I like that ending. It's cute! *hugs Roxas and Xed* awwwww
In the game he is and I can't change how it must turn out Chapter one is up, I'll upload the rest later. I completly forgot to start on chapter 6, so I am starting on it now, in less then 2 hours it should be out but I forgot, sorry it will be out soon ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sorry it's late. I was having a life. Surprising as it is, I have one! But here is the chapter. Chapter Six --- And that was how the next few weeks went by. There were no big events, troubles, or anything. Life in the organization was actually boring. Every day he would play with Naminé and that was about it. He had been in the organization for a month when things changed again. --- It was Axel’s birthday, or at least that was what he said. Marluxia wasn’t sure if nobodies could have birthdays even. If something didn’t exist, then how could it get older? They must be able to get older though because in the last month in the organization, Demyx had grown and he was a nobody. But never the less, Axel wanted a party in honor of his birthday. Marluxia and Zexion volunteered to bake the cake. Where ever Marluxia went, Naminé would follow so she was helping too. Zexion might have only been eleven but he was very good at baking. Marluxia watched as he cracked open an egg with one hand and gently mixed the batter together. Marluxia didn’t do much beside help put the cake in the oven, time it, and get materials. Naminé helped to decorate the cake with her artistic abilities. She drew Axel on there with frosting and wrote ‘Happy 16th Birthday’ as well. At the party, there was eating of birthday cake and pizza and a little dancing Not much was going on. Demyx volunteered to help out with the music. For one song, as a joke, Demyx started to play a slow song and said. “Would all of the couples come out onto the dance floor?†Every one laughed. Many members jokingly pushed out some of the guys together but no one really danced on the song besides Naminé and Marluxia. Marluxia danced with her because Naminé was so little and cute and she wanted to dance with some one. At the end of the party Axel thanked every one and then slowly members left the room and went to bed. --- Naminé was still very hyper due to all of the festivities and didn’t want to go to sleep. Marluxia let her dance around for about half an hour until she was tired and feel right to sleep. Marluxia carefully put her into pajamas and put her into her bed. Naminé was always innocent but she looked even more innocent when she was sleeping, the way that she smiled in her sleep was adorable. If Naminé was his age, he would probably like her. Not that it was possible or anything but she was so adorable in a little kid sort of way. --- Marluxia was tired and instantly fell asleep when he got back to his own room. Naminé had grown so much in the last month. She no longer seemed so tiny at all. She was still small but not as much. That was something that Marluxia missed in the organization, girls. Being a fifteen year old boy pretty much made him think about girls a lot. There were never any around besides Naminé. Hopefully soon there would be new additions to the organization of the female gender. --- The next day, Xemnas woke them up early to tell them that a new recruit would be coming into the organization. Her name was Renale but in the organization she would be referred to as Larxene. Xemnas sent Axel and me to go find her because she is sixteen and he wanted kids close to her age to get her. Axel and I opened a corridor to darkness to her home town. We searched for her. After looking in many places, we found a girl the pretty much fit the one that Xemnas had given us. She was about an inch shorter then Axel with straight blonde hair the reached to her shoulders and bright green eyes. She was wearing dark blue flared jeans and a long light green tank top. “Axel, you should turn the charm on her to try to get her back with us. She doesn’t look like it should be too much trouble to convince. I’ll come for back up if it’s needed.†Marluxia said. Axel just nodded and headed towards where Renale was sitting and reading. Marluxia couldn’t hear what Axel was saying but watched as he waved and put his arm around her like old friends. Renale struggled to stay sitting down and get Axel away from her. When he didn’t budge, she slapped him. Axel cringed and walked back towards Marluxia. “That didn’t work. Do you have another plan?†Axel asked. Marluxia nodded and walked towards her. “Renale?†The girl looked up. “How do you know my name?†“I’m a friend of a friend. Sorry about my friend, it was dare for him to try to get a girl to kiss him. He lost the dare. No one thought that he could do it any way. He’s very sorry for anything that he might have done. Why don’t you come with me so that he can apologize?†Hesitantly, Renale got up and came with them. Marluxia took her hand. He had missed girls and might as well make a move, right? Axel opened up a corridor to darkness after looking both ways and Marluxia lead her through it. Xemnas was waiting for them when they got back. “Welcome Renale, welcome to Organization XII.†They went through the same talk and conversation that Marluxia had gotten just a month before when he had entered the organization. --- After Larxene had left, Xemnas went to talk to them. “I want you two to date Larxene.†“Us, why?†Marluxia asked. “I want you three to be good friends. I want you both to date her, at different times of course.†“What do we get out of it?†Axel asked. “Who ever is dating her has no chores and the other only has to take care of Naminé.†“Won’t it hurt her feelings?†Marluxia asked. “None of you have feelings.†Xemnas said. “Now go, those are your orders.†--- End of chapter. Larxene is here and Axel is older. The chapter was weird and random but it was a good length. Larxene isn't mean because as a kid I don't think any of them were that mean.
yeah, I liked this chapter too new chapter in less then 4 hours hopefully, I'll start writing once I wake up, (I just woke up) I feel bad that Marluxia will be evil and makes Namine be evil too and try to kill them and it's sad! I am posting this on fanfiction, the name's Xedarlesfangirl
opps sorry *goes to fix* Larxene's coming? I didn't know that!
give or take. I guessed relative ages
you should be talking! *pokes millions of talent that fg owns* Yay! I don't want to make him evil but I have too :( and towards Namine too! new chapter in about 16ish hours?
I know I know I won't guess or say anything
yeah half of the time in school I'm all fg why are you ignoring me!!??! and she is all huh? (because she zones out about her stories) they really affect her mood too. sad chapters= sad fg happy chapters= happy fg mad chapters= RUN FOR YOUR LIFE me:I KNOW HOW LONG *raises hand* fg: *raises knife* me: I mean I have no idea *shifty eyes*
I HATE YOU!!! Or I love you still kind of confused that was like!!!! but they kissed YAY!!!! great chapter!
*pokes first picture in sig* I edited a picture of Roxas and a picture of Xed that you drew together
what is true? I just typed that because fg wrote 'me likie the key blades' next to the Xed chibi
please fix it!!!! by the way: Avatar is the Xed chibi that you drew! Xed: Me likie the keyblades Me: Repeat after me: Me likie ROXAS Xed: Me likie rox- KEYBLADES! I do not like Roxas
I'm not even kidding, I cried when that happened you are getting back at me for you having to kiss Roxas aren't you! this is so mean! Xed and Roxas is over I HATE YOU *continues to cry* ROXAS YOU DIDN'T LIKE IT!!!!! It was a SPELL it has to have been *cries more*
:) thanks! If I had a choice I would keep him nice but I have to go along with the game and make him evil by the end zexion is 11 demyx is 10 namine is 5 axel, saix, marluxia are 15 the others aren't important really no offense but duh it's in the past! this is when marluxia first entered the organization! (I decided he can be 15)
I never thought of Marly as a jerk! I think Marly is nice when he was younger! But I will sadly have to make him evil because I can't change the game. So he will become evil yes little Namine is cute! *hugs*
okay, that was a bit confusing luck isn't my strong suit. I like strategy better
YAY! thanks! um I'd say talent?
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Chapter five is out. Sorry there was nothing out yestorday, I had the farewell assembly (sp) the night so I didn't have time to write. But now it's out so here it is! Chapter Five --- Marluxia stopped for a second and continued to listen. It wasn’t his imagination, he did hear someone crying. Curious, he walked down the stairs to the main hall. When he saw no one there, he went into the kitchen and the sound got louder. At first, he just saw Xemnas, Zexion, and Saix crowding around the counter. What ever it was had to be inside of their tight circle. As he approached, them the noise got louder and louder and louder. As he pushed through the circle he muttered. “Xemnas is that a baby?” “No, she is actually about five years old.” Xemnas said to him with confusion and nervousness in his voice. Inside of the circle was a small child. She had bright, light blue eyes and light blonde hair. The hair had bangs and was tied into two pigtails. The pigtails were very short and only reached to about two inches above her shoulders. She was wearing a light blue tee shirt and pink corduroy pants. She was crying loudly. “Why is she crying? Why is she here?” Marluxia asked. “She is crying because she it upset or something. She is here to help the organization in the future.” Zexion said. “How could this little girl help?” “She has powers. When Diz gave her to us, he called her a witch. We are not sure if he is right or not, but she could be very useful.” Saix said. “Does she have a name?” Marluxia asked. “Diz called her Naminé.” Xemnas said. Marluxia wondered if she was hungry. He went over to a cabinet and grabbed a box of crackers. He placed a few in her hand. Naminé looked down at the crackers and then with a slight hesitation, began to eat them. Then she was smiling. “You seem to get along well with her Marluxia. Why don’t you take care of her?” Xemnas said. Marluxia nodded and watched as Naminé. She was a very cute little girl. Marluxia had always liked children. He waited as she ate. If Naminé was five, then why wasn’t she talking? He watched as she finished eating. “Naminé, can you talk?” She looked up at him. “Yes, I can.” “Then why were you just crying like a baby.” “Because they are idiots.” She said. “I like you Naminé. I’m Marluxia by the way.” She smiled and laughed. “Naminé what do you like to do?” “I like to draw!” She said. She looked excited. --- Marluxia took her down into the basement through a corridor to darkness. He set up a small table with paper and crayons on it and sat her down on one of the chairs. He sat down next to her. He watched as she suddenly was scribbling quickly onto one of the papers. She drew for a long time. Marluxia just stared at the picture. It was so accurate, better than anything that even he could draw, and she was only five. “I’m done!” Naminé said happily. She showed him a picture. There were two girls on it, one had short reddish hair and the other looked like Naminé. They were holding hands. “Naminé, I see you but who is the other girl?” She looked down. “I don’t know, she is some one from this dream I keep having. I think that her name is Kairi but I don’t her. I have never met her. I just know her from my dreams. Some times it’s almost as if I am her. But that is silly.” The five year old looked at Marluxia with wide eyes. Then she looked back down at her picture. Marluxia glanced over at the clock. It was starting to get late. Naminé looked tired. Suddenly, Xemnas appeared. “I have a room set up for Naminé. She looks tired, please put her to sleep.” Xemnas said. Marluxia just nodded. --- He took Naminé to her room. After helping her into pajamas and having her brush her teeth, he put her into bed. “Marluxia, will you put my picture on the wall?” She asked. Marluxia smiled and pinned up the picture before he left the room. --- He went to go talk to Xemnas. When he got to his room, he knocked on the door. “Come in.” Xemnas said. Marluxia walked in. He had never been inside of Xemnas’s room. It wasn’t like the others. It was all white like the others, but it was different. Xemnas kept his completly white. When you first walk in, it’s an office. There’s his desk and chairs. On the walls there’s a door for his room and bath room. Marluxia sat down on one of the chairs in front of the desk. “Xemnas, is Naminé a nobody?” “We don’t know yet.” Xemnas said. “We assume that she is not. She is just a child.” “Have you every heard of some one named Kairi?” Marluxia asked. “No, we know of no Kairi’s. Any more questions?” Xemnas asked patiently. “Why am I assigned to be with Naminé?” Marluxia questioned. Xemnas sighed. “When we do use Naminé, we need for her to like someone and trust someone. If she doesn’t then it will be hard to control her. You seem to understand her so we have you with her.” “Is this instead of or in addition too chores?” “It depends on the amount of chores needed. You will get out of chores easier though.” “That sounds cool superior. Well I’m going to go to sleep. Good night.” Marluxia said before he exited the room. --- Marluxia wasn’t really tired but he didn’t really feel comfortable with Xemnas. It was just weird and awkward. He pulled on his pajamas and brushed his teeth. He lay in his bed for a while before he went to sleep. Naminé was so little and her drawings were amazing. Could drawing be her power? It made as much sense as flower being an element. He hoped that Naminé would stay with the organization for a while. Naminé may have just been a little girl, but so far, she was the best friend that he had met. ~~~ Okay end of chapter. Why is it so Naminé centric? I don't know I just like her. She's pretty cool. This chapter was weird but thanks for reading! Next chapter probably 24ish hours I have motivation and Microsoft Word I hope that I have talent :)
um my chapters are pretty short. Only about 1000 words usually. Also, I type quickly and am motivated. I want to finish up the story before I go to camp in 10 days. If I don't finish it by then there won't be any updates for an extremly long time period. There will be 11 chapters so my goal was one chapter a day.
*blinks twice* don't get drunk! lssp starts tomorrow and you need to finish bma today!
