ehh not so slow when your typing a story. they will come out quicker in a few days. I only have two more days of school and then I'll have much more typing time, aka quicker and longer chapters
okay. *adds nexit@h XIV to the pm with new chapter list* thanks! in about 22.5 hours
:) when do you expect the next chapter? I know you were aiming for it getting out tonight btw- congrats on the 750 posts!
You know I did, I like to add jokes that only you understand and no one else would even gets as a joke XED OWNS ME? *hugs xed* YAY thanks
I still helped some *shifty eyes* it would have been fine if you hadn't made it a big thing that's no longer secret
one week in my pants wow.
*glares* I so helped think of that! I think so at least.
thanks! woot one hour! *gets to works* Who? (I might know, I just forgot) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Woot, chapter three is out. All 1,079 words of it are done and it is about 27 hours after the last update. Hope you like it! Chapter Three --- Marluxia walked down to the kitchen. No one had taught him how to do the cool thing where they disappeared into darkness yet, so he walked. All of the members were sitting around eating. Marluxia looked around and sat down next to Zexion after grabbing a muffin. He silently sat eating until he saw Xemnas stand up. He went around the table handing out papers. Marluxia looked down at his: #X1 Marluxia Training at 10 am Dish duty for all meals It seamed like an okay schedule and the task didn’t seam so complicated. He looked at his watch, it read 9:00. He had an hour to do the dishes and get to training. He just sat until every member was done. He saw Demyx and Axel whispering and looking at him. They got up and walked over to him. “Is it true you like flowers and your favorite color is pink?†Demyx asked. “Yeah, why?†Marluxia asked with a confused look on his face. “No reason.†Axel said before the two put their plates in the sink and ran off laughing. Marluxia was still confused but got up to do the dishes. There were a lot of dishes but he did them by the time he needed to be at training. --- Marluxia sat in the training room wondering who his trainer would be today. He wasn’t early, in fact he was actually two minutes late. He waited for about ten more minutes until he watched Demyx walk into the room. Demyx was younger then he was. “Sorry I was late. I was swimming.†Demyx said. “Today we will find your element, continue to train you on fighting, teach you basic skills, and help you with you weapon control.†Marluxia couldn’t help but laugh at the last one. He had seen Xigbar at breakfast with an eye patch. “So what are we doing first?†“Basic skills.†Marluxia watched as Demyx opened up a corridor to darkness and listened as he explained it. “So now you try.†“Okay.†Marluxia said. He opened up his hand as instructed and waited. He tried a second time still with no luck. On the eleventh time he finally got it. “Very good, moving on the weapon control. Now don’t go poking with your weapon. Also, don’t take it out when not necessary. Understood?†Marluxia nodded. “Now for an element, what do you like?†“I like flowers.†“Then that’s your element.†“How is flower an element?†Marluxia asked questioningly. Demyx laughed. “You’ll see. Now just we are going to practice fighting. You will practice fighting with Axel, I will be coaching you.†Demyx went into a corridor to darkness and pulled Axel out through it. Axel grinned and pulled out his chakram. He threw one at Marluxia. “Block it with the scythe.†Demyx instructed him. Marluxia blocked it and sent it back at Axel. Axel caught it and threw fire at Marluxia. Not knowing how to block it, Marluxia ducked. “Use your element.†Demyx shouted. “How do I do that?†He seriously wondered. How was he supposed to hurt someone with a flower? “It’s different for every one.†Marluxia looked at him, confused and randomly swung his scythe. After a couple of tries, he sent a lot of flower pedals towards Axel. They cut up Axel badly. “Okay you two can stop now. Good job Marly.†Marluxia watched as Axel and Demyx left through a corridor to darkness. Marly, he liked the name. Marluxia felt strange. It was a good strange though. He liked the feeling that he had felt when he had hurt Axel. He thought it was cool that he was fighting. He normally would have been terrified but for some reason, it felt, well, great. --- He went down for lunch. It was Zexion’s turn to cook. He had made every one hot dogs. Marluxia watched as each member put different things on the hot dogs. Marluxia sat next to Vexen who had put some unidentifiable substance on his. Marluxia stuck to relish. There wasn’t much clean up but Marluxia did what there was easily. In the afternoon, he played war with Axel for a while. It was fun and they played for a while. They actually got along very well. There was only on argument. “My ace takes the king!†Marluxia shouted. “No, aces are low.†Axel said. After some back and fourth bickering, they decided that aces would be high. It really wasn’t a big deal at all. --- For the rest of the afternoon, Marluxia worked on the flowers. He believed that there weren’t nearly enough flowers at the castle that never was. He planted flowers out side, but some in each room, and cared for the ones in his room. Being surrounding by flowers always had made him feel better. Surprisingly enough, none of other members made fun of him or anything, they actually were happy about the flowers being there. Sure he liked planting flowers and all, but when others enjoy it too, the feeling is better then it had been. --- At dinner, Marluxia sat with Zexion. Zexion made some sort of fish with potatoes for dinner. Every one looked down at the fish because no one knew what it was. The sauce was good, he didn’t know what it was, but it tasted good. Marluxia was hungry so he ate the weird fish any way. After Marluxia said it was good, every one picked it up and ate it as well. Demyx was on the other side of Zexion. “What kind of fish is this any way?†Demyx asked. “It’s squid.†Zexion said as if it was no big deal. One by one each member looked up and stared at Zexion. A few members spit out the food. Most looked down at their half empty plates and just put them in the sink, no one wanted to eat any more. There were a lot of dishes. Marluxia sighed and did them. It took a long time but after a lot of dumping, scrubbing, and drying, he was finally done. By the time he was done, it was very late. Marluxia made a corridor to darkness to his room. He was tired and climbed into bed after changing into his pajamas and brushing his teeth. He quickly feel asleep. After some point hours later in the night, he heard some one out side his door. Marluxia ignored it and went back to sleep. ~~~~ End of chapter! Hope you liked it. Don't kill me, I'm not good at fighting scenes. Also, don't forget that he heard some one out side his door. Next Chapter in 24 hours (give or take)
sounds really awesome! please notify me with the link for the Xed part *hugs Xed plushie* *pokes position as Xedarle's#1Fangirl* sounds really really really cool I can't wait! :D :D :D :D LSSP PWN
I will try to add more description into the next chapter
I really don't know. I just needed to make him a nobody. So sure they were heartless, why not.
I know That's about what I would think. I didn't describe it much. No you don't find out who they are, it is of no importance
It doesn't bother me. The Marluxia I'm using is NOTHING like fg's evil Namine killing Marluxia though. Woot 229 words, only 671 to go! By the way: How old do you think Marluxia is in the game?
I don't mind. Critism (sp) is important. I just realized why he was so sad this morning when I was writing, all of the songs that I was listening to were sad. While I type now I'm using more angry songs so hopefully it will make it better. But I have it all planned already
Trust me, you will never figure it out. I didn't even pronounce it out for the first year I knew her, or spell it right. Your not figuring it out. The next story is already out *pokes Marluxia's New Member Chaos*
Don't worry. He gets evil. Remember, this is the little 15 year old Marluxia.
It's really not a lot at all. Lol, thanks 21 hours
I think this has been enough poking.... for now *starts to type chapter* YAY! three words, only about 997 more to go! This chapter was long, it was 1059 words!
in about 23 hours! Thanks! *joins in poking*
I don't know yet. There might be but not for a long time
