OOC: Your godmodding... you can't just fight a powerful monster and its not really possible to just go to another world in like 1 move... it has to be more realistic. Plus you seem to be kind of overpowered even though the monster wasn't damaged... if you were fighting someone else that wouldn't be fair. You also had a lot of spelling errors which is fine, but make sure you read your post before posting
The large tree that hovered over the town began to burn... and so did the heartless in it... the heartless screeched loudly over the town and it disappeared. The tree burned with a flaring light and the people watched the once and gentle tree turn into a burning wooden pillar of fire. They depended on the tree... and now it was gone. The roots and vines disappeared and Xone and Kotone were saved.... Bisharon looked at the cloaked figure... "W-who... are.."
Hey are you going to post on pokemon special rp?
Kotone and Bisharon nodded at Xenree and then nodded at each other. Daisuke then looked at them, the heartless speaking for him... "You think I'm dumb huh?" The tree roots then surrounded Xone and the others... Bisharon jumped through the enclosing vines, but Kotone and Xenree were being encased... the heartless wanted to create a vine coffin-like attack, crushing them to their death in the vines... "K-kotone!!" Bisharon then looked at Daisuke high in the air... he ran up the tree quickly and then grabbed Daisuke's leg. "W-what th-the hell is wrong with you!!?" Daisuke came back to his senses and his heart stopped leaking darkness. And they both fell from a long distance. His eyes went back to normal and Daisuke was unconsious... The heartless looked at Daisuke from being in the tree... spikey vines were at the bottom of the fall so that Daisuke and Bisharon would die...
