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Ok this is sorta a long story REALLY long. so bear with me, and it takes a while to get it. About 5 years ago a girl moved into my neighborhood... I was 9 years old and she was 10. Since the moment i saw her i liked her more then any other girl. 5 years later I still think the same. ok heres the whole story. I'm now 14 and she's 15. We've always been pretty good friends we always laugh and talk. I'm not really sure that she knows i still like her, I know she doesn't like me that way... She's always been attracted to older guys, she's the type of girl that likes the really cool guys you would see at beaches and California... ---___--- At the moment i've found out that she likes a guy who's 17. But I've talked to him about it and he doesn't really like her that way. But I don't know if that is true since i've only met him once... So recently i went to a semi-formal party where there was mostly just dancing... Unfortunatly there was about 17 slow dances... Constantly he was asking her to dance to the slow songs right before i was about to. And likewise she would answer "yes." I have a really good friend (she's a girl) and hangs out with her ALOT. Unfortunatly for me she's a two timing backstabber! She always says she's helping me but i recently found out that she's gettin her his number and really tryin to get them together... Ok back to the story... Finally i got up the guts to ask her to dance and she said yes surprising me that she wouldn't say no that she would want to dance with him... Well it turned out to be really nice. Ok so the next day i hung out with her again at a park because there was a large picnic goin around... So most of the time i was sittin on the swings tlakin with her and her friends. At the end of the nite she began to talk about him Alot. It really hurt to have to listen to her talk about him this much. Well i walked along with her best friend (not the two-timing backstabber lol) and she knew that i had liked her before this. So she asked me "you still like her dont you?" and i answered "Yeah 5 long years..." And so she proceeded to say "You do know that she's really tryin to go out with that guy right?" (condensed version) I solemnly said" Yes i know, but i dont really care i just want her to be happy" It almost hurt me to say that= I wanted her to be happy with me not him... 3 months later i found out she doesn't like him!!! shes back on the market. Now about a few months later I went over to her house with all of my friends and we played this game that is called "Wearwolf." its like a backwards way of playing hide n seek. Well, while i was playing it was her turn to play. BTW her name is Rachel. Ok, anyways so while we were seeking for her i broke off with this other girl and guy. So as a way to lure her out I said just joking around- "I wonder were that ugly girl could be hiding!" and the girl i was seeking with said "Oh come on!! you know u have loved her for the past 5 years..." AND GUESS WHAT!!!!! she was hiding right in the shed behind us. I ran off worrying she was there because i didn't know she was there then. So, after someoen finally found her she said that she heard everything. But not in a good way, she didn't speak to me for the rest of the night. Didn't even say goodbye to me. I just sat back and listened to "Bullet for my Valentine" (band) about a month later i have to go up to new jersey to my aunts funeral. Im really bummed about the hole thing that went down there and im tryin REAL hard to get over her... So A grreat thing happened while i was up at new jersey... and then turns to CRAP. While im up there im staying with my 12 and 8 year old cousins. (both girls) So my 12 year olds cousin is this 13 year old girl that is SUPER HOT and i verbalized that i wanted to meet her. I got my cousin to email her and the girl kinda laughed and i finally emt her one night. It was just really at a glance. My brother was also with me (hes 17) So. the day after my cousin emailed her asking what she thought of me. and this is wat she said and i quote! Well ya know you can NEVER tell about someoen at just a glance. turns out shes a lieing erm well... you get it. ok so turns out she was in love wiht my brother. AND HE WONT LET ITN GO. to this day he rubs it in my freakin face... I came back and wanted to kill myself. How could life be so cruel. I have told No one about this but my best friend. My brother at one of my friends house just mentioned the girls name to all my friends so now they are bugging me to know the whole story but they dont. I can't seem to stay away from Rachel, she just seems to be always dragging me back in. my other friend (guy like me) likes her too. in fact he recently asked her out. she said no. lol. Ok But the bad thing is she said this in a text to him. "Atleast you had the balls to tell me unlike Tyler (me.) His name is Brenton. Rachel (girl) Ok. so. My friend told me the whole story and i was compelled to text her. So i started off the text by small talk. then i said "Brenton told me that you said i didn't have the balls to ask you out. Is that true?" ok now this is EXACTLY how she answered. for some odd reason she talkd to me as though she was talkin to someone else. idk but it was directed to me no one else. "Yea. You were younger then. But Tyler has more of a chance then Brenton does with me." Ok so after the sent that text i texted her. "Well i just really want you to know that the reason i never asked you out or told you i liked you was because i didn't want it to affect our friendship. Ya know make it awkward. and i basically always knew the answer if i had asked you." After that text she enver texted me back so i got really worried that she was dodging me. I then wated to see her in person. After talking to alot of my friends about it i said whatever. I've wated 5 years im gonna ask her out. This was Monday. I was supposed to see her Thursday. She was sick. I was then supposed to see her friday. She didn't show up at the play. I was DIEING. I needed to tell her. Ok Sunday (today) i finally saw her. She looked great. But i couldn't seem to get her alone! i didn't want to talk to her with all my friends around. Finally they left but my brother was sittin there. :( ok well her mom finally walked up and said that she had to leave. So she walked out the door. So i ran out to meet her there and i ran up. I asked her hey whyd u stop texting me. She said "Oh. I got sidetracked. I meant to text you back." I felt very relieved. Ok so then i asked her if she got my last text. She said no. So i told her my Text. "Well i just really want you to know that the reason i never asked you out or told you i liked you was because i didn't want it to affect our friendship. Ya know make it awkward. and i basically always knew the answer if i had asked you." After telling her this we were almost to her car. So i said. "Well i guess im uhh. Asking you out." She looked at me and stuttered there for a while. I looked down at her. (shes 1 year older but im taller) She kinda stammered and i said. "Ya know anytime now." BUT NOT IN A BAD WAY. i made sure to do it in a sweet kinda way. She said: "uhh no." My heart dropped to my feet. I was crushed. I felt like i was gonna pass out and die there. She looked at me and said "Well its just all the problems with out friends realationships..." And i kinda cut her off and said "Rachel, please. If you dont like me just tell me." She said "NO no! i like you as a friend right now. its just were both really young." I felt horrible right now. I started to tear up and so did she. But hers was because of the wind blowing through her eyes and hair. She said "Im not crying its the wind" i said "oh yeah mine too." And all i could think of saying was "This isn't going to affect our friendship is it." She solemnly said "No." So then i said 'i guess this is bye then' she didn't even hug me but that was ok. I walked back into the building where my brother was and after 2 minutes about she walked back in. My heart sunk deeper. I couldn't stand to look at her. (We have this catch phrase we used to say to each other "Keepin' it Real" every tiem we would say bye to each other. its just kinda our thing. she doesn't do it with anyone else and neither do i.) Anyways after me and my brother was walking out the door she turned to me and said "Keeping it Real." I turned back to her and muttered the words back. she could tell she broke my heart. I Really dont know what to do now. There are no other girls in my neighborhood that are good looking. Theres one really ugly girl that likes me but i dont wana resort to her but i feel like i have no other choice. She really loves me but i dont. I dont wana date her but i feel like im obligated. i have no other choice theres no other girls that would like me. Anywho. I just really wana know how to stop the hurt. What should i do? Please. Really help. :ninjacat:
Ok. Now ive liked my friend for about 5 years. She's really cool. And my other friend (guy like me) likes her too. in fact he recently asked her out. she said no. lol. Ok But the bad thing is she said this in a text to him. "Atleast you had the balls to tell me unlike Tyler (me.) His name is Brenton. Rachel (girl) Ok. so. My friend told me the whole story and i was compelled to text her. So i started off the text by small talk. then i said "Brenton told me that you said i didn't have the balls to ask you out. Is that true?" ok now this is EXACTLY how she answered. for some odd reason she talkd to me as though she was talkin to someone else. idk but it was directed to me no one else. "Yea. You were younger then. But Tyler has more of a chance then Brenton does with me." Now she never has liked me before, and there is about a year age difference im younger. Now here is some of my thoughts on it. - She is making it up so it doesn't make her look bad. - She hasn't ever told me she liked me becuz she wanted me to ask her out first. Ok Second part of the post. This is what i replyed after she said that and i wana know if it is good. "Well i just really want you to know that I never told you i liked you or asked you out becuz i thought that our friendship was more important. Ya know i didn't want to make it awkward. And i basically always knew the answer if i were to ask you." Ok now after that text she never texted me back... is that a bad sign!? im really confused :ninjacat:
I must know. Its a magical experiment of mine. any suggestions?
Ok this is sorta a long story REALLY long. so bear with me, and it takes a while to get it. About 5 years ago a girl moved into my neighborhood... I was 9 years old and she was 10. Since the moment i saw her i liked her more then any other girl. 5 years later I still think the same. ok heres the whole story. I'm now 14 and she's 15. We've always been pretty good friends, never "best" friends but we always laugh and talk. I'm not really sure that she knows i still like her, I know she doesn't like me that way... She's always been attracted to older guys, she's the type of girl that likes the really cool guys you would see at beaches and California... ---___--- At the moment i've found out that she likes a guy who's 17. But I've talked to him about it and he doesn't really like her that way. But I don't know if that is true since i've only met him once... So recently i went to a semi-formal party where there was mostly just dancing... Unfortunatly there was about 17 slow dances... Constantly he was asking her to dance to the slow songs right before i was about to. And likewise she would answer "yes." I have a really good friend (she's a girl) and hangs out with her ALOT. Unfortunatly for me she's a two timing backstabber! She always says she's helping me but i recently found out that she's gettin her his number and really tryin to get them together... Ok back to the story... Finally i got up the guts to ask her to dance and she said yes surprising me that she wouldn't say no that she would want to dance with him... Well it turned out to be really nice. Ok so the next day i hung out with her again at a park because there was a large picnic goin around... So most of the time i was sittin on the swings tlakin with her and her friends. At the end of the nite she began to talk about him Alot. It really hurt to have to listen to her talk about him this much. Well i walked along with her best friend (not the two-timing backstabber lol) and she knew that i had liked her before this. So she asked me "you still like her dont you?" and i answered "Yeah 5 long years..." And so she proceeded to say "You do know that she's really tryin to go out with that guy right?" (condensed version) I solemnly said" Yes i know, but i dont really care i just want her to be happy" It almost hurt me to say that= I wanted her to be happy with me not him... 3 months later i found out she doesn't like him!!! shes back on the market. Now about a few months later I went over to her house with all of my friends and we played this game that is called "Wearwolf." its like a backwards way of playing hide n seek. Well, while i was playing it was her turn to play. BTW her name is Rachel. Ok, anyways so while we were seeking for her i broke off with this other girl and guy. So as a way to lure her out I said just joking around- "I wonder were that ugly girl could be hiding!" and the girl i was seeking with said "Oh come on!! you know u have loved her for the past 5 years..." AND GUESS WHAT!!!!! she was hiding right in the shed behind us. I ran off worrying she was there because i didn't know she was there then. So, after someoen finally found her she said that she heard everything. But not in a good way, she didn't speak to me for the rest of the night. Didn't even say goodbye to me. I just sat back and listened to "Bullet for my Valentine" (band) about a month later i have to go up to new jersey to my aunts funeral. Im really bummed about the hole thing that went down there and im tryin REAL hard to get over her... So A grreat thing happened while i was up at new jersey... and then turns to CRAP. While im up there im staying with my 12 and 8 year old cousins. (both girls) So my 12 year olds cousin is this 13 year old girl that is SUPER HOT and i verbalized that i wanted to meet her. I got my cousin to email her and the girl kinda laughed and i finally emt her one night. It was just really at a glance. My brother was also with me (hes 17) So. the day after my cousin emailed her asking what she thought of me. and this is wat she said and i quote! Well ya know you can NEVER tell about someoen at just a glance. turns out shes a lieing erm well... you get it. ok so turns out she was in love wiht my brother. AND HE WONT LET ITN GO. to this day he rubs it in my freakin face... I came back and wanted to kill myself. How could life be so cruel. I have told No one about this but my best friend. My brother at one of my friends house just mentioned the girls name to all my friends so now they are bugging me to know the whole story but they dont. I can't seem to stay away from Rachel, she just seems to be always dragging me back in. I feel like she is the one to be, i have never felt this way to be. But she wont ever love me will she... life is always cruel... PLEASE HELP
hey guys! this is my second poem posted. I'm just a beginner so be gentle, im most definitly not the best poem writer, not that great. But, i like writing them. So I Present to you! Hazed Love I have nothing against love personally Its just it refuses to come to me No matter how much I beg and plead It just stays away you see Does love hate me? Is Cupid being lazy? Oh why am I so unfortunate For love to be so hazy I always heard that love will find you Well what if that’s just a lie? Living by myself, waking up alone The years to come would cause me to cry I’ve waited for longer then I can bare Its been far too long for me It’s about time that I went out And found my love to be Please tell me wat you think! =D *edit* Had to fix a couple of grammatical erors (the last part was a joke.)
I recently beat F.E.A.R. APPARENTLY THERES A SPOILER HERE!!!! DONT LOOK DOWN!! and I just realized something... In the last Interval... when Alma gets older when she becomes like 18... she is HOT! does anybody else think so that has played the game?
Ok first of all she isn't really dead.... Friends... we are gathered here today to wittness the departure... of a great friend of ours.. Kikame... err Sai... WHATEVER! anywho, Her anger got the best of her... she let in on her feelings and decided to leave the forums... for a month... or really? secretly? a lifetime? Yes people drove her to her limits *ehm* no names... Burnitup... :guns2:Burnitup. So we dont want to greave her going away. After all she is in a better place... Or well not really but it is to her. Not us. So let us leave this place not in sorrow and anger... but in happyness! So let us relate the good times......... *Que Dramatic Music* Dun-dun dun! Ohoohoh *Que new song* "Baby Come Back! Ill be a fool for youu! BABY COME BACK! I just can't let you gooho! oh Baby come baackkack... But no seriously let us relive the best times we had with her...
Ok I was told that to submit videos to the User Portal i needed to make a serperate account alltogether so that i had a different email... well when i tried to make it i fill out all the things like Username,Password, But then when it comes up to the Image Verification it says "Invalid Public Key. Make sure you copy and pasted it correctly." I really want to be able to submit vids, what am i to do? can an admin make me an account if nothing else works?? D:
Hi i searched all over and i couldn't find a similar thread to the one im aobut to make so if this is similar can u redirect me to the one im lookin for and then lock this one? thanks! ok here we go! Anyways ive been tryin to log into user portal and everytime i try to create and log in for it i put in my original email and it wont work... I have tried to use Hotmail accounts (MSN) Yahoo accoutns (Yahoo Duh) and Gmail (Google) none of them work!!! so is there ANY free Email adress i can make that will work on the user portal? PLZ i really want to post some vids...
Ok. I'm not sure if this is in the right place but ok... So today i had to get my braces tightened (and for all of those who have braces u know wat a joy that can be...) anywho me and my older brother were invited to go to a friends house after i got them tightened... So it was me my brother and my mother at the house around 3pm, my brother went to my mom and said "We're goin to the orthadontist, but my friend has frozen pizza but he wants us to bring a drink ok?" Now my mom is going through a very rough time in her life. Her sister is dieing of cancer, and her other sister's life is falling apart... ho-hum... Back to the story, so she replies "o ok." So we leave and i get my braces tightened at around 3:45... We get to my friends house at around 6... We watch TV there until 8:45... So my brother gets no signal at this guy's house so he left his cell pohone in the car... so when we get back to the car he checks his phone he has 4 text messages/8 missed called/ and 3 voice mails. So he looks at the texts tellin us to call our house. SO we call and we reach a family friend her husband and their daughter, who is one of our life friends. So they tell us that our parents are out looking for us! WE WERE LIKE WHAT!?!?! Apparently she had my cousins, aunts, uncles, and close friends at our house. Police were notified, an Amber Alert was sent out, We were saw on TV as missing children... When we try and call my mother (we were in her car) her cell phone rings right next to me... SHE FORGOT HER CELLPHONE IN THE CAR!!! So we call my father who is notorious for not answering his cellphone. We call 3 times he doesn't freakin answer! When we call the fourth time he finally answeres, i can hear my mother in tears, my father is very sahken up... So when we get home we finally discuss it together... there was pictures of us out to give the police a thought of what we looked like. My mom picked a picture of me when i was 6 years old... she could have picked a picture of me 8 years older... but no! So the police were notified the search was claled off... wow that was an insane day
Ok hellow! I've been gone for a while so it feels good to be back. Hellow! Ok well I'm having a huge problem and it would be huge if you could help... its sorta a long story but just please read the whole thing... About 5 years ago a girl moved into my neighborhood... I was 9 years old and she was 10. Since the moment i saw her i liked her more then any other girl. 5 years later I still think the same. ok heres the whole story. I'm now 14 and she's 15. We've always been pretty good friends, never "best" friends but we always laugh and talk. I'm not really sure that she knows i still like her, I know she doesn't like me that way... She's always been attracted to older guys, she's the type of girl that likes the really cool guys you would see at beaches and California... ---___--- At the moment i've found out that she likes a guy who's 17. But I've talked to him about it and he doesn't really like her that way. But I don't know if that is true since i've only met him once... So recently i went to a semi-formal party where there was mostly just dancing... Unfortunatly there was about 17 slow dances... Constantly he was asking her to dance to the slow songs right before i was about to. And likewise she would answer "yes." I have a really good friend (she's a girl) and hangs out with her ALOT. Unfortunatly for me she's a two timing backstabber! She always says she's helping me but i recently found out that she's gettin her his number and really tryin to get them together... Ok back to the story... Finally i got up the guts to ask her to dance and she said yes surprising me that she wouldn't say no that she would want to dance with him... Well it turned out to be really nice. Ok so the next day i hung out with her again at a park because there was a large picnic goin around... So most of the time i was sittin on the swings tlakin with her and her friends. At the end of the nite she began to talk about him Alot. It really hurt to have to listen to her talk about him this much. Well i walked along with her best friend (not the two-timing backstabber lol) and she knew that i had liked her before this. So she asked me "you still like her dont you?" and i answered "Yeah 5 long years..." And so she proceeded to say "You do know that she's really tryin to go out with that guy right?" (condensed version) I solemnly said" Yes i know, but i dont really care i just want her to be happy" It almost hurt me to say that= I wanted her to be happy with me not him... OK thats the story! Please im so freakin confused i dont know what to do. Just someone tell me, give me some addvice to go by! Everytime i see her i feel sick in my stomach. HELP PLZ
Hey, My first AMV ever! I made it actually a while ago, but i never showed anyone. So I posted it here and theres a link, so go on and plz post a comment here or there and tell me what you thinkz! It is my first VID! PLZ check it out here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=diUQo3khnBk COOL CHECK IT OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!! And remember it is my first ever so it will stink! VERY VERY BADLY!
Hellow, Darkest Blade here! Recently I read the book, and it has become my favorite book of all time, and it is called "And then there were none" So I have decided to make an RPG after it. Ok lets go! "Premise" Strangers gather on an island to meet a strange man named Mr. Owens, but all for different reasons. After very strange events they begin to share their own dark and horrible secrets and one by one.... they die. "Rules" 1. Keep it Pg-13 2. Don't kill other peoples characters without there consent 3. Please try to keep it up-beat, and use right grammar if u can. 4. HAVE FUN! "Guidlines" We are all allowed to have 2 chars each, they should be made-up people or you can take them from other shows so if you do, tell me where they are from. Before we go into the story we are gonna need introductions to the characters, so remember to make one of those before we begin. Please don't make yourself the killer, it would ruin the whole storyline. Also, if you would like, kill off your own characters to keep up the suspense! And once one of them die ask me to get another one. Ok Thx! and remember have Fun! "Characters"
Hellow, I was kinda bored from writing my 4th chptr in my Story, (you can read it in my sig), so i decided to make this thread. So if you could have any three wishes what would they be. Yeha this is lame lol but tell me. Also if you read my story tell me what you think of it! Ok here's my three wishes 1. I wish i could create and manipulate anything. 2.I wish i could take myself or anything anywhere i wanteed. 3. I wish I could put myself into video games as my own character. Like Kingodm hearts and FFX and what-not. SO what about you?
Hmm yes i know there are already posts about this but mine is different.... Ok, i signed up with a hotmail account for kh-vids, and so i tried to signup in the user-portal with my yahoo account. And then it brings up this weird page that says stuff like: An unhandled exception occurred during the execution of the current web request. Please review the stack trace for more information about the error and where it originated in the code. Does anybody know what to do!?!?
Hellow, this is called the Departed Souls, it is a small story i have been writing so tell me what you think, and i might continue on writing if you guys like, and if u havn't noticed i will use better grammer when writing the story... Ok here it is Departed Souls Chapter 1=Giving up?/ Introductions Kiyoshi dodged to the left, right before the lazer blast burned a whole in the wall behind him. He quickly looked upward only in time to be hit in the head by a small rock. Stars ran in front of his eyes as he sat up, he rubbed his forehead where he had been hit. "Ow," he mumbled under his breath, he looked down and saw the rock that he had been hit by. He took it up and threw it at the Training Android that had shot at him. "Stupid Robots," he said, as the robot began to malfunction. "Oh now, you aren't going to give up already Kiyoshi?" a voice said behind him. He turned around just in time to block the cardboard sword coming towards him. He unsheathed his fake sword also, swinging at the legs of the other boy. "Not a chance Leiko!" Kiyoshi shouted, nearly behing hit on the arm by the sword. He quickly jumped into the air doing a backflip off of the wall behind him landing behind Leiko. He quickly did a sidewards slash hitting Leiko making him fall to the ground. "You aren't going to give up already are you Leiko?" Kiyoshi had on a stone-hard face looking down at Leiko. They then both cried out in laughter, soon hiccuping so hard they felt as though they would puke. "You have been training haven't you Kiyoshi!?" Leiko remarked, "How did you possibly notice?" Kiyoshi said with a large smirk on his face. "Hmm, it might have had something to do with the fact that you did a backflip off a wall!" Kiyoshi, a 14 year old boy had been best friends with Leiko since they were both in grade school, he was about 5ft 5 in, standing 3 inches smaller then Leiko. But that was only because Leiko was already sixteen, and more mature then Kiyoshi had been. Kiyoshi, had dark black eyes matching his somewhat lighter shade of black hair. It came down in small strands in front of his eyes, and almost in a spike at the top scalp of the back of his hair. His eyes, were very dark, almost matching his pupils. He had on a grey hooded sweater that also had black stripes crossing at his wrists. He had a checkered wristband and a black ring on his right hand ring finger. He had on baggy baige pants, with small cuffs at the bottom, becuase he would often step on them, and small brown skating shoes that were one size larger then he really needed, hence him tripping on them often. Leiko, had lighter brown hair but was much spikier and had a black highcollared longsleeve zip-up hooded sweater. He also wore baggy pants, but used his favorite color, wich just happened to be the same color as his hair (brown). "Okay you ready to go, I'll pick up the cruiser!" Kiyoshi exclaimed as he and Leiko walked out of the training hall. "Hmm, I suppose but where is Mitsu?" "Whasn't she with you when I left to train?" Kiyoshi asked. "No!, she said she was going to find you and ask you something, we have to find her first before we leave!" Kiyoshi nodded and pointed to the left as if to tell him that he would search this way, and he should search the other. Kiyoshi walked to where he was pointing quietly sneaked across the metal floor of the warehouse. He slowly walked towards the shadow of what looked like 14 year old Mitsu. He slowly paced across and hid behind a stack of boxes, labeled " Souls Villiage." He slowly snuck up to the "shadow" and jumped out only to find that he had scared a pile of engines. Across the hangar was a starcruiser, able to transport anyone to any world that they would want to go. Kiyoshi, Leiko, Mitsu, and Suki had always dreamed of going to the different worlds, to have adventres in uknown vicinities, to meet strange and interesting people. Suki, the 17 year old girl, had stayed behind in town to help with the new shipment of lightREX, to add to the cities defences. For the past 1000 years, they had been battling the darkness from taking the hearts and the souls of the citizens of more than 3000 worlds. But, the lightREX had been running out lately, the small white and silver orbs that protected just one huge world, was droping like a lead baloon in negative gravity. Soon, the dark would overtake all the worlds. The dark denizens had an endless supply of darkness as long as they controlled the world that held the light and the dark. As long as they controlled Rexus, they could develop any darkness they wanted. At the beginning of this war, the world Rexus was shared among all people, until a group of rebelious people, went anarchy and released all the darkness inside the world's core. Soon, all that was light, the people and the cities, were razed. But the dark ones lived on, the humans that used darkness to destroy the others were soon known as the Dark Denizens, or just the Dark Ones. Soon, the world was completely dark, there was no such thing as day-time,it was always night. Complete darkness hovered over the world. And now, the Dark Ones were spreading their darkness to the other worlds, destroying them one by one. But some worlds, such as "Souls Villiage," had no part in the war, or atleast so they thought...... Now as you may have seen, this chapter was just the introductions to the backgrounds of the characters, and the Dark Wars that have been going on. Yes, I promise you there would have been more action in the chapters to come but that is oly if you want me to keep going. have a few chapters saved in my folio, so just tell me what you thinkad if i should keep going ! Thanks
Hellow All!, I have made a few poems, so instead of having a bunch of poems spread out through the forums, I will have this small little, i dunno, "File" of my poems that I have written. I am a newer one of the poets with barely any experience with writing, but hey! I like writing my poems, so here is the one that I Actually submitted into the January Poem Contest, so I'll see how it turns out, this one is called "Hidden Love", and I hope you all like it! And if you have never read my poems they normally revolve around the life of teenagers around the world, so that the readers, (if teens) can relate easily, or if they are older!! Either way I hope you like 'em! Here it goes: "Hidden Love" I want to tell you my feelings, I guess I'm just too scared Afraid of what you'll think And say when I'm not there. My love for you must stay hidden, Behind the barred cage of my heart Our friendship is just too important My feelings can't be smart The destruction of my love, My heart is a battlefield To tell, or not to tell My feelings have got to yeild Since we were born, For, all these long years I know what you could say to me My eyes would swell with tears I want to tell you how I feel But what if you dont feel the same? This deciscion bouncing back and forth Its just like some child's game My hidden love is killing me Its like a gun is ravaging inside my heart I start to gag, a feeling I can't shake Then the pain begins to start So I just let go, of all I feel In my heart grows a kink I want you to like me But i'm just too afraid of what you think..... Ok this is my first entry into my small little "File" of my poems.... tell me what uou us think and I might keep adding on to this file! L8er~ =P
Hellow, i did a latest poem and i have gotten some critism, some good, some... not so good. SO! I have decided to redo it, i have decided to keep some of the parts you guys enjoyed and put in a few newer ones. The things i write about is stuff that happens to most people, including me, so i really hope it relates! Ok here it goes again! Hidden Love I really do Love you, I know you dont really care I know you wish i would just leave And you pray I just wasn't there Or atleast that is what i think But what do I really know? I wish i was a mind-reader, To see if you love me so... We had grown up together, We've known each other for years I know what you could say to me My eyes would swell up with tears My love for you must stay hidden, Behind the barred cage of my heart Our friendship is just too important My feelings can't be smart I want to tell you how i feel But what if you dont feel the same This deciscion bouncing back and forth Its just like some child's game So I just let go of all I feel, My once raised heart begins to sink, I want to let you know my love for you I guess I'm just afraid of what you think..... Tell me what you think!! Do you think I should submitt it to the poem contest? I might make some more, but it depends on what you guys think! TELL ME, and remember i am a new at the Poem writing.....
