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    Special Chapter - David's Journey

    Shortly after David used his new powers to escape his friends, he nodded towards King Mickey and then disappeared. He traveled across the worlds trying to hone his new skills and powers, as well as give his friends time to train themselves. He didn't want to abandon them but he knew that they would never get stronger if he helped them out, he wanted them to learn how to train their powers on their own, he wanted them to acquire their individuality. David decided to do some training of his own while trying to uncover the secrets of Data XIII, and to do that he would have to explore new worlds, worlds that don't reside in the Disney Realm, no.....he needed to travel to worlds that exist within his home. He traveled to a world that resembled the state of Texas, he had hoped to find some answers from those who fought with Organization XIII and also have information on Data XIII.

    David headed towards Dallas, he knew that it was a different world because automobiles didn't exist, all of the worlds were just plain cities and villages. He continued walking, then he spotted a teen his age and decided to speak with him.

    "Excuse me, may I ask you a quick question?" asked David. The teen then turned to face him.

    "Sure thing, may I ask who you are?" asked the teen.

    "My name is David." said David.

    "Wait, as in David Hypolite? The Super Saiyan?" asked the teen.

    "Yeah.....that's me." said David.

    "Wow this is amazing, you've got to come with me right now, there's someone who wants to see you!" said the teen.

    "Alright but first answer my question." said David.

    "Sure thing." said the teen.

    "Do you have any information at all about Data XIII?" asked David.

    "Ah so you're fighting them too aren't you? I figured that." said the teen.

    "So you do know about them. Good." said David.

    "David follow me, we'll talk at our headquarters, you can speak with our leader, by the way my name is Jevin." said Jevin.

    "It's nice to meet you Jevin, go ahead and lead the way." said David smiling.

    The two of them began to walk towards Jevin's Headquarters. Along the way the two of them began to talk about the city.

    "So this is Dallas in the alternate universe, pretty much what I expected." said David.

    "Yes, there's no automobiles, street lights, there's only housing and markets, it's like your living in the 1500s!" said Jevin.

    "I see, I actually feel quite at home here." said David.

    "That's because you probably went through the Animus Training." said Jevin.

    "Wait you know about that?" asked David.

    "Yeah, we've been through the training before to become Assassins, basically you'll find different types of people here, you'll find us the Assassins, in other parts of the world like in your state Louisiana, there's Saiyans, in Nevada there's Sharingan users, in Florida there's Byakugan users, there's all sorts of combinations!" said Jevin.

    "Hmmm I see, so everyone here is an Assassin?" asked David.

    "No just the people that are in our clan, and our clan is the one who created the headquarters, our leader is also someone you've met and known." said Jevin.

    "Really?" said David.

    "Yeah, she's been wanting to see you again and now she finally can." said Jevin smiling.

    "I think I may know who you're talking about." said David smiling.

    "I won't say her name, let's just wait till we get there." said Jevin smiling.

    "Sure, how long we have before we're there?" asked David.

    "Actually we're here, we just need to descend." said Jevin.

    "Right." said David.

    The two descended down using the elevator built in and headed towards the lobby. They walked past hallways and then made their way up the stairs and headed towards the leader's sanctuary.

    "Go ahead and walk in." said Jevin smiling.

    "Alright." said David.

    David first knocked on the door, a woman's voice had said "Come in" and he knew immediately who it was. He walked in and the woman put on a big smile.

    "David!!!!" said the woman.

    "I knew it was you Lolita!" said David smiling.

    They both hugged each other.

    "Wow, oh my god what are you doing here?" asked Lolita.

    "Well, I came here on business, I'm trying to gather information on Data XIII." said David.

    "Ah I see, well we've fought with them many times, we haven't lost any members, but they never lost any members either." said Lolita.

    "I see." said David.

    "Though, it's been quite a while since we've had to go out and fight them on the outskirts of the city, usually Axel and Demyx would be coming here all the time to try to do negotiations and stuff like that." said Lolita.

    "Oh don't worry about them, I took care of them back at Radiant Garden, well Axel I took care of at Radiant Garden, Demyx I took care of at their stronghold." said David.

    "Wait you went into the The Floating Castle That Never Was?" asked Lolita.

    "Ah so that's what it's called." said David.

    "David how did you manage to infiltrate that castle?" asked Lolita.

    "Lolita, walk with me around town." said David smiling.

    "Well...." said Lolita.

    "Go ahead Lolita we got the base covered, go catch up." said Jevin smiling.

    "Alright then!" said Lolita smiling.

    The two of them walked out and headed towards the town, they walked around and talked about the old times they had together, they then strolled around the park when the sunset came in.

    "Hard to believe that six years passed since we seen each other huh?" said David.

    "I know, and we dated for only a year and two months before we had to break up." said Lolita.

    "Yeah, it was hard to talk to each other because of the distance." said David.

    "If only I haven't moved, we would still be together." said Lolita.

    "Don't blame yourself, you did find something good here, you're the leader of an Assassin clan, you've fought with Data XIII many times and still live to tell about it, plus you haven't lost any members." said David.

    "I did lose members, they never died, they just decided to join with Data XIII. Apparently they're trying to gather an army together for some reason." said Lolita.

    "They plan to attack each world one by one, they're starting with Radiant Garden which is where my friends and I were, but I left to go and gather answers and also others to help us fight them." said David.

    "I see, well you can count on the Assassins to help you out in your battle with Data XIII." said Lolita smiling.

    "I wouldn't wanna put you guys in danger especially you." said David.

    "David, I am strong too you know." said Lolita smiling.

    "Oh really?" asked David playfully.

    "Wanna sample?" asked Lolita smiling.

    "Heh....bring it on." said David smiling.

    Lolita then vanished and attempted to kick David who blocked it immediately! They both continued to smile and then vanished together, they were locked in a sword fight both on par with each other! Lolita was dodging every one of David's swings and she even dodged his Chidori! David was impressed with how fast she was, she almost punch him in his face but managed to dodge it in time.

    "I see, you too have the Sharingan huh?" said Lolita.

    "Wait what?" asked David.

    Lolita activated her Sharingan and David became surprised!

    "I see. Well looks like this is gonna be a good battle." said David smiling.

    "I am also a Saiyan just like you, so I'm also getting excited." said Lolita smiling.

    "I knew you were a Saiyan, I could tell by your speed and power." said David.

    "Enough talk, let's finish this." said Lolita.

    The two charged towards one another and punch each other's fists and then clashed into a Blow Exchange which involved high speed Taijutsu which is also another term for martial arts! They were even with each other, David used a Cosmic Clone to fight with him, but Lolita also made a Cosmic Clone to help her fight! They were both surprised at how much their abilities were the same! They both locked hands with each other and began to power up their Ki, they became evenly matched and continued to smile, then their Ki caused an explosion of light and once it faded they were seen hugging each other.

    "I missed you David." said Lolita smiling.

    "I missed you too Lolita." said David smiling.

    Lolita and David leaned in to kiss each other but David quickly pulled himself back.

    "I can't do it, I'm in love with someone else right now." said David.

    "Oh I didn't know, I'm sorry." said Lolita.

    "It's okay, if I weren't in a relationship I would've kissed you Lolita, trust me." said David smiling.

    "That's good to know, but you are a faithful man David, I'm glad you had the willpower to stop yourself from kissing me." said Lolita smiling.

    "I don't have that much willpower." said David laughing.

    "No don't try to hide it, you're blushing too." said Lolita smiling.

    "Yeah I was never good at hiding it." said David laughing.

    "But good match though David, I knew you were strong but for you and I to have the same abilities, it's unheard of!" said Lolita.

    "I was surprised too, we both have Sharingan, Chidori, we're both Saiyans, and I can also tell that you can become a Super Saiyan." said David.

    "Yeah I can." said Lolita.

    "So how many Assassins in the clan can become Super Saiyans or use Sharingan or Byakugan?" asked David.

    "I'm the only Super Saiyan, there's two who can use Byakugan, and there's one who is a Jinchuuriki, I'm sure you know what that means." said Lolita.

    "Yeah, I do, how many tails?" asked David.

    "He has one tail, the Shukaku." said Lolita.

    "Ah so he can manipulate Sand right?" asked David.

    "Yeah, and it's a she." said Lolita laughing.

    "Oh my fault." said David smiling.

    "It's okay, Demi is the one who has the Shukaku in her body." said Lolita.

    "Oh so she's a Jinchuuriki?" asked David.

    "Yeah, she was made one at birth, but her life wasn't all that bad as most Jinchuurikis. No one really knew that she had the Shukaku sealed inside her, only those who sealed it in her know it's in her." said Lolita.

    "I see, well she's definitely a lucky one." said David.

    "Do you have a Jinchuuriki back at your home?" asked Lolita.

    "Yes. Her name is Miranda, she's the Nine-Tails Jinchuuriki and also my girlfriend." said David.

    "Wow that's awesome! That she's your girlfriend I mean, I can't imagine how hard it was for her when she was young." said Lolita.

    "To be honest, I never knew about her childhood, she hasn't told me anything yet even though I want to know, but deep down I already know how she had it." said David.

    "Well it's okay as long as you know how she felt and feels now you'll be just fine." said Lolita smiling.

    "Yeah you're right as usual." said David smiling.

    "So are you." said Lolita smiling.

    "I guess." said David laughing.

    "Hey David, what's up with that outfit you have on, it's been giving off energy for awhile." said Lolita.

    "This is a new form I have acquired through training. A few years back my friends and I traveled to the future to battle my ex who met up with her future self and they tried to destroy us so that our future selves would disappear as well. But we stopped them and I became a Super Saiyan along the way, and I also learned the Mangekyou Sharingan as well. Anyway, I met up with my future self again and he trained me in the ways of using my Sharingan which gave me this new form. I now possess the Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan because of it." said David.

    "No way I have the Eternal Mangekyou too!" said Lolita.

    "I figured you would say that." said David laughing.

    "Did you learn how to use Kamui or Amaterasu Clone Destruction yet?" asked Lolita.

    "Did I learn what and what?" said David confused and smiling.

    "Kamui is a space time technique that lets you target a person and send them into another dimension. Amaterasu Clone Destruction is when you create a clone made out of Amaterasu, once touched it explodes and black flames engulf the target." said Lolita.

    "I have not learned these techniques of which you speak of." said David smiling.

    "You'll learn how to use them both or maybe you'll learn how to use one of them, or possibly use one of them but also develop a new visual jutsu." said Lolita.

    "Guess we'll just have to wait and see." said David.

    "Don't worry you're strong, you'll become even stronger by staying here for awhile." said Lolita.

    "Sure, I'll stay. I can learn more about this city, the Data XIII, and also learn more about this clan, and talk to you more." said David smiling.

    "Hey don't forget you have a girlfriend back home." said Lolita smiling.

    "I know." said David smiling.

    They went back to the headquarters, it was now dark outside. Lolita showed David where he was going to sleep. He got surprised.

    "Are you...sure?" asked David.

    "Well I won't let you sleep on the floor, besides the bed is big enough." said Lolita.

    "But it's the fact that we're both gonna be in the same bed." said David smiling.

    "Don't worry I won't do anything scaredy-cat." said Lolita smiling.

    "I'm not scared, and I better find my clothes on when I wake up in the morning!" said David smiling.

    "Oh shut up and get in the bed." said Lolita smiling.

    "I don't wanna!" said David.

    "Don't make me put you in the bed by force." said Lolita.

    "Go ahead, you'll just wind up destroying the entire bed to where we'll both have to sleep on the floor." said David smiling.

    "Then that is when you'll find your clothes missing." said Lolita smiling.

    "Oh hell no I'm going to bed now." said David charging into the bed.

    "I thought so." said Lolita smiling.

    David deactivated his powers and began to relax, Lolita alongside of him relaxed as well.

    "Hey Lolita?" said David.

    "Yeah?" said Lolita.

    "Where's your family?" asked David.

    "My mom and dad died at the hands of a gang that once tormented the streets of Dallas, until I got my powers and got revenge on them, then I decided that it was time for me to create a group that would help out those in need and bring justice to the city and the state. My brother was the leader of the Assassin clan until Data XIII showed up, he fought against the leader of Data XIII but he couldn't defeat him and was killed on the spot. My little sister was sent to live with one of my brother's friends, she's taking care of her right now while I stay back and maintain peace within the state so that way she can come back one day." said Lolita.

    "I'm sorry to hear all of this." said David.

    "It's okay, it's made me stronger, and it's made me see you again." said Lolita smiling.

    "I know how you feel, I lost my dad when I was in the 9th Grade, that's when I awakened my Sharingan, I then continued to train until I learned how to manipulate Ki, then learned how to enhance my powers and then combine Chakra and Ki together, then became a Super Saiyan. All for the purpose of protecting my friends and family, or whatever is left of my family. My dad told me that our entire family was being hunted down by some group that were called Tuffles. They're said to be very advanced in technology but were unable to fight like Saiyans. But then they learned how to achieve the powers and skills of a Saiyan and began to hunt down the Saiyans, and my family was made up of the most strongest Saiyans with my dad being the strongest. My purpose for the moment is to become strong enough to protect my friends, my remaining family, and myself." said David.

    "Sounds like we both have a lot on our plate." said Lolita.

    "Yeah." said David.

    "I used to hate my life because of how I lost my parents and my brother, I used to hate my powers because it was what caused us all to be targeted. But then I had realized that my powers were a gift, they were meant to be used for protection and for peace." said Lolita.

    "I felt the same way when I first had my powers, I didn't dislike them but I knew they were dangerous." said David.

    "It's definitely hard being the strongest of your friends and family, you tend to get so much responsibility pushed onto you. I know that being strong is good and all but I don't want to be seen as the dominant type and should always be relied on." said Lolita.

    "I feel the same way. I used to train my friends and even save them multiple times, pretty much to a point where they rely on me to come and save them, which doesn't help them get any stronger. In fact it makes them weaker." said David.

    "Which is probably the other reason why you left Radiant Garden, you wanted them to prepare for Data XIII on their own and not rely on you." said Lolita.

    "Exactly." said David.

    "I understand, and no one can blame you for doing that." said Lolita.

    "Thanks Lolita, I'm glad you still have the same personality." said David smiling at her.

    "Awww you're so sweet as always." said Lolita smiling at him.

    "Alright, let's try to go to sleep, we may have to do some things tomorrow, especially me, I need to gather information on Data XIII." said David.

    "Well this is the place to go, so far we're the only world that has lots of information on Data XIII since we fought them so many times." said Lolita.

    "I'll probably just stay here and train too until the time comes for when Data XIII launches their attack on Radiant Garden." said David.

    "Like I said too we'll be sure to help you out when the time comes." said Lolita.

    "Thanks, but when that times comes, I want you to be careful okay, I wouldn't wanna lose you. I may have a girlfriend now, but I'll never forget my first love." said David smiling.

    "And I'll never forget my first love either." said Lolita smiling.

    To Be Continued!

    Well this is the first part of the Special Chapter, basically this is gonna be about David's travels in Dallas, Texas where he meets a few old friends and his first love. He'll also learn new abilities as well as new powers! You'll also learn a bit more about Lolita during this chapter and how her relationship with David was all about and how it ended and stuff! Also this Special Chapter does have something to do with the story, look at it as a filler since in the numerical chapters it's all gonna be about the growth of David's friends and this Special Chapter is needed in order for the rest of the main chapters to be understandable. Hope you enjoyed!
    Post by: Alpha Shadow, Apr 9, 2012 in forum: Archives
  2. Alpha Shadow
    I'll be doing an update later on today hopefully I've had company over for 2 days so I couldn't concentrate so sorry if I'm taking so long.
    Post by: Alpha Shadow, Apr 7, 2012 in forum: Archives
  3. Alpha Shadow
    My Top 5's are:

    1. Topless - Breaking Benjamin (I love this song so much)
    2. I Will Not Bow - Breaking Benjamin
    3. Asylum - Disturbed
    4. Dreams Of An Absolution Remix - Lee Brotheron( I spelled it wrong most likely lol and this is Silver The Hedgehog's Theme from Sonic 06)
    5. F.C.P.R.E.M.I.X - The Fall Of Troy

    Evil Angel and Without You both by Breaking Benjamin would have made it in the Top 5 but I like to do variety.
    Post by: Alpha Shadow, Apr 2, 2012 in forum: The Playground
  4. Alpha Shadow
    I've been noticing lately that life has become difficult, from what I heard from my grandfather, things seemed easier back then, sure there were hard times but in a way it was so easy, prices were low, jobs were decent, everything seemed simple to me. But now, there's so much ignorance going on, money is too much of an issue nowadays, jobs are becoming harder to find and I feel they will only get harder because the more technology that surfaces, the more manual labor will cease to exist. At some point in time, most of the world that has this type of technology will become lazy, no one would be active, only those who have to build the technology will remain active. I just feel that in the future, everything will become more difficult than before since nothing stays the same. Already I've noticed the grading scale at some schools went up so now if you would make a 60% now it would be an F instead of a D and according to my friends, it's harder to maintain good grades now because the scales have changed. I understand why it's been changed because they want the students to focus on learning more but I mean seriously, I find that to be pressuring.

    So my thoughts on all of these developments are that the digital age will become more exciting, but it will be expensive. The Learning Age with schooling and whatnot will become harder and will encourage students to study even harder. As for crime.....what I hear and see in the world.......makes me not want to be alive, it is just ridiculous how some people can't understand their actions have consequences. I can understand that no one will ever have a true understanding of one another, I can also understand that life was never simple but even I can tell that life isn't simple only because of the things that are going on. Not everyone is smart, not everyone has common sense, not everyone is strong, everyone is however different in their own way as well as the same in their own way. Alright I'm done talking so what are your thoughts friends?
    Thread by: Alpha Shadow, Apr 2, 2012, 0 replies, in forum: Help with Life
  5. Alpha Shadow
    As long as I have my Sonic I'm content, but the jobs and the titles being cut like that......it's a big slap to the face to the customers that enjoyed their favorite titles. The gaming industry seems to be changing, it's like lately things have been getting worse, good games are being milked, people are losing their jobs which will have an impact on the games. It's just absolute chaos.
    Post by: Alpha Shadow, Apr 2, 2012 in forum: Current Events
  6. Alpha Shadow
    Special Chapter - April Fools Day (This will be a what-if chapter basically so my imagination will run completely wild!)

    "Alright! It's April Fools Day! I'm gonna raise hell!" said Brandon.

    "What you got in mind?" asked Joseph.

    "I have a bunch of things in mind but I can't tell you'll just have to see for yourself." said Brandon.

    "I gotta feeling that I'm gonna be involved." said Joseph.

    "You don't know that." said Brandon smiling.

    "Yeah I'm involved." said Joseph smiling.

    Brandon then ran off to create mischief. He decided to start with Lucus since he was fun to mess with. Lucus was minding his own business relaxing in Radiant Garden, Cody, Miranda, and Sora were also present. Brandon walked over to Lucus.

    "Hey Lucus!" said Brandon.

    "What's up?" asked Lucus.

    "I need your help with something." said Brandon.

    "Sure thing, what is it you need help with?" asked Lucus.

    "I need your strength to knock down this boulder that's in my favorite spot where I usually like to go and chill." said Brandon.

    "Sure let's go!" said Lucus.

    The two of them left, Cody and Miranda knew what day it was so they tried not to show interest.

    "How come Brandon needs help moving a rock he can just use his powers to move it can't he?" asked Sora.

    "Sora, we have something called April Fools Day, the objective of the day is to play tricks on your friends, basically it's a day to promote lying but as long as it's nothing extreme and hurtful." said Cody.

    "Brandon normally takes his jokes to the extreme, but sometimes it's just close." said Miranda.

    "I see, shouldn't we help Lucus then?" asked Sora.

    "I'd rather not get in the crossfire once Lucus falls for the prank, once he does he'll go on a rampage." said Cody.

    "Guess we'll just have to wait and see then." said Sora.

    "Yep!" said Miranda.

    Brandon and Lucus got to the spot and noticed the boulder, Lucus went up to the top to knock it down, once he knocked it down he noticed something on the ground. He seen a pastry on the ground and decided to eat it as a reward for helping Brandon, once he took a bite his face squinted up, it was too sour! While he was distracted by the sourness, thousands of boulders came rolling towards Lucus and knocked him off the edge! Then the boulder that he had threw down had morphed into a fireball and burned his butt, and Brandon stood there laughing his butt off.

    "What's the big idea Brandon?" asked Lucus.

    "It's April Fools Day dawg!" said Brandon.

    "Aw damn it I forgot!" said Lucus.

    "Got ya! Peace!" said Brandon running away.

    Lucus proceeded to chase after him, but failed because right when he began to run his foot got caught in a rope and it launched him into the sky, only to get hit by yet another boulder that was airborne towards his face. Brandon meanwhile thought about who he should prank next, he could try David since he was the easiest to fool if you did it right. So he decided to prank David next. David was at the Great Maw fighting with three of his Cosmic Clones, they were locked in a fierce battle, none of them were showing signs of weakness, they all activated their Ultimate Susano'o power and continued to fight! Brandon then grabbed his attention.

    "Hey Brandon what's up?" said David.

    "Nothing much man I just wanted to see what you were up to?" asked Brandon.

    "I'm just training my Mangekyou Sharingan's powers, I mean I did awaken it's Eternal power you know?" said David.

    "Eternal power?" asked Brandon.

    "Let me demonstrate." said David.

    "Oh no that's okay I don't wanna get hurt today." said Brandon.

    "You wouldn't get hurt but that's okay, is there anything else you need?" asked David.

    "No that's all I just wanted to see what you were up to." said Brandon smiling.

    "Alright then, I'm gonna get back to training." said David smiling.

    "Sure thing!" said Brandon smiling.

    Brandon had ran off, David turned around and started smiling.

    "Guess I should see how it turns out." said David.

    Brandon decided to prank Christian and Ricky next. He wanted to try to get the people that would be easy to manipulate. Christian and Ricky were standing on top of the clock tower and were talking about their friendship.

    "Man Rick I can't believe in such a short amount of time we became good friends." said Christian.

    "That's because we can see eye to eye." said Ricky.

    "That's true, we're similar." said Christian.

    "Hey guys!" said Brandon.

    "Hey Brandon!" said Christian.

    "Yo!" said Ricky.

    "So what's up?" asked Brandon.

    "We're just talking about how we had met and became epic friends." said Christian.

    "Yeah I find that to be amazing." said Brandon.

    "So what brings you here?" asked Ricky.

    "Well I wanted to see which one of you was better at Battlefield because I needed some tactical information." said Brandon.

    "I'm the best at Battlefield." said Ricky.

    "I'm the best with providing tactical information." said Christian.

    "But wait shouldn't the best at Battlefield be the best at giving tactical information?" said Brandon.

    "That's true." said Ricky.

    "Yes but I am the best at providing information." said Christian.

    "Actually you're the best at using tactical information." said Ricky.

    "Yes and providing tactical information." said Christian.

    "But Christian I'm the one that taught you everything I know." said Ricky.

    "Yes you did, but everyone has a particular skill that they're best at, mine is tactical information." said Christian.

    "Christian I'm the one who was the captain while we were back in the Battlefield universe!" said Ricky.

    "But I was the strongest and was able to provide tactical information!" said Christian.

    "That's because I couldn't have all of the positions!" said Ricky.

    "You fool! They split us up based on our epic skills, my epic skill is retrieving information!" said Christian.

    "No you fool! They assigned each person a job because of how well they can perform as a whole, I was capable of doing everything better which was why I was Captain, you were second best which is why they gave you the Intel Position!" said Ricky.

    "Whoa now hold on there! You didn't do the best at everything, I excelled at three skills that you couldn't do as well as me!" said Christian.

    "What skills are those!?" asked Ricky.

    "Strength, Speed, and Intelligence!" said Christian.

    "Fool that's only because you got the Sharingan, as for me I use my pure raw talent to achieve my position as Captain!" said Ricky.

    "What you trying to say? That I rely on my Sharingan to win all of my battles? That I use my Sharingan to acquire high ranking positions?" asked Christian.

    "That and the fact that you can't do anything without using your Sharingan!" said Ricky.

    "Hypolite uses his Sharingan all the time!" said Christian.

    "But Hypolite is strong without the Sharingan because he can use Kaioken and Super Saiyans 1 and 2! He even has a good bit of Ninjutsu!" said Ricky.

    "But he uses it when he fights strong opponents!" said Christian.

    "That's because it's necessary, he was able to get stronger, if the opponent got stronger then he should get stronger as well, as for you, you didn't have to use your Sharingan all the time not during our training sessions, David himself never used his Sharingan when he trained us!" said Ricky.

    "Ya'll two should fight!" said Brandon.

    "Yeah you wanna fight me to prove me wrong?" asked Ricky.

    "Hell yeah I wanna fight you!" said Christian.

    Ricky and Christian jumped off of the tower and dove towards the ground and began to fight! Brandon started to laugh and then ran off to prank someone else. He knew that he couldn't prank Miranda and Cody since they know how he is when April Fools Day is present. He decided to try Taylor, he had got a pretty evil idea of how he could trick her. Taylor was at Merlin's Study reading a few books on Magic and wanted to learn how to control it better. Brandon had walked in.

    "Hey Taylor!" said Brandon.

    "Hey Brandon!" said Taylor.

    "So what you doing?" asked Brandon.

    "Just reading books about Magic." said Taylor.

    "Cool." said Brandon.

    "Anything you want?" asked Taylor.

    "I want you." said Brandon.

    "Wait what?" said Taylor.

    "You heard me.....I want you to be my girlfriend Taylor." said Brandon.

    "Okay now I know you're playing a joke on me, who put you up to this?" asked Taylor.

    "I put myself up to this, I wanted to tell you how I felt about you." said Brandon.

    "Wow....this is so sudden." said Taylor.

    "I know, but before we fought with Data XIII I wanted to at least tell you how I feel about you just in case I die in battle." said Brandon.

    "Truthfully Brandon, I feel the same way for you as you do for me, I'll be happy to date you Brandon, I've always been in love with you, you make me smile all the time whether you're being stupid or you're being bold and kind." said Taylor smiling.

    "Can I say one thing?" asked Brandon.

    "Of course you can." said Taylor smiling.

    They were getting closer to each other, Brandon leaned towards her ear and whispered..........."April Fools!"

    Brandon immediately made a mad dash for the door and ran as fast as he could to get away from her! Taylor however stayed at her chair and was depressed as ever, she was crying. Miranda then stumbled upon her and asked her what was wrong, once she found out what Brandon did, she decided to pursue after him. She went to look for David to tell him what had happened. David was just returning from his training when he spotted Miranda.

    "Wait so Brandon confessed his love to her and then she did the same and he told her 'April Fools' ?" asked David.

    "Yeah!" said Miranda.

    "Hmmm I never expected him to go that far." said David.

    "But you know Brandon, he always does things to the extreme." said Miranda.

    "Guess I'll have to have a chat with him." said David.

    "Then let's go!" said Miranda.

    "Sure!" said David.

    The two of them headed after Brandon who fled to the clock tower of Radiant Garden, once there he noticed a hole that was made next to it, he decided to explore it and dove inside. He landed on the ground and was amazed by how there were so many crystals present! He took notice of one in particular, it was a red crystal, and reacted to his energy! He then absorbed some of it and his body glowed in a red color! His clothing changed in the same manner Sora's clothing changed when he drived into his forms! Brandon then used the energy to navigate through the cave and then took down the Heartless that were present. He then came across a blue colored crystal that was the same as the red crystal! He touched it and underwent the same change as he did when he touched the red crystal! He then noticed that his form was based on speed and wisdom, so he used it's power to navigate through the traps the cave had lying dormant in wait for him. Again he took down the Heartless that were inside of the cave blocking his way, then he came across a golden crystal and did the same thing. He realized that it's power was based on combat, speed, and agility! He did the same thing he did with the previous crystals to navigate through the cave until he came across a white crystal! He touched the white crystal and his body morphed once again, his clothes were white but then glowed every two seconds with powerful magic! He could sense that the combat, speed, agility, and magic were enhanced to the max and he felt the power to glide as well! Once made it towards the end he noticed a door and opened it, inside the hallway was plain white with a wall of water encased within!

    Brandon continued to venture into the hall and fought off Nobodies that seemed to appear! He had finally reached another door and opened it......inside the next room was an arena......and in that arena stood David and Miranda with their Mangekyou Sharingans activated!

    "Hey guys what are you doing here?" asked Brandon.

    The two of them said nothing, they just immediately attacked him! Brandon had dodged both of their attacks and then attacked them back! David had used Amaterasu on Brandon who dodged it but was only caught off guard by Miranda's Rotation technique! Brandon recovered and used his Lava Style to keep them at a distance but David used his Sharingan's powers to copy his Lava Style!

    "No way! I thought you couldn't copy Kekkei Genkai abilities!" said Brandon.

    David then used Lava Style: Dragon of Destruction which unleashed five giant dragons that crashed to the ground to attack Brandon who dodged it just in time, Miranda then appeared behind him and used Giant Rasengan to hit him! Brandon dodged it again and then noticed David using his Inferno Style: Flame Control which hurled black flames and created spears out of them! Brandon continued to dodge for his life, Miranda then landed on the ground and used Shadow Clones to distract Brandon while she created Wind Style: Rasen Shuriken! She charged after Brandon with the jutsu while David powered it with his Amaterasu to create Inferno Style: Black Rasen Shuriken! Brandon dodged it perfectly but then didn't notice the second one coming towards him and got hit directly with it! The jutsu not only burned him to the max but it was destroying every cell in his body! He had fell to the ground defeated.

    "Why.....would you........kill me?" asked Brandon.

    "Because you took your jokes too far, you hurt the one that was in love with you." said David.

    "What?" asked Brandon.

    "Taylor was in love with you, it was no prank, she didn't know it was April Fools Day and she took it all seriously." said Miranda.

    "Then.....I....I didn't mean to......" said Brandon.

    "Now that you know this......what will you do?" asked David.

    "I'm sorry......I shouldn't have played with her feelings like that, I truly do love Taylor, I just thought that she knew it was April Fools Day, I shouldn't have got a big head. It's all my fault, all of this pain I feel is just what I deserve, hell I deserve to die." said Brandon.

    David then activated his Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan and relieved Brandon from all of his pain!

    "What? The pain!?" said Brandon.

    "Now that you understand, go ahead and tell her how you truly feel while apologizing to her." said David.

    "But David how did you?" asked Brandon.

    "Just use this as a lesson, don't take jokes too far because it can seriously hurt you in the end, physically and/or mentally." said David.

    "BRANDON!" screamed Taylor.

    "Huh?" said Brandon.

    "Dude how come you're so spaced out?" asked Cody.

    "I don't....know." said Brandon.

    Brandon was in the town of Radiant Garden and was about to go prank Lucus. David stood on top of a mountain and deactivated his Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan in his right eye. He smiled.

    "So Brandon you wanted to tell me something?" said Taylor.

    "Yes." said Brandon prepared to release his feelings.

    "Then tell me." said Taylor smiling.

    "I.....I!" started Brandon.

    David had turned away and began to walk away. Miranda appeared before him and had smiled.

    "You used Ultimate Tsukiyomi on him didn't you?" said Miranda smiling.

    "It was only to show him what would happen if he were to continue on like this." said David.

    "Well though it was crude how you gave him a lesson on pranking, it was really nice what you did to help him, he's now confessing his love for Taylor." said Miranda smiling.

    "Yeah he is, and I'm proud of him for it." said David smiling.

    "Yeah." said Miranda smiling.

    Meanwhile......

    "Christian remind me again why we're fighting?" asked Ricky.

    "Hell if I remember!" said Christian.

    THE END!!!!!!

    Basically this was just a little chapter I wanted to do for you guys, I felt happy this morning so I decided to give you guys something special, normally I wouldn't be able to do something like this because I can't be funny I mean seriously I suck at making others laugh so please bear with what jokes I attempted to put in lol. I'll probably do an Easter special as well.....maybe......I'd have to give it some thought. But expect another special chapter to come in the next update, it's prior to what's going on in the main story except it's involving David only, with minor mention of his friends, in the special chapter we'll take a look at what David is doing during his time away from his friends right after gaining his Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan! Stay Tuned!!!!! By the way sorry if this was short, when I was typing it felt long but it looks like it was short to me.
    Post by: Alpha Shadow, Apr 1, 2012 in forum: Archives
  7. Alpha Shadow
    I have re-formatted the first chapter, the second chapter can be redone if you guys want me to so leave me some feedback please! Hope you guys enjoyed that first chapter again lol
    Post by: Alpha Shadow, Mar 29, 2012 in forum: Archives
  8. Alpha Shadow
    Updating the story tomorrow! Gonna be busy all day!
    Post by: Alpha Shadow, Mar 27, 2012 in forum: Archives
  9. Alpha Shadow
    (Choose any cloak style from the games)

    Chapter 17 - Sharingan Training! Disagreements!

    Joseph and Miranda had joined Brandon and Taylor in their conversation while David remained resting in the bedroom, but his dreams weren't pleasant, inside his dream he was walking around a destroyed city, flames were blazing in the distance, an ocean made of lava lied beneath the surface, and he then realized, the city was floating in the air! He continued to explore the vacant city wondering what had happened, he decided to look for survivors for a few minutes but found none. There were no bodies, no signs of blood, it's as if everyone was evacuated before the city was destroyed. He flew into the air and glided around the city to find clues as to what happened, again he couldn't find an answer, nothing was left, he then decided to think of something else to dream about but he couldn't, he remained stuck in the dream.

    He kept gliding around and then he noticed some of the buildings were cut in half, the roads were completely demolished, cars were obliterated, and........there were blue shards scattered across the ground! He picked one up and he felt it's energy and was able to determine that it was Chakra flowing through it! He continued walking around, he turned to his left and noticed more blue shards, but had an electrical current circling around them. Suddenly he heard an explosion coming from behind him! He turned around and noticed that there was a Lightning Style technique heading towards him! He dodged it and then searched for the source of the attack.

    "I'm impressed, you dodged that attack very quickly!" said a voice.

    "Who's there?" asked David.

    "Don't you remember me?" asked the voice.

    "No I don't remember you, am I supposed to?" said David.

    "Maybe if you seen my face you'll recognize me." said the voice.

    Then a flash of lightning began to form on the ground and out came a man! He wore a black cloak similar to Organization XIII and Ezio Auditore's cloak but it was different, there was a symbol on the back, there was a white eagle spreading it's wings symbol on his back. He raised his head and smiled and that's when David remembered him.

    "It's.....me?" said David.

    "Yes, I am you, and you are me." said Dark David.

    "But you're taller than me." said David.

    "I'm the Future David, the one you fought alongside with when your friends came to the future to stop Tyra, only I'm different." said Dark David.

    "I remember, but how come you're giving off such a dark and powerful energy?" asked David.

    "That's not easy to explain, but in short, I was unable to save my friends, I was unable to save the one I loved, I wasn't able to gain control." said Dark David.

    "Wait, are you saying that you killed everyone, or I killed everyone?" asked David.

    "Yes, I did, I couldn't control the new power I had acquired, it took hold of my judgment, and I destroyed my life." said Dark David.

    "But you seem stable now though." said David.

    "I had to meditate my mind and body for two years in order to gain control." said Dark David.

    "You mean you stayed in meditation for two years without losing concentration?" asked David.

    "Yes I did. I can still bring everyone back but I can't do it, I killed my own friends and family, I don't deserve to have them near me again." said Dark David.

    "But don't you think that they would understand that your power was uncontrollable for you at the beginning?" asked David.

    "I controlled it now but I don't believe I'll be forgiven for what I've done, but anyway, I tapped into your mind using Chaos Control, I put your mind into a mediation so that way when you awaken you'll be stronger and have learned all you could." said Dark David.

    "What are we about to do?" asked David.

    "You're still not strong enough to beat Data XIII, you're gonna need training, mainly Sharingan Training." said Dark David.

    "So you know about Data XIII huh." said David.

    "I do know about them, and from what I can tell you, Xemnas and that Data version of you and Ultima named Ultimaus will be very strong. I need to make sure that you're Sharingan is strong enough to fight them both mainly the Data Ultimaus." said Dark David.

    "What exactly will I learn?" asked David.

    "Throughout this entire dream, you'll learn how to make your Sharingan copy techniques and counter fighting styles to a new level, then I'll help you awaken your Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan as well as train your Ultimate Susano'o. You will need to be ready for the battle and don't worry about time, in here time is infinite, outside the dream time won't pass either, we could train forever and once you wake up no time would have passed. But I only need to train you until you get the power needed." said Dark David.

    "That's fine with me." said David.

    "I know it is, we're the same person remember?" said Dark David smiling.

    "Yep!" said David smiling.

    They began training. Meanwhile back in Merlin's House.

    "So Joseph how's things been going with you and your girl?" asked Brandon.

    "They've been going great I'm really happy with her." said Joseph.

    "I heard she's in Texas that's true?" asked Taylor.

    "Yeah she is." said Joseph.

    "At least she's not far away though, by far away I mean like 3 days away." said Taylor.

    "That's true." said Joseph.

    "So how's David doing in there?" asked Miranda.

    "He's sound asleep, I think he'll be out for awhile." said Taylor.

    "But that power he has, I don't think he should use it that much, it's taking a lot of stamina from him." said Brandon.

    "He called it Ultimate Susano'o right? It seems like it has an ultimate risk." said Joseph.

    "It's not that bad though, he just becomes exhausted." said Miranda.

    "But the more he uses it the more it'll put a strain on his body, when he came to join us he was fine but once he used it again to show us and got out of it he was exhausted. I'm sure that he can't use it too many times especially with it's duration." said Taylor.

    "He did say he was gonna train it." said Brandon.

    "But that's what I'm worried about." said Taylor.

    "I'm worried about that too, what if he overuses it and then does more harm to his body?" said Miranda.

    "This is David we're talking about, he'll be fine." said Joseph.

    "Yeah I agree with Joseph." said Brandon.

    "Besides Miranda, if you're that worried about him, why not wait for him to wake up and tell him not to train with that technique." said Joseph.

    "But he'll have to do it someday though." said Brandon.

    "I'll just help him learn a new technique." said Miranda.

    "You could try that." said Taylor.

    "Yeah, maybe he just needs to abandon the one technique that makes him more powerful and could very well save his life." said Brandon.

    "Brandon you don't have to be rude!" said Taylor.

    "He's just saying though, maybe it's better if he just does it himself, he knows his own body better than any of us." said Joseph.

    "Is it wrong for me to worry about the guy I love?" asked Miranda.

    "No it's not, it's wrong that you doubt his ability." said Joseph.

    Miranda became furious, as did Taylor.

    "You guys wanna take this outside?" asked Taylor.

    "Whoa now hold on we're just having a discussion no need to make this into a fight." said Brandon.

    "No it seems to me like you guys want to pick a fight!" said Taylor.

    "We're not, you two are." said Joseph.

    Taylor immediately lost her mind and grabbed them both and threw them out of the door! Her and Miranda then rushed after them while Brandon and Joseph stood there ground and prepared to fight! Brandon and Joseph dodged their attacks and headed for The Great Maw to avoid destroying any buildings or hurting people in the process of their fighting. On the way there, they were dodging Taylor's and Miranda's Ki Blasts, and they definitely were getting a run for their money. The others had also noticed they were fighting and got involved, soon everyone was in an all-out brawl and there was no order. Sora, Mickey, Donald, Goofy, and Riku were all watching them fight, Sora and Riku however wanted to jump in.

    "Look at them act like a bunch of children!" said Donald.

    "Don't you think we should stop them Your Majesty?" asked Goofy.

    "Not yet, let them continue, I believe they just needed some tension to be released." said Mickey.

    "Hey Sora, wanna jump in?" asked Riku.

    "I sure do!" said Sora.

    "No, don't jump in, you don't wanna get hurt." said Mickey.

    "Get hurt by them, not possible." said Riku.

    "Not by them." said Mickey.

    "Then who?" asked Sora.

    They all looked at Mickey. As they were all fighting each other, they were unknowing of a powerful force that was about to hit them! In the sky, a red light was heading straight towards them! They looked up and then noticed it too late, the light crashed towards the ground and they all flew back!

    "What's that?" asked Sora.

    "Looks like he recovered." said Mickey smiling.

    "You mean that's David?" asked Riku.

    "Sit and watch, he's about to show you something new." said Mickey.

    The others had risen up and stared at the person standing in the middle of them. He was wearing a black and red cloak, most of it was black, the designs on it were red, there was a unknown symbol on the back and was white.

    "Dude, is that Ezio?" asked Christian.

    "It looks like him!" said Ricky.

    "No I sense something different, that's not Ezio." said Brandon.

    "In any case, let's get him!" said Brandt.

    They all charged after him, the man immediately awakened his Mangekyou Sharingan and charged after them all! His right eye began to move around a lot and then it stopped, he then vanished into thin air and began attacking them with Chidori simultaneously! All they could see was a ray of electricity traveling across the battlefield, and they couldn't dodge it in time. The man then reappeared behind Brandon and kicked his back, then Joseph attempted to punch him but was stopped, the man grabbed his fist and spun around his body, elbowed his back, punched his face, kicked his foot so he would collapse, and then impaled him with a Rasengan! The man disappeared again and flew into the air, he dove down towards the rest of the others and attacked them with his Hidden Blades powered by Lightning Style Chakra! Once the battle was over, everyone was beaten but were able to stand up and move a little bit.

    "Who is this guy?" asked Brandon.

    "None of this would have happened if you four weren't arguing over whether or not I should train with my Ultimate Susano'o." said the man.

    "Wait, is that David?" asked Taylor.

    "Yes." said David.

    "But how did you recover so fast?" asked Taylor.

    "Nevermind all of that, why did you guys go this far as to fighting, and why did all of the OTHERS join in as well instead of trying to stop it?" asked David.

    "I didn't want you to train with your Ultimate Susano'o, and Taylor agreed, but Joseph and Brandon insisted that you train it despite the risk involved." said Miranda.

    "That shouldn't have been an issue, what I do with my powers is up to me, if I wish go over the limit then I will, I know my body better than anyone else." said David.

    "We told them that." said Joseph.

    "I'm glad you two knew me." said David.

    "What are you trying to say?" asked Miranda.

    "I'm not trying to say anything, just don't worry about me that much." said David.

    "Is it wrong for me to worry about you?" asked Miranda.

    "No it isn't, but you should at least have more faith in me." said David.

    "Okay guys calm down." said Travis.

    "No, this needs to come out." said David.

    "Yes it does. David you know I have faith in you, you know that." said Miranda.

    "Then don't worry so much about me." said David.

    "But I can't do that, I love you that's why I worry about you more." said Miranda.

    "Then obviously you don't love me enough." said David.

    "Okay what is your problem today?" asked Taylor.

    "Yeah man you're acting different than usual." said Christian.

    David then turned his back, he closed his eyes.

    "I can''t tell you. That's it." said David.

    "You can't tell us? That's your answer?" asked Miranda.

    "Yes." said David.

    "Alright, you're gonna tell us what's going on, or we'll have to beat it out of you!" said Cody.

    David turned to face them all, they were seriously about to charge towards him. He had no choice now.

    "Good he's gonna tell us!" said Travis.

    David closed his eyes........the air around him began to change.........his right eye slowly started to open............Miranda noticed the shape of his Sharingan was different, and she was right. David then opened it all the way and used his Eternal Tsukiyomi to put them into a deep sleep. Then he vanished and appeared in front of Mickey. He nodded at him and Mickey nodded back, then David used Chaos Control and disappeared.............

    To Be Continued!
    Post by: Alpha Shadow, Mar 23, 2012 in forum: Archives
  10. Alpha Shadow
    Where's All This Aggression Coming From

    My aggression is rising within me, I have no idea why it's coming out but I can feel it, and it's strong. I believe that willpower and aggression are alike because each can cause you to go through actions without thinking of the risks, but they are different as well. Willpower is good for pursuing your dreams, Aggression can also aid in that department but it shouldn't be used all the time because it could hurt you and/or someone else. I want to embrace it and learn how to become aggressive when needed since I hardly want to use aggression to solve my problems, I've witnessed it hurt others and cause problems. But at the same time I've seen it help others become successful with what they wanted to accomplish, and I say that in a good way not in the bad way. It makes me wonder, is Aggression good or is it bad? The thing is, it can be both depending on how you look at it. It can aid you in your dreams or goals or objectives, but it can also compromise those dreams, goals, or objectives. Which do you use more, Aggression or Willpower? Does it aid you? Does it hurt you? Or does it do both?
    Post by: Alpha Shadow, Mar 21, 2012 in forum: Archives
  11. Alpha Shadow
    Hey guys I been thinking about something, should I give this story a new name or shall I say the Thread a new name because Naruto: Recruitment isn't such a good name to me anymore, it's become more like Naruto and DBZ, plus I like the Kingdom Hearts story being involved, maybe I should call it something else you know, I'll make a poll for which would you prefer like should I keep the same name, change it(which means I'll have some options), or you can tell me what you think I should change the name to, and I'll also try to change the first chapter of the entire story to match the format I'm using now because I'm not too fond of my readers noticing that change. I mean it is whatever you guys want.
    Post by: Alpha Shadow, Mar 21, 2012 in forum: Archives
  12. Alpha Shadow
    Chapter 16 - Taking Things Easy But Not Too Easy

    "So David, I hear that you've been defeating Data XIII members all by yourself!" said Travis.

    "Yeah, but the last one was defeated by these guys here, I settled the fight with an "overpowered" member." said David.

    "Wait David was he really weak?" asked Brandon.

    "He was strong, but he was weak against me because I had discovered his weakness, it required me to use a new power because of that weakness." said David.

    "Can we see this new power?" asked Christian.

    "Well, my Chakra has recharged itself, so I guess I can show you guys." said David.

    "Yes!" said Christian smiling.

    "Are you showing us that transformation you were talking about?" asked Miranda.

    "Yep." said David smiling.

    "It's probably just another Super Saiyan form." said Brandt.

    "Probably." said Kyle.

    David activated his Mangekyou Sharingan and began to build up Chakra, he mixed in some of his Ki to increase the duration time it takes to transform, and then his body began to take on a lightning aura, the sky became dark, the rocks floated above the ground, his hair becoming slightly a bluish color! Everyone was amazed at his change but they weren't that impressed.

    "So that's it?" asked Ricky.

    "Yeah." said David.

    "Wow, truth be told I was expecting something epic." said Raelon.

    David smiled. "So apparently my powers aren't good enough then huh?" said David appearing behind all of them.

    "What the hell!?" said Christian.

    "How is he behind all of us, or how did he get behind all of us?" asked Raelon.

    "Shadow Clones?" asked Hanna.

    "Cosmic Clones?" asked Taylor.

    "No.....pure speed." said David smiling.

    "That's amazing!" said Brandon.

    "That's why you never judge anything based on appearance." said David.

    "So it's very fast but what about it's powers?" asked Joseph.

    David extended his hand towards a boulder in the distance, he created a Chidori instantly and then it shot towards the boulder and was cut in half!

    "Wait did you just turn that thing into a spear?" asked Brandon.

    "Yeah, Chidori True Spear is it's name." said David.

    "That's tight I'm not gonna lie." said Christian.

    "So the form is dominant with your Lightning?" asked Taylor.

    "Yeah, I can do many things with it, like for example, if I wanted to I could EMP an entire city, or possibly make a portable EMP that can be shot like a Ki Blast." said David smiling.

    "So why not fight Data XIII or just disable their castle with that power?" asked Brandt.

    "This form can only be maintained for five minutes, it uses up all of my Chakra as well as Ki if I use it that is." said David.

    "Would it really take that long to beat them all?" asked Cody.

    "Yeah, not all of them are weak." said David.

    "We still have to train though." said Miranda.

    "That's right." said David.

    Suddenly a white light began to form around them! Out from it came a man in a white cloak!

    "Great, as if two of them weren't enough." said Brandon.

    "Greetings my fellow rivals, I am Data Xemnas, and I've come to give you all some good news!" said Data Xemnas.

    "And what would that be?" asked Ricky.

    "It seems as though we won't be able to fight you in a week, we are having some upgrades being made to our secret weapon so fighting you will have to wait until three weeks from now as planned before." said Data Xemnas.

    "We could just storm your castle and destroy the weapon right?" asked Christian.

    "No, there's no point in doing that, remember what I told you, they aren't to be taken lightly." said David.

    "Ah David you seem to be getting stronger and stronger I see, that form is flawless!" said Data Xemnas.

    "I'm not the only one getting stronger you know." said David smiling.

    "I'm aware of that, whenever a Data XIII member is defeated, the entire battle is recorded and transmitted into our memory banks so we know how you all fight." said Data Xemnas.

    "So you know about our skills then?" asked Miranda.

    "That I do, and I merely want a challenge so I'll give you all a month to get stronger instead." said Data Xemnas.

    "Why a month?" asked David.

    "There's no reason, I just want my organization to get a good challenge, by your friends of course, you yourself provided a wonderful challenge, but I'm curious to see how much stronger your friends can become." said Data Xemnas.

    "So you want them to become stronger is that all?" asked David.

    "Yes, and I know you're capable of making them stronger, but don't throw off your training as well, David." said Data Xemnas.

    "I know, I think you and I already know that we'll be fighting most of the time." said David smiling.

    "Oh yes, I know that indeed, I want to make sure all of the members are enjoying their matches while you and I have a powerful match." said Data Xemnas smiling.

    "So they shall, and we'll also have a good match, don't worry about that." said David smiling.

    "Good to hear, like I said you have a month to prepare, and remember, that month can past by quick." said Data Xemnas.

    "Right." said David.

    "Well, I'll be taking my leave now, enjoy the month you have left before your demise." said Data Xemnas smiling.

    "We'll see." said David smiling.

    Data Xemnas had faded while everyone else were a little shocked at what just unfolded.

    "That was unexpected." said Brandt.

    "Yeah it was." said Hanna.

    "He's definitely got something planned." said David.

    "He said they're upgrading their secret weapon." said Miranda.

    "I know what it is, which is what I was supposed to tell you about." said Hanna.

    "You know what it is?" said Brandon.

    "Yeah, and it's gonna shock you guys." said Hanna.

    "Go ahead and tell us." said David.

    "The secret weapon is another member that was sleeping inside of a capsule similar to the capsule Sora slept in, and he has a golden Sharingan." said Hanna.

    "A golden Sharingan?" said Lucus.

    "Yes." said Hanna.

    "Well I'll say this, that golden Sharingan isn't able to be unlocked, it's basically an increase in power, let me guess it's a combination of me and Ultima?" said David.

    "Y-Yeah how did you know?" asked Hanna.

    "Because Ultima and I have the ability to sense Nobodies that have similar powers to us, and we felt another power being crafted, but we never said anything, we needed to wait till Xemnas had confirmed it, which he did." said David.

    "So both of you knew?" asked Ricky.

    "Yes, we did." said Ultima.

    "But why not just tell us though?" asked Taylor.

    "Some of you guys act too hasty, I took that into account and made up my mind, I needed to check out the situation first before I got everyone else involved." said David.

    "That's fine with me." said Cody.

    "Yeah me too." said Raelon.

    Miranda and Brandon looked at David and they noticed he was looking very tired and worn out, his breathing became a little bit heavy but was unnoticeable to the others.

    "David you okay?" asked Brandon quietly.

    "I used too much power." said David feeling sluggish.

    "How about you go rest, we can pick up where we left off later on, we have a month." said Miranda.

    "Yeah Miranda just take him to get some rest." said Brandon.

    David then reverted back into his normal form and feel on one knee.

    "David you okay?" asked Taylor.

    "I'll be alright, I just need to rest a bit, I used too much power in my Ultimate Susano'o." said David. His Mangekyou Sharingan then disappeared and his eyes were back to normal.

    "I'll take him in." said Taylor.

    "Thanks Taylor!" said Miranda smiling.

    "I'll help you out." said Brandon.

    "Alright." said Taylor smiling.

    The two of them took David and they headed inside Merlin's House and placed him into bed. They took a chair and sat down outside of the room.

    "David sure is getting a lot stronger." said Brandon.

    "Yeah." said Taylor.

    "I never expected all of this to happen though." said Brandon.

    "What do you mean?" asked Taylor.

    "I never expected like all of us to get these powers, I didn't think that we would all develop like this, I mean look at us, we have amazing powers, but it's like there are villains who's powers greatly exceeded our own." said Brandon.

    "Yeah, back then it was so easy, but now it's like we're only becoming a burden to David." said Taylor.

    "I don't feel that way. It may seem like we're becoming a burden to him but in all honesty, we're helping more than we know." said Brandon.

    "How so?" asked Taylor.

    "David had told me a story about his past, before he met any of us he used to go to a different school and everyone used to ignore him, girls rejected him or messed with his emotions by giving him false hope of ever dating them, he used to go through hell and back but he never changed who he was." said Brandon.

    "That's so sad." said Taylor feeling upset.

    "But once he met us, he started maturing and tried to hold on more to who he was and wanted only friendship, he did want more than just friendship, he wanted a girlfriend, he wanted to be popular, but he knew about his limitations and decided not to cross boundaries." said Brandon.

    "Yeah, and he also had his dad most of the time too huh." said Taylor.

    "Yeah, his dad was everything to him, he used to talk about him all the time with us, every day we would talk he would bring up his dad, but only once or twice, never more. It saddens me that his dad isn't with him, and he was here all by himself fighting those Data XIII guys, but he wanted to protect his friends which is why he ventured alone." said Brandon.

    "I mean he doesn't have to do everything alone, we can help him, I know he's worried about us and wants to protect us but he doesn't have to do it alone." said Taylor.

    "That's right, from what I believe, and he wants us to know this, I think he really wants us to stay by his side because we give him the strength to go on, WE are the key to his power, if we were to abandon him, he would have no one else to turn to." said Brandon.

    "That's true, but if he had no friends, and he had acquired those powers, who knows what he would've done. I felt darkness within David before, and it's nothing nice." said Taylor.

    "Yeah, he could become dangerous, but that's why he chooses not to rely on that darkness because he wants to protect us without having to use that power. Like I said, I believe he wants all of us to understand that we give him power and that we mean the world to him." said Brandon.

    "Actually I think Miranda means the world to him to be honest." said Taylor laughing.

    "Well yeah that's true." said Brandon laughing.

    "Those two sure have a connection, they always think about one another no matter how far apart they are." said Taylor.

    "Even while David was gone she still thought about him, sometimes she would cry herself to sleep but she became stronger because of that, she admitted her real feelings and she became a lot stronger." said Brandon.

    "I agree, it made her powers develop even further because she wanted to venture out to find David and bring him back to us, but we had no way to do that, and it discouraged her a little but her powers continued to get stronger." said Taylor.

    "I remember how she used to be so innocent, she still is but she used to be shy." said Brandon.

    "Yeah, I'm amazed at how much she's blossomed." said Taylor.

    "Love has that affect on people." said Brandon.

    "Love causes us to become stronger." said Taylor.

    "Perhaps you and I can become stronger too." said Brandon smiling.

    "Perhaps we could." said Taylor smiling.

    Meanwhile outside Merlin's House..........

    "I gotta admit, David's become stronger." said Brandt.

    "Yeah, he's been becoming stronger and stronger by the day." said Raelon.

    "Let me ask you guys this, is it just me or does everyone else feel that we're a burden to him?" asked Kyle.

    "I don't believe we are, well.....I kind of feel that way." said Christian.

    "I somewhat feel that way." said Raelon.

    "I don't feel it that much." said Joseph.

    "I don't feel it at all." said Lucus.

    "I don't either." said Cody.

    "I agree with Cody and Lucus, I don't feel like a burden to him, I feel that we're helping him." said Miranda.

    "I think that just us being his friends gives him the strength to go on." said Ricky.

    "That's what I think too." said Cody.

    "But either way we have to become stronger, we can't let Data XIII beat us, so far David is the only one who can hold his own against them, but we have ensure that we can do the same." said Joseph.

    "How about we try to train ourselves." said Christian.

    "Yeah we should do that, but let's wait for David to recover." said Miranda.

    "Yeah I'd rather take it easy until he recovers and he can tell us what he has planned." said Joseph.

    "We should check him every day though." said Travis.

    "Oh don't worry about that, I'll be with him the entire time." said Miranda.

    "I'll keep watch over him too, he is one of my best friends after all." said Joseph.

    "So what should we do from here?" asked Brandt.

    "Well, me and Joseph can go inside with Taylor and Brandon while you guys can go find Mickey and Sora, tell them everything that's happened with Data XIII and David so that way they know what's going on." said Miranda.

    "Right." said Raelon.

    "Sweet we get to meet Sora and Mickey!" said Christian.

    "Yeah just don't go all fangirl on them okay?" asked Ricky.

    "You should know me by now Rick!" said Christian smiling.

    "I know I'm just saying, we don't want them freaking out." said Ricky.

    "Yeah yeah." said Christian.

    "Well we'll see you guys later then, we'll be here in Merlin's House most of the time so feel free to stop by." said Miranda smiling.

    "Okay, later!" said Raelon.

    To Be Continued!
    Post by: Alpha Shadow, Mar 17, 2012 in forum: Archives
  13. Alpha Shadow
    The Single Life

    Life as a single person for me is pretty peaceful, I'm free to choose a path that will only affect myself. Quite frankly I don't need to be in a relationship to achieve happiness, I can achieve alone by fulfilling my dreams or by doing what's right for me. Some of my friends are happy in their relationships, but one of my best friends does tell me that sometimes it gets hard to maintain it when you argue with your girlfriend or you don't see eye to eye on a situation. No one can avoid having a disagreement in a relationship, it's just natural, but if you were to argue, don't treat it as the end of the world, it's gonna happen, but if two people in a relationship argue way too many times then it's bound to end. Being single isn't bad one bit, it's not good to feel lonely and try so hard to get into a relationship because that would mean you're dependent on someone, and I can understand that it's difficult to cope with being alone and not experiencing the wonders of dating but to me it's not needed. I never went to my prom, I never went to homecoming though I performed in the parade with my Percussion section. Back then I used to ask myself why can't I get a girlfriend? What's turning them off? What is wrong with me? But I've come to understand it's not what's wrong with me, it's no one's fault, it's the fact that everyone has their own likes and wants. Some can see true beauty in those who aren't as attractive as the prettiest or handsomest person at school. Personality should always be the key to finding someone to spend the rest of your life with, or at least to date.

    Looks can matter, with me I do want looks but I don't need a super pretty girl that's just nasty as you know what and acts so childish. I go for girls that have a nice personality, don't need super pretty or super ugly, but I don't want super ugly I mean I do have standards lol like not trying to be mean. At this point in time, I've shut my heart away from females, I've grown to dislike them almost to a point where I hate them. I don't want to go down that path but I really just want to be alone for the rest of my life, unless there's a good reason for me to go back to wanting a relationship because at this point I see no reason to be in one. That's just my take on the whole thing.
    Thread by: Alpha Shadow, Mar 14, 2012, 1 replies, in forum: Archives
  14. Alpha Shadow
    Post

    Recording?

    I see, and would my laptop need to have anything special or anything dealing with performance, I am using an Acer with an Intel Pentium CPU and it has an Intel HD Graphics card.
    Post by: Alpha Shadow, Mar 14, 2012 in forum: Technology
  15. Alpha Shadow
    Post

    Recording?

    I'd like some help in this department as well, I do have a laptop, it doesn't have an HDMI output, but my HDTV has two HDMI ports, Component port, composite, I don't care too much about pricing, I use my Xbox 360 BTW and I use HDMI to play it, any suggestions?
    Post by: Alpha Shadow, Mar 13, 2012 in forum: Technology
  16. Alpha Shadow
    Chapter 15 - Brandon's Secret Technique!

    "Okay, clearly we're screwed now because Larxene transformed." said Raelon.

    "I agree." said Lucus.

    "Alright, we have three options." said Taylor.

    "What are they?" asked Brandon.

    "We can either hold her off till David gets here, defeat her ourselves with some powerful technique, or retreat." said Taylor.

    "I say we retreat." said Lucus.

    "I say we let David take this ***** out." said Cody.

    "I agree with Cody." said Raelon.

    "I say we do it ourselves." said Brandon.

    "I also agree." said Joseph.

    "Yeah I agree as well." said Miranda.

    "So do I." said Taylor.

    "But she'll rape us sideways!" said Raelon.

    "She's bound to have a weakness somewhere, I'm sure her lightning has some other weakness." said Taylor.

    "No, it's only Wind." said Joseph.

    "Damn it! There's gotta be a way to beat her, Lightning won't stop her, Water makes her stronger, Earth won't stop her, maybe Fire will but I won't chance it." said Taylor.

    "What about your Crystal Style?" asked Miranda.

    "I have a jutsu that'll work but I need about five minutes to use it." said Taylor.

    "There's enough of us here so I say we rely on Taylor's jutsu." said Brandon.

    "Yeah I'm sure we can hold her off for five minutes, even though we have no clue how powerful she is now!" said Lucus.

    "The hell up Lucus, anyway we'll try it out Taylor." said Cody.

    "Alright then, let me drop back and I'll get started." said Taylor.

    "Okay, everyone get in front of Taylor, we have to survive for five minutes got it?" said Miranda.

    "Yeah let's do it." said Joseph.

    Taylor dropped behind them and began forming her seals, then pink Chakra began to surround her as she continued to form hand seals. Joseph and Cody dashed towards Larxene first while the others circled around her! Larxene quickly countered Joseph and Cody while shocking the others with her empowered Lightning! Miranda recovered the quickest and called out her Keyblade and began fighting with Larxene, the two females were locked in a fierce deadlock and neither were showing weakness! Raelon and Lucus used a Dragon Flame Jutsu while Miranda dropped back to avoid the attack, Larxene stood and began to laugh as she summoned a mass amount of power and started shocking the dragons so much that they shrunk into nothing!

    "What the hell just happened?" asked Raelon.

    "I shrunk your jutsu, my Lightning is too powerful to stop, Water can make me stronger, Earth is weak to my Lightning, Fire can't even damage me because of the power of my Lightning, Wind can probably defeat me but it depends how strong the Wind Nature is!" said Larxene beginning to laugh.

    "Which means we'll just have to try to hit you with a different Chakra Nature!" said Brandon.

    "What do you mean?" asked Larxene.

    "You've seen all of the basic Natures, you've seen the Crystal Nature, but you haven't seen this one yet." said Brandon smiling.

    "Brandon what are you talking about?" asked Joseph.

    "I've been developing this new Chakra Nature by mixing two Natures together, I kept messing around with it until I mixed together Fire and Earth." said Brandon.

    "What happened when you mixed the two together?" asked Raelon.

    "I managed to create Lava!" said Brandon.

    "That's not a new style that's just a more powerful Fire Style Jutsu." said Lucus.

    "No it is a new style, it's because he mixed together Fire and Earth, Lava is made up of molten rock which is rocks covered with flames which is why it's called Lava, it's basic science." said Miranda.

    "Thank you Miranda." said Brandon.

    "Come on you two should have known that." said Joseph.

    "Well excuse us for not being nerds!" said Lucus.

    "You don't have to be a nerd to know that Lava is made of fire and earth." said Miranda smiling.

    "Yeah what the hell you think a volcano is?" asked Brandon.

    "Oh okay." said Lucus.

    "Anyway, let's see if her Lightning can withstand the Lava Style." said Brandon smiling.

    "Alright, go ahead we'll cover you Brandon." said Joseph.

    "Right!" said Brandon.

    Brandon rushed in front and prepared his seals while the others followed behind him, Larxene began to use her Lightning to stop Brandon who dodged it quickly, he then jumped into the air and told the others to back away, once they did he used Lava Style: Flamethrower which hurled a large wave of fire towards Larxene who used her Lightning to counter but had no effect! She then immediately dodged it and landed firmly on the ground, then Brandon smiled and he hurled towards the ground and slammed his hand on the surface! Lava began to form on the ground and then disappeared, then Larxene was about to charge after Brandon when all of a sudden her feet were stuck! She looked on the ground and noticed her feet were trapped in a pool of Lava! She tried to escape but the more she struggled, the more the Lava began to spread throughout her body!

    "My god that jutsu is amazing!" said Raelon.

    "I know he caught her within 20 seconds into the fight!" said Joseph.

    "I can't believe Brandon had this kind of power hidden away!" said Miranda.

    Meanwhile Taylor was almost done gathering the Chakra she needed and was watching everyone fight. "I can't believe Brandon can use a Jutsu like that, it looks like it could beat my Crystal Style, but of course it has to have enough force to penetrate it. But Brandon I'm really surprised you had a Jutsu this awesome!" said Taylor smiling.

    "It's over for you." said Brandon.

    "You ******* just wait till I get out of here!" said Larxene.

    "We'll see." said Brandon.

    Larxene's body was then completely turned to stone and she could no longer move, they had won!

    "Taylor whenever you're ready you can use your Crystal Jutsu to finish her off." said Brandon.

    "Yeah, I'm just about done." said Taylor.

    "Looks like we didn't need David after all!" said Raelon.

    "We just got lucky with Brandon's Lava Style that's all." said Lucus.

    "Yeah but hey we had Taylor building up her powerful Crystal Jutsu." said Cody.

    "That's true." said Lucus.

    Taylor released her jutsu, Crystal Style: Eight Trigrams Jade Destruction, which encased Larxene in a Crystal Prison and then eradicated itself rapidly! They all began to breath easily.

    "Damn I'm glad that's over!" said Joseph.

    "I know!" said Taylor.

    "I'm actually proud that we didn't need David!" said Raelon.

    "Same here." said Brandon.

    "It's nice to know that we can defeat opponents without David being here." said Miranda.

    "But let's not forget we have to become strong enough to where we don't end up in the same situation like this again." said Taylor.

    "What do you mean?" asked Raelon.

    "If Larxene was able to cause this much trouble, just think what the other members could do, so far we've only gotten the weak ones that are strong to us." said Taylor.

    "She's right, the only members left now are Roxas, Saix, Xaldin, Xigbar, Luxord, Marluxia, and Xemnas." said Miranda.

    "All of them except Xemnas, Xaldin, and Saix should be easy to beat." said Raelon.

    "Roxas will still be hard to beat, he is like Sora and if he's two or three times stronger than the original Roxas, he could very well be powerful." said Miranda.

    "Yeah, don't forget the Keyblade is a powerful magical weapon." said Taylor.

    "Yeah you're right." said Raelon.

    "It's bad enough my Keyblade couldn't damage Larxene, which has me wondering, why is it hard to damage our opponents with our weapons?" asked Miranda.

    "I don't know, maybe we'll have to ask David or Mickey, or maybe Merlin might know." said Taylor.

    "Yeah, and speaking of David we should go and back him up since we're done here." said Miranda.

    "No need." said David.

    "What the hell!" said Raelon.

    "What?" asked David smiling.

    "When did you get here?" asked Joseph.

    "I been here." said David.

    "Wait, were you watching us the whole time?" asked Taylor.

    "Yep!" said David smiling.

    "You son of a, why!?" asked Brandon.

    "Because I wanted to see if you all could handle yourselves without me, and you've shown me that you can." said David.

    "That's good and all but you took care of Lexaeus that friggin fast?" asked Raelon.

    "Yeah, I just had to use a new transformation is all." said David.

    "Don't tell you became a Super Saiyan 2 already." said Brandon.

    "I can become one, but no. I used a technique called Ultimate Susano'o which is a Mangekyou Sharingan jutsu." said David.

    "How about you show us." said Lucus.

    "Sorry, using that form takes alot of my Chakra and Ki, it's not something I can use more than once. But basically there's three different stages of Susano'o, the beginning stage, not the first stage, is when you can use parts of the Susano'o's body to attack including the full body, the first stage is the semi complete body which is where the Susano'o forms a cloak and gains a weapon, the second stage is the completed Susano'o which is more powerful and gains armor, but the third stage is different, the Susano'o disappears and the user's body becomes encased in he or she's most dominant Chakra Nature and gains Unlimited Chakra for a few minutes, and I'm training to extend that time limit." said David.

    "So we can get that if we unlock the third stage of Susano'o?" asked Miranda.

    "Yes." said David.

    "Damn that sounds overpowered." said Raelon.

    "Yeah, but I have something that's more overpowered, but can't show it to you guys, not yet anyway." said David.

    "Well let's head back, we're finished here." said Cody.

    "Sure, Ultima should be back with Ricky and the others." said David.

    "Great we're all here then." said Miranda.

    They all began to walk back to Merlin's House.

    To Be Continued!


    Hope you all enjoyed this chapter! I might be sucked into Naruto Storm Generations for a bit so forgive me if I forget to update this thing but most likely I'll remember, and hopefully I'm not too busy either since I am a musician so yeah bare with me! Later!
    Post by: Alpha Shadow, Mar 13, 2012 in forum: Archives
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    This is my first commentary please give me some feedback on the intro and the commentary thanks friendos!
    Post by: Alpha Shadow, Mar 12, 2012 in forum: Production Studio
  18. Alpha Shadow
    Chapter 14 - The Rejuvenated Super Saiyan (Rating is PG-13 for a few words)

    David and Lexaeus were locked in a vanishing duel with David winning! Lexaeus tried to overcome him by releasing more power but all David could do was stand, watch, and smile. The power increase didn't scare him, in fact, he taunted him as he charged up!

    "Go ahead, go into your full power, I'm not afraid." said David smiling.

    "You fool! Do you really think that my power isn't frightening?" asked Lexaeus.

    "It's frightening to those who don't know how to beat it, I, on the other hand, don't fear it." said David smiling.

    "No....you can't possibly have enough power to defeat me, my power is infinite!" said Lexaeus.

    "I guess I'll just have to show you how weak you truly are." said David smiling.

    "You don't even have a Keyblade! How are you gonna hurt me?" asked Lexaeus.

    David began laughing. "I'll show you."

    Lexaeus dashed towards him, David ducked, Lexaeus tried to stomp him, David sidestepped, Lexaeus rushed towards him, David dashed backwards and then vanished, then he kicked Lexaeus in his face and he flew! David appeared behind him, grabbed his cloak, and slammed him into the ground! Lexaeus immediately recovered feeling no pain and proceeded to rushing towards David who continued to smile, Lexaeus kept throwing punches while David dodged easily, David then uppercut his stomach and side kicked his cheek!

    "How is he able to read my movements so easily?" Lexaeus thought. Lexaeus charged after him again while David, smiling, stood there and waited for him and once Lexaeus got close he vanished and evaded all of his attacks! "He did it again! Just how?" Lexaeus thought again.

    "I told you didn't I? I was gonna show you how weak you are. Am I right?" said David smiling.

    "No, you are not right! I'm not weak, it is you who is weak!" said Lexaeus.

    "Then why haven't you hit me yet?" asked David.

    "Because you keep running away!" said Lexaeus.

    "I don't run, I dodge, evade, and counter. The problem is with you, you have all of this destructive power, but you don't have the speed needed to connect your destructive power." said David.

    "No way!" said Lexaeus surprised.

    "It's the truth, right now you aren't worth fighting, but if you were to gain more speed, then you'd be worth fighting, but it's better if I put you out of your misery now." said David.

    "I may not have the speed, but I can just increase my power to insane levels and then nothing you do will hurt me!" said Lexaeus.

    "In my current form I can't hurt you, in my Super Saiyan form I can't hurt you, my Mangekyou Sharingan's powers won't hurt you either, but I have another form that's stronger than my Super Saiyan form AND Mangekyou Sharingan put together! Perhaps even stronger than my other Super Saiyan form." said David.

    "We'll see." said Lexaeus increasing his power to the max. Lexaeus began to gather lots of energy and began to acquire a red afterglow in the process, his hair became more spiked and more sleeker, his body began to grow slightly while acquiring a lightning like aura! Once he was done he stood there waiting to see David's new form that's supposed to be able to defeat him.

    "Your power has grown very nicely, now let's see if my new form can beat your power!" said David. David began to gather Ki, the ground started shaking and the rocks were lifting into the air, the sky became slightly dark! David's Sharingan activated and his body became encased in a lightning like cloak, his hair becoming sharper, his skin becoming much much lighter! David released all of the power within him and a loud thundershock came out with the releasing of his power! Lexaeus stared at his new form and was amazed at how it was so different!

    "What...what is this....sensation?" asked Lexaeus.

    "What you see before you is my Susano'o form. Or rather, the 3rd stage of Susano'o." said David smiling.

    "Wait what's Susano'o?" asked Lexaeus.

    "Susano'o is a jutsu that can be activated using both eyes of the Mangekyou Sharingan, the user would be encased in a giant spirit that would provide the ultimate attack and defense. The user would be able to use parts of the spirit's body to fight, then they evolve into the 1st stage, that's when they fight in a semi-complete form, the 2nd stage is the completed Susano'o. But the 3rd stage is an entirely different stage, the user himself becomes the ultimate weapon, he has ultimate attack and defense as well as the ultimate speed. Susano'o is also another name for Thunder, and this form's main ability enhances my Lightning and can change it into Thunder at will." said David.

    "Well I gotta admit that is a pretty awesome form, but it's not enough to beat my infinite power!" said Lexaeus laughing.

    David then immediately appeared behind him and elbowed his back causing him to fly towards a mountain! Lexaeus then struggled to get up as his body was becoming numb! "What......what just happened......he was standing still and yet.....he got behind me.....and when he punched me......I could hear the force of the attack!" said Lexaeus.

    "That sound you heard was Thunder, whenever I connect an attack it gives off a loud Thunder sound and it gives more damage to the victim." said David.

    "But how did it.......make my body numb?" asked Lexaeus.

    "Oh that.....when I made contact I flooded 5% of my Chakra into your body which put a shock to your Chakra Network." said David.

    "So this is.....your ultimate power and defense." said Lexaeus.

    "Yes. Now do you understand the difference between you and I?" asked David charging his Chidori.

    "No! I can still fight-!" stopped Lexaeus.

    "I forgot to mention, if you are using a lot of Ki the numbness will take control of it and will fade once your Ki fades, and since you have unlimited Ki, that means this numbness will affect you for an unlimited amount of time. But any other person I fight with using this form won't have the same weakness since you had so much Ki and I only needed to add a little bit of Chakra that your body couldn't sense, if you had that ability I would of had to use all of my Chakra most likely." said David.

    "You! Just wait till Master Xemnas hears about this! He'll destroy you and all of your weak friends!" said Lexaeus.

    "I'm counting on him to show his face." said David smiling. After those words David impaled Lexaeus with his Thunder Chidori.

    David then flew into the air and headed towards Miranda and the others to help them out. He took his time to collect his thoughts.

    "Although, my Ultimate Susano'o form isn't as powerful as my Zeus form. The two of them are almost the same but the Zeus form has five different levels, each level is stronger and is dominant with one skill which is either Strength, Speed, Sense, Chakra Natures, or my Special Abilities like my Sharingan, Super Saiyan and whatnot. But I never want to have to go beyond the third level, it's too destructive. I'll only use it when I've learned how to control the destruction the both of them cause, which means I'll have to train inside those two levels. Speaking about destructive powers, I need to train Miranda on controlling her Dark Kyuubi powers, I'd want to seal them but she may need them at some point in her life. That power is protecting her that's for sure, back then when she would get injured she would recover with no problems, though it wasn't a speedy recovery, but if I were to train her, she could very well become stronger than me. It'd be better too because she would be able to protect everyone, but I won't just teach her how to control the Dark Kyuubi, I'll teach her how to become a Super Saiyan and ascend higher than that!" thought David.

    Meanwhile, Miranda and the others were struggling with Larxene.

    "Okay she is definitely a spammer!" said Raelon.

    "I know all she's doing is using Lightning like a *****!" said Brandon.

    "Maybe it's because she is one!" said Taylor.

    "I wouldn't say that so loud guys, we don't want her to become more enraged!" said Miranda.

    "Don't worry once David's done beating Lexaeus he can help us beat Larxene!" said Lucus.

    "But shouldn't we try to beat Larxene ourselves, I mean didn't we just talk about how we shouldn't rely on David all the time?" said Taylor.

    "Wait you guys talked about how David is always saving us and we could never do it for ourselves?" asked Miranda.

    "Yeah we did!" said Raelon dodging lightning arrows.

    "I would feel pretty worthless every time we'd get beat down and then he shows up and beats our enemies!" said Cody.

    "Maybe we just needed to get stronger, I mean the most we should do is all train together!" said Joseph.

    "Yeah that's true, David was always training and fighting lots of enemies!" said Miranda evading a lightning wave.

    "You weaklings sure talk about David a lot huh? I'd love to date someone strong like him, in fact I should date him!" said Larxene smiling.

    Miranda then awakened her Sharingan and impaled Larxene with a Chidori!

    "Oh my god Miranda!" said Taylor.

    "David and I are dating, you and him have no chance at all!" said Miranda angered.

    "Damn I didn't think she would snap like that!" said Raelon.

    "It was gonna happen sooner or later." said Cody.

    "How can David love a weakling like you, I'm keeping all of you on the run, and also for your information, I was being sarcastic dumbass, and lightning based attacks don't hurt me I mean HELLO lightning user here!" said Larxene.

    "She does have a point." said Brandon.

    "The hell up Brandon!" said Taylor.

    "Hey I'm just agreeing with her!" said Brandon.

    "It's okay Taylor, she is right, I shouldn't have charged at her recklessly without thinking about her ability!" said Miranda pulling back.

    "So lightning won't damage her, which means we need to find out her weakness!" said Lucus.

    "Well....if you think about it in Chakra Nature terms, Wind can beat Lightning." said Joseph.

    "But who here can use Wind Style Ninjutsu?" asked Cody.

    "David can but he's not here." said Brandon.

    "Well...Miranda and Joseph can, but they don't have any jutsu for it, they just have the nature." said Taylor.

    "Yeah, unless there's a technique we have that can be combined with our Wind Style." said Joseph.

    "Wait, what about the Rasengan, Joseph I know you can use it!" said Brandon.

    "Yeah, I can use it but it's not made of Wind-OHHHHH!" said Joseph finally realizing.

    "We can combine our Wind Chakra with the Rasengan, it has a high power to begin with so the Wind should increase it and also inflict even more damage to her!" said Miranda.

    "But do they know how to combine the two together?" asked Taylor.

    "Nope." said Joseph and Miranda.

    "I was afraid of that." said Raelon.

    "We'll have to think of something quick, she's almost done transforming." said Brandon.

    "Wait what!?" said Raelon.

    "Ah son of a-!" said Lucus.

    Larxene had finished transforming while the others were staring at her new body, and they felt her awesome new powers and began to feel fear!

    To Be Continued!

    Post by: Alpha Shadow, Mar 10, 2012 in forum: Archives
  19. Alpha Shadow
    Ah I see, I knew about the Funimation thing, I just figured they'd try to dub the third semester at least but can't have everything. I noticed that with a few other animes there's like many episodes but only half of them are dubbed, must be some sort of licensing problem. The first season was great, second season I definitely enjoyed the war game they had, I couldn't stop laughing lol.
    Post by: Alpha Shadow, Mar 6, 2012 in forum: Anime and Manga
  20. Alpha Shadow
    Chapter 13 - Finish The Fight

    Ricky and the gang tailed Shepard towards Louisiana and then the army had stopped. Shepard began to announce the strategy for taking over the state and how it should be done.

    "Not so fast!" said Ricky.

    "Ah so you all followed us here eh?" said Shepard.

    "Why are you attacking this place?" asked Hanna.

    "Because, it's small." said Shepard.

    "And?" said Brandt.

    "That's all, it's just small and it's a good practice run for my army here." said Shepard.

    "Well, you're not gonna destroy this state, we'll stop you!" said Travis.

    "I'm always hoping for you all to join me, it's alot easier." said Shepard.

    "Get real." said Christian.

    "Don't waste your time on them, allow me to finish them off." said a stranger.

    "Ah Xigbar, perfect timing!" said Shepard.

    "Damn, here we go." said Ricky.

    "Who's that?" asked Hanna.

    "Xigbar is an Organization XIII member who specializes in warfare, or shall I say overpowered warfare." said Christian.

    "I see, so you know about me, but I'm not the original Xigbar." said Data Xigbar.

    "Yeah, that white cloak is proof of what Ultima told us." said Ricky.

    "So that's a Data XIII member?" asked Brandt.

    "Yeah." said Christian.

    "I fought with him already, and I barely escaped." said Hollie.

    "Ah we meet again, love." said Xigbar smiling.

    "Is he strong?" asked Kyle.

    "Yes, he's unbelievably strong." said Hollie.

    "I'll leave them to you Xigbar, I'll be destroying this state, have fun!" said Shepard.

    "No problem, go enjoy yourself, I'll handle this." said Xigbar smiling.

    Shepard began to leave while Ricky, Travis, and Kyle went after him, Christian stayed back and held off Xigbar.

    "Fine by me, it'll be easier to take you four down." said Xigbar.

    "Christian, you're in charge, make sure you beat him and come help us out!" said Ricky.

    "Got it!" said Christian.

    "Heh, you really think you fools can beat me? You must be out of your mind!" said Xigbar.

    "Why don't you save the bragging for later!" said Hanna.

    "So Hollie, describe his movements for us." said Brandt.

    "He moves very fast, his weapons are pistols that are powered with some kind of crystal that can be manipulated. He can also form those pistols into any kind of weapon that he chooses and can also dual wield those as well." said Hollie.

    "That sounds about right, the original can do all of those things, well, when he forms the sniper he can't dual wield it." said Christian.

    "But remember Ultima said that the Data XIII members are alot stronger than the originals." said Hanna.

    "Yeah, there's no telling what this version is capable of doing." said Brandt.

    "Guess we'll just have to try!" said Christian activating his Sharingan.

    Xigbar readied his Arrowguns and turned them into machine pistols, Christian charged after him first, Xigbar began to rapidly fire off rounds towards him, Christian's Sharingan slowed down the speed of the crystals and dodged them all! Christian got in close and Xigbar immediately disappeared and then reappeared behind Brandt and kicked him in his back, then he combined the Arrowguns and created an Assault Rifle and fired off rounds towards Hollie who dodged them all and attempted to kick him in his stomach but he vanished before she could even swing her kick! "You guys are making this too easy!" he taunted. Xigbar then jumped on top of a building and transformed his Arrowguns into a Sniper Rifle and then took aim at Hanna!

    "What the hell, he has a Thermal Scope on it?" said Christian.

    "Ultima was right, these versions are definitely stronger than the original!" said Brandt.

    Xigbar fired at Hanna who dodged it just in time, but Xigbar stayed smiling and shot three bullets all at once! Hanna dodged two of them but the third one had hit her arm, Xigbar then fired off one shot and the crystal transformed into ten crystals heading straight for Hanna! Brandt rushed in and blocked all of the shots with a shield! Christian rushed towards Xigbar who formed two submachine guns and fired at him! Christian used his great speed to evade them all and then vanished, he appeared in front of Xigbar and punched him hard, then he grabbed his cloak, lifted him off the ground, and then slammed him into the ground!

    "How did that feel?" taunted Christian.

    "What was there to feel?" asked Xigbar rising up.

    "No way, you didn't feel any of that!?" said Christian.

    "Physical Attacks won't hurt me, there's only one type of attack that can affect me." said Xigbar.

    "Great, now how are we supposed to beat him if nothing works on him, and we don't know what kind of attack does work on him." said Christian.

    Xigbar changed his Arrowguns into pistols and ran towards Christian at high speeds, Christian began dodging all of the crystals coming after him but had a hard time damaging Xigbar based on the speed of the crystals coming after him! Xigbar then began to reload his weapons, "Now's my chance!" said Christian. Christian tried to attack Xigbar with a Rasengan but Xigbar vanished and then several crystals penetrated Christian's back and he fell to the ground!

    "Wait, what just happened?" asked Brandt.

    "I can reload instantly with any weapon I craft, my original's weakness was the reloading time and the fact that the crystals were easy to dodge after watching the patterns after awhile, but my reload is instant, and the crystals are two times faster and stronger!" said Xigbar.

    "Somebody hurry up and heal Christian, I'll distract him!" said Hollie.

    "Don't worry, he's not dead or injured, he's paralyzed by the crystals' powers, which is another thing I should mention, each weapon I craft has a different power, the gun is different and my body's ability is different." said Xigbar.

    "I see, so that's how he was able to fight all four of us so easily, he just switched to the right weapons that increased his own abilities!" said Hollie.

    "Watch what happens when I use the Sniper Rifle craft." said Xigbar.

    Xigbar crafted the Sniper Rifle and then his body began to disappear! He then kicked Hollie in her stomach and she fell to the ground!

    "What's going on?" asked Hollie.

    "When I use the Sniper Rifle craft, I can turn my body invisible, which allows me to fit into the purpose of the rifle." said Xigbar.

    "So your power is to craft a weapon style and then once it's been crafted your body becomes accustomed to that weapon's purpose of usage or something like that right?" said Brandt.

    "Exactly." said Xigbar.

    "So that explains the speed for the pistols and submachines, but what about the fact that physical attacks don't work on him, what causes that?" asked Hanna.

    "I'm tired of talking about my powers, it's time I ended all of your lives!" said Xigbar.

    Xigbar crafted a Light Machine Gun and became visible again. He then jumped on top of a building and fired off many rounds of crystals towards the group and they all tried to dodge them, but Hanna and Hollie got hit by the crystals! Brandt dodged them while saving Christian but they were short on manpower now. Xigbar then instantly reloaded his weapon and got ready to fire again when his gun shocked him! The gun shattered and fell to pieces while electricity began to surround Xigbar!

    "What's going on?" asked Xigbar evading the electric field.

    "Lightning?" said Brandt.

    Then inside the electric field, Ultima appeared!

    "Ultima?" said Brandt.

    "Seems I almost arrived too late, but I made it." said Ultima.

    "What the....Ultima?" said Xigbar.

    "I figured you of all people would be here in this universe." said Ultima.

    "Why are you here?" asked Xigbar.

    "All of them here need to be sent to Radiant Garden immediately, I've already evacuated three of them." said Ultima.

    "Wait, you mean Ricky, Travis, and Kyle left already?" asked Brandt.

    "Yeah, and don't worry I took care of Shepard and the entire army." said Ultima.

    "But how did you do it all so fast?" asked Brandt.

    "Brandt, you do realize I'm David's Nobody, if David can do it then so can I, but of course David would probably have fun, however I don't have fun killing my opponents." said Ultima.

    "Yeah you got a point." said Brandt.

    "Anyway, I'll heal everyone else once we get to Radiant Garden, but for now.....I'll finish off Xigbar." said Ultima.

    "We'll see about that!" said Xigbar.

    Xigbar began to glow in a purple aura and then crafted a new set of Arrowguns! He made them into snipers and fired many rounds at Ultima who stood there and repelled them all!

    "No effect?" said Xigbar.

    "Fool, we fought before, don't you remember that your crystals are empowered by an Earth Chakra Nature, and my dominant nature is Lightning, so you know that you don't stand a chance against me." said Ultima.

    "Wait how is it Earth?" asked Brandt.

    "The Earth Chakra Nature is used to harden it's attack power, he uses the Wind Chakra Nature to increase it's speed, but he's using more Earth Chakra than Wind which is why my Lightning is stronger still." said Ultima.

    "It's not over yet-!" stopped Xigbar.

    "No....it's been over." said Ultima piercing Xigbar with a Chidori.

    Xigbar then fell to the ground and then began to dematerialize while Ultima used Chaos Control to send the others to Radiant Garden.

    "Are we in a hurry or something because you ended all of this pretty quick." said Brandt.

    "Yes, we are in a hurry." said Ultima pushing Brandt in.

    They went inside quick and disappeared along with Xigbar. They all reappeared outside of Merlin's House.

    "So Ultima basically rushed into the COD universe and brought us all back here in less than five minutes." said Ricky.

    "Yeah I know, but Christian, Hanna, and Hollie need to be healed." said Brandt.

    "I'm already doing it." said Ultima.

    "Damn he doesn't mess around does he?" said Travis.

    "Nope." said Kyle.

    "Once everything's done here, all of you need to await David and everyone else's return from their battle." said Ultima.

    "Wait, who are they fighting?" asked Ricky.

    "Two members of Data XIII, but they shouldn't be too long though." said Ultima.

    "But why can't we go help them?" asked Travis.

    "Because, you wouldn't be of much use to them." said Ultima.

    "What do you mean by that?" asked Kyle.

    "You don't possess the Keyblade, also you don't have the right combat skills to fight them, all of you are currently used to warfare skills, those skills won't work here." said Ultima.

    "He's right, our guns won't have any effect in this universe, plus we don't have them either." said Ricky.

    "But I'm sure David will have a way for you guys to be useful, he's already made Brandon and the others useful, but of course they had the experience needed to fight Data XIII since they were in the DBZ universe." said Ultima.

    "But wait, was it that crucial to come and get us and eradicate Shepard and his entire army in a whole minute?" asked Travis.

    "Yes, it was that crucial, the war with Data XIII was moved up, we're expected to fight with them in about a week." said Ultima.

    "How much was it moved up?" asked Brandt.

    "It would've been three weeks by now I believe." said Ultima.

    "That's very odd." said Ricky.

    "We believe that they may have a secret weapon of some sort which is why they decided to make it closer." said Ultima.

    "There's always that possibility." said Christian getting up.

    "Oh Christian, you're alive?" asked Travis.

    "I was only paralyzed by Xigbar." said Christian.

    "Yeah, but not anymore thanks to Ultima." said Brandt.

    "I know, I heard everything, from what I can tell, Data XIII are a very strong group." said Christian.

    "Indeed they are." said Ultima.

    "One thing is certain......we have to finish the fight!" said Ricky.

    "Stealing stuff from Halo Rick?" asked Christian.

    "Hell yeah!" said Ricky.

    "Okay!" said Christian.

    "It will be a difficult fight, these guys are strong, very strong." said Ultima.

    "You took down Xigbar instantly though." said Brandt.

    "That's because he was using Chakra Natures, and so far he's the only Data XIII member that experimented with them, and that's what gave off his weakness." said Ultima.

    "I don't know, I get the feeling that he isn't the only capable of using Chakra." said Christian.

    "We'll just have to gather more intel then." said Ultima.

    "Which means, David's gonna have to infiltrate again right?" asked Kyle.

    "Maybe not, we do have Hanna remember, she can scan the entire stronghold of Data XIII for us." said Ricky.

    "Oh yeah true." said Kyle.

    "Why don't we ask her now since she and Hollie are up." said Ultima.

    "Ask me what?" asked Hanna.

    "We need to know if you can scan the entire Data XIII stronghold?" asked Ricky.

    "Yeah, that shouldn't be hard, just give me a direction." said Hanna.

    "Face North and then concentrate on looking for a giant floating castle, it's all black." said Ultima.

    "Right." said Hanna.

    Hanna concentrated and used her Eagle Vision and then found the castle, she began to search through the inside and spotted all of the members inside! She could feel their awesome powers especially the power coming off of three of them!

    "Alright, I can say this, there's three of them have a high power surrounding their bodies, and trust me, it's strong, real strong." said Hanna.

    "Alright see if you can find their secret weapon or something hidden." said Ultima.

    Hanna continued her search and then stumbled upon a room hidden in the back of the throne room, inside was a pod, which held a sleeping organism inside!

    "There's this hidden room in the back of the throne room, there's this pod also and has something sleeping in it, but whatever it is has a power bigger than the the strongest member in the group!" said Hanna.

    "Can you make out what's inside?" asked Ultima.

    "Well....it's definitely a person." said Hanna.

    Hanna continued to scan inside the pod, it was a person wearing a white cloak just like the other Data XIII members, she could feel it's intense power growing stronger and stronger, then it opened it's eye and showed off a golden Sharingan!

    "That's not possible!" said Hanna.

    "What's going on?" asked Ricky.

    "As I was looking at the person inside the pod, he had opened his eye and I seen a golden Sharingan, and it disrupted my Eagle Vision's powers!" said Hanna.

    "Wait, a golden Sharingan?" asked Ultima.

    "Yeah." said Hanna.

    "Wow of course this member would have a Sharingan, doesn't every one that's powerful have one hidden somewhere." said Brandt.

    "No, this is a new Sharingan, different from mine and different from David's, even different from Christian's." said Ultima.

    "Why do you say that?" Travis asked.

    "I think we're in gonna be in big trouble, there's no way we can stop them if they've managed to pull this off." said Ultima.

    "Pulled what off what's wrong Ultima?" asked Christian.

    "I think Data XIII has managed to create a data version of David and I fused together!" said Ultima.

    "Fused together?" said Kyle.

    "You see, David became apart of Organization XIII, then along the way I became his Nobody and was also apart of Organization XIII, and Data XIII is based off of stronger versions of the original members, David and I are both similar, which means they were able to combine our powers, skills, speed, everything, into one body." said Ultima.

    Everyone became shocked with fear as they finally realized that they might not be able to survive the battle with Data XIII.

    To Be Continued

    Well I hope this was enjoyable, sorry if it was rushed I kinda wanted to get out of that old universe and get into the Data XIII business a lot sooner. I had got more ideas and I'm gonna stick with the ideas I have for continuing the story along after this. But I won't worry about it until this Data XIII saga is done with, then I'll decide how to start the new saga. Well goodnight guys I'm tired like crazy.


    Chapter 13 - Finish The Fight

    Ricky and the gang tailed Shepard towards Louisiana and then the army had stopped. Shepard began to announce the strategy for taking over the state and how it should be done.

    "Not so fast!" said Ricky.

    "Ah so you all followed us here eh?" said Shepard.

    "Why are you attacking this place?" asked Hanna.

    "Because, it's small." said Shepard.

    "And?" said Brandt.

    "That's all, it's just small and it's a good practice run for my army here." said Shepard.

    "Well, you're not gonna destroy this state, we'll stop you!" said Travis.

    "I'm always hoping for you all to join me, it's alot easier." said Shepard.

    "Get real." said Christian.

    "Don't waste your time on them, allow me to finish them off." said a stranger.

    "Ah Xigbar, perfect timing!" said Shepard.

    "Damn, here we go." said Ricky.

    "Who's that?" asked Hanna.

    "Xigbar is an Organization XIII member who specializes in warfare, or shall I say overpowered warfare." said Christian.

    "I see, so you know about me, but I'm not the original Xigbar." said Data Xigbar.

    "Yeah, that white cloak is proof of what Ultima told us." said Ricky.

    "So that's a Data XIII member?" asked Brandt.

    "Yeah." said Christian.

    "I fought with him already, and I barely escaped." said Hollie.

    "Ah we meet again, love." said Xigbar smiling.

    "Is he strong?" asked Kyle.

    "Yes, he's unbelievably strong." said Hollie.

    "I'll leave them to you Xigbar, I'll be destroying this state, have fun!" said Shepard.

    "No problem, go enjoy yourself, I'll handle this." said Xigbar smiling.

    Shepard began to leave while Ricky, Travis, and Kyle went after him, Christian stayed back and held off Xigbar.

    "Fine by me, it'll be easier to take you four down." said Xigbar.

    "Christian, you're in charge, make sure you beat him and come help us out!" said Ricky.

    "Got it!" said Christian.

    "Heh, you really think you fools can beat me? You must be out of your mind!" said Xigbar.

    "Why don't you save the bragging for later!" said Hanna.

    "So Hollie, describe his movements for us." said Brandt.

    "He moves very fast, his weapons are pistols that are powered with some kind of crystal that can be manipulated. He can also form those pistols into any kind of weapon that he chooses and can also dual wield those as well." said Hollie.

    "That sounds about right, the original can do all of those things, well, when he forms the sniper he can't dual wield it." said Christian.

    "But remember Ultima said that the Data XIII members are alot stronger than the originals." said Hanna.

    "Yeah, there's no telling what this version is capable of doing." said Brandt.

    "Guess we'll just have to try!" said Christian activating his Sharingan.

    Xigbar readied his Arrowguns and turned them into machine pistols, Christian charged after him first, Xigbar began to rapidly fire off rounds towards him, Christian's Sharingan slowed down the speed of the crystals and dodged them all! Christian got in close and Xigbar immediately disappeared and then reappeared behind Brandt and kicked him in his back, then he combined the Arrowguns and created an Assault Rifle and fired off rounds towards Hollie who dodged them all and attempted to kick him in his stomach but he vanished before she could even swing her kick! "You guys are making this too easy!" he taunted. Xigbar then jumped on top of a building and transformed his Arrowguns into a Sniper Rifle and then took aim at Hanna!

    "What the hell, he has a Thermal Scope on it?" said Christian.

    "Ultima was right, these versions are definitely stronger than the original!" said Brandt.

    Xigbar fired at Hanna who dodged it just in time, but Xigbar stayed smiling and shot three bullets all at once! Hanna dodged two of them but the third one had hit her arm, Xigbar then fired off one shot and the crystal transformed into ten crystals heading straight for Hanna! Brandt rushed in and blocked all of the shots with a shield! Christian rushed towards Xigbar who formed two submachine guns and fired at him! Christian used his great speed to evade them all and then vanished, he appeared in front of Xigbar and punched him hard, then he grabbed his cloak, lifted him off the ground, and then slammed him into the ground!

    "How did that feel?" taunted Christian.

    "What was there to feel?" asked Xigbar rising up.

    "No way, you didn't feel any of that!?" said Christian.

    "Physical Attacks won't hurt me, there's only one type of attack that can affect me." said Xigbar.

    "Great, now how are we supposed to beat him if nothing works on him, and we don't know what kind of attack does work on him." said Christian.

    Xigbar changed his Arrowguns into pistols and ran towards Christian at high speeds, Christian began dodging all of the crystals coming after him but had a hard time damaging Xigbar based on the speed of the crystals coming after him! Xigbar then began to reload his weapons, "Now's my chance!" said Christian. Christian tried to attack Xigbar with a Rasengan but Xigbar vanished and then several crystals penetrated Christian's back and he fell to the ground!

    "Wait, what just happened?" asked Brandt.

    "I can reload instantly with any weapon I craft, my original's weakness was the reloading time and the fact that the crystals were easy to dodge after watching the patterns after awhile, but my reload is instant, and the crystals are two times faster and stronger!" said Xigbar.

    "Somebody hurry up and heal Christian, I'll distract him!" said Hollie.

    "Don't worry, he's not dead or injured, he's paralyzed by the crystals' powers, which is another thing I should mention, each weapon I craft has a different power, the gun is different and my body's ability is different." said Xigbar.

    "I see, so that's how he was able to fight all four of us so easily, he just switched to the right weapons that increased his own abilities!" said Hollie.

    "Watch what happens when I use the Sniper Rifle craft." said Xigbar.

    Xigbar crafted the Sniper Rifle and then his body began to disappear! He then kicked Hollie in her stomach and she fell to the ground!

    "What's going on?" asked Hollie.

    "When I use the Sniper Rifle craft, I can turn my body invisible, which allows me to fit into the purpose of the rifle." said Xigbar.

    "So your power is to craft a weapon style and then once it's been crafted your body becomes accustomed to that weapon's purpose of usage or something like that right?" said Brandt.

    "Exactly." said Xigbar.

    "So that explains the speed for the pistols and submachines, but what about the fact that physical attacks don't work on him, what causes that?" asked Hanna.

    "I'm tired of talking about my powers, it's time I ended all of your lives!" said Xigbar.

    Xigbar crafted a Light Machine Gun and became visible again. He then jumped on top of a building and fired off many rounds of crystals towards the group and they all tried to dodge them, but Hanna and Hollie got hit by the crystals! Brandt dodged them while saving Christian but they were short on manpower now. Xigbar then instantly reloaded his weapon and got ready to fire again when his gun shocked him! The gun shattered and fell to pieces while electricity began to surround Xigbar!

    "What's going on?" asked Xigbar evading the electric field.

    "Lightning?" said Brandt.

    Then inside the electric field, Ultima appeared!

    "Ultima?" said Brandt.

    "Seems I almost arrived too late, but I made it." said Ultima.

    "What the....Ultima?" said Xigbar.

    "I figured you of all people would be here in this universe." said Ultima.

    "Why are you here?" asked Xigbar.

    "All of them here need to be sent to Radiant Garden immediately, I've already evacuated three of them." said Ultima.

    "Wait, you mean Ricky, Travis, and Kyle left already?" asked Brandt.

    "Yeah, and don't worry I took care of Shepard and the entire army." said Ultima.

    "But how did you do it all so fast?" asked Brandt.

    "Brandt, you do realize I'm David's Nobody, if David can do it then so can I, but of course David would probably have fun, however I don't have fun killing my opponents." said Ultima.

    "Yeah you got a point." said Brandt.

    "Anyway, I'll heal everyone else once we get to Radiant Garden, but for now.....I'll finish off Xigbar." said Ultima.

    "We'll see about that!" said Xigbar.

    Xigbar began to glow in a purple aura and then crafted a new set of Arrowguns! He made them into snipers and fired many rounds at Ultima who stood there and repelled them all!

    "No effect?" said Xigbar.

    "Fool, we fought before, don't you remember that your crystals are empowered by an Earth Chakra Nature, and my dominant nature is Lightning, so you know that you don't stand a chance against me." said Ultima.

    "Wait how is it Earth?" asked Brandt.

    "The Earth Chakra Nature is used to harden it's attack power, he uses the Wind Chakra Nature to increase it's speed, but he's using more Earth Chakra than Wind which is why my Lightning is stronger still." said Ultima.

    "It's not over yet-!" stopped Xigbar.

    "No....it's been over." said Ultima piercing Xigbar with a Chidori.

    Xigbar then fell to the ground and then began to dematerialize while Ultima used Chaos Control to send the others to Radiant Garden.

    "Are we in a hurry or something because you ended all of this pretty quick." said Brandt.

    "Yes, we are in a hurry." said Ultima pushing Brandt in.

    They went inside quick and disappeared along with Xigbar. They all reappeared outside of Merlin's House.

    "So Ultima basically rushed into the COD universe and brought us all back here in less than five minutes." said Ricky.

    "Yeah I know, but Christian, Hanna, and Hollie need to be healed." said Brandt.

    "I'm already doing it." said Ultima.

    "Damn he doesn't mess around does he?" said Travis.

    "Nope." said Kyle.

    "Once everything's done here, all of you need to await David and everyone else's return from their battle." said Ultima.

    "Wait, who are they fighting?" asked Ricky.

    "Two members of Data XIII, but they shouldn't be too long though." said Ultima.

    "But why can't we go help them?" asked Travis.

    "Because, you wouldn't be of much use to them." said Ultima.

    "What do you mean by that?" asked Kyle.

    "You don't possess the Keyblade, also you don't have the right combat skills to fight them, all of you are currently used to warfare skills, those skills won't work here." said Ultima.

    "He's right, our guns won't have any effect in this universe, plus we don't have them either." said Ricky.

    "But I'm sure David will have a way for you guys to be useful, he's already made Brandon and the others useful, but of course they had the experience needed to fight Data XIII since they were in the DBZ universe." said Ultima.

    "But wait, was it that crucial to come and get us and eradicate Shepard and his entire army in a whole minute?" asked Travis.

    "Yes, it was that crucial, the war with Data XIII was moved up, we're expected to fight with them in about a week." said Ultima.

    "How much was it moved up?" asked Brandt.

    "It would've been three weeks by now I believe." said Ultima.

    "That's very odd." said Ricky.

    "We believe that they may have a secret weapon of some sort which is why they decided to make it closer." said Ultima.

    "There's always that possibility." said Christian getting up.

    "Oh Christian, you're alive?" asked Travis.

    "I was only paralyzed by Xigbar." said Christian.

    "Yeah, but not anymore thanks to Ultima." said Brandt.

    "I know, I heard everything, from what I can tell, Data XIII are a very strong group." said Christian.

    "Indeed they are." said Ultima.

    "One thing is certain......we have to finish the fight!" said Ricky.

    "Stealing stuff from Halo Rick?" asked Christian.

    "Hell yeah!" said Ricky.

    "Okay!" said Christian.

    "It will be a difficult fight, these guys are strong, very strong." said Ultima.

    "You took down Xigbar instantly though." said Brandt.

    "That's because he was using Chakra Natures, and so far he's the only Data XIII member that experimented with them, and that's what gave off his weakness." said Ultima.

    "I don't know, I get the feeling that he isn't the only capable of using Chakra." said Christian.

    "We'll just have to gather more intel then." said Ultima.

    "Which means, David's gonna have to infiltrate again right?" asked Kyle.

    "Maybe not, we do have Hanna remember, she can scan the entire stronghold of Data XIII for us." said Ricky.

    "Oh yeah true." said Kyle.

    "Why don't we ask her now since she and Hollie are up." said Ultima.

    "Ask me what?" asked Hanna.

    "We need to know if you can scan the entire Data XIII stronghold?" asked Ricky.

    "Yeah, that shouldn't be hard, just give me a direction." said Hanna.

    "Face North and then concentrate on looking for a giant floating castle, it's all black." said Ultima.

    "Right." said Hanna.

    Hanna concentrated and used her Eagle Vision and then found the castle, she began to search through the inside and spotted all of the members inside! She could feel their awesome powers especially the power coming off of three of them!

    "Alright, I can say this, there's three of them have a high power surrounding their bodies, and trust me, it's strong, real strong." said Hanna.

    "Alright see if you can find their secret weapon or something hidden." said Ultima.

    Hanna continued her search and then stumbled upon a room hidden in the back of the throne room, inside was a pod, which held a sleeping organism inside!

    "There's this hidden room in the back of the throne room, there's this pod also and has something sleeping in it, but whatever it is has a power bigger than the the strongest member in the group!" said Hanna.

    "Can you make out what's inside?" asked Ultima.

    "Well....it's definitely a person." said Hanna.

    Hanna continued to scan inside the pod, it was a person wearing a white cloak just like the other Data XIII members, she could feel it's intense power growing stronger and stronger, then it opened it's eye and showed off a golden Sharingan!

    "That's not possible!" said Hanna.

    "What's going on?" asked Ricky.

    "As I was looking at the person inside the pod, he had opened his eye and I seen a golden Sharingan, and it disrupted my Eagle Vision's powers!" said Hanna.

    "Wait, a golden Sharingan?" asked Ultima.

    "Yeah." said Hanna.

    "Wow of course this member would have a Sharingan, doesn't every one that's powerful have one hidden somewhere." said Brandt.

    "No, this is a new Sharingan, different from mine and different from David's, even different from Christian's." said Ultima.

    "Why do you say that?" Travis asked.

    "I think we're in gonna be in big trouble, there's no way we can stop them if they've managed to pull this off." said Ultima.

    "Pulled what off what's wrong Ultima?" asked Christian.

    "I think Data XIII has managed to create a data version of David and I fused together!" said Ultima.

    "Fused together?" said Kyle.

    "You see, David became apart of Organization XIII, then along the way I became his Nobody and was also apart of Organization XIII, and Data XIII is based off of stronger versions of the original members, David and I are both similar, which means they were able to combine our powers, skills, speed, everything, into one body." said Ultima.

    Everyone became shocked with fear as they finally realized that they might not be able to survive the battle with Data XIII.

    To Be Continued

    Well I hope this was enjoyable, sorry if it was rushed I kinda wanted to get out of that old universe and get into the Data XIII business a lot sooner. I had got more ideas and I'm gonna stick with the ideas I have for continuing the story along after this. But I won't worry about it until this Data XIII saga is done with, then I'll decide how to start the new saga. Well goodnight guys I'm tired like crazy.
    Post by: Alpha Shadow, Mar 6, 2012 in forum: Archives