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  1. Fork
    May 3rd...What?What were you expecting.xD

    Well seriously, if you check today's birthdays, it's 2Foxxie and Jade's b-day!
    Happy birthday guys.
    Thread by: Fork, May 3, 2007, 10 replies, in forum: The Spam Zone
  2. Fork
    You know, what are your top 5 game series for you.

    Mine would be:

    1-Metal Gear Solid
    2-Kingdom hearts. Yea, sorry but it's not first for me.xD
    3-God of War
    4-Prince of Persia
    5-Devil may Cry


    What are yours?
    By the way if you have less than 5 then just name them.

    Edit: I know I should have put FF, but it's different. Each FF might suck and might be amazing for me.
    Thread by: Fork, May 2, 2007, 52 replies, in forum: Gaming
  3. Fork
    Thread

    Friendship

    Friendship

    A friend should be someone who will always be there;
    to take time to listen,
    to help out, to care.
    A friend should be someone who makes you feel good;
    Who is able to cheer you when no one else could.
    A friend should be warm, understanding and true,
    Someone you trust;
    Who will let you be you.


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    I think there's a lot of truth in that poem. :)
    What do you think?
    Thread by: Fork, Apr 27, 2007, 0 replies, in forum: Archives
  4. Fork
    K!
    Glad we had this talk!
    Thread by: Fork, Apr 27, 2007, 30 replies, in forum: The Spam Zone
  5. Fork
    Oopsy Daisy.
    I just made another one.
    Thread by: Fork, Apr 27, 2007, 25 replies, in forum: The Spam Zone
  6. Fork
    Another Fanfic I decided to make. I'm actually continuing my last story.
    Just to resume what happened in the last story;
    It was based on the secret ending of Kh2Fm+.
    With Ven (The roxas look alike), Aqua( Blue haired girl) And I myself named the third knight. His name is Kuro (Which means "Dark" and I think it reflects his personality).
    The bald man's name (from Secret ending) is Xehanort.(Though not the Xehanort we know and love xD)

    Anyway, just to resume it quickly, Kuro is a heartless in human form that killed his family (Without knowing about these things until later in the story), Mickey wanted the 3 knights to go kill Xehanort, Mickey ended up killing him, he also attacked Kuro (Because Mickey knew Kuro was a heartless), Aqua killed kuro, she actually loved him, cry cry cry the end xD.
    This is just a really fast way to resume it, so it sucks if I explain it this way.
    Any comments are highly appreciated from me!
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    Fate’s Dark Hands

    Chapter I: Rude Awakening


    Darkness…All I could see is darkness. And it was all I could feel. I couldn’t even move.
    Where was I? …But that wasn’t important to me at that time. The thing that was going through my head the whole time was “Who am I?â€
    All my memories, my past, gone…
    The only thing I remember is…a girl. Who was this girl though? Blue hair, blue eyes. It’s like I never met her before but I knew her in the back of my mind.

    I then heard a voice.
    “Wake up young one, your story doesn’t end hereâ€
    Was this voice talking to me?

    I started feeling an imaginable pressure upon me, I couldn’t even breath.
    “Open your eyes Kuro!†The voice yelled.
    Kuro? Was that my name?

    I then saw a bright light heading towards me.

    -----

    As I awakened the first thing that came to my mind was who was this voice. I looked around me and there was nothing, no one.
    I found myself on the ground in a strange town, more like a castle. It was like nothing I had seen before. As I got up I saw even more things.
    Buildings were everywhere in sections. It was like a maze. Yet it had amazing sights.
    People walked by with smiles on their faces. Greeting me like I was a local around here.

    I wanted to explore the town a bit. Maybe I would find answers on where I am.
    As I went down the stairs I saw Item and accessory shops. I was probably in the marketplace, but this was no time for shopping so I went to the next section of the town. People called that section “Boroughâ€. It’s where all the residential houses were.
    A view of the castle can be seen from that section. The castle had cranes all around it, and huge towers with hat shaped roofs. It also had pipelines all over the place.

    One of the houses in the section caught my attention. Strange noises were coming from inside. When I got close enough I saw some words that were actually carved through the door.
    “Cid’s house/Lab. Keep out!â€

    I then heard something from behind me. I turned around only to see a portal, a dark portal that came out of the ground. Something was coming out of it. The more the creature showed itself, the more I stuck to the door. I tried turning the handle but it was locked.
    The portal closed and the creature appeared. As soon as I saw it a sign of relief came to my face.
    This thing wasn’t even 1 foot tall. It was a bit strange though. It had two antennas on its head and it was totally black. These were shadows of some sort.
    It kept walking in circles, and tripping each few steps.
    I was panting heavily from the near fright I had, I took a deep breath and decided to forget this ever happened.

    As I walked away from this embarrassing scene more portals came out of the ground in front of me, and more of these shadows appeared.
    This wasn’t a mere coincidence, they were after me. I turned around to make a run for it but even more portals appeared. I was surrounded by them. At first look they seem harmless, but you can never judge a book by its cover. The true way they act is to be feared.

    One of them approached me and jumped in the air to attack me.
    I closed my eyes hoping that something would happen. And something did actually happen. A brown haired boy was killing them off one by one, with each blow one would dissolve and die. Eventually the shadows stopped appearing.
    The boy looked about 15-16years old. He was accompanied by…animals? A walking duck and dog…But I guess after today nothing would surprise me.
    The boy was wielding some sort of weapon, a key shaped blade.
    He reminded me of someone I know or knew.
    I wanted to know who he was but he ran off before I could say anything.
    So I followed him.

    Doesn’t this guy ever get tired. He kept running without breaking a sweat.
    Finally reaching the outskirts of the town he stopped. I was wondering why he stopped so I stayed behind a wall and peaked from the corner.

    I then heard a voice, so did the boy it seems.
    “The Keyblade…A truly marvelous weapon. Were it only in more capable hands…â€
    A perplexing laughter can be heard echoing. The laughter is coming from multiple people.
    “Show yourselves!†The boy yelled.
    A man appeared a bit far from where the boy was standing. Unreachable unless if you could do a 40 feet long jump. The man was wearing a black hood, actually his clothe were all black, and the hood would match it. He was also wearing a necklace, but I couldn’t actually see the necklace from where I was standing.
    The man raised his arms in the air and 5 more people appeared near the hooded man wearing the exact same thing.
    “Organization XIII!†The dog like person shouted.
    “Good. Now we can settle this†The boy said, while throwing his hand in the air in making his weapon appear.
    “What a shame…And here I thought we could be friends.†The organization….â€membersâ€, laughed sarcastically and disappeared via the portals they summoned.
    Now was my chance to talk to the boy.
    When I got close to him another portal appeared in front of the boy. Another member appeared from it and just when I was going to say something, everything stopped. Birds stop in mid-air, the boy wasn’t moving. Time froze in it’s place.
    The dark portal didn’t even disappear yet.

    I then heard a voice in my head.
    “Now now, I can’t have you interfering with thisâ€
    Everything started becoming dark, the sky was darkening, and everything around me was fading away.
    The only thing that didn’t turn dark was the ground around me, in a 10 foot radius.
    “Who are you?!†I yelled.

    “Who I am is none of your importance†The voice said. I didn’t know where it was coming from.

    “Then what was that just now, who was that boy!?â€

    “Ah, you were in Hollow Bastion my friend, formally known as Radiant Garden. What you just saw was history in the making. Sora, the keyblade master, in his first encounter with Organization XIII.â€
    Sora? Keyblade master? None of this was fitting right in my head.
    “…†I just stayed silent.

    “You’re probably not getting any of this. Tell me, what was the last thing you remember Kuro?â€

    “A girl, her name was….Aqua.†I said.

    “And…?â€

    “That’s it. Nothing else. Heck I don’t even remember if my name really is Kuro…â€An idea came to my mind at that moment “But, if that girl is the last thing I remember…Then I should look for her. Maybe I’ll find answers with her.â€

    Another voice stared talking. This voice was deeper than the other one
    “Kuro…The last time you saw Aqua was 20 years ago.â€
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    K that's enough for now. Kinda long for Chapter I...
    Slow start, but I'm heading somewhere with this.

    Comment truthfully please.
    Thread by: Fork, Apr 26, 2007, 14 replies, in forum: Archives
  7. Fork
    I used to be "Forsaken_Sora" but now I changed my name.

    You mortals can go back to your worthless lives now.
    Thread by: Fork, Apr 20, 2007, 5 replies, in forum: The Spam Zone
  8. Fork
    Part 7!And the last one too.
    Chapters 4,5 and 6 were a pain in the ....well you know.
    Chapters 3 and 7 were the ones that I liked writting.
    I hope you enjoyed reading it as much as i enjoyed writting it.

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    Chapter 7/ Final Chapter: A loving heart.

    Kuro dodged Mickey’s attack.
    “You would betray me too!?” Kuro said; he then started attacking Mickey. But both of them were fast so no one could land a blow on the other.

    “What are you doing Mickey?!” Aqua yelled.

    “Aqua, he’s a Heartless! Can’t you see it?! If we let him live he would destroy the worlds!” Mickey explained.

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    Kuro’s heartless/human form proved too strong even for the king himself.
    “I don’t care! He’s still Kuro!You're so obsessed with eradicating the heartless that you forgot who you're killing!” She yelled.

    “But Aqua!” He yelled.
    For the second Mickey was defenseless Kuro punched him with all his might.
    He screamed as he fell down into nothingness, Aqua yelled;

    “No!!”

    “Now for you” Kuro said as he was looking at Aqua.
    She leaned over her keyblade, picked it up and pointed it at him.

    “Don’t…don’t make me fight you Kuro.”


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    “Yea but those dreams were just a way to remind him, it’s not like we actually created them” Said Ale.
    “Damn that girl.” Ienzo said. “We would have finally finished our plan if it wasn’t for her”
    “And Xehanort sacrificed himself for nothing” Even said. ”Looks like were back to where we started”
    “It seems we underestimated Kuro’s heart.” Ale said.
    “Stop blabbing about stuff like that Ale!” Ienzo shouted.
    “No you stop, stop manipulating, and stop controlling. You had your chance Ienzo. I’m done with your plans.”
    “Ale!” He shouted.
    “See you next time, *doubt it*” Ale said as he waved.
    “Humph, don’t worry. We’ll see him again. May it be in this life or the next. People like him have their fate written in darkness.”

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    “Ahaha, after what you’ve seen you think you have a fighting chance?” He said sarcastically.
    They started turning in circles looking at each other, Aqua with her pose and Kuro walking normally as if he wasn’t the least bit threatened.
    Aqua attempted to do a jump attack but Kuro stopped it and sent Aqua on the ground by just touching her keyblade.
    She grabbed her keyblade with her two arms as she got up and then tried to stab him in the chest.
    Kuro let his keyblade go and grabbed the sharp end of Aqua’s keyblade.
    He started pushing the keyblade towards her trying to make her fall off the cliff.

    “Futile” He said.

    “Kuro! Why are you doing this!? Look it what you’ve become!”

    “I'm still the same old Kuro! It’s you who changed!” He yelled.

    “But…”

    “But what?!”

    “I love you…”

    Kuro looked at his reflection in her keyblade. His hair semi-flying about, and his devastating golden eyes. And then looked around him.
    His eyes turned back to normal and he stopped pushing.

    “What…Have I become? I’ve attacked my friends...and killed the king.”

    “You can still redeem yourself Kuro…” She said.

    “No…Not after what I’ve done…Not after what I’ve become…Mickey was right.”
    He took a step back then said;

    “Aqua…I want you to kill me.” He said in a low tone.

    “What?! I…I can’t…I won’t!” She yelled.
    He took off his left hand from the keyblade and started caressing her face.

    “You have to. I can't kill myself…” He said.

    “No…Please don’t do this to me!”

    “I’m sorry” He let go of the keyblade. And with that small moment Aqua forgot the last remnants of affection she had for him and plunged her keyblade into him.
    As he was falling Aqua grabbed him and put him slowly on the ground.
    “No!”

    “Hah, thank you…” He said as he coughed blood.

    “Why…Why did have to be you…”

    “Everything happens for a reason…”He said while he touched her cheeks.”Hey, remember our conversation earlier…When I promised you that we were going to go to a restaurant?”
    She slowly nodded.

    “Well…Looks like I’m going to have to break that promise now.” He chuckled while looking at his body slowly decaying.
    “Kuro…”
    “Will that…”He coughed a bit and continued. “Will that be ok?”
    “…”
    He gently grabbed her arm.
    “Even in this light you’re still a Star of the earth.” Those was his last words, his hand fell to the ground as he let go of her hand. And faded away.
    Those words echoed through her head as she had a glimpse of her past.
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    It was the first time they met, in a Jasmine field.
    Aqua was there strolling along, as she looked at the beautiful Jasmines and picked the beautilful flowers. But every time she would try pick one it would crumble in her hands. Jasmines are delicate flowers; it would take a 10year olds’ hand to be able to pick one without crumbling it.
    She tried again, it crumbled again. “Dammit!”
    “It won’t work if you pick it up like that” Said a man from behind her. It was Kuro.
    “Then how do I do it?” She asked.
    “Simple, just gently put your hand behind the Jasmine and pick it up slowly” He responded.
    As she tried to put her hand behind the Jasmine it instantly crumbled.
    “….Ok why don’t you show me how to do it” She said while putting her hands on her hips.
    He gently put his hands behind the flower and slowly picked it up.
    “You know, they say Jasmines are Stars of the heaven that decided to live on earth.” He said as he looked at the flower. He then leaned towards Aqua and offered the flower to her. “I’d say such a flower would only be happy if it was with another Star of the earth” Kuro said with a smile.
    Aqua instantly blushed to that.
    “So what’s your name?” He asked her.
    “Hah” She turned around trying to hide her red face “Aqua. You?”
    “Kuro”
    “Kuro? That’s a weird name…” She said.
    “Yea, cuz Aqua is a really common name in the world” Kuro said while laughing.
    Aqua turned around and crossed her arm.
    “Haha, you should see your face” He said in a flirty way.
    She blushed again.
    “C’mon, I’ll buy you lunch. I know this great place”
    She nodded.
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    How would you feel if you lost someone you loved?
    Aqua tuned to tears right away. “Live on Aqua…Live on” Words echoed through the sky.

    She dried her tears as she got up.


    Behind Aqua was Mickey, he was still alive. He must have grabbed on to something when he fell.
    They picked up Ven who was still unconscious and went far away from the cliffs that were still crumbling.
    From afar, looking at the cliffs collapsing and Kingdom Hearts disappearing between the cloud, Aqua knew that it was finally…The End.



    Epilogue:

    All worlds start with darkness they say, and all logically end with it.

    Many people ask what happened to the brave knights.
    Aqua never did open a shop like she wanted to. Instead she just moved to somewhere far away. To forget the memories she has in her town.
    She will get married though. And have Children.

    Ven never finished his studies. He moved to a distant island. It wasn’t abandoned, there were towns and villages. Him also will get married and have children. His son will inherit his power. He will be a keyblade master.
    Though I can’t seem to remember his name…I think his name meant “Sky”.
    Nevertheless, he will save the worlds from darkness.


    As for Kuro…well he faded as we saw before. But remember, there is always another side to a story.

    ---------------

    “Wake up young one, your story does not end here”

    We hear a knock on a door. A blond haired man answered it.
    “Yes? Oh dear, what happened to you?! What’s your name boy?” The blond haired man said.
    “…Xehanort”. The enigmatic man said before collapsing on the ground.


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    Comment and Review! And be truthful as always.


    Man...It's finally...over....NOT :D.
    As you can see from the "Ending" of the epilogue that I'm gonna continue the story, but with just another name.
    That's right! You won't get rid of me that easy.
    ::Evil laugh::
    BWahahahahahahahaah *Cough Cough*
    *Dies*
    Thread by: Fork, Apr 18, 2007, 5 replies, in forum: Archives
  9. Fork
    Part 5 & 6 together!
    Sorry if you didn't want to spend that time reading ( For the ones who care anyway :rolleyes: ) but it would have felt weird to put these 2 chapters alone.


    Chapter I
    Chapter II
    Chapter III
    Chapter IV

    Anywho, enjoy.

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    Chapter 5: A battle ahead.


    The 4 brave warriors were about to leave. Kuro, Aqua and Ven came down the stairs. But they weren’t wearing their normal clothe. They were wearing armors.
    “How do you like your armors?” Mickey asked.
    “A bit tight…Yet they’re pretty light.” Aqua said. “Who made them?”
    “Ahh, a wizard back at my kingdom.” He replied. “Let’s depart.”

    -------------

    A while after leaving town, they started talking.
    “So what are you guys going to do after this?” Asked Ven
    “Well, I’m thinking of opening my own shop.” Aqua said with a grin on her face.” What about you Ven?”
    “Bah, not sure yet. I still have to finish my studies first. Then we’ll see…and you Kuro?”
    “I’m still leaving town you know. I…just can’t stay in our town anymore.” Kuro said.
    “Aww man…It’s your choice I guess. And we can’t change that. Just know that we’ll miss you.” Ven said
    “Yea, I know. What about you Mickey?” Kuro asked.
    “I guess I’m going to have to go back to my castle after this.” He responded.
    “Hey Kuro.” Aqua whispered
    “Hmmm?”
    “After this whole mess ends, there’s a beautiful restaurant I know. Do you want to go there? Just like the good old days.” She asked.
    “Do you really think now’s the best time?”
    “Well I was just wondering… “She said.
    Kuro laughed, and then said “Ok. We’ll go there after the battle.”
    “Promise?”
    “Promise!”
    -------

    “So Aqua, do you have a family?” Mickey asked.
    Ven and Kuro looked at Mickey in a weird way.

    “Well actually…I don’t have a family. My mother died while giving birth to me, my father became ill a few years ago and died…And my siblings died in an accident…”
    Aqua got used to losing her loved ones, she was cursed that way.

    “How much longer till we get there?” She asked.

    “Won’t be long now.” Mickey said.

    “Well, what I want to know is…” Ven was interrupted.

    “Wait! Stop!” Kuro yelled.

    “Wha…? Ahhh!” Screamed Ven. He was on the edge of a crater balancing himself out. Ven would have fell down if Kuro didn’t catch him by the hand.

    “Whoa, thanks Kuro” Ven said.

    A huge crater stopped them from continuing their quest. They could see the other side, just no easy way to get there. It would take hours if they wanted to go around it.

    “Look! A bridge!” Aqua Shouted.
    A long wooden bridge linked this side to the other one. But the bridge looked a bit….unsafe. Wooden parts of the bridge can be seen falling into nothingness. The ropes looked like they could break in any second.

    “You’re kidding right?” Ven said while gasping.

    “Do we have a choice?” Kuro groaned. He sighed then said “Let’s get going”.

    “You know we can go around it right? Guys? Guys?!” Ven yelled.
    The bridge could collapse in any second, so they went one by one.
    Aqua was the first to pass through it. And the first to make it to the other side.

    “See! Not that hard!”

    Kuro was the second one, and he made it.
    Ven was the third one to try to make it. Aqua and Kuro could see Ven’s terrified face.
    Half way through it, a couple of steps from the bridge started falling into nothingness.
    Ven started talking to himself.

    “I swear if we make it through the day I’ll never make fun of people again.”

    “Who is he talking to?” Kuro asked while looking at Ven.

    “I have no idea…But you know, I missed doing these kind of things with you guys” Aqua replied.

    “Yea, me too” Kuro said with a smile on his face.

    Finally made it to the other side, Ven jumped on the ground and started kissing it.

    “Ok Mickey! It’s your turn!”
    After taking one step on the bridge it started collapsing. Mickey quickly jumped back.
    Ropes started breaking, and all the steps started falling.
    The bridge was finally destroyed.

    “You okay Mickey?!” Kuro yelled.
    There was silence for a few seconds.

    “Yea I’m fine! You go ahead without me! I’ll catch up” Mickey yelled.

    “But how will we know the location!?” Ven shouted.

    “Trust me! You’ll know!”

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    “Hey guys, have you ever thought what may happen if one of us didn’t make it…?” Aqua said while looking at her two friends.

    “We did that come from?” Kuro said in an annoyed tone.

    “Ah, I don’t know. Maybe this Xehanort is tougher then we think” She said in a perplexed voice.

    “Nah, we’ve faced many things in the past. We don’t have to worry about baldy.” Ven said.

    “Hah, good to know… Is something wrong Kuro?” She asked.

    “We’re here” Kuro said with a serious look on his face.

    --------------A few days later-----------

    “So the battle ended.” Ienzo said.
    “Yup, your plan failed again Even” Said Ale.
    “It’s too bad too; you spent years planting those dreams in his head. Planting darkness in his heart with that creature Xehanort put us in command of.” Even said”
    --------------------------------------------


    Chapter 6: Treason and betrayel.


    This was definitely the place. Keyblades upon keyblades were stabbed on the ground.
    They all formed a huge “X”. And a sandstorm was forming.
    The 3 knights put on their helmets and went to wait for the heartless.
    In the middle of the “X” were 3 keyblades. All 3 took one.

    Upon the horizon, a shadowy figure came. It was Xehanort. He was even more terrifying in person. But he the 3 knights weren’t scared. They were prepared for this. All their life’s work and training would be tested in this battle.

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    Author interruption!! :
    Hey, first off I’m glad you’re still awake after all this!
    Second: You all know what’s gonna happen next. If I wanted to explain it, it would have taken like 5 pages from Word.
    So this is the secret ending from KH2: FM+
    If you haven’t seen it yet, then what the **** are you waiting for?!?!
    If you have, I’m gonna continue it from the part where Xehanort summons Kingdom Hearts.
    K? Later! :
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    After being rudely interrupted by the author!*cough* Back to our story:
    Xehanort shot a weird firebolt into the clouds.
    Then the sky split apart, and the moon appeared. No, not the actual moon, but a heart-shaped moon, Kingdom hearts.
    With a just a simple grasp, Xehanort pulled down Kingdom Hearts.

    Aqua while holding Ven in her hands looked at Kingdom Hearts and for the first time in her life she felt fear.

    Kuro took off his helmet. Something was wrong with him, it’s like he couldn’t breathe anymore. His blue eyes started turning into a yellowish color. Is there a connection between him and Kingdom Hearts that made him turn into a heartless?

    Mickey had finally arrived. But too late it seems.
    Xehanort had already summoned kingdom hearts. And the 3 knights couldn’t even touch him much less stop him.

    The ice that Ven was trapped in melted. Though he went unconscious.
    Aqua put Ven in a safe place. She took off her armor; she then started climbing the huge mountain Xehanort had created. For one last try to stop him.

    Xehanort was looking at his Kingdom Hearts amazingly. He then sensed a presence behind him.

    “Why do you fight me?” Xehanort said in a sarcastic tone. ”You and I are the same”
    It was Kuro that was behind him.

    “Me and you have nothing in common!” He yelled.

    “Oh really? Wasn’t it you who killed your parents Kuro? All you had left from your family. Aren’t you possessed by darkness?” Xehanort asked in a rhetorical way.

    “Shut up!” He yelled again. Kuro jumped high in the sky, while the light Kingdom Hearts was emitting, and attempted to land a blow on Xehanort.
    Xehanort laughed at his attempt. His doppelganger came in front of him and blocked.
    But it was a futile attempt by him. The doppelganger’s weapon broke with Kuro’s blow.
    The knight landed on the ground and with another slash the doppelganger was defeated.

    Xehanort laughed even more and then said “You see? Your anger and darkness gave you power! While your comrades failed to kill the doppelganger, you killed him in 2 blows.”

    “Shut up!” Kuro yelled. He started attacking Xehanort but it was futile. Xehanort was too fast and dodged his attacks. He then summoned his weapon and blocked. Both their swords were on each other, both Kuro and Xehanort were pushing towards the other.
    Kuro kicked Xehanort with all his strength and sent him flying to the edge of the cliff.


    “This is where it ends Xehanort!” He said while pointing his keyblade at his chest.

    “A change of heart…Wait Kuro! Don’t do it!” It was Aqua’s soothing voice. She had finally reached the top.

    “Don’t go as low as him!” She said.

    “Ahhh, Aqua. Good to see you again” Xehanort said.

    “Wha….what do you mean…”

    “Oh, you mean you don’t remember me?
    “Just a way to burn my past sins”” He Quoted and laughed an evil laugh.

    “You…you’re the hooded man!” She yelled.


    “Think Kuro! How could she have known that much about the heartless?! How could she have known about me?! Why don’t you also check her back pocket if you don’t believe me!” Xehanort said.

    “What?” She asked.
    Kuro appeared behind Aqua and took the necklace that was in her back pocket. He remembered the insignia of the heartless, and it was the exact same insignia on the necklace.

    “What is this…?!” He asked as he pushed Aqua back.

    “Kuro?!” She shouted.

    “Are you heartless?! You’re working for him!” He shouted back.

    “Didn’t I tell you Kuro?” Xehanort said with a grin on his face.

    “You!” Kuro appeared in front of Xehanort with the same pose he had before, while also pointing his keyblade at him. ”This is your fault from the beginning”

    “Go ahead, kill me.” Kuro didn’t move a muscle. “You see, you don’t have the guts to kill me! You’re just a worthless excuse for a heartless” He got up.

    “Kingdom Hea….” He stopped.
    He looked at his chest as it started dissolving. A keyblade was plunged him.

    “Allow me then!” It was Mickey; he stabbed Xehanort in the chest.
    Xehanort fell to the ground, lifted up his arm and said “Kingdom…Hearts…”
    He then turned his attention to Mickey and Kuro and started laughing in madness as he also started dissolving.
    The cliffs created in the battle with Xehanort started collapsing, as to the pressure of Kingdom Hearts since no one can control it”

    “It’s over…” Kuro said.

    “Not quite” Said Mickey. He said while attacking Kuro.

    --------------------------
    Egad!
    Mickey attacked Kuro?!
    Stay tuned for more boring stories!
    Thread by: Fork, Apr 17, 2007, 2 replies, in forum: Archives
  10. Fork
    Part 4!
    There's a hell of alot of dialogue here. It's just a way to set events straight k?
    And It's not as suspensful as the others.(Yea "Suspensful" xD)
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    Chapter 4: The “No Heart”.


    Finally morning, Mickey told everyone to meet him in the dinning room.
    They all took a seat but the king was nowhere to be found.


    “….So how are you Aqua?” Ven saud.
    Aqua was day dreaming about something. She stayed quiet.

    “Helloooo, Aqua?”
    She woke up from he daily snooze.

    “Hmmm, oh hey Ven”
    *Hey* wasn’t the answer Ven was looking for.

    “What’s on your mind?”

    “Probably nothing as always” Kuro said while rolling his eyes.

    “Says the man who never has anything to say!” Aqua commented.

    “Guys…?” Ven said quietly.

    “Oh please! At least I don’t disappear every now and again” Kuro yelled.

    “Yea, I always stay locked up in my house” She said sarcastically

    “GUYS!!” Ven shouted.
    Mickey came in the room.
    “Am I…interrupting something?” He asked.

    “No.” Aqua said while sighing. “So why did you call us in the first place?” She then asked.

    “Oh yes” A sudden serious look came to his face. “Kuro, Aqua, do you remember
    that creature you saw in the town square? As you saw it was a creature of pure
    darkness. A being that lacks a heart. It’s called…”

    “Heartless” Both Kuro and Aqua interrupted. They look at each other with an untruthful look.
    “Yes” For some reason Mickey was not surprised to hear them say that. He then continued “And heartless as we call them were once people. People who became heartless themselves while overwhelmed with darkness and hatred. Or…a people that were turned into a heartless by another one”
    Ven gulped.

    “Three elements combine to create life; A heart, a soul and a Body. But have you ever thought, what if an even stronger Heartless was giving the orders? If he cast aside his own soul and body and became a Heartless, wouldn’t he be able to control the other ones?” He said “Wouldn’t he be planning to make us of the creatures’ instincts? If the heart-seeking creatures have their sight on something larger. Their ultimate goal is clear.”

    “What are you saying?” Asked Aqua.

    “The largest heart in existence” He continued “The heart of the worlds. Kingdom Hearts!”

    A deep dark voice came echoing through the room.
    “Hahaha, very good my king”
    A dark man appeared in the center of the dining table. A bald man, though his baldness didn’t make him any less threatening with his pointy ears, beard and red piercing eyes.
    The clothe he was wearing were out of the ordinary:
    A black trench coat that could flow with the wind, with a white shirt underneath it. He also had black boots.
    Guess we now know his favorite color.

    “Xehanort! What are you doing here?!” Mickey yelled.
    “Xeha….nort…” Thought Aqua.

    A wicked laugh came out of this Xehanort. He then said “You should know best.
    After all, it’s you who’s sending these lost souls to their dooms”
    The king jumped on the table, lifted up his arm and summoned his keyblade.
    He then attempted to attack Xehanort but he just went through him.

    “Save your strength for later. This is just an Illusion. There’s no use of me chatting with you here. You know where we have to meet. Till then ”He had one last laugh before disappearing.

    “What was he talking about Mickey?” Asked Ven while getting up.

    “Ugh, I can believe he just came to annoy me…” He said. Then continued “ I was going to get to what he said later…That man is Xehanort. He controls the entity of Darkness itself. Therefore he controls the heartless, for he is a heartless. I fought him many times before. Heartless, even in their human form are as cruel as the can be”
    Kuro felt a bit of anger towards Mickey after what he said.

    “Keyblade wielders nowadays are low in number…There are many reasons for this. People hearts are not as they used to. Not pure. And then there’s Xehanort….
    You 3 are the only keyblade wielders left besides me. Will you lend your heart, your soul, and your courage to fight this menace?”
    All 3 of them looked at each other and nodded. Then Ven said “Right!We’ll take care of old baldy”

    “Good!” Yelled Mickey “We leave in an hour”
    “That late?” Said Ven while laughing.

    The 3 of them got up. Kuro as always was the last one leaving the room( But before the King). Mickey stared piercingly as he was leaving.
    “What?” he turned around and looked at Mickey.
    Mickey put his attention elsewhere before Kuro could turn around.
    He then just left the room...


    After a while, Kuro got a chance to talk to Aqua.
    “What do you want?” She asked while putting her hands on her hips.
    “Look…I just came to say sorry…About before” He said
    “Aw, well…this isn’t really the time to talk about this. We’ll talk after the battle okay?”
    “Hah, sure” He replied.
    He then said while leaving the room “By the way, how did you know they were called heartless”.
    “Oh, well…it was kinda obvious they were called like that right?”
    “Heh, yea. Well Ciao” He waved his hand and left.


    -----------Earlier that day, in the crack of dawn----------

    We find ourselves in Aqua’s room, when she was sleeping.
    A knock on the window was heard.
    “Wha…?” Aqua woke up.
    She grabbed her robe and wore it. She then headed for the window and opened it.
    “You?!” She yelled.
    It was the hooded man from before, floating in the air.
    “Now now, you don’t want to wake your friends.” He said.
    “What do you want?” She asked.
    “Just came to warn you about something”
    The man told her about future events. About the heartless. And that Kuro was going to have a change of heart. He also told her about Xehanort and his plans.
    “Why are you telling me this?” She said.
    “Like I said before, it’s a way to redeem myself"

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    Not as cliffhaner-ish as the others, but still...
    So what do you think?(Again,comment truthfully)
    Thread by: Fork, Apr 14, 2007, 6 replies, in forum: Archives
  11. Fork
    Part 3 of my Fan-Fic.
    As we last left off "Even" was talking to Nameless.
    Chapter 3 turned out longer than I expected

    For the newbies:
    Chap I: Here!
    Chap II: Here!


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    Chapter 3: Dark Secrets revealed.

    “Do you remember that day correctly? Why did you leave them to die?” Even asked in a sarcastic way.

    “I don’t really know…It was a long time ago. I’m guessing something horrible they did”
    Even looked at him sharply. “….I wouldn’t expect you to remember. You killed your family.”

    “Wha…What are you saying?” Said Nameless in a confused tone.

    -------Half an hour later--------------------

    We see Nameless walking down a road, looking perplexed. More than usual anyway. What could Even have possibly said to make him look this way?
    Even's words kept passing through his head.
    He stopped. Leaned his hand on a house. Trying to balance himself, like he was going to fall flat.

    He heard a voice from behind him calling him. While sighing, he turned around to see who was calling him.
    A man, a young man to be accurate. His Unnatural spiky hair seemed like a trademark for him, well they were almost unnatural. He had bright blue eyes that were a bit mesmerizing.

    “Hey!” He shouted while running closer to Nameless “Feels like forever since last we talked. I heard what happened in the town square. You can always count on Aqua to make a “right on time” entrance. Right?” He said with a smile on his face.

    “Oh, hey Ven” The sad look on his face was lifted “Yea, you gotta love her.”

    “So…Did anything happen between you two?” He said while winking at Nameless.

    “Nah, She….left before I could even say thank you”

    “Aw, well maybe next time right?!” He joked with a big grin on his face.

    A bond can be seen between these two. Usually Nameless could tell Ven anything. But he would never talk about the slightest thing about his personal life.

    “Hey, do you have free time?” He continued. “I want you to see someone”.

    “And who would this someone be?” Nameless asked

    “An amazing man….uhhh, not really man. Well he isn’t….”

    “And this is making sense….how?!” Nameless interrupted. He crossed his arm in annoyance.

    “Gah, just come with me.” Nameless laughed at Ven and agreed to go with him.

    -----------------

    Finally at the mysterious “man’s” house, Ven told Nameless.

    “He might seem a bit strange at first, looks and all. But he really is a good person.”
    They entered the house. Nameless seemed glad to see an actual house this time.

    Everything was in its place. Books, pens, chairs. The owner of the house seemed to love art. Beautiful sculptures of famous artists and persons from almost every world.

    He had paintings hung up on the wall. Painting of environments, worlds.
    One painting caught our hero’s eyes. Looks like a painting of a huge magical tower. And in the corner of the painting were the words:

    “To my favorite pupil,
    May you never forget this place;
    Yen Sid”.


    “I’m over here!” said a voice coming from the next room.

    They entered the next room. The first thing Nameless paid attention to was Aqua. They both looked at each other but never made eye contact. He kept walking until he heard a squeaky voice.
    “Glad you joined us gentlemen”.
    But the person who said this was no where to be found. Until he heard it again.
    “Down here!”
    A really short man was standing behind Nameless. No, not a man, a mouse! With big round ears. He was wearing a mage’s clothe.

    “Ah, king Mickey” Said Ven. “Good to see you again”
    “King…Mickey?” Whispered Nameless to himself. Then he said “So, to what do I owe this honor your highness?”
    “Haha, please none of that highness stuff. You must be tired after your little encounter. Please! Rest for now! We’ll talk tomorrow. Your rooms are already ready. And I your dinners are in your rooms. ”

    None of them wanted to turn down such an offer. Especially from a king. They decided to stay. After all, a free night at such a luxurious house doesn’t come every day.

    They all bowed then left the room. Except for Nameless, when he was about to leave Mickey asked him “Do you have a name?”
    Nameless chuckled. “Kuro”

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    Kuro went to his room, his dinner was there but he didn’t feel hungry.
    He just went to sleep.

    Kuro saw himself in his house. Windows and doors shut as they always are. He started looking around. He suddenly heard a voice.
    “Why did you do it?” He turned around only to see his mother. “Mom…” He said.
    She lifted up her hand and started pointed at Kuro.
    She said with a creepy voice “You did this. You did this” And kept on saying it until her arm fell off. Then she started screaming. Stains of blood started appearing on the walls. Kuro put his hands over his ears and fell to his knees. Then started screaming.

    You suddenly see him waking up. It was just a dream…more like a nightmare.
    “He was right…” Kuro said


    --------4 hours earlier---------

    “You killed your family.”

    “Wha…What are you saying?”

    Even started taking small steps.
    “Remember when I said earlier that a person turns into a heartless if darkness overwhelms a heart?” Kuro slowly nodded “Well that happened to you. Anger, hate, obsession, all these things overwhelmed your heart. You finally became a monster.”

    “You mean…like the one I saw?’ He asked.

    “Not even close, you became more of a monster then that embarrassment of a creature you saw. You kept your human form, yet you couldn’t control yourself”

    Kuro stayed quiet for a few seconds. Then he finally said “Why should I believe you?”

    “Oh, I never asked you to. Soon enough you will find out for yourself if I was lying or not. But know this; you are a being of darkness.”


    After seeing him leave, a man came out of an other room and started clapping his hands.
    “Well done” he said.
    “How long have you been there Ale?”
    “Long enough my friend, at least he now knows the truth. Phase 2 of our plan is complete. And Kuro reacted just as “he” said he would.
    And soon he will join us, just like all did.”


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    Enough for now!
    As you can see I finally decided to name him.
    "Kuro" Means "dark". I had a reason why I didn't name him at first.
    Naming him was a last minute decision.
    And sorry Axel fans!

    You know the drill, comment truthfully!
    Thread by: Fork, Apr 13, 2007, 9 replies, in forum: Archives
  12. Fork
    2nd chapter of "Secrets of the past".
    From now on I'll call the hero guy "Nameless"

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    Chapter 2: A blue haired manipulator?


    “I didn’t need your help Aqua.”
    “Really?” She said sarcastically “Why do you always do this?!”


    The girl named aqua obviously knew our mysterious hero. She had the bluest of hair. And her eyes were a sight to look at. The eyes of an innocent. Her name suited her looks.


    “Ugh, do we have to do this again?” He said while taking a few steps back “I’m leaving the town in a few days.”
    “Just like you left your family” She replied
    “…I have nothing left here” And disappeared. Looks like it’s a habit for him to walk away.

    Aqua looked a little gloomy after what he said. But she doesn’t seem to let these kind of things get to her.
    She took a few steps while looking at the blue sky.
    “You done hiding?” She said.

    A man wearing a hood over his head came out of an alley. Though his hood was the only thing that kept him mysterious, he was wearing normal run of the mill cloth, but kept him mysterious it did.

    “You should thank me for telling you about this, or else your friend would have been dead by now” he said.
    “You never told me why you’re helping me.” She replied while still looking at the sky.
    He chuckled “Just a simple way of burning my past mistakes”
    She turned around “You know you never told me your name”
    “My name is of no importance to you, here take this.”
    The hooded man hands Aqua a necklace.
    “What’s this?” She asked in a straight tone.
    “Just a lucky charm, who knows, it might come in handy someday. Till next time we meet”

    After seeing the man leave, Aqua took a look at the necklace he gave her. There was a strange insignia on it. It looked like a black heart with 2 red spikes crossing each other.
    She thought to herself “Hmmm, must be a new cult” And put it in her back pocket.





    Back to our mysterious man, we see him back at the house he was in front of earlier before he heard the scream. He lifted up his arm wanting to knock, but he hesitated
    He finally knocked. A voice came from the house. “Come in, come in!”
    Nameless entered the house.

    While the outside of the house was in order and clean, a person can’t say the same about the inside. Books on the floor, on desks and coffee tables. Books almost falling off dusty bookcases. Files and torn papers on the ground.
    The curtains of the house were closed.
    Preserved cardboard boxes.

    “Ahhh, good to see you again.” This man’s long hair reached his upper torso. It was a mix between blond and grayish. He was wearing scientist clothe. Holding a book in his hand. The book is probably not a surprise after seeing a house like his.
    “Good to see you to Even” Said nameless. He then asked “Did you see what happened earlier….”
    “Fascinating, have you ever seen an examination of the heart” He interrupted “ Hearts are an amazing thing. People fail to see what they truly hold. A heart has two sides, light and dark. Even the purest of hearts might have darkness in them. If a person is overwhelmed by darkness, then he might become a creature called “Heartless” “
    “What does this have to do with me?!” Yelled Nameless.
    Even Laughed and said “The creature you *fought* earlier was a heartless. A being of darkness itself. And it seizes hearts from living things. Creating, multiplying its ranks.
    But if the heart is pure, if a heartless can grow to have the slightest feelings, then there might be a chance that he might go back to his human form”

    Even was obviously obsessed with these heartless.

    “And….?”
    “ Don’t you think it’s about time you talk to me about that day?” He asked.
    Even was not one to always stay on topic.

    Nameless looked at the ground and had a little grin come to his face.

    “Yeah…Ever wonder why I live alone? Why I have no family?
    It’s because they were murdered. Murdered by a ruthless creature. And…I just let them die…I could have save them but I was in the other room…Leaving them to die.
    God…I can still hear the screams in my head. In my nightmares.Even in my dreams.Heh,if I can even call them that anymore.”

    Even leaned to the table, put down his book and told nameless.
    “That....old friend is where you’re wrong.
    The screams you heard, the room you were in, was the dream"
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    Enough for now. A bit slow this time, but I'm heading somewhere with this.
    Again comment truthfully. If it wasn't good then tell me. I wouldn't want to continue something that aint good. Cuz then I would be just wasting my time on something useless.
    Thread by: Fork, Apr 12, 2007, 6 replies, in forum: Archives
  13. Fork
    Hey guys! So this is my first Fan-Fic.
    Though I think it might be a little stupid at first. I would greatly appreciate comments. What's 5 minutes of your time?

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    Secrets of the Past

    Chapter I: Darkness, screams, and secrets.

    “How long has it been…since I started having these…*Visions*? Almost 2 years now. Since…that day”
    The figure gets up from the bed. Walks slowly to a nearby table and picks up a glass of water. He seems to be worried about something. You can see fear in his eyes. But fear of what?
    The figure lived in a small house. Doors and windows shut. Dark as dark can be.

    The man heads to the door and opens it. Bright light finally enters his dungeon called “Bedroom”. The small house could give away that the town he lived in was full of darkness. But as soon you see him opening that door you know you’re wrong.
    Children playing, birds chirping. Cats and dogs fighting. Strange a man lived in such a hollow home in such a cheerful town.

    The man steps outside and takes a deep breath of fresh air. A calm look suddenly comes to his face.

    He sees a red haired man coming towards him. The Red head just bumps into him and keeps walking.
    You hear “I’d say sorry if I were you”
    The man stopped, turned around and said “Yo! My apologies. No need to get testy. Name’s Ale, got it memorized?”
    “I never asked your name” said the man.
    “You never said you didn’t want to hear it” He chuckled. Then said “Later”. And Disappeared.
    The man seemed late for something.

    ------------Meanwhile, in another location----------

    Darkness, all we can see is darkness. Expect in one little corner where few people were talking.
    “What about our “friend” ?” Said a man.
    A woman said “We’ll know soon enough Ienzo”
    “And…Is our bait ready?


    -----------30 minutes later------------

    We find our mysterious man in front of a beautiful house. Plants on the balcony. A bird cage. This house has welcome written all over it.(Not literally though).
    Just when mysterio man was going to knock on the door, a huge scream can be heard echoing trough the town. The man rushed to see what was going on.


    He searched trough the whole town, why is he so obsessed on finding this scream? Finally in the town square, he saw a crowd of people. Forming a circle and in the middle was a pedestal. On the pedestal was a weird creature. Almost 2 feet tall.Though it seemed harmless. But there was no sight of a person screaming. Just a curious crowd. He decided to walk away from this. Mist suddenly appeared out of nowhere.
    The creature suddenly started attacking the crowd fiercely. The man turned around. The creature was already staring at him piercingly.
    He started shivering, losing his anger, losing himself. He was on his knees a second later. Holding his head tight like something was in his head. He started hearing screams. Screams he has heard before.

    Seeing him defenseless, the creature decided to attack him. It jumped high. Darkness following its every move. Darkness helping it’s every move.
    A strange figure suddenly jumped out of an alley. He took out his hand while in the air and some sort of weapon appeared in his hand. And with one blow the creature was dead. The body….just dissolved.
    He said “Forget to use your keyblade again eh ? “ The mist disappeared.
    The figure was identified. “He” was a “she”!


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    That's it for now I guess.
    I want real comments. Don't say "IT'S AMAZING" just because you don't want to hurt my fellings. Don't lie like that.
    Tell the truth k?
    Thread by: Fork, Apr 11, 2007, 6 replies, in forum: Archives
  14. Fork
    Vote Vote Vote!
    Thread by: Fork, Apr 10, 2007, 30 replies, in forum: The Spam Zone
  15. Fork
    Don't have to explain this :P
    (By the way,I mean on a non-school day)

    I usually wake up between 11 and 12
    Thread by: Fork, Apr 8, 2007, 27 replies, in forum: The Spam Zone
  16. Fork
    What's your best Final Fantasy?VOTE!
    And say why.

    Like you vote FF1," Cuz it started the series."

    I'm only gonna put the ones that were on consoles.And I didn't put FF3.



    I voted FF6 Cuz it's a timeless clasic and always will be.



    Edit:lol,"Dirge of Cerberus" came out wrong. I accidently put a smily.
    I put ":Dirge...."
    When it should have been " : Dirge..."
    Thread by: Fork, Apr 7, 2007, 21 replies, in forum: Gaming
  17. Fork
    Edit:
    Ahh,my computer reseted while I was posting the poll and the thread somehow got posted.
    I'm gonna make another thread
    So I would apreciate a mod to close or delete this thread.
    Thread by: Fork, Apr 7, 2007, 0 replies, in forum: Gaming
  18. Fork
    Just like the thread title explains it.
    Say what are the movies you've seen ALOT of times.

    My movies:
    -Van Helsing
    -Shrek 2
    -The day after tomorrow
    -Saw I
    Thread by: Fork, Apr 6, 2007, 13 replies, in forum: Movies & Media
  19. Fork
    Now while Kingdom hearts is an amazing game it has its stupid side.

    http://youtube.com/watch?v=7vI4XJAeaFM

    Funny stuff ^.^
    Thread by: Fork, Apr 6, 2007, 4 replies, in forum: The Spam Zone
  20. Fork
    There's a game that i want you guys to try out.It determines Both Skills with Sight and Mouse.
    Its only like 2min of your time.
    And the game needs sound.

    www.winterrowd.com/maze

    There are only 4 or 5 levels in the game.real easy and i want everyone to try it.

    By the way,I'll bow down to anyone who actually finishes it. Cuz he/she would be awesome.
    Thread by: Fork, Apr 2, 2007, 9 replies, in forum: The Spam Zone