i think that the title works well if you're planning to get the attention of someone looking for an action/romance/heroic story, yes? for me, i really like it. not sure if it captured my attention like "WAHH!" but i'd read it anyway. X3
yeah...i think that this was copied out of order. :?
i read the whole thing on the place where they posted this and i'm pretty sure that that crow was malificent (or that crow that made her reappear in KH2). i thought that this was really a fluffy novel to read. the whole 'watching you while you sleep' thing in the beginning was really funny! aw, i just love these two!! -akuroku obsessed- >w<
aw, why hate axel so much? :O well, i'd have to say lexeaus just because he looks freaky and i don't know much about him compared to the other org members. to the people that are saying vexen, i like him because of his freaky-ness. XD
the way you wrote it wasn't very complex; it was actually a little poetic. except for the repeat (and the fact that i don't really like kairi so much XO), i thought it was nice without having to go through paragraphs of description. i'd try for next time, if you're continuing this, to add in a little more detail and emotion. i'd check back again to read a bit. ;3
oh, perfect! i was waiting for one of these "tell me why" threads to show up. XD the reason, so i could post a rant...more like an essay that i did in my spare time about why i chose axel as my favorite character. roxas is a close, close, CLOSE second with demyx and then the rest. X3 i'll post why in a little bit and i promise to keep it as short as i can. posting that essay would be a little out there. >x<
i'd have to say namine since she's the only girl that doesn't have a personality that gets on my nerves. kairi really matured in the game and she seems more driven but there's still a girlish trait in her that drives me mad. <_> there's a little innocence in namine that i adore. although she's a nobody, she can actually interact with other characters without ruining her sweetness. besides, i like that she cares for riku and axel, too (from the novel) .^^ it's sad that the FF characters only get small parts in that game, but, even so, they're still really cute. =3 yuna: "oh, foofie." best line in the game. XD
finally! an axel battle that's difficult! 16 HP bars to go through! heehee, i wanna try fighting him...i most likely would fail. XDD i wanna see sora do the reaction command. i wonder if it's any different than the roxas one... hm, "lost vision" sounds interesting...nomura is pretty special for making battles that even he can't defeat. :p
i really think you're off to a good start. keep observing drawings and draw out what you see! you learn faster than tracing. actually, i like that you didn't resort to tracing unlike what a lot of people your age would do. XD keep doing what you're doing and you'll get even better! <3
for those who don't know, the starburst trick is when someone can put a starburst candy in their mouth (with the wrapper on) and can remove the wrapper with their tongue. then they can spit the wrapper out. :p just a random thought i had, which org member do you think would be able to do it?
wow, looks like a final form of his. ;D i'd most likely get my butt kicked fighting marly...especially with all these forms he's got.
well, i've been taking japanese class at school for roughly 3 years now and i think i know enough of the basics to understand most of what the KH characters have been saying for many of the japanese videos posted here. however, i can't read all kanji shown so that's a dead spot for me. DX the rest of it, i could translate as best i can with a little help from my sensei. X3
i read the katakana that the knight said while he was getting up. he said xeanort quite a lot. anyway, THAT was scary! just watch me die if i get this game. ><#
"the other promise"? why does that seem to sound like it involves axel and roxas when they make that other promise to meet up again on the station tower? at least, someone told me that it was another promise a while back. XP
-dies- omg, i know, i know. i'm crying! while the larxel people rejoice, the akuroku shippers cry and prepare their pitchforks.
noo...-faints- llll-ll...ar...xel...nehh...wrong...-fetal position- no flirting...bad seriously. seriously, i'm biting a pillow right now...in fetal position. so much flirting...
that's a very good speculation on things. it makes sense why they'd be called "meagers" and, from the way you put it, roxas could have some high importance in the next project. i'll keep this theory in mind. ;D
that could be. when i look closely, it looks like his appearance is changing while the camera zooms in on him. something to do with the fact that he's looking at kingdom hearts? it could just be a shadow, though.
question: what're your guesses on the last chaser? (the one that has changing eye colors) he looks completely new to me. i guess his eyes could represent something.
it's possible. what i see the most is his ability to freeze, move earth and weild the keyblade. (vexen, lexeaus and roxas' abilities) hm, but that's all i can see! :3