I wont until the story is over thanks and chapter 11 should be out in a bit... and the poll has decided the out come of the next chapter
13 Sorry it wont have more I have to go back to school tommorrow and it's hard to find more time to write with homework and clubs and stuff :( Well you will have to wait till either chapter 11 or 12 to find out what Roxas does (I might make chapter 11 short and save that for later)
thank you (and actually you are the third comment) Sure I'll go look at yours :) I can't have Kairi go out of character! now do you really think she would do that?
thanks I am working one chapter 11 but I can't writing any more until there are more votes on the poll :D
It's out now! people please vote on the poll, read, and comment :)
Chapter ten is out! In this chapter we get to see Roxas tell the organization about his morning. What will happen? What will they think? Only reading this chapter will tell. ~~~~ Chapter Ten On the Beach No one talked. They just stood there. Sora and Riku looked confused. Roxas and Kairi had stood up but were no longer holding hands or even touching. Roxas was scared. Were they going to kill him? Was he going to have to fight him self? By now the sun was up. Today was a nice day, the blue skies with light, white, fluffy, clouds. Too bad none of them would be able to enjoy it. After a long time of standing and staring, Roxas decided to talk. “I um erg need to go back to the Organization before they worry about me being gone. Come visit me sometime Kairi.†He started to turn around. “Yeah you better go!†Sora shouted. “Wait Roxas, maybe I would like to come with you now.†Kairi said. “No, Kairi, don’t go!†Sora and Riku shouted at the same time. “Well I really do have to get back.†Roxas said. “Bye Kairi.†He smiled at her and created a corridor of darkness. The Castle that Never Was Roxas stepped out of the corridor of darkness. He didn’t see any one around. He headed towards the kitchen. In there, all other twelve members of the organization we sitting eating breakfast. Roxas grabbed a bagel and sat next between Axel and Demyx. He started to chew on his bagel. Hey maybe I won’t have to talk about my morning. He thought. “So Roxas is back everyone!†Xemnas started. Great, Roxas thought. So much for not having to talk about it. “Did you kiss her?†“Is she in love with you?†“When’s she coming?†“Did she reject you?†So many questions were being thrown at him. He stopped trying to hear them. He couldn’t even tell who was saying them. “Every one!†Xemnas yelled. “Stop asking Roxas so many questions; let’s let him tell the story himself.†Roxas sighed. He really didn’t want to tell them. He knew that he should and would have to sooner or later. “Well, at seven I woke her up so that we could watch the sunset together. Then we held hands and walked along the beach. We sat down and talked a bit and then I kissed her. And she kissed me back.†All of the organization members were aww-ing. “Wait but that’s not the end of it. Sora and Riku saw the kiss. I’m not sure what they said but it made Kairi want to come back with me, now.†“Great job Roxas!†Xemnas shouted. “Okay everyone, meeting over, you can leave now. All we have to do now is wait. Wait for Kairi to fall right into our perfectly set up trap.†The organization members all got up and left. Axel and Roxas remained. “So, you kissed her.†Axel started. “Yeah, I did. I was totally relived that she didn’t push away.†“I told you she wouldn’t. Roxas, did you, um, like it?†Axel asked sheepishly. “I did, a lot. I feel horrible doing this to her.†“Well maybe if you visit her, you can convince her not to come.†“Yeah, I guess I could do that. But for now I think I deserve a break.†Axel smiled at him. They both just sat there. Thinking and wondering, what will happen next. ~~~ Hope you liked it. You will have to wait till the next chapter to find out what happens between Sora, Riku, and Kairi. Please vote on the poll and comment :D
thank you :D chapter ten will be up in an hour
I would've thought someone would seen it coming with the last chapter them telling him to...
I just do things while I write so I don't get bored :)
Yeah I can believe it, after wrting chapters... it's quite hard to be imagniative!
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