lol, I do not think that there is much to ponder but what ever. The story really is over though. I could have made it go on and on and on.... but I really wanted to end it because it didn't turn out the way it sounded in my head.
Chapter three is out. In this chapter Roxas finds out something and gets hurt very much emotionally. What upset him? What is going on with the band? Only reading this chapter will tell. ~~~ Chapter Three --- The Castle that Never Was: The Basement The group had just practiced for about three hours. “Okay guys, we sound good enough. Every one can take a break until the guy come backs.†Demyx smiled. Every one except for Roxas and Axel left the room. “So Demyx, do you really think we were good? Do we have a chance?†Roxas asked excitedly while making a pleading sign with his hands. “Yeah, we were amazing!†Demyx smiled at him. Roxas did a little happy jump and left the room. “So Demyx, do you really think we were good?†Axel asked seriously. Demyx burst out in laughs. “Are you kidding? We stunk! Didn’t you hear us? I bet the guy is just going to come in laugh and leave or something stupid like that. I mean you were good and I was good but Roxas can’t sing, Vexen can’t play the piano, Zexion can’t dance, and I wouldn’t trust Luxord, Xaldin, and Lexaeus with technical equipment ever. We have absolutely no chance.†Demyx was still laughing. “Yeah, that’s what I thought.†Axel said sadly. Just then Roxas walked in he had this look on his face that said how could you do this to me. “I, I just came in to get my um sheet, so I can you know practice.†Roxas stuttered. “But I guess, it’s good I came, at least now I know the truth.†He shook his head and ran out of the room. He wasn’t crying or anything, but it looked like he easily could have. “You got Roxas so excited! How could you do that to him? You made him really think that he was good and we that have a chance. That was really mean.†Axel said glaring at Demyx. “Roxas, wait up!†Axel ran after him. “I didn’t want to hurt his feelings or anything. And you saw how excited he was and that hand gesture! Come on! Axel!†Demyx looked sad as he sighed. “Great, this is working out perfectly.†--- The Castle that Never Was: Outside of Roxas’s Room Roxas was sitting on his bed. There were tears in his eyes as well as tears flowing down his red cheeks. Axel was sitting next to him with a box of tissues. He was patting Roxas on the back. “I thought that we were good. I thought that we could be famous. I thought that something big was going to happen to me.†Roxas cried. “Roxas, you are only fifteen you have plenty of time to do all of that.†Axel said trying to comfort him. “There’s just one thing that I don’t get.†Roxas said then looked up at him. “Why do I care so much? Why am I crying? I am a nobody! I don’t experience emotion! I don’t even have a freaking heart!†Roxas cry screamed. A lot had just come out, more than he had really wanted to say. “Woah.†Demyx whispered. Demyx felt absolutely horrible. It was all his fault that Roxas was feeling this way. “Roxas.†Axel started. “You never got over the fact that you don’t have a heart did you?†Roxas slowly shook his head. “It’s just so hard. I don’t exist! I don’t have a heart! What is the point of me even being here! Why do I still have to feel things? I hate it! I hate it all!†Roxas was now crying insanely. Axel hugged him but Roxas just turned away. He was seriously upset. Demyx took a deep breath and walked into the room. “Roxas, I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to make you this upset!†Roxas was glaring at him. “Yeah you only told me that I was good when I really stunk! You got my hopes up.†Roxas’s sadness had turned to anger. “I understand you being mad at me but it was just a little white lie. Please forgive me!†Roxas was quiet for a few moments. “Okay, I guess I forgive you.†Just as he said that, they all heard a knock on the door. All three hurried to go greet him. --- The Basement The room was already set up. Each member sat or stood in position ready to play. Xemnas talked. “Hello Sir! This is Organization XIII. I hope you enjoy the show!†The band started playing. Just as always Demyx and Axel were good. All of the dancers were just doing their own things and not paying any attention to what was going on around them. Roxas wasn’t doing too badly at singing surprisingly. Demyx looked up at the guy. He had this look on his face that was saying are you kidding me. He could tell it was over. The song was slowly coming to its end. “Guys, that was um interesting! I sadly do not thing that you are what our company needs. Thanks any way.†The guy carefully ran out of the room. “So it’s um over?†Saix asked. “Yep, Organization XIII will not be rock stars.†Demyx said. After a few awws people just left. It was over, and things were exactly how they had been before. ~~~ Yes, this is sadly the end of Organization XIII Rockstars. Please comment. It really is over. There will be no silly afterword like there was on my last story. Hope you liked it :D
aww that was cute Xed is sweet another great chapter :)
I wanted to make a stupid funny chapter :) *steals page pwn back* Think Roxas is a guy.... At least I thought so....
Chapter two is out! We shall find out who got what parts. Did Roxas get into any thing? Will Demyx be able to transform the Organization into a band? Only reading the chapter will tell. ~~~~ Chapter Three The Kitchen All of the Organization members were gathered around the table. Demyx sat down next to Axel. Axel was toasting his toast by running his hand over it. None of the other members had bothered to check the bulletin board yet. Demyx decided to make an announcement. “Everyone, the list for who made the band is up.†A few people like Roxas and Axel went to go look while most of the members just sat and remained seated. Demyx went to look at the list as well. --- Organization XIII Singer: Roxas Dancer: Zexion Drummer: Axel Back Stage Workers: Luxord, Xaldin, and Lexaeus Manager: Xemnas Piano: Vexen Back-up Singers: Saix and Marluxia Back-up Dancers: Xigbar and Larxene --- Axel didn’t really care that he got in because he knew that he was going to be the drummer. On the other hand, Roxas was jumping up and down excitedly. A few more people came in to look at who got what parts. There were a few yays or aws but there wasn’t much in the way of talking. “Every one, we are having our first official band meeting in the basement in ten minutes. I expect for every one to be there.†Xemnas said. “Anyone want to help me set up?†Demyx asked no one in particular. Most of the people just went to do what ever they were planning to do for the next ten minutes. “I’ll help!†Roxas said. He was still excited. --- The Basement Roxas and Demyx took the whole ten minutes to set up. They had microphones, drums, and a piano in place. The other members had just started to flow in. Demyx and Roxas had set up thirteen chairs in the front of the room for any meetings that they might have. Every person sat down in a chair. Because Xemnas was the manager he thought that he should be leading the meeting. “Every one, because I have no idea what I am doing, I am going to let Demyx talk!†Demyx stood up. “We are going to play a few songs. Every one already knows how to use their instruments so we can play after we come up with ideas for songs. Before we write songs, which will be the job of anyone who can think up a song, we will play other songs that we know. So does anyone have any ideas?†“I think we should play Sanctuary.†Axel said excitedly. “That song is a bit complicated and I think that Roxas is a guy.†Vexen said. “Hey Vexen, are you sure about that one?†Saix said. A lot of other organization members laughed. Demyx gave him a look and whispered a song into each member’s ear. They each nodded and got to practicing. ~~~~ Okay I hoped you liked the chapter! Please comment :D Does Any One know what cut scene we see Demyx playing his sitar in? (If we see that, I always forget)
Thanks, I thought the video was funny because all of the auditioners were male :)
Organization XIII Rockstars chapter two Sorry it took so long. This is a long chapter and it has a something special for the readers. Who will audition? What will Xemnas do to Demyx? Only reading the next chapter will tell. ~~~~ Chapter Two The Castle That Never Was: Conference Room --- Recap “I think you are lying. What friends live together and where the same clothes? In my opinion, Organization XIII sounds like a band.” Every one was silent. They didn’t know what to say. Demyx started talking. “You guys, it’s okay he found out. He might make us famous. Yes we are a band. We will need to talk it over but why don’t you come back tomorrow around the same time.” Demyx smiled. The guy waved and walked out of the room. Xemnas looked up. “Demyx, do you have a band?” “Um, not yet.” End of Recap --- “Every one can leave now.” Xemnas said, forcing a smile. All of the organization members started to exit the room. Xemnas looked at Demyx getting up. “Demyx, stop right where you are.” He said harshly. “Xemnas, I can explain.” “Really? We aren’t a band and you told some big guy in a suit that we are! I’d like a good explanation!” Xemnas boomed. “Well I can play my sitar. I am sure that other people are good at something in this house. I am going to have auditions. Every member must be in the band.” “Okay, get to work.” Xemnas said and they both left the room. --- Sign up Sheet for Organization XIII Sing (3pm today) Dance (4pm today) Drums (5pm today) Back Stage Work (6pm today) Manager (7pm today) Piano (8pm today) --- After posting the sign-up sheet and making an announcement he went up to his room to be alone, and practice his sitar. --- Demyx’s Room He took the list off of the board at 2:45 so that he could figure out who was going to do what. Sign up Sheet for Organization XIII Sing (3pm today) Roxas Saix Xemnas Marluxia Dance (4pm today) Roxas Zexion Xigbar Vexen Larxene Drums (5pm today) Roxas Axel Xaldin Lexaeous Back Stage Work (6pm today) Roxas Xigbar Zexion Marluxia Larxene Luxord Manager (7pm today) Roxas Xemnas Piano (8pm today) Roxas Vexen Saix He looked over the list. Wow, this is going to be interesting. --- Auditioning Room Roxas, Saix, Xemnas, and Marluxia walked into the room. Demyx gave them some music to attempt to sing. He also recorded it on a tape. All of them were surprisingly good. After they all sang, he told them to leave and watched the tape: This is the Audition Video --- Later in the Day Roxas, Zexion, Xigbar, Vexen, and Larxene walked into the room for the dancing try outs. First Roxas attempted to dance. He had absolutely no idea what he was doing. Because Demyx was afraid he would hurt himself, he told him to leave. Xigbar and Larxene both got mad half way through their dances and broke out in fight. Surprisingly enough, Zexion can sort of dance. He was the best of the bunch. --- Later Still Roxas, Axel, Xaldin, and Lexaeous all walked into the room to try out for drumming. Xaldin and Lexaeous we okay but they had never really played the drums before. When Roxas came up, he had absolutely no rhythm what so ever and it sounded very, very bad. Axel was good. He didn’t do much but he was good. He did a million times better than the other members. --- Much Much later For piano the only people who tried out were Saix, Vexen, and Roxas. Roxas really wasn’t good at piano. He just signed up for everything. Vexen and Saix were both good. After everyone had auditioned, Demyx took a break. He put up the list and went to sleep. ~~~~ Hope you all liked it! Please comment. Sorry about the poll, I didn't find out about it till after I posted it up. No chapters of mine will have polls anymore
humor is good (unless it's like stupid or cheesy) :) I try to make mine funny but it usually doesnt work
thanks we wont 'see' them play for a while xemnas still needs to deel with demyx and they need try outs (which will be funny) I plan to make some try out videos
Thanks and for those who do not live where I am (idk who) by coming out in the morning that is in about 11 hours :)
thanks :) I'm going to start writing chapter two in the morning :)
Great Job!! Hehe I saw that one coming :) Nice job! :) :D :) :D :) :D :) :D :) :D
Thanks so much! You really need to read more if you think I'm the best writer Check out my new story: Organization XIII, RockStars :) chapter one is out and I'm going to write chapter two later
um okay? Yeah my new story came out last night :)
awww their first fight, lol great job, I can see it happening I feel bad for Roxas :( Xed is pretty awesome but she has issues but great job! I love this chapter! and I am not one to like battly stuff :):):):):):):):):):)
great job! I like the story like I said xed has violence and anger problems wow. I think she is juse a bit creepy, how does she hold them all? great job (like always :)) FIRST POSTNESS
lol, sounds pretty cool I think making fun of her could work :)
Thanks Next chapter might come out um uh....I don't know yet I am going to work on it in a bit. I need a organization member to be like really bad at some thing....any ideas?
Organization XIII Rockstars Chapter One Okay so now I am starting the new story. It is about organization XIII, but a lot of Demyx in there (it's from a third person view, like Demyx sees it happening to himself or something but it's like his thought, what ever please read :) and if you missed the trailer here it is again :) : http://video.kh-vids.net/video/1d7da29d-a96a-4e3f-a3b3-99160104a81f.htm ~~~~ Chapter One: The Castle that Never Was: Demyx’s Room Demyx was playing shoots and ladders with Roxas. Other organization members were scattered around the house. They were in Demyx’s bed room. Axel was also in the room just watching them. It was raining out side and a quite boring day in the castle. Currently, Demyx was winning. Roxas was two shoots away from losing. He had a very angry look on his face. Roxas rolled the die, he got shoots. “Shoots! I hate this game.” Roxas got up and sat in the corner. He was definitely mad. As he got up he pushed the board off of the table they were playing at. Axel laughed. “Woah, Roxas chill, it is just a game.” He went over to where Demyx was. Demyx looked quite bored. “Okay since I picked the last game, and Roxas lost. I think that he should get to pick the next game.” He smiled and looked up at Roxas. Roxas went over to a stack of games piled up in the corner of Demyx’s room. He blandly picked up a deck of cards. “How about go fish?” The three of them gathered around the table and Axel started to deal out cards. While he was doing that they all heard a knock on the door. Because none of them had been expecting anyone they just ignored it. Suddenly they heard Xemnas’s voice over the speaker: “Will all organization members please report to the conference room? NOW!” They all shrugged and hurried out of the room. --- The Castle that Never Was: Conference room Each one of them took their normal seats in the chairs. Xemnas came in with some dude in a suit. Xemnas took his seat and every one looked at him wondering who the guy below was. Xemnas made some sort of gesture to him to tell him to talk. “Excuse me Organization XIII.” Everyone around the room gasped. “Oh, no need to be startled. I was in twilight town and I heard a lot of people talking about you.” All of the members still looked confused. Saix spoke. “No duh people were talking about us! Why do you want to talk to us?” “Well Organization XIII, what are you?” The guy said. There was a lot of whispering around the room. Xemnas talked. “Organization XIII is just a group of friends.” He lied. “I think you are lying. What friends live together and where the same clothes? In my opinion, Organization XIII sounds like a band.” Every one was silent. They didn’t know what to say. Demyx started talking. “You guys, it’s okay he found out. He might make us famous. Yes we are a band. We will need to talk it over but why don’t you come back tomorrow around the same time.” Demyx smiled. The guy waved and walked out of the room. Xemnas looked up. “Demyx, do you have a band?” “Um, not yet.” ~~~~ Okay so that was chapter one. Hope you liked it! Please comment and vote on the poll!
Great job! She has anger issues lol great job!
