At first is was a love story (I think) but every chapter changes everything! It can be funny though :D
Thanks :D and about the next chapter.... I need to figure out what happens next! expect the next chapter in an hour or two You will have to see what the organization does in the next chapter! thank you :D
Okay, for some reason I don't think many people saw chapter five so here's the link: http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?p=197459&mode=linear#post197459 In chapter Six, we get to see some thing from Sora's view. What will he see? How will he react? Only reading the next chapter will tell :) ~~~~ Chapter Six Still on the beach Kairi noticed that it was getting late. She turned and went back to her room. Sora and Riku stayed for a bit. “Riku, why do they want Kairi? They can’t love, they don’t have hearts! They have to be up to something!” Sora said. “Sora, I am going to let you watch them. I’ll be near Kairi to protect her. Have your key blade ready.” Riku warned him. He slowly turned and went in the direction of Kairi’s room. Sora went off to behind a nearby bush and waited. On the beach- Sora’s bush He was starting to get tired but he knew that he had to stay and watch the organization members. After about an hour of waiting, Saix returned. “I put the moon up early to night to get rid of Kairi.” Saix grinned. “Nice.” Axel started. “But we need a plan!” They all thought for a while until Roxas finally spoke. “Okay I have a plan.” Demyx laughed. “Ha, you have a working plan? I gotta hear this!” “Okay, first Kairi falls in love, with me.” Roxas smiled. “Wait.” Demyx started. “Why do you get her?” “One, no interrupting the genius at work.” Roxas continued. Axel, Demyx, and Saix, broke out into laughing. “After she is in love with me, I say that I have to go.” “But I shall ask her to come and visit me.” “Once she is there, we tie her up and hold her hostage and demand Sora to um erg give up some thing? Okay I don’t know what we demand from him but some one else can think of that.” Roxas smiled. At hearing this Sora gasped. I have to save Kairi. But how? Saix smiled. “Great thinking lover boy.” Roxas glared at him. Saix continued to talk. “You just go make her fall in love with you while we come up with the rest of the plan.” Roxas smiled and started towards Kairi’s Room. ~~~~ Okay that was chapter six. Sorry it was so short. I had to break it off there from reasons that you will find out later :) Please comment and vote on the poll :D :D
Thanks the biggest twist I have thought up yet has been revealed! she shall go for neither Sora or Riku :) I am about to start on writing chapter six, I can be expected in about two hours :)
Okay here is chapter five :) normally I say something witty about the up coming chapter right here but I've got nothing. Please read :) ~~~~ Chapter Five Kairi was suddenly sad. Gosh that dream was great. I had finally come to a decision! If only it was that easy in my real life. She sighed. I guess I’ll go find them so we can sort this out and talk. --- She walked out to where Riku and Sora were standing on the beach. The sun was almost down. The last light in the sky highlighted Riku’s gorgeous shiny silver hair. Sora still looked cute like always. Suddenly she had an idea. It was quite unlike her to eavesdrop. It wasn’t something that she would normally do but she was willing to try. She ran behind a bush a ways away from where Sora and Riku stood. Sora was talking. “Okay, I know how we can decide who gets Kairi. I think you shall approve of this and no one shall be hurt. We shall play rock paper scissors.†Then he smiled. “Best two of out three.†Wow. Kairi thought. They are going to decide who gets me by rock paper scissors? What am I, property? Kairi came out from the bushes. Both Riku and Sora looked at her. “What am I, property? You two are so immature. I am not picking either of you!†Sora was sad. “But, but Kairi, who else is there? Who else are you going to pick?†Kairi was still angry. “Well there’s the organization. Also, who said I am even picking some one?†Riku laughed. “Kairi the organization is way too old for you.†Kairi just starred at him, shaking her head. “That’s not the point. The point is neither of you are going to get me and there is nothing you can do about it.†All of a sudden, out of nowhere eight organization members showed up. Axel, Roxas, Vexen, Marluxia, Larxene, Saix, Xigbar, and Demyx appeared. Kairi smiled. “Okay, first of all Larxene please leave. Also, any members that uh like guys more than girls, please leave. Xigbar, you are too old for me.†Larxene, Xigbar, Vexen, and Marluxia left. Demyx, Saix, Axel, and Roxas remained. “Wow.†Sora said. “This is going to be interesting.†~~~~ Okay that was chapter five. Please comment and vote on the poll. :D
I was thinking that just this chapter was a dream. But the way people are commenting they think that the whole story never happened! I think that it was just the last chapter because chapter 5 starts off right where she was. Yes she still will have to chose
Thanks. I decided to just give up on using that word and I would be better off :D
Just when everyone thinks they understand who's going to get her and what shall happen next. I make one wonder!
I try to suprise the readers :D The next chapter will not be in the makings for a while because I need to see what happens with the poll
Okay, chapter four is out. Sadly, it will be the last chapter :( . Kairi has made up her mind. Who will she choose? Only reading the next chapter with tell ;) . ~~~~ Chapter Four: Kairi was still in her room. She had cooled off since the latest talk. She was trying to think of who to choose. Still she had no idea. She decided to take a walk. She was just walking along the beach, thinking. The sun was just starting to set. Light pinks and oranges filled the sky. No! Kairi thought. I need to pick. She tried to decide. She decided to say a plus for each one until she could no longer think of a good thing for one of them. Well, Sora is my age, Riku is less immature. Sora is the Key Blade master, Riku was on the dark side. Okay they are both very, very cute, no need to go there. ;) Sora is sweeter, Riku is um stronger? No Riku is, um no. Oh. My. Gosh. Kairi stopped walking. She had come to her decision. She took a deep breath and started walking to go find Sora. --- Sora was already in his room. She lightly tapped on his door. “Sora, it’s me, Kairi. Can I please come in?” Sora came to open the door. He smiled and opened the door. Then he sat down on his bed. She sat down next to him. He lifted his arm and put it around her shoulder, she didn’t squirm. “So, do you want to talk?” He asked sweetly. Oh gosh. Kairi thought. He is so sweet. “Sora, I was thinking for a while and I came to a decision.” Sora took his arm off of her. Kairi shook her head and smiled. She gently put his arm back on. “I’ve picked you Sora.” Sora looked up and smiled. “Really?” He continued to smile and started inching towards her. Just then Riku walked in he saw them and had a shocked look on his face. “Kairi, I see you’ve made up you mind.” Kairi got up and smiled. She walked up to him and kissed him on the check. “Sorry Riku, I’ve picked Sora. That is all you are getting, ever.” She pushed him out the door and locked it. She sat back down next to Sora. “So, where were we Sora?” Sora smiled again. He inched towards her. Closer, and closer, and closer and finally, their lips meet, every thing went black. --- So many thoughts raced through her head. Did I pass out? She slowly opened her eyes. She was in her room. The sun was just starting to set. Wait, that was a dream? She started to think about her dream. Oh gosh, I was a huge flirt. That dream was so unrealistic! She knew that what ever she had thought in her dream was wrong. Oh gosh, back to square one. ~~~~ Hehe, Did I fool anyone? Okay it wasn't the last chapter. There are still many chapters to go :) . Hope you liked it! Please comment and vote on the poll :D
I don't know why I always mess that word up. I'm going to start on chapter four now in hope of getting it up in an hour!
Chapter four is going to be very slow I think
I would start now but I kind of need to figure out what should happen next because truthfully I don't know :D I think I'm going to wait for a while to see what happens with the poll, that might help shape the story
lol, maybe I'll have axel come in and they can be a couple, just because you said that :D I can see it now: Axel stepped out of his corradoor of darkness, picked up Kairi and.... okay I've said to much. Who knows the out come? (of course beside me);)
Awesome! I wonder what will happen next? I'm excited for the next chapter. :D
Thank you :)
Yeah, I kind of want to bring another charater in. That's why I have the poll up to what people think:)
Yeah, I think I had more expirence this time and took all of the comments into consideration :D
I laughed out loud at that part (sorry if it wasn't supposed to be funny) Great job. I like your story a lot! :)
Yeah, the next few chapters are much slower, in my opinion. I'll go read yours now :D
