I did that on purpose! is it because I want the readers to wonder or because I have yet to think of a name I think it is both....
Give it time oh and after the next chapter, there will be a picuture of her up I've written a page of it so far (microsoft word) and they are usual 2-3 pages so maybe an hour and a half
It is implyed The story Kairi's Choice, ends with them being together I had only posted the first chapter in this thread but there are 13 chapters of it but thanks for reading! Here are all of the chapters: http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9701 http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9714 http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9731 http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9785 http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9802 http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9844 http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9871 http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9897 http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9916 http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9961 http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9979 http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=10005 http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=10024 there's all 13 chapters in order!
Hey, Does any one remember the story Kairi's choice? It was a story that I wrote a while back that ended a month ago. This is the sequal! No one expected it? The first part is from Axel's point of view, but after that it's really from Roxas's point of view. Here's Kairi's Choice if you didn't read it: http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9701 here we go! ~~~~ Chapter One The Castle that Never Was Axel woke up. He was tired. It had been his job to stay up late last night to wait for Roxas to get home. He had volunteered because he thought that he would get to talk to Roxas. Yeah right. He was still quite tired but he wanted to get out of bed anyway. Xemnas doesn’t like late sleepers. He changed into a new coat and walked down to the kitchen. All of the organization members were there. The he instantly woke up. Roxas was there! Axel grabbed a few pieces of bread and some butter then sat down next to Roxas. He toasted his toast by carefully running his hand over it. After he had finished with that, he excitedly talked to Roxas. “Roxas, it’s a surprise to see you around here.” He joked. He made it sound like he was joking, even if it was the truth. Roxas laughed. “Yeah, I guess I just love spending time with Sora, Riku, and Kairi. It’s nice to be with people your own age.” Axel had never thought of it that way. “I guess I never thought of it that way. I just never see you any more. Well, not really. I mean I’ll see you when you get home and wake up, but that’s about it.” Axel said with a bit of sadness in his voice. “I’m sorry. I guess I thought you would understand, maybe see it my way? But I have to leave at 9:30 to go see them. So I guess we can’t really talk now.” “Um Roxas, it’s 9:35.” Xemnas said. “Oh my gosh! I have to go! Axel, will you clean up for me?” Roxas said. Before he even waited for an answer, Roxas disappeared into a corridor to darkness. “Yeah, sure thing.” Axel said. It was pointless, Roxas was long gone. --- Today Axel just had to wait for Roxas, no chores. He decided to read some magazine. He had already read all of his. He opened up the door to Zexion’s room. Zexion was always reading some thing. The room was very organized, nothing was out of place. He walked over to the book case. He picked up some random book and walked back into the main hall to read. He had picked up a war book, lots of blood and people dying. The story needed some sort of fire, but other than that, it was pretty good. He had read a few pages of it when he heard a knock at the door. He looked around, no one else was going to get it. Slowly, Axel got up to open the door. He saw a small girl standing out side. “Sorry, I don’t want to buy any Girl Scout cookies.” He said and started to close the door. With lightening fast reflexes, she held the door open. “I’m not here to sell anything, I want to see Roxas.” Axel stared at her for a few seconds before letting her in. She looked young and small, but I guess she could be Roxas’s age. She was a little bit shorter than Roxas. She had reddish-blonde hair that fell to a tiny bit below her shoulders and fell into her face. There was a pale blue head band in her hair. Her skin was pale. She had navy blue eyes. She was wearing a pale blue long shirt that had a pink ribbon around it and thin straps. Underneath of that, there were pink leggings. She also wore a pink beaded necklace. “Excuse me, who are you?” Axel asked. “Oh, I’m sorry, my name is-” She started. Suddenly, Xemnas appeared. “Axel, who is your friend?” “I don’t know superior. She is here to see Roxas.” “Then take her to Roxas.” Xemnas said and disappeared into a corridor to darkness. “Where’s Roxas?” The girl asked. “He is on Destiny Island.” “Where’s that?” “It’s.... well never mind. Let my take you there.” “Okay.” She said. She sounded a little scared. Axel quickly opened up a corridor of darkness and pulled her through it. “Woah.” Was all that she said. --- Destiny Island: On the beach (Roxas’s Point of view) It was another wonderful day with Sora, Kairi, and Riku. Today, it was warm and they were playing volley ball on the sand. It was Kairi and me again Sora and Riku. We were losing, but we were still having fun. It was warm and in mid morning. The sky was bright blue with a few clouds, not the stormy clouds, but the white fluffy kind. It was really warm but not to bad. “Sora, can we take a break?” Kairi whined. “Yeah.” Sora said The four of them sat on the beach, letting the sun reflect down on them. Suddenly, Roxas saw a black section a ways down on the beach. Axel stepped out with a girl. They walked closer to them. The girl looked familiar, very familiar. It looked like she could be… no it couldn’t be. But it looks like her. “Hi Roxas! I’ve been looking for you for so long!” The girl said and ran up to hug him. “Oh my gosh. It really is you.” Roxas said. Kairi had this disgusted look on her face. “Roxas, should I be jealous?” “Kairi, Sora, Riku, this is-” ~~~~ Mwahaha! Cliff Hanger! So that was chapter one! Hoped you like it! Comments are very much wanted.
I.Am.So.Confused And that means you are doing a great job! Awesome story! Kind of weird but cool! CHAPTER PWN!
YAY I can stay up for 10 more minutes plus reading and commenting time *counts down*
I liked The Goblet of fire the best It was just eventfully awesome and it was so long (long books are awesome)
Left Handed! I was suprised to see all of the left handed people posters! YAY for lefties!
Is it really coming out tonight? If so how long? with time differance everywhere tonight might be tomorrow no hurry now though, procrastination gets us all
just friends in your pants O_o wow.
Well I like to dance and I like cats and my birthday is the 20th of January (or 1/20) so that's how I got dancecat120 Not very complicated...
remember, one thread per story awesome, I like Xed's new look but what's with Kuxir, we were going to find out about him aww, there was so much almost Roxedness but great job FIRST POSTNESS
no... I just wanted to think up a three:D
well we all know now *pokes new story* if it's over right before it then how will there be time as for three, why did you make the bride have brown eyes?
*screams* I KNEW IT WASN'T OVER YAYYYYYYYYYYY I was wondering when Xed was coming back Yay for more Roxed (as I like to call it) awesomeawesomeawesome great job! *is super excited about Xed's return* FIRST POSTNESS!
1. what is the other story about? 2. how long will it take? 3. *thinks of three* I don't think you'll say #1 though...
I don't think we should be afraid of it But I still am Why should people even guess how they die It's probably something no one could ever guess or know about
I don't know what is going to happen I guess I'll go with what I want to happen, I don't know if it's true or not but I've always thought that you feel pain for a second but then you are born again, whether and animal, plant, human, cell, bactria, you just start over again and forget what ever you used to know when you die I guess it hurts, it depends how you die I guess I think I'm scared of dieing, but then again I'm afraid of a lot of things and I'm not a pain person, no pain tolerance here, so I'm a bit terrified but I also doubt any one will ever know what happens when you die because you don't know unless you have and I don't think you would remember So that's my theory wrong or not I don't know but that's what I think
haha extremly funny!! wait are they the only students in their classes or something? but great job!
*laughs at fg for HOURS* me and Roxas: FG and Axel at this party KISSING! I gtg too, it's getting a bit late here Me: Bye Roxas!!!! I'm not even going to ask Roxas: thank you very much *hugs Roxas* *signs off still laughing at Fg and Axel*