It's true! she was dizzy and had a headache all of the next day!
*hugs Xed chibi* THANKS FG FOR DRAWING IT!!!! I'm bricking you?
OMG!!! AWESOMEAWESOMEAWESOME Xed come back!!!! Me: Xed, you and your chibi (sp) are in my desktop Xed: FG SAVE ME Me: There's a picture of fg too Xed: you have a problem Me: :D
Wow, it's really good! I didn't see that part about Axel being born there too coming! great job!
How did the drawings that you were making in math go? *pokes you drawing in math and saying it's lssp stuff no looking* you sing well! but I had to leave and heard about ten seconds. *listens to fg singing in head* it was good! *joins in no school dance*
Sorry *goes to fix* They dyed it in his sleep. He heard them come in but went back to sleep. New chapter in maybe in less than 6 hours. I don't know exacts yet
*feels need to comment on this* She was actually pretty good at singing, I was surprised. Sadly I had to get up to leave because everyone had to :( Wootness, end of bad moon arising! Wootness start of the lssp!
Thanks! I'm not even close but 350 is a big number!
doesn't bother me at all. 350th post!
thanks! I had to make his hair turn out pink by the end of the story.
thanks SCHOOL IS OVER!!!! sorry still excited, lol. new chapter not tonight
Thanks, yes his hair pwns I know what comes next, unlike my other stories I actually planned ahead on this one. the baby? I'm not telling you who it is but I'll give you a hint. If Marluxia is 15 and normally 24ish then the baby is really not a baby at all, but a five year old. Think about Marluxia being 9 years younger and you'll find who it basically is.
yeah, that's the best thing I could think of besides him being born with it and that would have been no fun. thanks! next chapter not tomorrow but some random time the next day
real thought...as opposed to fake thought? just kidding, I know what you mean. When I right my stories on some chapters I can be not paying any attention to it and it just turns out fine while of other chapters it takes a lot of effort and thought.
I liked it the begining was cool in my opinion it just looked a little unorganized with the huge paragraph, that may just be me though. but it sounds interesting! (good interesting)
Great job! I really liked it. haha poor axel having to be with Demyx it's funny! great job!
*feels stupid* Wow I always forget to look for new chapters with the new one thread rule. There have been 8 chapters since the last time I read! Great job, I'm a bit confused but it's really good. I still feel sorry for Roxas Great job!
Right, I know what that is, I just didn't know that's what it's called. Next chapter there should be more detail hopefully Okay it's short but too bad. I put in description but not much really happens in this chapter. ~~~ Chapter Four --- Marluxia slowly opened his eyes and looked over to his clock. It was already nine-thirty! Marluxia pulled on a clean robe and opened up a corridor to darkness. He didn't even bother to look in the mirror. He entered the kitchen and grabbed some toast. After that, he sat down next to Demyx for break fast.He started to spread butter onto the toast. Out of nowhere, he heard laughing. He ignored it for a while as he started to eat his toast. The laughing continued all throughout break fast. Marluxia was pretty sure that the laughing was in his direction. He wiped his face with a napkin to see if that was the problem, it wasn’t. After Marluxia was finished with his breakfast, Xemnas came in. Xemnas looked around the room. When he was looking at Marluxia, he paused, made an odd face, and continued looking around. It was a Saturday so there were no chores. Demyx and Axel scurried out of the room as soon as they were done eating. Xemnas stopped over to talk to Marluxia. “Marluxia, did you look in the mirror this morning?” Xemnas asked with a concerned look on his face. Marluxia just shook his head with a confused look on his face. “I suggest you do so.” Marluxia walked out of the kitchen and into one of the bathrooms. He didn’t have any food in his teeth or on his face, he didn’t need to shave (he never had), and there wasn’t anything on his coat. He looked up to see if his hair was messy. It wasn’t. Then he stopped. His hair was pink. It was no longer the pretty brown shade that it had been, but a very light pink. He screamed. Then he ran out of the room and back into the kitchen. “Who did this?” He said. No one in the room made the slightest noise but Marluxia could tell that many were trying to hold in their laughter. He heard snickering outside the room. “Demyx! Axel!” He turned around to see the young blonde and red head running away. --- He made a corridor to darkness to his room. When he got there, he went straight to the bath room. The first thing he did was take a shower in attempt to get out the color. He washed his hair three times and scrubbed it extra hard. After he was done, he got out, dried off, and got dressed. He looked back into the mirror, his hair was still that pink. He stared at it for a few minutes. It really wasn’t all that bad. He actually liked pink and this wasn’t a bad shade. It actually looked pretty good on him. He went to go find the two so he could know what color they used to dye his hair. --- He created a corridor to darkness to Demyx’s room. He knocked on the door. Hesitantly, Demyx opened it. Demyx’s room was the same white as all of the others. He had put music posters on his walls. His sheets had musical notes all over them. On his book shelf were mostly music books, sheet music, and some short stories. Demyx was really young, probably about the same age if not younger then Zexion. Zexion was eleven years old. Axel was sitting in there too. He was probably about the same age as Marluxia. “Demyx, two questions: One, how old are you? Two, what color did you use for my hair.” “I’m about ten. I don’t remember what we used.” Marluxia watched as he ran into the bathroom. After a few minutes, Demyx came out with a box and handed it to Marluxia. “Why, do you actually like it?” “Yeah I do thanks!” Marluxia said before he ran back into his room. --- He sat in his room looking into the mirror, the pink really did look good but it was just missing something. His hair had grown since the beginning of all of this. His hair always had grown very quickly. His hair was really long, it reached half way down his back. Maybe I should give myself a hair cut, he thought. He grabbed a pair of scissors and held it up to his hair. Was he really going to do this? He slowly made a snip and watched as a lot of pink hair fell to the floor. He evened it out so that it was about two inches below his shoulders all the way around. Next he cut in bangs. He stopped them at about his eye lids and randomly cut more of it out. He then randomly shortened his at places around his head so that pieces stuck out. He looked in the mirror wondering what he had just done. He must admit that he looked different, he wasn’t sure if it was a good or bad different though. He shrugged and went down to see what every one thought of it. --- He wanted to watch television with most of the other members. He sat down on one of the chairs. Marluxia hardly cared what they were watching. He just wanted to be where most of them were to see if anyone noticed. Apparently, no one did. After a while of waiting and such, Marluxia went back up stairs to his room. As he closed the door, he wasn’t sure if it was just his imagination, but he thought he heard a baby crying. ~~~ End of chapter. Now we know about how his hair came to be. Who is that baby? Next chapter won't be tomorrow, I don't know when it will be on the next day though.
I thought that like it was Roxas, Demyx, Zexion for like age order. They are all younger, except vexen, xigbar, and xemnas, they are younger but still old. And then baby namine- *puts tape over mouth* I've said too much. Marly got his first evilness in this chapter right after he hurt Axel, the evil will get bigger as the story progesses. I always think Marluxia is nice but then I remember what he did. The story doesn't take you all the way up to chain of memories. It's only 11 chapters long because Marluxia is number 11. It's only like the first few days that Marluxia had in the organization. But thanks!
YAY! 22 hours until chapter 4 *starts brainstorming*
