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*chants* Please be released internationally, please be released internationally, please be released internationally...

Madi and Tootsie = <3

My thoughts exactly. I wouldn't even change the question to "which one Kairi deserves" but more like "which one she LOVES". The word "deserve" doesn't suit.

YA WELCOME TOOTZ DD:

You would've been MUCH better off trying to fix up the first design you started, instead of adding more and more and more elements which, in the end, did nothing more than blotch up the space. If you had worked through the first design, I'm sure we would've had more clean results than this accumulated mass of failed attempts in design. Rather have ONE half-finished design than having dozens of failed ones in one piece, which aren't even in harmony with each other. 3:

XDD I know that feeling all too well, but when it comes up to design you have to absolutely, at all costs, avoid doing that. That is picking anything you think is nice and slapping it on any work for the sole purpose of wanting to use it and not whether it will fit in the design you're working on or whether it would add anything to it.

Typically this is how some people come about with the most AWFUL of designs; simply by mashing up all sorts of brushes they thought were pretty INDIVIDUALLY on the canvas. XD Admittedly, sometimes this sort of random playing turns out to be quite nice, but a lot of the time it's overdone.

I DO BELIEVE YOU'RE ON ABOUT THE YUMMY MAN NIBBLING ON A GUY'S EAR, AYE? /o/

...o_o

Tomorrow's my last day. FINALLY.

lol okay sure XD

Well, I'd be lying if I said this is a "good attempt" because I honestly don't even knowing what you were trying to attempt here. There's a bit of everything in terms of technique and style - which none have been worked to perfection - so in the end, it looks like a confusing jumble of...crap. At that, there is no structure, it's painfully obvious that the elements were placed at random. As Cin so bluntly stated, "vomit on canvas".

I would suggest already setting down which styles and techniques you plan on using, but limit yourself to two. That way it would be easier to express and set abound your 'ambiance' you want to create in your work. THIS ALSO GOES FOR COLOR! (Personally I would've kept in a vector style and mixed it with photos.)

While we're on the subject of colors; they do not collide with one another here. Set a colorscheme! You could have easily kept this in the reds and yellow, I don't see why the green, pink and blue had to be added.

Now structure. Like I had said before, the elements are placed at random. The ragdoll, what's it doing in the far left? It looks so lost and out of place - with the way it is, its presence is quite futile. The floral plants sprouting from the side...okay, so you have a bit coming from the top in the middle, and a second at the left. (Actually, I'm not even sure if the one at the left is supposed to be floral-ish like the top) Why not have that same repetition at the right? Which brings me to the checkered board - I find it so random xD especially since it's in a gradient. Why dat, lol?

The typography is just HORRIBLE <_<; I don't even know what else to say. It's not very legible, the letters aren't worked out at all (why is it all rigidy!? And the "S", "V" and "X" seem to have somewhat lost their true structure) and the letters aren't even in a fix size. Normally when we make a or several letters larger than another, it's done for a specific reason/to bring out an effect. But here it's not particularly bringing out anything, it just looks badly treated.

Yeah, hope that helps and makes sense at the while.

So uh...if you don't want decent CnC, what do you want? D:

It wasn't just one girl, there were several. <_<; In the end we ended up having a poll and the majority winded up being for pink, so there. :3

Yeah, I get it XD Getting some ineresting interpretations lol.

Thanks a lot, especially for helping out.

^Is that for the first attachment? D:

And yes, it is a project. :D

I don't intend to say anything on the project of fear of 'influencing' opinions. Besides, all I really need to know for the moment is what it makes you think of.

GYA HA! CAUGHT YOU RED-HANDED!

Thanks a lot guys, except Wisdom Form Tosspot. You deserve to be smashed with a nail bat.

Anyway I'm going to continue using this thread for updates of different propositions - here are some adjustments/new ones. Hope y'all don't mind me tugging on y'all for a bit longer 3:

Usual, say your thoughts.

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Wtf guys, I can't even read them xD;;

Thanks for this, eastercat!

YOU STUPID INGRATES. NINCOMPOOPS WHUT.

Ahem!

I should recommend this interesting book I read to a few people.

Eitther way, I'mma see this for Christmas with my family XD

Eh, it's likeable. It has a cute fluffly feeling to it, aww.

My pink name stands out better!

EDIT D: @ invisible sig.

Aww, same man.

Yeah so music's a definate obsession.

Next comes cheeks and anything soft/chubby. Yaoi, crack stories/drawings, pin-up, Sprite, chewing-gum...

And cute small blond boys. :'D

The only ones I know are Maya and Cinema 4D, but I'm sure you can get a Trial period of either of the two.

What a lovely tag *__* Dolly is one lucky twat. XD

Anyway. Generally everything is really well done here, however I don't particularly see the purpose of the lightening on the stock, that being on the right. The background is very light as it is, so you don't necessarily notice it. There isn't much of an effect with the lightening here.

Secondly, I would've personally tried to make the text follow that same curvy line so it goes in motion with it Or either placed it in the middle, with the stock. c: It could placed 'behind' the stock to give that depth feel, but that's up to you. My point is, if I kept it horizontal I would've had it aligned in the middle.

Nice work though.

(PS - THIS ALESSENDRA GIRL LOOKS LIKE A MAN.)