This was how the bible was created, don't hate on Christian's Sh!T. You can decide whether thats true or not.
Inspires me to actually get my butt off my couch, and go to the beach and perhaps take my time doing things. Thats was amazing.
"I think...." Ellen pondered for a moment; biting the inside of her cheek, making faces. "I Think its been a little over a hour." she finally estimated. Time didn't fly too fast when you were waiting and especially when you had nothing to do. The only real thing that had happened since the others went into the hole was Nexas coming.
HAH! I loved how there was hardly any dialogue at all, really made it sound like an Epic. And I love the whole background of KHV. But what I really liked, was how random it was at times, and how I got lost here and there, but knew what was happening (Entirely my fault, I was too lazy to actually read one whole paragraph Word For Word) I love stories about KHV, always full of craziness and sure to make you smile.
Where is everyone? Im trying to think of a way to put in Maxie, perhaps Flo later.
Ponyo, it was freaking great! Studio Ghibli never lets me down!
Our child would be beautiful.
Its the most dangerous,active journey to ever be made on KHV. You need skills,determination and most of all complete will power. I like how Premiums get to change their username mostly. The Sig thing is nice, but the whole Icon and Username thing is better.
I think you should get more into the emotion words, such as; 'He said', you could put, 'He exclaimed' or 'he grumbled' and or' he yelled at the top of his lungs'. Then theres the grammar mistakes, such as the past,future and current tenses: 'But Xion and Roxas was mad at Sora..They didn't care if they where under a spell.'; Not too good. 'But Xion and Roxas Were mad at Sora..They didn't care if they were under a spell.'; good! Theres a spell checker on here, or on Word, you should check it out! Or get a Beta Reader, they proof read and help you edit your stories. But I do liek the idea! And where the story is at currently XD Spells are so much trouble.
I skipped the last two -u-;; Edited post. I'll be drawing my OCs soon, already working on Maxie. Its also good practice to do so....I only wish I could draw dragons. Username: Program Name: Flo,Winger Age: 17 Appearance: Dark-Blond hair to her shoulders that curl up at the tips; pale/creamy skin from being inactive; Green eyes; usually wears a black,long sleeved shirt and skinny jeans. Type of Dragon: Earth;500 (Pre-teen dragon?) Weapon(s): A dagger Bio: Flo was born into a wealthy family, they were all snooty and stuck up; except her oldest sister. She was raised by her older sister and their Nana, and thats what saved her from being spoiled and bratty. Flo was born weakly and so couldn't play much sports nor go outside much, but everyday she dreamed of going out of her home and living life freely; sadly she had no courage to run away. So her sister moved out and took Flo to live together, at the age of Eleven. Flo became a bit more stronger and very much happier. Her sister tamed a dragon and went on to join a Dragon Knight society, leaving Flo lonely months on end; until finally Flo grew a backbone and went and tamed her own dragon when she was Sixteen. Now she's trying to become stronger and join her sister's society. Other:Flo usually has on her family's bracelet which has their crest, a wing on it. This is a sign of nobility and wealth. Flo doesn't take much money from her family and does her best to earn it. 100
.....I love your Signature, very funny.
I have a Dragon Rp idea as well! But Im glad I found this one! Username: Program Name: Maxie, Pepp Age: 18 Appearance: Layered,short dirty-blonde hair that she usually has in a pony-tail;Tan skin;Hazel eyes, wears glasses when she reads; goggles on head for when she's riding her dragon. Usually has a collared,button-up shirt,jeans and boots on. Type of Dragon: Lightning Dragon;1,050 (Thats considered near old Dragon right?) Weapon(s): She usually uses a steel blade with Elven inscriptions/spells on it. Bio: Maxie lived her life as good as she could, but her family wasn't exactly rich nor poor, they were in the middle. Her mother died while giving birth, and her dad raised her; she was raised more of a guy than a girl. Though she does care about usual girl things. And then once she turned 17 she went off to tame a dragon, always curios about them. Now she is doing her best with her new Dragon partner Other: I have another OC I'll post soon. 100
"We're waiting for our ride. Its a ship." Ellen turned back to the sky above. "Once its comes we'll go down. But for now, we're waiting for it." "Plus Im freaking tired of battling for now." The brunette thought; she gave out a yawn and closed her eyes to relax better.
Well its most likely magic, Moogles do poses a lot of that. And or perhaps its the help from the Keyblade's powers too.
Read Hitman Reborn! The cute little Arcobaleno babies are adorable! And it updated yesterday!
Games don't have to make sense at all, they just need to be fun and hard to beat! What the hell is Synthesizing exactly anyways? What is a Moogle, why do they have poms and how can they have wings? Nothing is suppose to make sense, just that theres a way and a will!
"OH I see! So your Monochrome, and your partner was like Rainbow!" Ellen understood in a way. Now that she thought of it, what powers did she poses? Other than it's sharp edges and ginormous size her blade had some magical power, but she had yet to learn them. This called for training later, and perhaps a little talking with her weapon. ((OOC: That reminds me of Adventure Time With Cake And Fiona, where Rainbow Unicorn's opposite is Monochrome horse XDD))
Let me give you my opinion. 1: Where does all that water come from? The pipes of the town, have you not seen the fountains and water place in BBS? 2: Where does it go in KHII? Perhaps it was frozen? Making the lovely blueness all around?....Or all the pipes were fixed by the committee? 3: How is it there's a giant door and a huge fall in the first game and in the second there's a normal space in front and even a entrance where you would have fallen in the first game? .................................................................. And those are my opinions. I think the others have it more down than I do.
"What sort of a power do you have? Are you like a Water bender who does better with the moon or something like that?" ellen turned her head to him. She noted how the sun was slowly falling, nearly reaching the sea far ahead and the tops of the multiple trees. Now that she noticed, they had gone up hill slightly.
