Out of curiousity what did you expect? thank you!
Two to three hours. Thank you! *slowly emerages from corner* eastern time. I should probably start working. *types* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Here's the last chapter. It's short but too bad. It's right on time. Chapter Ten --- Marluxia grasped Naminé’s hand. “Come on, let’s go.†He took her into Xemnas’s office. She sat down in one of the chairs in front of his desk while Marluxia stood next to Xemnas. “Good job Marluxia. I had faith that you could get her to do it.†Xemnas said. “Thank you superior.†Marluxia said. Xemnas turned towards Naminé. “Now there has been a castle set up for you to bewitch. Make it so as he goes up, he looses his memories and only remembers the fake memories. I want you to do it now!†Xemnas yelled at her. Naminé looked up, in her eyes Marluxia could tell she was on the verge of tears. “Yes sir.†She said as she got up and started to leave. “Hold up Naminé. Now Marluxia, Axel, and Larxene will control you.†“What about Vexen?†She asked. “He is of no importance. You are to listen to every thing that they say. Whether what you are doing is good or bad, you must listen and obey.†Naminé nodded and ran out the door. “Xemnas may I?†“Please go.†He said. --- Marluxia ran after Naminé. She was sitting in her room sobbing quietly into her pillow. Marluxia sat down next to her. “Naminé, what’s wrong?†She looked up at him with an angry stare. “You turned against me. You are just as bad as the rest of them.†Marluxia gripped her hand and she tried to shake it off. “Naminé, it’s so hard to be under the pressure of Xemnas. I had to do it. We are real friends. You can still trust me. Every thing will be okay.†Naminé considered her thoughts for a while. “Okay, I believe. I need some more colored pencils and a sketch pad.†Naminé told him. Marluxia quickly opened up a corridor to darkness and got her supplies, then he gave them to her. After that he left the room. --- Axel and Larxene were in Larxene’s room. They were just talking. Marluxia went in. “We will be working together. We need to get over this stupid argument.†Axel spoke up. “I couldn’t agree more.†Then he held out his hand. “Friends?†Marluxia shook it. “Yeah, friends.†“Sit.†Axel commanded. “We know that you are in control of this new operation and all, but I do believe that we should all work together and become more and better. We should be loyal to one another. We should be come the superiors of Organization XIII.? “Thirteen?†Marluxia asked. “Roxas is here already. He is a nice boy. Him and I are great friends.†“Your plan sounds fun. I definitely agree.†Marluxia said happily. “Perfect.†Axel said. --- A few weeks later, they set off for castle oblivion. Naminé had it all bewitched and completely ready. It would be a matter of hours before Sora would show up. The rest of this story is history. I think you all have heard of it. It’s called Chain of Memories. please note: I do not own Chain of Memories or any thing at all relating to this story other than my ideas and my somebody name for Marluxia. I hope you all liked it. I leave in 4 days so I might make a small story or just wait until I get back. Thanks for reading every one!
I hadn't thought out the whole Larxene and Marluxia plot yet. I'll get to it in chapter 10. As for Namine and Kairi, well um erg *runs off into a dark corner*
He had to turn evil! Tomorrow, probably mid-morning. Or for those not in my time zone, that's in about 12ish hours. I think the next chapter is the last though. As you see I am close to where Chain of Memories starts so that means I'm basically done. Marluxia: Haven't you already ruined my life enough? Me: One chapter can do oh so much. *evil smile*
I'd do anything, in your pants That would have to be the most wrong song ever for this.
tomorrow or the next day hopefully. Tomorrow I am leaving my house and having a life ! Well I left my house today too but tomorrow I won't be home that much. So most likely in 2 days! Here's Chapter Nine. Chapter Nine --- Flash Back The door was closed, so Marluxia knocked. There was no answer so Marluxia assumed that he could just go in. When he opened the door, he stopped walking. Larxene was sitting on her bead and Axel was there too. Marluxia thought it over again. This is Larxene, and Axel’s here too. If they had just been sitting there talking, it would have been one thing but that wasn’t all it was. Axel and Larxene were kissing. End of Flash Back --- They continued obviously not knowing that Marluxia was in the room. It was hard to watch too. After they continued for a few more minutes, Marluxia spoke up. “Larxene?” He said letting his voice sound shaky. She came up for breath. She looked Marluxia right in the eye then looked away. “Marluxia, it’s not what it seems!” “So Axel’s tongue was not in your mouth?” He asked. Axel wanted to make a point on this one. “Actually, we haven’t gotten that far yet. If you had gotten here a few minutes later, then you would be able to say that truthfully.” Either way, Marluxia felt hurt. “Don’t be upset Marluxia. You can’t be, no feelings remember.” Axel said smiling. Marluxia stopped and turned around. “Axel, I hate you.” Axel got up. “Want to say that again?” Marluxia didn’t respond with words. Instead, he pulled out his scythe. He swung it how he had once to destroy Axel. He sent flower petals towards Axel. Axel sent fire at Marluxia and Marluxia dodged it. Marluxia stabbed Axel with his scythe. Axel threw one of his chakram at Marluxia who hit it back with his scythe. Marluxia hadn’t learned any other attacks yet. He just sent the flowers again. He didn’t know what he did differently this time, but it was different. Axel was done and Marluxia could tell that he was done. “I like to fight.” Marluxia said before he walked away. --- The next seven years went by with nothing. He tended to his flowers and he tended to Naminé. That was all that he did. Every one avoided his and stayed out of his way. Larxene and Axel still were together and to this day still avoided him. Marluxia was no longer the nice little pathetic guy that he had been. Ever since that day when he caught Larxene and Axel together, he had been different. He liked fighting while he had once dreaded it and had thought that it was wrong. Every one in the organization had changed really. Larxene was no longer his cute girlfriend but a sadistic evil woman with control over lightening. Axel was still pretty much the same though. --- Marluxia woke up and went down to breakfast. He sat with Naminé today like he had every day. She was now thirteen years old. He blonde hair had grown as had the rest of her. Every day she wore a white dress. She was constantly drawing. At breakfast, there was an announcement. Xemnas of course was the one giving it. “There is a new key blade master. He is a great threat to the organization. His name is Sora. Sora is fourteen. He can fight well. Sora has a nobody. We want his nobody in the organization and we want to destroy all that Sora is. The nobody's name is to be Roxas. Marluxia, Larxene, and Axel, I would like to talk to you three alone.” They went into his office. “Now the three of you are the closest to Naminé. We have finally discovered what Naminé can do. She has the power over Sora’s memories and those connected to him. We can use her to destroy him. With her drawings, she can completely change what Sora believes is his past and everything. It is all planned out. All that we need you to do is play with Sora and keep his going. Marluxia must convince Naminé to help up with this.” “I can do that quite easily.” --- Marluxia walked to Naminé’s room. She was sitting at her long white table drawing. Currently she was drawing a picture of a guy with an organization coat holding hands with a guy with red shorts and a black and white shirt. “Who are they Naminé?” Naminé looked up startled. “It’s Sora and Roxas.” She said before going back to her drawing. “Naminé, your time has come to help out the organization?” Marluxia said, holding her hand. “Me, what for?” She asked. “Naminé, you have powers over Sora's memories through drawing. You can change what he remembers and make it better. He will thank you.” Naminé looked down at the paper. “What about me? Can I make him know me?” “Naminé, you can do anything. You can make him love you and he will think that that’s how it’s always been. Naminé, you have the power.” He said smiling. “Power.” Naminé said confidently. “But won’t it be wrong?” She asked. “Naminé, just think about how great it could be. Naminé, right from wrong hardly matters. You will help so many people. Does it matter if just Sora gets hurt if every one else comes out better?” Marluxia said. “But what about guilt? I’ll never be able to live with myself.” She said looking down. “Naminé, you’re a nobody. Don’t worry, you won’t feel a thing.” Marluxia said pulling her closer. Marluxia leaned over and kissed her on the check. “Naminé, do it for me?” “I’ll do it.” --- Sorry that I had to make Marly mean. I can't change the game. He is bad! I like this chapter though. Poor Namine!
I have to read How to Read Literature Like a Professor and answer 22 questions on it. And I must read To Kill a Mockingbird and write a three page essay applying what I learned in the first book to analyze the literary elements. It's a ton of fun! *she said sarcastically*
get to far? ewewew I would never write anything like that! Thank you!
Nope, it is staying up. That is what you get for that being the only picture of Xed beside the xed chibi that you let me see not on online.
Roxas: They're from the dreams, if ya know what I mean
You've never forgotten your pants before? Thanks! Next chapter sometime today or tomorrow, I need to pack today because I'm going to camp in a week. Woot chapter 8 is out! I hope to get more done on chapter 9 today and have it out by tomorrow. Please enjoy this chapter! Chapter Eight --- Marluxia left his room and turned down the hall. On his way, he was going to pass Axel’s room so that he could ask for some last minute tips. When he got to Axel’s room, he heard crying. It was the crying of Naminé. She was sitting on his bed just crying and Axel was sitting there not knowing what to do. “Marly, thank god you’re here! What do I do, she just keeps crying?†Axel said with a worrisome look on his face. Marluxia walked over to Naminé. “Are you hungry?†He asked. Naminé shook her head and pointed to her arm. There was a small cut on it with some blood coming out. Marluxia picked her up and took her into the bath room. He first washed it off with soap and water. “Naminé this will sting a bit.†He told her. He soaked a cotton ball in some medicine and wiped the cut with it. After that he put a bandage on it and took her back to Axel. “Be more careful with her Axel.†Were his last words before leaving. --- He took a nap for a few hours. Then he walked to Larxene’s room. When he got there, he knocked on the door and waited for her to come out. After a few minutes of waiting, she came out. Her blonde hair had been pulled into a pony tail and she was wearing a pastel pink shirt with loose brown shorts. She looked nice. “Where are we going?†She asked. “Well I was thinking I would show you another world and then we could come back here.†He suggested. She smiled. “That sounds nice.†Marluxia took her hand as he opened up a corridor to darkness to Destiny Island. --- It was getting late and the sun was starting to set. He sat down next to her on the beach. There were some little kids also on the beach. Marluxia got up to kindly ask if they would go away. They looked about Naminé’s age. One had silver hair and looked a little older then the other two, one had brown hair, and one had short reddish hair. Marluxia stopped, it was the girl from Naminé’s drawing. “Excuse me is your name Kairi?†He asked. “Yes it is.†Kairi said. She looked around at her friends and the three ran off. Marluxia walked back down to where Larxene was sitting. Then he sat next to her. “Isn’t the sunset beautiful?†Marluxia asked as he took Larxene’s hand. Larxene just looked at him and nodded quickly. “Is something bothering you?†He asked. “I don’t know. I guess I just miss every one.†Larxene said, looking down at the ground. “I felt the same way when I first came here.†He said. “Did you cry?†She asked staring into his eyes. “Yeah, I did.†He said. Then he hugged her. “Let’s watch the sun set.†He said. And that is just what they did. After the sun was down, Marluxia opened up a corridor to darkness back to the castle that never was. He walked her to her door. “It was fun Marluxia, thanks.†She said. Marluxia smiled at her. Then the question rang through his mind: Should he kiss her? He decided that he would just kiss her on the check. Marluxia gave her a tiny kiss on the check. “Good night Larxene. Let’s do something else some time.†She nodded and went into her room. --- Marluxia slowly walked back to his room. When he got there, he went right to sleep without even changing he was so tired. He slept soundly until morning. In the morning, he took a long shower and washed his hair thoroughly. Instead of just letting his hair dry, he used a blow dryer to dry it. Next, he brushed his teeth two times and washed his face as well. He brushed his hair one last time before leaving the room. This time, he looked down at his outfit as well. He had on the organization coat today because he planned to just stay inside the castle. He had on shoes and he had on the shirt and pants that went under the coat. Marluxia headed down to breakfast. --- Yet again Larxene wasn’t at breakfast when Marluxia got down. Axel wasn’t there either. Marluxia sat down next to Zexion. Zexion was eating oatmeal. Marluxia had toast. He put jam on his toast before he ate it. After he was done with that he, he put his plate in the sink and went back up to his room. One he was there, he brushed his teeth again to make sure he cleaned them thoroughly. He also washed his face and made sure it was clean of any food. When Marluxia was sure he was done, he headed towards Larxene’s room to discuss what they would do today. The door was closed, so Marluxia knocked. There was no answer so Marluxia assumed that he could just go in. When he opened the door, he stopped walking. Larxene was sitting on her bead and Axel was there too. Marluxia thought it over again. This is Larxene, and Axel’s here too. If they had just been sitting there talking, it would have been one thing. But that wasn’t all it was, Axel and Larxene were kissing. ~~~~ Ouch that has got to hurt. Next chapter hopefully tomorrow.
We were in the same school but next year we wont be (:(). But I'm going to stop replying to this because it's getting very much off topic. *waits for next chapter*
I'm probably wrong. Because my school is out I can no longer bug fg into finding out stuff about the story or ask her a million questions. She isn't one to make it predictable so she probably isn't Xed's somebody. Actually you have 452 (I was just looking while you posted)
Yeah, it was a quick pencil sketch that fg drew. I think they are the same person (nobody somebody) but I don't think that means they must look exactly alike. I think that Raemond has the gray eyes that Xed was described as having. 400th post!
They kind of look a like but not all that much. I was comparing them face to face. Though it's not a good Xed picture it still is her, but it is Xed form 1 (from the 14th key not bma)
She's a rebel in your pants... no comment.
I found this site because my friend made videos and wanted me to watch them, then she made stories and wanted me to read them, and after a while I made my own videos and stories.
'Don't be afraid' 'But what do you do' 'When time is up?' Those are from the trailer, there are more too I think but I forgot which ones. *watches amazing trailer again*
That's cool. The part with her turning around is like in chain of memories when namine turns around to revel Kairi. Cool still! They're the lines from the lssp trailer! Great job! *hates you for being so artistic*
Is Saix working again? Wow, you put a lot of work into this! It's times like this when I wish I understood any of it, but that's just me. LSSP:Boss Battles PWN
