Kirby! I love the way you added Kirby in it! Kirby ROCKS! <(^-^)>"It's true, I do!"
My friend was playing frisbee with me like a year ago, and I threw it past her, and it landed on my driveway. The side started coming up like someone was picking it up and dropping it. I ran towards it and stomped on it, and heard a little squeal of pain. She and I just ran into my house, no questions asked. To this day, we don't play frisbee.
I'm somewhere in the middle. I'll play a video game and beat it in like 10 minutes but like you EvilMan, I don't beat a brand new Kirby game in 10. I usually beat it in 10 days. Not because I can't beat it in fewer, because I can figure out how to beat things and, like, where they are, how to get there, etc.
This is pretty obvious when you think about it... Try hitting restore on itunes. It worked for my friend. She had this same problem. 5 times...
Dang, this story's coming along nicely! I can't wait to see how it ends!
This I wrote a couple days ago. Random Random is a thing I do For a little cheer. Random is a thing I do To enjoy things quite sheer. Random is a thing I like Because it is quite fun. Random is a thing I like WAY more than a pun. Random is a thing we all do, admit. When life becomes quite boring. Random is a thing we all do, admit. When we all end up snoring.
Sorry fangirls.... I'm a sucker for Riku. Can I be him? Coz he has awesome hair. Better than Sora's....
Wow this is really good! And I really, really, really, really, really, realllllllllllllllllllllllly like it. Good job! *round of applause*
Aw...I feel sorry for CtR. "I have no mother."
Or...maybe it's supposed to be like that? And i really like it, too. Me too! Have fun in school! It's what i try to do!
Wow, I really like it. And like ObsessedWithSora (hi!) said, cut the paragraphs down. Remember, 6-8 sentences. But i can understand, because i hatehatehate the paragraph rule. In all my little stories that I write, I just use one big one until it comes to dialogue. That's also when to start a new one.
Not technically true. I have a lot of ghost stories myself and I'll give you proof OWS. My mom had just cleaned my room one night about some 2-4 years ago and when I woke up the next morning clothes and toys were strewn about my floor. And some years later or before, cause I don't remember how old I was during any of these stories, I was going to sleep and I woke up about 3 in the morning and i saw these white pale figures laughing and talking. I went straight back to bed, nothing said or done. And I also hear different voices at night whispering things I can't hear. But once I heard this one part of a sentence in a female voice, "But what about...," and that's it. Pretty believable to me. And my dog starts whimpering uncontrollably when she goes into the attic. And I've also heard footsteps up there before.
No it doesn't! I really love it! Actually, it sounds sort of like my best friend's story. (We write stories and let each other read them) But seriously, it's good! Nevaeh is a really interesting name. How'd you come up with it?
Hey, NM! Awesome ficcy! I really love it! Keep up the good work!
I'm having, like, this majour fight with my best friend and that explains exactly how I feel and how I think she feels. I could not have worded that better myself. Partially because I suck at poetry. But nonetheless 5 stars!
See you, Xeph. I'll miss you budd! *hug* *reps*
Everyone agrees! O.o We've found a 3rd spamzone. The Spamzone, Usernotes, and here!
Thank you very much!
That's really deep, DR. I loved it. It has a hint of sadness, but I'm drawn to it, like Shadow of the Day by Linkin Park. I give it four out of five stars! Good job!
Hey, ILRAYCSM! i always call everyone by their initials! umm...bie!
