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While I was reading it I kept scrolling down to the end to see how much more I have left because I didn't want it to end. The storyline was amazing, and I second that on which it did really sound like her actual backround. I've also noticed in many fanfics, Demyx is almost always the first person people meet. When I first read this I was like, "Oh no, another one of those new Org member fanfics," but as I read on I was captivaded by your awesome story telling, and couldn't tear my eyes away from it.

The part about Demyx was heart-wrenching. The part with Zexion was horrible, but briliant. I'm glad that Axel was hardly in it, dispite the huge role he did play.
To me, it added to the story in the sense that even with all these evil people around, he was there to make things better. All I can say is, great job.

Roxas
Sora annoys me WAY too much. He's too happy ALL THE TIME and too optimistic. I'm not emo, but his happiness REALLY gets to me. Roxas is just more down to earth and...better. I still love Sora though!

AXEL!!!!!

And Demyx!!!

I love them both!!!!

And I HATE Saix!!!

*sorry Saix fans*

I like the first and the second vedio ALOT, I acually didn't see the rest of them...

Anyway my favorite part is in the first one where it says 'Can anybody help me make sense please?" and it shows the clip of Axel. That's my favorite part and I love it!!!! Nice job everyone!

it was good for the first time fanfic.

I'm giving you a warning. I'm extremely honest, almost brutally honest, and right now I'm asking for your permission to tell ya the bad points in it. :D Sounds pathetic, but I don't wanna hurt anyone's feelings around here. I mean, it wasn't all bad, it wasn't bad at all but there was some parts in there that need fixing. Hahaha, so just tell me if I can be brutally honest with you on your story and I'll point out what's wrong with it, K? :D :D :D

no, I don't know her keyblade's name.

What I do know is that I was dispointed to find out that Kairi has a keyblade. I mean, Sora seemed so special when only he had one. And then when you find our that Riku has one your like, WHOA didn't see that comming! When I found out Kairi has a keyblade, it took the fun out of everything, like, it doesn't make the keyblade any more special since four people have it. To me it seems like Square Enix is like handing out keyblades like, "Your too weak to have another weapon so let me hand you a keyblade!" I just hope that no one else show's up with another keyblade, that would suck.

That was interesting. In a good way. For me, it looks too much like a script of a play or something, but I think you wanted it to be that way. Good job though, and I think this is an interesting story line.

*GASP*

He is not a wussy!

...except for the fact he created suicide for only one best friend...
...I know me and other people had gone through exactly what he had and we're still alive...
...Well, most of us...

hahahah I agree with Roxma about Xaldin...except with Saix. I hate that guy. He's so ugly and mean and has ugly hair.

Although, I want to say I feel bad for Axel, another part of me wants to feel sorry for everyone else he's tormented. Losing your best friend aint easy, I know that, but being burned up from the inside isn't easy either....

ohhh I got an idea. Remember when you fight Axel with Roxas the second time, and Axel says, "Let's meet again, in the next life" and Roxas says, "Yeah, I'll be waiting"? Of course you remember...ANYWAY, Remember when you fight Roxas in the World that Never Was and Roxas says, "You make a good other," and then disapears? Well, maybe when he disapears he goes into the 'next life'. And, since Axel died a few moments before that happend, he was already there, hence why he appeared suddently once Roxas was alone on the station tower. Maybe when he's talking about Roxas being awake and asleep, he's referring to how Roxas merged with Sora in Twilight Town. When Roxas dispears in the end of that scene, that's when he really merges with Sora when Namine also merges with Kairi. Alot of thinking going on in my brain, but that's my theory about the scene with Axel and Roxas.

It read 2:00 A.M. He lay back in bed, staring at the ceiling. He hasn't been able to fall asleep lately, waking up at this time every day. His body was exhausted but his mind was still running. He got up out of his bed and walked through the door, into the lonly hallway.

man, that was funny. Try to make longer chapters, that way they last longer and I don't have to feel as sad when they're over. =( :D :D :D

those were funny =D :D :D :D

hehe funny

I hate math so much

keep going!

I wanna see if the thing with the headphones really work for a mic. I'll go try that out...

I'm a girl, but my voice sounds like a guy. If the things with the headphones work out, I'll send ya a sample of my voice. :D :D :D

Haha that was funny

I liked the names of the chemicals

write more

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haha that was funny!

TEN POINTS FROM GRYFFINDOOR made me laugh alot :D :D :D

Keep writing more

Roxas's days in the Organization (Chapter six)

Alrighty, chapter 6! =D In this one I’m switching to a different point of view just for a bit, but don’t worry, it’ll all return back to normal. I’m trying to show something here… PLEASE COMMENT =D


Chapter 6
End of Day 5
~Station tower~

The three of them, Roxas, Demyx, and Axel sat atop the Station tower in Twilight town. Usually it would only be Roxas and Axel, but Roxas insisted that Demyx came today because of the events that happened earlier. Axel let him tag along, but constantly reminded him that it was just for today.

“I can’t get over how good you did, Roxas.†Demyx said, licking his sea salt ice cream. “You’ve never fought before in your life, and you pull off a fight as great as that one.â€

“You beat Larxene! She’s one of the toughest members in here!†Axel said excitedly.

“You could probably beat Axel in a fight!†Demyx said to him. Axel gave him an evil stare and elbowed him in the ribs.

“You’re not that good yet. I’ll train you in the future to get better.†Axel said. He licked off the remaining ice cream from the stick and threw it over the edge. He stood up.

“Xemnas is sending me on this mission to go somewhere. He told me briefly what I was to do. I’ll be away for a while, ok?â€

Roxas looked up. “For how long?â€

Axel shrugged. “However long it takes for me to finish what I need to do.â€

Roxas looked at the floor. He couldn’t really imagine Axel not being there. Things will be different. When he came, it was Axel that took him under his wing, and it was Axel who made sure that he was always alright. Sure, Demyx was his friend, but Axel was different. Axel was his closest friend, his best friend.

“What needs doing?†Demyx asked him, sounding confused at his own words.

“Remember the guy, before Roxas came, that was supposed to join us but never ended up doing so?†Axel said, smiling deviously. Demyx nodded.

“Xemnas entrusted in me to take care of him.â€

“Well, what are you doing to do to him?†Roxas asked. They looked at him, confused. No one spoke.

“Roxas, Axel is the assassin in the organization. You didn’t know that?†Demyx said to him slowly.

Axel-an assassin?

“You’re going to kill him, Axel?!†Roxas said to him loudly, sounding both shocked and angry. Axel nodded slowly with a what-you-didn’t-know-that kind of look on his face.

Roxas sighed. He couldn’t stop him from killing this guy. Axel was the kind of guy, Roxas learned, that if you told him to do something he would fight to the end to finish it.

He tried looking on the bright side. I mean, I don’t know this guy, so what do I care…right? He thought silently to himself.

“Anyway, you got Demyx with you. You’ll be fine!†Axel told him, leaning his back against the wall of the tower. Demyx put his arm around Roxas’s shoulders and pulled him close to him. Roxas fought his embrace.

“We’ll miss ya Axel!†Demyx said, waving to him. Roxas waved as well.

Axel smiled and opened a corridor of darkness.

“Tootles!†He waved curtly and stepped through.

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Axel found himself in the meeting room of the castle. Zexion, Xigbar, Saix, and Vexen were there as well. They all stared at him with piercing glares for a few seconds. He looked around.

“Am I missing something?†He asked, confused.

Zexion folded his arms. Xibar scratched the side of his head. Saix’s eyebrows lowered and twisted into a mean glare. Vexen sighed deeply.

“Your late.†Saix said.

Axel returned his glare. He crossed his arms across his chest and leaned back on one leg.

“I was doing something. So what if I’m late?†He said. Xigbar’s single eye showed sympathy for him. Zexion’s cold face stayed fixed into annoyance, showing but only the slightest bit of emotion.

“Where were you?†Vexen asked.

“I was doing something! That’s not for you to ask!†Axel’s tone raised and he sounded rude. He uncrossed his arms.

Vexen seemed taken aback.

“Respect your elders, Axel.†Saix spoke smoothly to him. His voice seemed to drill a hole in Axel’s ears, sounding flat and cold. Axel tried his hardest to not freak out on Saix right now.

“He was probably out with that idiot and the boy doing something worthless like he always is.†Saix continued. Right about now, Axel was trying even harder to keep his mouth shut.

“Worthless. That’s what he’ll always be.†Vexen said, a smirk hatching across his face while he turned around and began to walk away.

Axel jumped forward and grabbed Vexen by the collar. He spun him around and locked eyes with him. Vexen’s face was twisted in horror. Axel raised his fist getting ready to punch him in the mouth for saying that, but Xigbar held his arm back. Zexion was trying to wrench Axel off of him. Saix was standing there, watching.

“C’mon dude, calm down. Can we just get on with this mission and leave?†Xigbar said to him, pulling his arm back which caused Axel to release his grip from Vexen.

Zexion pushed Axel forward towards Xigbar. He turned to Vexen and gave him an are-you-ok kind of look. Vexen nodded.

Saix sighed and shook his head. He turned around and opened a Corridor of Darkness. He stepped through it with Vexen and Zexion behind him. Xigbar went after them and Axel stood there. He scratched the back of his head.

“I hate this place.†He muttered to himself as he walked through the corridor.


Eventually, they all arrived in a town by the name of Traverse Town. Only Xigbar had been there before. The group split up because they were each doing their own separate things. Saix went with Vexen and Zexion went with Xigbar. Axel was left alone to do his own business. He thought he worked better alone anyway.

After Xigbar gave everyone a brief overview of the layout of Traverse Town, Axel went to the Second District to find this traitor. Xemnas refused to give his name to him but he gave a pretty vivid description. He had short black hair, paper white complexion, emerald eyes, a kink in his nose, and always had on a black beanie hat. Also, he was probably the only nobody in all of Traverse Town. Nobodies can sense other Nobodies the way dogs can sense other dogs.

Once Axel opened the doors to the Second District, he pulled his hood up over his head. He casually walked down the stairs in front of him and looked around.

Xemnas also knew the exact location of this guy at the time he told Axel to look for him. He said he was at the green hotel. Looking up and to his left, Axel saw a big lit up sign reading GREEN HOTEL. He could have moved from this place, but it was worth a try to look for him.

In case if anyone was watching him, Axel didn’t open a Corridor to Darkness and warp into the hotel. So instead, he walked back up the stairs and rounded the corner before missing the door and walking in the narrow ally between the hotel and the building next to it. When he looked up he saw a small ledge jutting out of the side of the hotel. He smiled to himself. Perfect.

Axel bent low and then jumped as high as he could and his hand grabbed the end of the ledge. He pulled himself up. It was an extremely small ledge. Only his one foot laying sideways could stand on it. But that was all he needed.

From there, he jumped a bit higher onto the roof of the building. There were a few sun roof windows for the rooms on the top floor. He looked into each one. Only two of the five windows had people in them, and none of them was the person he needed. So instead he walked crouched off the roof and jumped down onto a balcony on the other side.

Axel felt a tingly feeling inside of himself. It was a feeling he was normal to. It seemed to start off at the middle of his body and work its way all the way down to the tips of his fingers and toes. It was a light feeling, but he could feel it every time it happened. A Nobody was close by.

Axel crouched a bit lower and sneaked up to the window he was next to on the balcony. He looked inside. No one was in there. He stood back quickly and leaned against the end of the balcony with his hands on his hips. This guy was going to be a bit trickier to find.

“Whatcha doin?â€

Axel jumped from his spot and spun around. There stood another black hooded figure. He calmed down a bit.

“Dude, I didn’t mean to scare ya’, but from back there it looked like you were slacking off. What’s up?†Xigbar teleported himself a foot away from Axel’s face in less than a blink of an eye. Axel poked him in the chest lightly.

“I’m looking for him. Lay off of me, ok?†He turned around away from him.

“Something bothering you. I know it.†Xigbar said to him. Axel looked down and shook his head. He put one hand on the edge of the balcony and jumped over the railing. He landed cat-like on the ground. He started to walk away.

Xigbar teleported right in front of his face again and Axel almost walked right into him. Although his face was shrouded in darkness from the hood draped over his head, Axel could sense that he was smiling and having fun taunting him. He took a step back and walked around him.

“Aren’t you supposed to be with Zexion?†Axel said. He stopped walking. The tingly feeling came back again, this time it felt stronger. He turned around again and jumped back in surprise when he stood face-to-face with Xigbar again.

Axel sighed and shoved him lightly to the side. Xigbar started to laugh.

“Alight, Zexion is probably lost without me. I’ll leave you alone.†He opened a Corridor of Darkness.

“Be a good boy now!†He said before waving and stepping into the darkness.

Axel sighed. People just need to learn when to leave him alone.

Although Xigbar was gone, the tingly feeling wasn’t. His target was nearby. He pulling his hood a little bit more over his head and walked out of the alleyway.

He found himself in the Third District. He walked along the side of the dimly lit houses. He was bathed in the faint glow of the small lights that hung worthlessly above his head.

“Worthless. That’s what he’ll always be.â€

Vexen’s crude voice rung out in his ears. Axel kicked a stone in front of him and sent it skipping ahead of him.

As he walked aimlessly ahead his footsteps echoed throughout the empty district. Most people by this time had retired to their beds and were sleeping or relaxing soundlessly. Axel too wished that he could be on top of the station tower, relaxing back with a cold ice cream in his hand next to Roxas. Next to his friend.

His only friend.

He stopped. He was not imagining the sounds he was hearing. He heard footsteps, low at first but then they sounded closer and louder. Axel glanced to his right and saw a younger looking man walked straight across the center of the Third District alone. He didn’t seem to notice Axel standing above him.

Axel dashed against a building and stood still, still eyeing the character. He was wearing a black beanie hat with a little bit of black hair sticking out underneath it. He was too far away for Axel to identify anything about him.

The man reached the other side of the district and turned left, walking up the stairs and turned left again, heading forward in Axel’s direction. Axel stood motionless. He wasn’t trying to hide, but then again, he wasn’t trying to be seen.

The guy took a while to reach three yards in front of Axel. Every few feet he would stop and glance into the window of a house and watch the people inside it for a few minutes. It didn’t bother Axel too much that he was taking his time. Like most killers, he was patient.

When the man did reach three yards in front of him he stopped and lit a cigarette. He picked his head up and looked straight at Axel with emerald eyes. The tingly feeling inside of him was still there.

“You can come out now.†The man said to him. His voice sounded a lot like Saix’s. It made Axel shudder. Axel stood leaning against the wall of the building and moved from his place. He stood a yard in front of the man.

The muted light around him made his white skin seem almost ghostly. His face was covered in small scars and the crook in the left side of his nose was clearly visible. Despite his ragged appearance, he looked only to be in his early thirties.

“Your times up. You betrayed the Organization.†Axel said to the man, crossing his arms. The man nodded and blew some smoke out of his mouth and into Axel’s face.

“Do I know you?†The man asked, tilting his head to the side and leaning a bit closer.

Axel summoned his chakrams and held them at his side. The man didn’t flinch. “You wouldn’t want to know me.†He said coldly to him, and raised one of his weapons.

The man smiled and put out his cigarette on the bottom of his shoe. He spread his arms out wide and smiled, waiting for Axel to attack.

Axel brought his chakram down. Everything seemed to go in slow motion. A million things buzzed in and out of his head, but there was only one thing he could concentrate on. It was the look of Roxas’s face when he found out Axel was a killer.

The chakram hit the man, and well, it hit him hard. The man fell to the floor, dead. His body slowly faded into darkness and Axel was once again left alone.

All alone.

He dismissed his weapons and leaned back up against the building. He removed his hood from his face and put his hands on his head and closed his eyes. He slid down the side of the building until he was sitting down. He sat there for a moment. He never felt this way about killing before. He felt almost…sorry for the guy.

Time was ticking away. He was only gone for a few hours, but he was sure that Roxas was waiting for him. Normally he would join one of the other groups and help them out with what they were working on, but right now, he didn’t feel like helping. He wanted to go home.

“Hey, wait up!â€

Someone else was here. The voice sounded like a young boy’s. Axel lifted his head up and looked over the edge into the center of the district. A boy about the age of 14 was running around with two other people. As Axel tried to concentrate more, he noticed that the two other people were…a duck and a dog?!

He pulled his hood over his head again and leaned his head forward a bit more. He concentrated on the boy’s appearance. The boy looked all too much like Roxas…the blonde hair, the blue eyes…even the keyblade he summoned in his hand looked exactly like Roxas’s.

A keyblade!?

“Sora, hurry up!†The tall dog figure said to the boy.

Sora? Roxas?

Something in Axel’s head clicked. It all made sense now. Roxas’s Other was still alive. That boy running around was Roxas’s Other. Roxas was Sora’s Nobody!

Axel stood up and opened another Corridor of Darkness that led him right in front of the castle. It was in the middle of the night. The streets were bathed in the eerie glow of the moon that floated silently above him. Every time Axel looked at the moon on a night like this, it would remind him of something he forgot about a long time ago.

Walking into the castle, he noticed that everyone was asleep (except for the people still at Traverse Town). He was extremely tired himself but didn’t want to go to bed just yet.

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Roxas lay in bed, staring at the ceiling. He didn’t want to sleep. He couldn’t sleep. He wanted to stay awake and wait for Axel to come back.

Suddenly he heard the sound of footsteps walking down the hallway. They stopped at the front of his door. Roxas didn’t move from his spot. He still continued to lay there, staring at the ceiling, staying motionless. The doorknob turned slowly and the door opened a bit. The rest of the door opened slowly. Axel stood crouched down, his hand on the doorknob, trying his best to be quiet. Although Roxas didn’t see him, he knew all too well that he was there.

Axel tiptoed over to Roxas’s bed. When he reached his bedside, he leaned over him. He saw that Roxas was awake and staring straight ahead. He smiled.

Roxas turned his head towards Axel, his eyes gleaming mournfully. Although he spoke no words, Axel read clearly from his face he was saying, “Why did you leave me?â€

Axel shook his head. Part of him wanted to wrench Roxas up from his bed and hug him so hard because he missed him so much, and part of him wanted to slap him right across the face.

“You can’t do this Roxas! You need to forget about me and get some sleep!†Axel whispered to him, grabbing his shoulders and shaking him lightly. “Was everyone that bad to you?â€

Roxas shook his head. “Larxene took her anger out on Demyx…I was left all alone.â€

Axel let go of Roxas and walked over to the chair that sat lonely in the corner of his room. He sat down on it leaned back, closing his eyes. He thought silently to himself about him seeing Sora and whether or not he should tell Roxas about it. He shook the feeling off of his mind, and decided that he’d ask Xemnas about it in the morning.

Axel folded his hands in back of his head and leaned on them. Exhaustion won over his body and he began to feel drowsy before finally falling asleep quickly.

Roxas turned over on his back again and continued to look up at the ceiling. Xemnas will surely yell at him for not doing his chores today, but he’d deal with that tomorrow. With nothing on his mind, he was able to fall asleep, being exhausted as he was from staying awake.

The moon shown as brightly as ever, filling the room with dim light. Within the silence the air held, Roxas was able to finally close his eyes, and not have to think about anything before he left himself vulnerable to anything, asleep.
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I'm trying to write these as fast as posible without making them seemed rushed. Hope you enjoyed this one, and PLEASE COMMENT

hehe that was funny, make some more.

Sorry, I can't help you with making up any more questions...I'm not funny at all and my mind is blank as of now...


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