi confronts Sora! Before I say much more, here's the story: :D

    Please note that none of this happened in the game, it is made up.

    Here's the link to the first chapter: http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9701


    Chapter Two

    Kairi stayed in her room for the rest of the day. She was scared and confused mostly. She didn’t want to face them. She couldn’t decide between Riku and Sora, they were her best friends. Her current goal was to avoid seeing them at all costs.

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    She woke up at around 9:00 the next morning. She had a horrible dream last night. She could strangely remember it in great detail. Usually she only remembered bits and pieces of her dream but could never seem to get the whole thing back into her head. This was different. She could remember everything about this dream as if it had really happened! She was talking to Riku and Sora. For some reason they wanted her to choose between them! Good thing it was just a dream, if that had really happened, who knows what she would do.

    Today was another gloomy day. Another gray sky filled with clouds. Thankfully today there was no rain. The sky made it look like there should have been rain, but currently, there was none. She wanted to find Sora so that she could tell him about her dream. This morning she was so anxious, she hardly bothered trying to look nice. She saw him walking out of his room. He looked tired still and his hair was all over the place. For some reason he seemed mad. She hoped that he and Riku weren’t in a fight again.

    “Hey, Sora, wait up!” She yelled after him.

    Sora stopped and turned around. “Hi Kairi, are having a nice day?” Sora asked.

    “Yeah, my day has been nice so far. I had this really weird dream last night.” She started to tell him all about her dream.

    Sora looked up, he no longer had a mad look on his face, but it wasn’t happy either. “Kairi, that wasn’t a dream, it really did happen.” He said and looked at her like she was crazy. Then the you’re crazy Kairi look disappeared off of his face. In its place came a look of happiness with a little bit of embarrassment. “So, have you chosen yet Kairi?”

    Kairi looked angry and confused. “Why? Why do you want me to choose between you? You two are my best friends. What do you want me to do?” Kairi finished her statement and starred at him, waiting for a reply.

    Sora was smiling again. Wow, doesn’t he look cute when he smiles? Kairi told herself to stop and pushed the positive Sora thoughts out of her head. She continued to wait for a response. “Well, I want you to choose me of course!” Suddenly he stopped smiling and looked a bit sad. “I don’t know why Riku wants you to choose, but everything is a fight between us I just figured that you’re the next fight.”

    Kairi looked angry now. “I don’t care why Riku wants me to choose, I want to know why you want me to!”

    Sora took a few steps back. “Wow, no need to get angry. I just want you to choose so that we can be together.”

    Kairi was definitely confused now. “Wait, who ever said I was choosing you?”

    Sora smiled. “Well, look at him. The guy is so old! He even has gray hair! He was on the dark side for a while, do you really want him?”

    Kairi was mad and disgusted. “Sora you idiot, the more you make fun of him, the less I want you!” She stormed off shaking her head.

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    So that was chapter two! Hope you liked it. Yet again please comment and vote on the poll. Criticism is welcome!
    Thread by: dancecat120, Apr 13, 2007, 17 replies, in forum: Archives
  8. dancecat120
    Part two is on the way. Unfortunatly, I started writing it last night around 12:30 so I had to go back and add detail and fix all of the errors made due to being half asleep :)

    Okay chapter two is up:

    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9714
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 13, 2007 in forum: Archives
  9. dancecat120
    Okay thank you for all of the comments. I am going to finish writting chapter two and then post it up. You can expect it in about 15 minutes :D

    Thanks to all of the voters

    Sorry it was a long time between replys and chapters. I had to do this really stupid thing called sleep. :D
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 13, 2007 in forum: Archives
  10. dancecat120
    Thank you for the criticism. I appreciate it. I will take it into consideration while writing my next chapter. I am new at this and I still trying to figure out where to go with the story so criticism is certainly wanted:D
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 13, 2007 in forum: Archives
  11. dancecat120
    Thank you :)

    Funny wasn't really what I was going for but at least you liked it :D

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    I think I am going to try to type another chapter before I go to sleep. :D :)
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 13, 2007 in forum: Archives
  12. dancecat120
    Thank you very much! *goes to change errors*
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 13, 2007 in forum: Archives
  13. dancecat120
    Okay I have decided to attempt to create a story. I don't know how it will turn out. And yes, this is my first story. Please note that none of this ever happened in the game! I would very much appreciate it if people were completly honest about what they really think. If you feel that it is bad, please do tell me so. So now that everyone thinks that the story is going to be horrible (:) ) here it is!:

    Chapter One
    Setting: Destiny Island


    Kairi suddenly woke up. She must have had some sort of bad dream. She couldn’t remember it what had happened or even what it was about so she just decided to forget it. She looked up the clock in her room; the time was 9:30 so she decided to get up. She climbed out of bed and brushed her hair. After she was done she put on her pink dress. She always felt prettier when she wore it and she wanted to look good for Sora and Riku. Even though neither of them had really told her that they liked her... it was quite apparent that they did.
    She decided to see if anyone else was up yet. As soon as she left her room and got out side, she could tell that the usually clear blue sky had been replaced by a dark gray-blue, cloudy sky. There was heavy rain coming down. She quickly ran to the cave where she used to draw some times.
    When she got there Sora and Riku were already there. They were fighting- typical- and it appeared that Sora was winning. Sora looked up and smiled at her. While Sora did that, Riku hit him. “Hey, Riku, that was so unfair! I was just saying hi to Kairi!” Sora whined. Kairi placed her hand over her mouth and giggled. She thought it was adorable how whiny and immature Sora was. But she liked how Riku took every possible chance to beat Sora as well. She happened to like them both, a lot. She always had.
    Kairi watched them fight for a while. It was really boring to her. All they did was whack each other with sticks. Come on, don’t they have anything better to do? After what seemed like forever, Sora gave up. Smiling, Riku took a bow. Then he looked up and winked at Kairi. “Riku, what was that for?” Kairi questioned.
    “Well, Sora and I have been talking lately. We both like you a lot. We know that you already know that. We both want you.” Kairi looked up, confused and let Riku continue. “You see Kairi, Sora and I aren’t kids anymore. We have many more feelings than we used to. Many of those feelings, are about you. We are tired of fighting over you Kairi! We want you to choose!” Riku ended.
    Kairi looked up startled. She knew it would come to this sooner or later. She had of course hoped it would be later, “You want me to what?” Kairi asked.
    Sora looked up now, he was definitely angry. “We want you to chose who you like Kairi. Me or him. There is no happy medium.”
    Kairi knew what she heard was true. She wouldn’t accept it though. She was scared and ran back inside to her room.


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    Okay that is it so far. Please comment! Be completly honest :)
    Thread by: dancecat120, Apr 12, 2007, 19 replies, in forum: Archives
  14. dancecat120
    YAY, great job!

    Nice suspence!

    It's funny yet sad so far. Okay the end is very sad but great *gives thumbs up* :D :)

    FIRST POST!
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 12, 2007 in forum: Archives
  15. dancecat120
    great job. I like the ending the them going back in time and all.

    :D :)

    Nice story

    FIRST POST!!!!
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 12, 2007 in forum: Archives
  16. dancecat120
    Talking in third person :D thats hilarious!

    great job!

    I like this story so far :D :D :D
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 11, 2007 in forum: Archives
  17. dancecat120
    Four definatly sounds the coolest (I did vote)

    Also- How do you plan to have time to make all of these?
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 11, 2007 in forum: Archives
  18. dancecat120
    Oh gosh....

    Where do you get your ideas for all of these stories? You must have an extremly active imagination....
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 9, 2007 in forum: Archives
  19. dancecat120
    What does 'smoof' mean?:confused: I like the story a lot but that is a weird word that I have never heard used before.
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 7, 2007 in forum: Archives