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  1. dancecat120
    lol

    if so they don't own the thread or poll

    kh vids does :D
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 15, 2007 in forum: Archives
  2. dancecat120
    :D that's a very good answer :D
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 15, 2007 in forum: Archives
  3. dancecat120
    um what is 'pwn'
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 15, 2007 in forum: Archives
  4. dancecat120
    thank you

    you will find an excuse :rolleyes:
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 15, 2007 in forum: Archives
  5. dancecat120
    Thanks

    I don't think another story is on the way for a while

    sorry
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 15, 2007 in forum: Archives
  6. dancecat120
    it really is the end

    who cares about the organization

    *ducks to avoid being hit by millions of rocks*

    I might have an afterword though
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 15, 2007 in forum: Archives
  7. dancecat120
    This is sadly the last chapter. What will Roxas tell Kairi? What will she do? Who will she choose? Only reading the next chapter will tell

    ~~~~~


    Chapter Twelve



    On the Beach

    ---

    Recap:


    Kairi heard a sound and quickly looked up. Roxas was stepping out of his corridor of darkness. She looked up at him. “Roxas, we need to talk.” She was serious.

    He looked up serious too. “I know, I understand. I haven’t been completely honest with you.”



    End of Recap

    ---

    “Roxas, I think I know.” She looked up at him.

    “Well, I hope you will forgive.” He looked sad and continued speaking. It seemed as though his mind was somewhere else. “The organization wanted me to make you well um fall in love with me. Then they would get you to come to the castle and tie you up. They would’ve made Sora give something up to save you.” He was quite. He really did look sad. They just stood there, looking at each other in silence.

    “Wait, you mean you never really liked me? You kissed me! It was all part of some evil plan!” Kairi was annoyed.

    “Yeah, it was. At first at least. After I got to know you, I liked you. I really did want to kiss you!”

    Kairi thought back to yesterday.

    ---


    Flashback


    Roxas was quite for a bit, still smiling. “I, I like you Kairi.”

    Kairi was a bit freaked out. “Wow. I don’t get it; I thought you can’t like me. No offense of anything but don’t you not feel emotions? Don’t you not have a heart?”

    “Yeah, I don’t have a heart. But that doesn’t mean that I can’t like you Kairi.” Roxas said sounding a bit sad.

    “I’m sorry but do you really like me? Or is this just some plan?”

    “I really do like you Kairi; I would never want to hurt you.” Roxas said stroking her hair.


    End of Flashback

    ---


    “You lied to me!”

    “That was before I really liked you. You have to understand! I didn’t let you come back with me this morning so they wouldn’t capture you!”

    Silence.

    They were both quiet. Suddenly they heard something coming from the nearby bushes. “Ha, Kairi we told you so!” Sora and Riku laughed.

    “Wow. Maybe you were right and he was trying to hurt me. But he really didn’t let me come back. I guess I don’t care if his intentions in the beginning were bad. Roxas, will you excuse me for a bit? I need to talk to Sora and Riku.”

    Kairi, Sora, and Riku went to behind a few bushes. “Great job eavesdropping.” She said sarcastically. She looked mad at them. They ran, quickly. “Yeah you better run!” She yelled at them.

    She went back to the beach and sat down next to Roxas. “I really am sorry Kairi.”

    She smiled as he put his arm around her. “Yeah, I know. But it’s okay, I forgive you.” He smiled. She smiled. And slowly then inched towards each other, and kissed. They heard snickering from the bushes. Neither looked up, they didn’t care.


    ~~~~

    Okay this really is the end! Hope you liked it. Please vote on the poll and comment :D

    If you have any questions about the story you can comment or private mail me

    THIS IS THE END
    Thread by: dancecat120, Apr 15, 2007, 12 replies, in forum: Archives
  8. dancecat120
    having fun? lol
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 15, 2007 in forum: Archives
  9. dancecat120
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 15, 2007 in forum: Archives
  10. dancecat120
    I am putting it up now

    It will be up in 5 minutes:D
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 15, 2007 in forum: Archives
  11. dancecat120
    thanks


    I am done with the last chapter!!!!

    but just I think I will wait a while to put it up *evil smile*
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 15, 2007 in forum: Archives
  12. dancecat120
    thanks!

    next chapter will be up in a while :D
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 15, 2007 in forum: Archives
  13. dancecat120
    I would do that but I already know the ending. I let the readers decide a lot but I can't let them choose the end result :D
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 15, 2007 in forum: Archives
  14. dancecat120
    lol

    there's only one chapter left

    I need to let the readers have suspense before the next one...
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 15, 2007 in forum: Archives
  15. dancecat120
    lol,

    thanks

    only two more chapters to go

    or I could make chapter 12 really long and finish it up then....
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 15, 2007 in forum: Archives
  16. dancecat120
    Chapter is up! In this chapter Sora, Riku, and Kairi talk. What will happen? Only reading this chapter will tell.

    The next few chapters will be short. I am going to attempt to finish Kairi's Choice tonight.

    ~~~~


    Chapter Eleven


    On the Beach


    No one talked. They just stood there. Sora and Riku looked confused. Roxas and Kairi had stood up but were no longer holding hands or even touching. Kairi was scared. What are they going to do? By now the sun was up. Today was a nice day, the blue skies with light, white, fluffy, clouds. Too bad none of them would be able to enjoy it.

    After a long time of standing and staring, Roxas decided to talk. “I um erg need to go back to the Organization before they worry about me being gone. Come visit me sometime Kairi.†He started to turn around.

    “Yeah you better go!†Sora shouted.

    “Wait Roxas, maybe I would like to come with you now.†Kairi said.

    “No, Kairi, don’t go!†Sora and Riku shouted at the same time.

    “Well I really do have to get back.†Roxas said. “Bye Kairi.†He smiled at her and created a corridor of darkness.

    “Kairi, don’t listen to him! Don’t visit him. It’s all part of a plot.†Riku said.

    “You are just jealous that I fell for Roxas and not either of you.†Kairi said. She was mad at them. She had no idea what do to.

    “No! Okay I might be a bit jealous but you can’t trust him! I over heard him talking to the organization about his plan to make you fall in love with him and then kidnap you. They would make me do something to get you back.†Sora said. He looked sad.

    “Do you really expect me to believe that garbage? He is so nice to me. He is romantic too and unlike you guys, he isn’t immature.†Kairi said. She was annoyed with them.

    “Kairi, you are forgetting something. Roxas is part of me. I can feel him. I can feel that he is up to no good!†Sora said. He sounded as if he was begging.

    “I don’t know if I can trust you. I want to but I can't. I want to talk to Roxas.†Kairi was sad and confused.

    “Don’t go see him, let him come to you. Make him come here. See if he really cares.†Riku said.

    “I guess I’ll wait for him here. You guys, please don’t stay. I want to talk to him, alone.†Kairi said. When she said alone she looked up at them. They carefully stood up and ran away. Kairi sat on the beach waiting, hoping for Roxas to come.


    ---



    Still on the Beach, two hours later


    Kairi heard a sound and quickly looked up. Roxas was stepping out of his corridor of darkness. She looked up at him. “Roxas, we need to talk.†She was serious.

    He looked up serious too. “I know, I understand. I haven’ been completely honest with you.â€


    ~~~

    Dadada

    Hope you liked it! Please comment and vote on the poll :D
    Thread by: dancecat120, Apr 15, 2007, 14 replies, in forum: Archives
  17. dancecat120
    thanks :)

    chapter 11 might be out in half and hour to an hour :D
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 15, 2007 in forum: Archives
  18. dancecat120
    Great story!!!!!!!!!
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 15, 2007 in forum: Archives
  19. dancecat120

    Awesome story so far!

    I lol when she called them men


    Maybe you should attempt to make it a bit longer (not that I am the one to be talking about that)

    but great start!
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 15, 2007 in forum: Archives
  20. dancecat120
    Thanks

    people can expect chapter 11 in a few hours :D

    Thanks!

    I am sure your story will be awesome
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 15, 2007 in forum: Archives