Diz: I am a servant of the world, if ya know what I mean.
Yeah it was a boring chapter, I had to add something funny. Thanks!
It's cool I think you were trying to make it hard to read (black on gray) because if you weren't trying, then it was hard to read, if you were trying good job. I had to read it three times before I kind of sort of understood it though, but that is sometimes good. But it sounds fun to read!
Sorry it took so long to update, some things came up. Sorry that it's so short too. With out school and seeing my friends I actually lack inspriation. Wow that's sad. But never less here's the chapter. Chapter Seven --- “Axel, who um gets her first?†Marluxia asked. It was so weird to talk like this. It was like she wasn’t even a human. Actually she wasn’t a human, she was a nobody, but still it felt quite strange. Axel grinned. “Who ever she wants.†“Do you really feel right about this?†Marluxia asked, still worried. “It’s no big deal. It’s just a couple dates. It’s not like you’ve never dated anyone before.†Axel said and paused. There was no response. “Wait, you have had a date before haven’t you?†Axel said. Marluxia looked down to the floor. “Well yeah, about that, no I haven’t.†He said quietly. “I’m sorry Marluxia. But you’ll finally get a girl!†Axel said with a grin. “But I don’t know what to do!†Marluxia said sadly. “You’re smart. You’ll figure it out.†Axel said before he left. --- By dinner time, there were already bets going around with who would get her first. Of course Luxord was in charge of all of the bets. So far it seamed that six members voted Axel and only three voted Marluxia. Larxene was oblivious to what was going on around her. At dinner, Larxene came and looked around. She didn’t really know any one yet and didn’t know where she could sit. Being the nice guy that he was, he planned to offer her a seat. “Larxene, you can sit with me.†Marluxia said as he patted the chair next to him. When she didn’t respond he thought of something else. Maybe she didn’t recognize her nobody name yet. “Renale, why don’t you come sit over here?†He asked. She looked up and smiled at him. “Thanks, I don’t know any one here yet.†“I’m Marluxia.†He said as he extended his hand. “I’m Renale, I mean Larxene.†She said as she shook his hand. She looked down at the food on her plate. It had been Vexen’s turn to cook. She poked the undeniable substance with her fork. “Why is this?†“Vexen made it, don’t ask, just eat. It usually isn’t harmful.†Marluxia smiled. Larxene laughed at that while she carefully ate the substance. Marluxia waited for her to be finished. “Come with me, I’ll show you back to your room.†He got up and put their plates in the sink. --- Marluxia took her to her room. “Okay here we are. I had fun sitting with you. Do you want to hang out some time?†He asked. Marluxia couldn’t believe that he was doing this but he hoped that she would say yes. “Like a date?†Larxene asked as she looked at him. There was a look of scariness and worry in her eyes. He could tell it in her voice as well. Marluxia blushed. “If that’s okay with you.†“Yeah, well see you tomorrow.†She said smiling. “Yeah, night.†He said. She said yes, she actually said yes. --- He walked down to the main hall where a few organization members were hanging out. “So what did she say?†Luxord asked. “She said yes.†Marluxia said still smiling. --- The next morning, Marluxia woke up early. He didn’t know what he was doing with Larxene, he didn’t know when he was doing something, but he knew that he was doing something, and that’s more then Axel could say. Marluxia straightened up his room in case she came there. He made his bed, put all of his clean clothes away, put dirty clothes in the hamper, and straightened the books on his shelf. After his room looked presentable, he got ready. He took a long shower and washed his hair thoroughly. Instead of just letting his hair dry, he used a blow dryer to dry it. Next, he brushed his teeth two times and washed his face as well. He brushed his hair one last time before leaving the room. Marluxia walked out of the room and started towards the kitchen for breakfast. He passed multiple members on the way who just looked at him and laughed. There was nothing wrong with him, he had spent so much time in front of the mirror that he knew he looked fine. When he got to breakfast he sat down next to Demyx. Larxene wasn’t at breakfast yet. “Marluxia, I like your outfit.†Demyx said smiling. It almost looked like he was trying to hold back laughter. Marluxia looked down at his outfit. He was wearing a brown shirt with blue flowers on it. When he looked at his pants, he screamed and ran back to his room. Many organization members laughed. How he had managed to forget his pants, Marluxia didn’t know. Thankfully, Larxene wasn’t down yet or else that would’ve been embarrassing. Marluxia pulled on a pair of blue jeans. He wasn’t going to wear his organization coat on the date because if they went some where then there would be suspicious looks. Marluxia stood in front of the mirror for a while to make sure he hadn’t forgotten anything this time. He had on his pants, shoes, socks, underwear, and shirt. His face was clean and there was nothing on his face. Marluxia was ready to see Larxene. He walked out the door and walked down the hallway to Larxene’s room. ~~~~~ dadada Cliffhanger!
Roxas: No one knows me better than, if ya know what I mean
will any users actually appear in there? (just wondering) will there be like interuptions in the middle or will they not interfere? (sorry for the random questions)
Interesting. I'm a little confused and all but that is normal for me. Like I said, interesting (I don't know if it's good or bad interesting yet) But you should continue!
Namine: About a year ago, some things happened, if ya know what I mean.
I knew that you've been thinking about it since december! *feels special* Hopefully you will think of more randomness, I'm sure that you will Random Facts:LSSP Pwn
But I should be about to get it out anyway. I'm not posting it till tomorrow... I have 9 more days and 5 more chapters, today is my day off
I haven't even started to type yet. It only takes me about 30 minutes to actually type it up. But it might be later because something just came up at home and I might not be able to get it done in time.
Thank you! next chapter in about 6ish hours most likely
Awesome, I motivated some one *feels special* That motivates me to start on chapter seven. That doesn't mean I'm going to but it helps. I really won't start untill the morning when I'm not half asleep, the chapters turn out better when I am awake
Does my story about his new member chaos have anything to do with your motivation? It's good, extremly long though (which is good I think) Poor Marly! I like with Marluxia fics to see what some body name every one gives them. It's good. *waits for another chapter*
OMG IT'S XED'S SOMEBODY! so kuxir really is riku's nobody. Because kuxir is friends with xed and I feel smart really awesome!!!! I was a little confused at first but it's really cool!!! LSSP PWN!
Yeah I try to keep it with us viewing his thoughts but it's not his point of view... Yes he is.
Okay then. *backs away slowly* To make you feel better: Next chapter in about 22 hours
I'm sorry!?!?!? I don't try to write fast, wait no I do!
Yeah, I couldn't have it take 100 chapters so some times there will be jumps sorry about that? Yeah I was deciding whether to put in Larxene or not in this chapter when I read your post and I had no better ideas.
yes. there will be Larxel and MarluxiaXlarxene (I forgot what it's called) but NO Axel Marluxia because I like to avoid flames yeah Larxene hits hard! Axel: Larxene why did you slap me? Larxene: Dance wrote it Axel: Dance....!!! Me: Should I run?
