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  1. Ravenyuki
    Wow. That's a sad story.
    Post by: Ravenyuki, Sep 4, 2009 in forum: The Spam Zone
  2. Ravenyuki
    Wow. You guys actually joke like that.
    Post by: Ravenyuki, Sep 4, 2009 in forum: The Spam Zone
  3. Ravenyuki
    Wow. That's hilarious! I hope you win. ^.^
    Post by: Ravenyuki, Aug 31, 2009 in forum: The Spam Zone
  4. Ravenyuki
    Ha ha! Did they pull her hair that tight for her eyes to look buggish like that?
    Post by: Ravenyuki, Aug 27, 2009 in forum: The Spam Zone
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    money for its ads, so
    Post by: Ravenyuki, Aug 27, 2009 in forum: The Spam Zone
  6. Ravenyuki
    Bump!!!

    Chapter 15: Teamwork

    “I’m worried about them.” Anna said. “What if they’re...”

    “They’re not dead.” Cindy said. “I can feel it. They’re close by.”

    “And how do you know that?” Lena asked.

    “I just know.”

    “Hey guys, look!” Hiromi cried, pointing in front of them.

    The barrier around them had vanished, and they saw Raven and Kahlill lying on the ground unconscious.

    “What have you done to them?!” Ben shouted at the hunters, his keyblade in hand.

    “Oh, don’t worry. We haven’t done anything. In fact, they should be just fine when they wake up!” Ira said, smiling.

    Raven and Kahlill slowly stood up. Anna’s eyes were wide with fright when she saw them. They both looked like they were possessed.

    “You call that nothing! You did do something you lowdown dirty son of a *****!”

    “Ben! Calm down!” Lena cried.

    “You think you’re so tough, don’t you kid?” Isa said. “Well, we’ll see how tough you are against this!”

    He waved his hand, and many heartless and nobodies appeared. They all stood; ready to fight.

    “How can we fight them? They’re our friends.” Cindy said.

    “We could just knock them out.” Hiromi said.

    “Wow. That’s gonna’ be sooo easy.”

    They all fought and fought. They all knew this was not going to be an easy task. Soon they realized that they were losing. Badly.

    “Look at these wimps, they’re tired already!” Ira cried. “Let’s finish them off!”

    Ira opened a portal and went through it. He came out with five people.

    “Mayu!” Anna cried at one of them.

    “They must be the missing people!” Lena said.
    “No fair! It’s ten against five!” Ben cried.

    Lena made her way to Raven. She blocked each attack she threw.

    “Raven! You have to wake up!” she cried. “Don’t let these creeps use you! Just snap out of it!”

    Raven’s eyes regained their shine for a moment.

    “Lena?” she said, lowering her keyblade.

    The necklace on her neck glowed with dark energy. Black lightning zapped all around it. She grabbed at the necklace and fought against its control. It was putting up a real fight against her.

    “You…piece…of…garbage…” she cried at it.

    An aura made of light surrounded her, and the charm on the necklace cracked. The charm shattered and Raven fell down in a heap.

    “No way.” Ted said under his breath.

    “She broke the necklace!”

    Kahlill came up behind him and slashed him with his keyblade.

    “What the f***?! What are you doing?!” Ted shouted at him.

    “You’re supposed to attack them, not me!”

    Kahlill held the broken chain in his hand.

    “Sorry if I don’t meet up to your expectations.” Kahlill replied, dropping the chain on the ground.

    The others were waking up too.

    “Their magic has weakened!” Lena said.

    “How the hell did they break free of our control?!” Ira exclaimed.

    The three hunters stood closer to each other.

    “Let’s kick their sorry asses!” Ben shouted.

    “Are you thinking what I’m thinking?”

    “I think we are.” Hiromi said with a determined smile.

    They all raised their keyblades and attacked them with a big burst of energy.

    “We can take them!” Ted cried.

    “No we can’t!” Isa said.

    Ted stayed in the direction of the blast. Isa ran to grab him, and Ira followed behind. They were all hit by the blast. When the magic cleared, all three of them were bent over and weak. They started to vanish into the darkness.

    “You may have won now...” Ira said. “But next time...We’ll crush you like bugs!”

    The air cleared, and they were gone.

    Chapter 16: Sunset

    Raven sat on the top of a building in Fiddle Town. She was watching the sun set in the distance. There was a sudden noise behind her. It was footsteps. She turned around to see Kahlill.

    “How did you find me?” she asked him.

    “Okay...maybe I followed you.” he said.

    “Stalker.” Raven joked.

    “Hey, I’m a stalker?” he said with false surprise.

    He sat down beside her. They stayed silent for a while. Kahlill moved closer to Raven. She didn’t notice because she was lost in thought.

    “What are you thinking about?” he asked her.

    “Everything.” she replied.

    “Everything?”

    “What you said...Did you really mean it?”

    “Yes.”

    He took her hand.

    “I want us to be together.” he said.

    Raven was tearing, but she didn’t want him to see. It was hard for her to say what she said next.

    “I really like you too.” she said, trying her best to hold back tears. “I love you.”

    He noticed that tears were starting to fall down her face.

    “Don’t cry Raven. Please. You’ll make me cry too.”

    He took her in his arms and held her close. She calmed down, and dried her tears. When he let go a little, she still stayed against his chest.

    “I want to stay here a little longer.” she thought. “He’s so warm.”

    Suddenly he tickled her sides and she was forced to laugh.

    “That made you smile.” he cried, laughing. “I don’t want that sad face. No sad face.”

    Raven’s smile faded after a minute, and the look of uncertainty and sadness came back to her

    face.

    “I know what’ll cheer you up.” he said.

    “What?” she asked with a flat voice.

    Without warning he took her in his arms and gave her a passionate long kiss.

    ~A few weeks Later~
    “Isn’t it great?” Lena said. “Raven’s in love.”

    “Yep.” Anna said, putting on sun block lotion.

    All seven of them were on the beach at Fun Cove. Kahlill was in a lounge chair with Raven on his lap. All of a sudden, a giant monster with heartless around it sprang out of the ocean.

    “Here we go again!” Kahlill cried as they all sprang into action.

    ~The end~

    I’m glad this was a happy ending! I love happy endings. (I cried because of my own story...wow...I’m that emotional?) Hope you enjoyed it! I’ll add Sora and the others in another fanfic. (I’m better at original characters...I guess.) At least I added Vexen, Master Xeanhort, that knight guy who follows him. Ciao!
    Post by: Ravenyuki, Aug 27, 2009 in forum: Archives
  7. Ravenyuki
    I find it funny too.
    Post by: Ravenyuki, Aug 27, 2009 in forum: The Spam Zone
  8. Ravenyuki
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    Hey! How are you?

    Hey! How are you?
    Profile Post by Ravenyuki for Asterisk, Aug 27, 2009
  9. Ravenyuki
    What do you mean by that? >.>
    Profile Post by Ravenyuki for cstar, Aug 24, 2009
  10. Ravenyuki
    I wish I could say this when I go back.
    Post by: Ravenyuki, Aug 24, 2009 in forum: The Spam Zone
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  13. Ravenyuki
    I would name my girl: Alessa

    I would name my boy: Kyle.

    These are the names I definitely would give them.
    Post by: Ravenyuki, Aug 24, 2009 in forum: Discussion
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    Ahh!

    I was born in the 90s.
    Post by: Ravenyuki, Aug 24, 2009 in forum: The Spam Zone
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    No. Way. That sounds gross! >.<
    Profile Post by Ravenyuki for cstar, Aug 24, 2009
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