Hey guys no update today I'm actually gonna be writing the next chapter on my notepad program so it'll be easier for me to save it and then make some changes just in case, although I think this pad here is able to save but I wanna make sure I get everything done correctly so I'll be spending maybe a day, or two, possibly three working on this chapter but it's not the last. Also while I was sick and I have made a full recovery yesterday, I was thinking about whether I should continue the story or end it, I haven't gotten any feedback from anyone on KHV so I don't know what you guys want so I will do what I want to do. I have decided to continue the story and I do have plenty of brand new ideas, but will stick to the one I been planning on for awhile. Basically there will be two different stories put into one, but I won't spoil it too much, just know that there will be a Kingdom Hearts story, and a story back in Haven City! I thought about changing the city's name but I decided to keep it the way it is and I won't use the US state names or city names either, I want to focus on the changes that have underwent the city or shall I say David and his friends' world! Expect new foes, possibly many lol, new techniques, new surprises, new friends, and of course, more epic storylines! This part of the story will probably be the last one. I would make one more but I have a new story I need to start on plus I have gathered some members who would want to combine our imaginations together and create a new story based on Kingdom Hearts only, and I can guarantee that it will be an entertaining story! Alright enough of me talking, I'll be getting to work on Chapter 19 Part 2! Give me at least two days! Thanks guys and I'm glad you all continued to support this story!
Alright! 1. School is always like, you can find teachers like that anywhere, and these exams and all that other stuff it can stress you out because they like to tell you stuff like "Your future depends on these exams so make sure you study and don't mess up!" Of course I remember a few of my teachers saying that and I was like "Thanks for the encouragement!" So don't let school stress you out, it's not worth it, you're almost done with school. Don't let it turn you into a Heartless lol. 2. As for your boyfriend. THAT FRUITCAKE NEEDS TO UNDERSTAND THAT NOT EVERYONE CAN BE LIKE HIM, SOME PEOPLE HAVE TO STUDY, NOT EVERYONE IS THE SAME, NOT EVERYONE HAS PHOTOGRAPHIC MEMORY AND CAN REMEMBER EVERYTHING BEING SHOWN OR TOLD TO THEM! Anyways I can relate to him a little bit though, I have that ability to do amazing on tests without studying and I do have photographic memory, but he shouldn't try to distract you, instead he should be HELPING YOU if he''s so amazing in school. 3. Social problem? Here's a simple solution, Ignore. Block. Remove. Sever. Live Life Without Them. That's what I do to those that hold me back. Hopefully all of this makes sense, I was kind of rushing so I can get back to talking to you on IM lol.
Sorry guys I have a bad headache so I can't release the next chapter :( I want to but I can't concentrate so I'll post a new chapter as soon as I recover. Hopefully it will be soon because I've been having headaches, maybe I'm studying too hard. Anyways I hope you guys understand and like I said just go on my YouTube and watch some videos and leave some feedback I have MW3, Guitar Hero, Sonic, a little DBZ, and soon Prototype 2 and Battlefield and other games will be on as well, and Naruto is also on my YouTube. Enjoy, thanks, and I hope I get better soon!
Chapter 19:1 - Time To Go To War! It's finally the day, the day that everyone in Radiant Garden goes to war! Everyone has trained hard, they've went through hard times but stuck it out, they had time to increase their skills as well as their wisdom. Were they ready for the battle? They are unsure with how it will turn out but they can only hope that their training was a success! Everyone that was going to be fighting in the battle were heading out to meet in The Great Maw, which is where the battle was supposed to be taking place. Taylor led the group towards the The Great Maw while Sora and Riku went to gather more forces. One question filled everyone's minds, "When is David going to show up?". Sora and Riku had spotted Cloud who was heading somewhere. "Hey Cloud!" Sora called out. Cloud turned to face him. "Hey Sora." said Cloud. "Where are you heading?" asked Sora. "Same place as you, towards the The Great Maw to help you guys fight Data XIII." said Cloud. "So you're fighting with us?" said Sora surprised. "Yeah, this time I decided to be there to help you fight these guys." said Cloud. "Awesome! Now we just have to find Leon and Tifa!" said Sora. "Leon and Tifa are already heading towards the place now." said Cloud. "Great, so we have everyone involved." said Riku. "Yeah." said Cloud. "Okay, when you get there, tell them not to engage the enemy once they appear, we need you guys to help us fight off the Databodies that will appear, once the Nobodies come to take over, we'll be heading off to aid the others." said Riku. "I see, so Organization XIII is aiding us in this fight?" asked Cloud. "Yeah, David was a member for awhile and had gained his trust, plus they also know of Data XIII's power." said Riku. "Good to know. Well, I'll continue to the rendezvous point with Leon and Tifa, I suggest you two do the same before it's time." said Cloud heading off. "Right." said Sora. "Okay now that we've gotten Cloud, Tifa, and Leon involved, we can tell the King we're ready to go." said Riku. "Yeah let's get going." said Sora. The two headed to Merlin's House to brief King Mickey with the good news. Taylor and the others had reached The Great Maw where they laid eyes upon ten thousand Databodies lying in wait for them! Everyone were surprised to see this many of them out here and they knew that Data XIII were here. Leon, Cloud, and Tifa were watching from the top of the mountain, they too were shocked by the number of Databodies present. "Looks like this is gonna take awhile." said Leon. "We'll have to wait till Sora, Riku, Donald, Goofy, and the King get here before we start fighting." said Cloud. "Which means David's friends will have to hold them off for now." said Tifa. "Speaking of, where is David?" asked Leon. "I don't know, I haven't seen him around here for quite some time." said Cloud. "I hope nothing bad happened to him." said Tifa. "He's a strong guy, he won't be beaten so easily." said Cloud. "You're right." said Leon. The three of them stood and watched as Taylor and the others got ready to fight the Databodies when suddenly something was appearing in the sky! A giant white floating castle was coming down from the sky, it had the Data XIII symbol which is an upside down Kingdom Hearts heart! From the top of the castle stood two hundred members of Data XIII with Xemnas in the front! "It's time my brothers and sisters! Let us go forth and show the world our power!" said Data Xemnas. Everyone roared and then dived towards the surface! Xemnas, and the original Data XIII members remained at the top of the castle. "Alright as planned, we'll split into two groups, the Assault group and the Defensive group. The Assault group will be made of Axel, Vexen, Marluxia, Demyx, Xaldin, Larxene, and Lexaeus. The Defensive group will be made of Saix, Roxas, Xigbar, Zexion, Luxord, and myself." said Data Xemnas. "Yes sir!" said the twelve of them. "Alright, let's begin!" said Data Xemnas. Immediately, the Assault group dove down to the surface to command their sections! Sora, Riku, King Mickey, Donald, and Goofy soon made it to the battlefield and noticed what was going on! "This isn't good." said Sora. "There's so many of them!" said Goofy. "Can we beat all of them?" asked Donald. "Don't let their numbers fool you." said Riku. "Riku's correct, we need to stay focused!" said Mickey. "Right!" said the three of them. Leon, Cloud, and Tifa then turned to face them and Tifa called out to them. They went over to talk about the Databodies as well as the Data XIII Recruits that had appeared. Data Xemnas then came out to announce the start of the battle. "Welcome my friends! Thank you for coming here to fight for your lives! I am truly grateful! Now then, let's get this started shall we?" said Data Xemnas. "Let's go!" said King Mickey. The group on the mountain descended down to launch their attack on the Databodies when suddenly a light flashed on top of the surface! Everyone became blinded by it's light and were wondering what was happening! The light then faded as David and Ultima stood firm, back to back as they looked at the Databodies. "Sorry we're late." said David. "We had a little last minute trip." said Ultima. "A trip? Where?" asked Taylor. "A place where Ultima could learn to transform into his true self." said David. "His true self?" said Joseph. "Observe." said Ultima. Ultima's body started to glow in a dark blue color and then lightning began to surround his body as well! The sky then turned dark and a flash of lightning then crashed upon him creating a bright light! His body was completely covered in light and no one could see him transforming into something amazing! David began to smile. "What you seen before was Ultima, but no more, he is now......Sasuke!" said David. "Sasuke!?" said Brandon, Joseph, Raelon, Lucus, and Miranda. The light then faded, a teen stood with black hair, spiked in the back, flowed down in front his cheeks. A gray shirt with his chest almost completely exposed, an Uchiha clan symbol on the back, dark blue pants, and black sandals. He also carried a sword and his skin was almost a pale white color. "So how did it turn out?" asked Sasuke. "You have the looks and even the voice, looks like it was a success." said David smiling. "Well we have to test out the powers." said Sasuke. "True." said David. "Let's see, Cloud, Tifa, Leon, Sora, Riku, Donald, Goofy, and the King are gonna be fighting the Databodies until the Nobodies get here, but they'll be here within thirty seconds so they might as well come with us." said Sasuke. "Yeah....there's ten thousand here now.......let's see leave about a thousand." said David. "Alright." said Sasuke. "Wait what's he going to do?" asked Brandon. "You all might wanna step back a little bit." said David. "Hey David why don't you and I do it, we can combine our powers so that way we aren't using much." said Sasuke. "Yeah that's true let's go for it." said David. The two of them stood in front of the ten thousand Databodies and then closed their eyes. After ten seconds, they opened their left eye and used their new jutsu called Divine Amaterasu! Nine thousand of the Databodies began to float into the air while a blue colored wind was swirling around them, then David and Sasuke extended their hand causing a dark blue sphere to form around the Databodies! They then closed their hand and the sphere exploded! The sphere completely burned all of the Databodies trapped inside leaving only the thousand left! "Wow!" said Sora. "I'm impressed." said Cloud. "They've definitely become stronger." said Leon. "Yeah, but I'm sure Sora and Riku have become stronger too!" said Tifa. "They have, just wait till you see what they're capable of now!" said Mickey. The flames had cleared and the Data XIII Recruits were becoming frightened. "Well, it seems those two have learned a new trick." said Marluxia. "Scary as it may look, it's not enough to beat my ice." said Vexen. "I don't know Vexen, my fire can beat your ice." said Axel. "Not if I use my Nobody's Soul ability it won't." said Vexen. "Oh yeah, I forgot about that, not even my Nobody's Soul ability can stop your ice once it's been enhanced." said Axel. "How about we stop admiring our enemy's abilities and start this war!" said Larxene. "Impatient as ever." said Lexaeus. "She's right though, we need to start now." said Xaldin. "You're the boss." said Demyx. "Right....let's go!" said Xaldin. "Well it looks like they're coming after us." said Sasuke. "Guess we should get this started then." said David. "David what do you want to do?" asked Taylor. "Well, first I need to speak to Xemnas who is behind you guys." said David smiling. "Huh?" said Taylor. They all turned around and noticed Organization XIII was behind them all with a thousand Nobodies of each form! They also came in their floating castle. Xemnas walked towards them. "So is everything going as planned?" asked Xemnas. "Yeah, we left a thousand of the Databodies, which means the Nobodies will be in equal numbers with them once they combine." said David. "Good, we'll get started right away." said Xemnas. Roxas came walking out. "Hey David have you seen Sora?" asked Roxas. "Yeah he's up on the mountain with Riku, the King, and the others." said David. "Good, I'll be joining them." said Roxas. "Right." said David smiling. "We should probably fill your friends in on what's going on." said Saix. "Yeah." said David. David turned to face them. "Alright. First I wanna say I'm sorry for doing what I did to you guys, and saying what I said too, I meant no harm I just wanted to try to help you guys. Anyway, you all trained like I had wanted you all to, you've become very strong, Organization XIII, the King, and myself have sat down to formulate a strategy, and this is what we decided upon. We will fight this army according to our Chakra Natures as well as cooperating with an Organization XIII member's element. Those that are dominant in their Chakra Nature will pair up with that Organization XIII member so that way he or she can boost that dominant ability. For example, those who are strong with Fire Chakra Nature will partner up with Axel whose dominant element is Fire." said David. " I see that makes perfect sense, we can challenge the teams that have a weak nature against Fire correct?" asked Joseph. "Yes. Once we have that set, we'll also have a special force to move towards the floating castle. Those people will be the ones who are dominant in combat. I need Ricky's group, the one from the war universe to aid me, I also need Miranda and Taylor to aid me because the Crystal Style will be needed, and Miranda I'll tell you later on why you're needed. You all will work with me, Xemnas, Saix, Xigbar, Luxord, and Zexion, Roxas will follow us with Sora, Riku, and the King. Leon, Tifa, and Cloud will stay back to help out the teams that are having trouble, they'll help out the team that's in the most need of help, then they'll take that team and help out the other team." said David. "Okay!" said Miranda. "Roger that!" said Ricky. "One last thing. We'll all be staying together until we've reached the first Chakra Nature group, which will be made up of a Data XIII member and some Data XIII Recruits. We'll keep going through this cycle until just the Special Defensive group is left, that's when we'll breach the castle." said David. "So what about Sasuke is he going with you guys?" asked Raelon. "No, I'm gonna be staying with you guys to help you fight, I'll be working with Larxene since her dominant element is Lightning which is my dominant Chakra Nature." said Sasuke. "Awesome then we have nothing to worry about!" said Lucus. "We never had anything to worry about to begin with." said Cody. "Yeah, we've trained so hard and we know that we can beat these guys with or without David's help." said Taylor. "Which is why I can't wait to see what you guys can do." said David. "Alright the Super Nobodies are ready." said Xemnas. "Good, cause it looks like the opposing side is already coming after us." said Brandt. "Don't worry our side is already starting." said David smiling. Sora and the others were already descending down and were destroying the Databodies while the Super Nobodies, Nobodies of each form combined to create a super soldier capable of annihilating anything in it's path, were pushing ahead to aid them! David and everyone else jumped over all of the action while Sora and the gang followed behind them once they were able to break through. The Super Nobodies and the Databodies were left fighting each other. The Data XIII Assault group charged towards the heroes and then they all stopped! "Alright it looks like you guys thought up the same plan." said David. "Yes, we thought it would be wise to split up the groups according to dominant elements." said Data Xaldin. "Good, everyone go ahead and split now!" said David. Soon after everyone had split up, the Special Defensive group were the only ones left and they made their way towards the floating castle. "I can't believe how quick that was executed!" said Taylor. "I can't believe it either, but I hope everyone can fight them on their own turf." said David. "Wait what do you mean?" asked Miranda. "I'll explain it." said Xemnas. "Go ahead." said David. "Our data versions had the ability to simulate the arena that they first battled Sora in. Once they begin to fight they can create that same arena and can block anyone from entering the arena." said Xemnas. "So then how can the other groups get through?" asked Christian. "It's simple, the member that had cast the barrier has to have been weakened by fifty percent." said Xemnas. "So they have to be halfway defeated?" asked Ricky. "Yes." said Xemnas. "That shouldn't be too hard hopefully." said Brandt. "In any case we should get going." said David. "Yeah." said Miranda. They headed towards the floating castle. To Be Continued! I wanted to make it longer but I been at this for like 3 hours or more and I do have a few other things I have to do plus I been having this headache for a whole day now. I'm in the middle of studying for this big test called the ACT which is what I need to get into a College so I'm like constantly cramming my head with this giant thousand page book that's supposed to help me. It's actually helping though because I'm learning things I never learned while I was in school so I find that to be quite amazing. I never knew Matrix Math existed until now lol. Anyways Part 2 will be made sometime this week or this weekend!
Chapter 18 - Becoming Independent Everyone was still upset about what David did to them, how could he fight with them like that and then use his Genjutsu on them like that? They began to wonder about that. They started to explore reasons as to why David acted the way he did, Brandon and Cody thought that he was just going insane, Lucus thought that he was just depressed, Taylor and Miranda thought that he had something on his mind. Everyone had their own thoughts, but only one of the thoughts could be right. Taylor went to talk to Mickey. "Your majesty?" said Taylor. "What is it Taylor?" said Mickey. "Do you know why David acted the way he did and left us like this?" asked Taylor. "I'm sorry, I can't tell you, he wanted me to keep it a secret." said Mickey. "I see, then that just means that he wants us to figure out his motives on our own." said Taylor. "That's one of the reasons why he left." said Mickey. "I see, then that means that we're gonna have to train on our own." said Taylor. "We'll help you train, you and Miranda have the ability to use the Keyblade as well as the Elemental Blade." said Mickey. "Yeah about the Elemental Blade, is it really supposed to strengthen our dominant elemental ability?" asked Taylor. "It's a powerful blade nonetheless and it'll strengthen any element you have to the highest degree, but you have to excel in your training with the blade." said Mickey. "So my Crystal Style will be able to become a lot stronger than before?" asked Taylor. "It will become exceptionally powerful!" said Mickey. Taylor gave it some thought and then decided on an answer. "I'll take the training, and I'm sure Miranda will take the training as well." said Taylor. "Great, we'll begin immediately then." said Mickey. "Right, I'll go and ask Miranda if she wants to train too." said Taylor. She ran to get Miranda who was still upset over what David had told her. She had tears flowing down her cheeks and had her eyes closed. Taylor went to comfort her. "Hey Panda what's wrong?" asked Taylor. "I can't believe that David said that to me." said Miranda upset. "David probably has a good reason for doing all of this." said Taylor. "What reason is there to hurt me like that?" asked Miranda. "He probably wanted you to train yourself and counted on you to use that pain to become stronger without his help." said Taylor. "Maybe." said Miranda. "THAT'S IT!" screamed Taylor. "What's it?" asked Miranda confused. "Everyone gather around!" said Taylor. "Taylor what's going on?" asked Brandon. "I know why David acted the way he did with all of us!" said Taylor. "Well then let's hear it." said Lucus. "Think about how we all were in the past, we had powers just like David, some of us even had special abilities and were able to exceed David, but we haven't exceeded him one bit. That reason is because we've always relied on him and by relying on him he came to save us so many times that he became so much stronger to where we couldn't even beat him, and also to where we always depended on him and not on our own individual strength. I believe the reason David attacked us like that and said what he said to Miranda was because he wanted to make us resent and hate him, but at the same time he wanted us to use that hatred to become stronger and train ourselves without him supervising us." said Taylor boldly. "Taylor is right." said Mickey. "I managed to solve it?" asked Taylor. "Yes, the reason David abandoned you all was because he was hoping that you would come to hate him or at least dislike him so that way you could gain the motivation to train yourselves and show him that you all can be independent." said Mickey. "So you knew all along about his motives?" asked Brandon. "Yes, he wanted me to keep it a secret from you all but he knew that someone was gonna understand his motives for doing what he did." said Mickey. "So what happens now?" asked Brandt. "Isn't it obvious? We're going to train ourselves and become exceptionally strong!" said Taylor. "Yes, and I'm going to be taking Taylor and Miranda to undergo their Keyblade Training so they can control the power of the Elemental Blade. As for the rest of you, I know how you all can train yourselves, the group that came from the war universe, go and see Xigbar, he'll have a nice surprise for you all. The group that came from the Saiyan universe, go and see Ultima, he'll definitely help you guys out. You all have a special ability sleeping within you, and all you have to do is exploit that special ability and awaken it. Once it's been awakened, there's no doubt that the battle with Data XIII will go smoothly and we'll be victorious!" said Mickey. "Yes sir!" said all of them. They all immediately scattered and headed for their training destinations, Taylor and Miranda stood beside Mickey and they all headed for Merlin's House. Once they reached the house Mickey had opened the door and they all walked in to greet Merlin. "Ah your majesty what can I do for you?" asked Merlin. "Heya Merlin, would you happen to have a book about the Elemental Blade?" asked Mickey. "Ah so you're going to train those two in the Art of the Gelel Style correct?" asked Merlin. "I am." said Mickey. "Gelel Style?" said Miranda confused. "It's a fighting style that utilizes the Elemental Blade's powers, you'll basically learn how to fight using only your magical abilities!" said Mickey. "So we won't be using the blade?" asked Taylor. "No you'll be using the blade to battle, but you'll be able to change it's magical effect, you can wield fire and water at the same time or you could wield lightning and wind, or how about gravity and lightning, the possibilities are endless, and who knows you can probably wield all the elements you can use." said Mickey. "So the blade's physical attacks will cause magical effects to our opponents?" asked Taylor. "Yes, and you can also learn how to utilize the Final Form using the Elemental Blade!" said Mickey. "Final Form? You mean like Sora's Final Form?" asked Miranda. "Yes, you'll learn how to levitate your blades and fight by manipulating them with your mind!" said Mickey. "That's amazing!" said Taylor. "Well enough talking for now, we got to get you guys started!" said Mickey. They went to Disney Castle where Sora and Riku were waiting there, the two were very excited for some reason! "What's going on guys?" asked Mickey. "We have a new visitor!" said Sora. Walking towards them all was a teen Sora's age wearing white jacket with a black shirt, a silver crown necklace, khaki pants, and black and red shoes. His eyes were blue and had brown hair just like Sora! It was Roxas! "Wait what's Roxas doing here?" asked Taylor. "Ah you made it!" said Mickey. "Yes your majesty, and I'm ready to begin training with you, Sora, and Riku." said Roxas smiling. "Well you'll be training with Sora and Riku for now until I'm through training these two ladies here." said Mickey. "I understand your majesty." said Roxas. "Alright, then Sora and Riku, I leave Roxas in your hands, girls let's get started!" said Mickey. "Right!" said both the girls. Meanwhile at Organization XIII's floating castle in The World That Never Was, Ricky, Christian, Brandt, Hanna, Travis, Kyle, Hollie, and Andy all met up with Xigbar. They explained the situation to him and he understood. "Ah, I see, so David wanted you guys to train so he went ape on you guys, and the king sent you all here to learn how to use the weapons I use to battle. It looks like David knew everything about how his friends would act towards his actions, you guys did exactly what he said you'd do." said Xigbar. "Wait you mean everyone in the organization knew too?" asked Ricky. "Indeed we did, and he wanted us to keep it a secret too but he knew that you guys would figure it out in the end, but anyways I'll train you on how to use Arrowguns, that way you'll be able to battle Data XIII easier." said Xigbar. "Awesome!" said Hanna. Meanwhile, Brandon and the others had found Ultima who was sitting on top of Radiant Garden's clock tower. "So you guys finally understood David's true intentions?" asked Ultima. "Yeah, we know what he wanted us to do and we'll do it!" said Raelon. "Good answer, very well, I'll teach you all how to use your Ki more efficiently, and we'll also work on getting your Chakra stronger too which will let you use better techniques or increase the power of your current techniques." said Ultima. So everyone began their training under their new masters, the war universe trained under Xigbar and learned how to use Arrowguns. A few learned how to form a sniper rifle, another few learned how to form an assault rifle, one learned how to use a submachine gun and assault rifle, one learned how to form all of the different classes of guns. Brandon and the others learned how to enhance their Super Saiyans powers to where they can stay Super Saiyan all the time and not waste any Ki which allows them to transform into a more powerful state when they fight! Brandon became better with his Lava Style, Joseph learned how to use Wind Style Jutsu, Raelon learned how to use Ice Style, Lucus learned how to activate a hyper armor ability for his body to protect him from all sorts of attacks, Cody learned how to use Wood Style! The girls also had made great progress with their Elemental Blade training, and they even learned how to use more elements while using their own unique elements! They've all become stronger, and time was passing by as everyone became stronger and stronger, then one day Data Xemnas appeared before them. "Greetings Radiant Garden, I wanted to remind you that in a week will meet at the battlefield, I'm looking forward to annihilating all of you that continue to resist our organization!" said Data Xemnas. "We'll definitely beat him, no doubt about it." said Brandon. Meanwhile back at Disney Castle, Miranda and Taylor were sparring with one another while Sora, Roxas, and Riku were watching them amazed! King Mickey had went to check on them all and also took notice of how the two fierce females were fighting each other! "They're definitely different from before." said Riku. "Yeah, they've learned how to use their high speed fighting while using their Keyblades." said Sora. "How did they do that anyway?" asked Roxas. "They combined their Ki with the powers of the Elemental Blade, both of them were already used to combining powers and abilities together it's no wonder they were able to do it so easily, David must have taught them well." said Riku. "Wow!" said Roxas amazed. "I can't believe how equal both of them are!" said Sora. "No, they're not equal." said Riku. "Riku's right." said Roxas. "Take a good look Sora, Miranda's not even in her Sharingan and she can keep up amazingly well with Taylor's attacks, and Taylor is actually faster than Miranda." said Riku. "But by the looks of it, Miranda is now the fastest even without her Sharingan." said Sora. "Exactly." said Riku. "Another thing about that fellas, is that Miranda now gains an increase in power and speed when she uses her Sharingan, and right when she activates it she can instantly get the first hit on her opponent, that's the only time when she's at her most powerful, the first moment she awakens the Sharingan, she begins to release a large amount of Chakra which causes her powers and speed to triple!" said Mickey. "That's amazing!" said Sora. "I'm interested to see how strong David's become though, knowing him he's probably learned a technique that's vastly overpowered." said Riku. "Most likely." said Sora. "Guess we'll just have to wait till a week passes, then we'll see how strong he's gotten." said Roxas. "Yeah." said Sora. To Be Continued! Hey guys I hope you enjoyed the chapter! I'll try to update probably Saturday since I'll be free from studying and recording videos and stuff, it'll basically be a chill day so I'll most likely keep my Xbox Live profile offline while it's on so I can just enjoy Netflix and Hulu in peace. Anyways in the next chapter I'm going to ATTEMPT to make it very long because that's when the battle will start, and I want to make sure I do very good with it so I'll probably be trying to focus too much on all of the fights. Also I want you guys to answer me this, you can comment about it or send me a PM, I want to know if you guys want me to continue the story once Data XIII has been defeated? I can continue going with the story if you guys want me to but if you feel that I should end it with Data XIII's defeat then I'll be sure to make the ending even more epic than before! If you want me to continue I'll still make the ending epic, and then I can extend the ending by adding some cool changes, trust me I had some time to think about it while I strayed off the path of updating this story. I have some pretty good ideas and I'm positive I can get a good story going on for the next saga. So do you want me to continue the story or finish it? Please tell me don't be shy guys, I haven't gotten any feedback lately so it would be nice to get some! Thanks!
Okay unfortunately I am unable to update I'll have to try this week hopefully I can get the time to update. Sorry guys but hey you can pass the time by re-reading the whole story or you can go over to the Production Studio and go to Video Projects and check out my videos also!
Hey guys just giving you an update I'll be continuing the story probably tomorrow or Sunday if time permits me, I been busy with uploading videos to YouTube so I never had time to work on my story but I will get around to it tomorrow or Sunday, it'll be one of the two that's for sure. Also just know that next week will be a busy week for me since I'll be working on getting into College so I'll be focusing mainly on that.
Ah sad face. Well in that case just spell words the best way you can, or you can play around in Office Word you might just get the setting right to auto detect misspelled words. Just experiment!
Try using Google Chrome man it'll let you know if the word has been misspelled or not. I always use Chrome and I'm happy with it, it even helped me learn that the word Amaterasu isn't misspelled which also means it's a real word lol. It's amazing, in Naruto it was a jutsu that released black flames and stuff, but it's an actual word lol! Anyways try it out if you want and you'll be fine, also good luck with the format man!
I Will Not Bow - Breaking Benjamin I always enjoyed this song and would listen to it over and over, it's like I can relate to the lyrics. But not really a fan I just like their music pretty much, but I'm definitely a Disturbed fan, sad to see them go on that hiatus but it's okay.
This story seems interesting. Try not to make the entire chapter a paragraph, separate the action and the dialogue it looks better that way. Here's an example. "Today I will finally overcome this spell of weakness I've been having" annnounced Arile as he drew a sword and placed it in front of him pointing at his rival Serio. "You can try, but i dought you can succeed" replied Serio sharply. Then when you want to start an action scene, in my opinion you can keep it the way you're displaying it now but don't mix in conversation in the action scene's paragraph, try to make it something like this, this is just an example. Arile charged towards Serio with two hands locked onto the blade's handle, he jumped up and came down with the blade aiming for Serio's face! Serio raised his blade and immediately blocked Arile's attack! Arile's blade then began to speak to him saying "Fire" repeatedly, Arile then looked at Serio's blade and replied the same words as the blade and a gulf of flame shot from the blade! "Arile what did you just do?" asked Serio. "I think I just shot fire out of this blade!" said Arile. Something like that. But yeah I say you have a pretty good story on your hands, this was just my two cents on how you should format your story and I'm sure others will either agree or disagree. Good luck!
Special Chapter - David's Journey #4 Inside the Data XIII floating castle..... "How's the recruitment process coming along?" asked Data Xemnas. "It's coming along perfect master." said Data Saix. "Good and how's our secret weapon?" asked Data Xemnas. "He's also coming along perfect, he's definitely going to become stronger than David." said Data Saix. "That's very good indeed." said Data Xemnas. "Master, we have also received information regarding the Assassins." said Data Saix. "Go ahead, inform me." said Data Xemnas. "Master, it seems there's a team of three heading towards the border, among the three is Lolita." said Data Saix. "I see. I believe it's time we crippled their forces, and I know just who to send." said Data Xemnas smiling. "You want Him to go?" asked Data Saix. "Yes, I think those two need to have a talk." said Data Xemnas. "Yes master, I'll send him out right away." said Data Saix. "Very well, oh and Saix." said Data Xemnas. "Yes master?" said Data Saix. "I need you to inform him of this as well." said Data Xemnas. Meanwhile back at the Assassin Headquarters, David remained training and was showing little results. He was distracted by the dream he had regarding his Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan's powers. He decided to take a break and went to see what everyone else were up to. But he didn't know that everyone were sent out on a mission. Lolita, Demi, and Jevin were reaching the border to Texas. Their mission was to secure the border and set up a motion sensing barrier to detect trespassers. "Alright we're nearly at the border." said Lolita. "Good, let's get it secured!" said Jevin. "I can feel some Nobodies there, but there aren't many of them." said Demi. "Then it'll be easy." said Jevin. Lolita remained silent. They descended down from the trees and ran straight into the wide open grassland that overseen the border. They quickly disposed of the Nobodies and got ready to set up the barrier when suddenly Jevin was attacked from behind! Jevin was knocked out cold, Demi summoned her Iron Sand instantly and went to protect him, Lolita quickly activated her Sharingan and blocked the intruder's incoming attack! "Demi, take Jevin and head back to the headquarters immediately!" said Lolita. "Right!" said Demi. "Be careful." said Lolita. "You too!" said Demi. Demi took Jevin and they immediately fled the scene, Lolita and the intruder stood there watching each other. "Judging by your outfit you're part of Data XIII right?" said Lolita. "I'm actually part of their recruitment division, it's indicated by our symbol in the front, the Data XIII members have a cloak like Organization XIII but we recruits have outfits similar to the Assassins except we don't have a cape shadowing our arm." said the intruder. "That voice.....it can't be." said Lolita. "Yes, it is." said the intruder lifting his hood. "What!?" said Lolita surprised. "It's been awhile, little sister." said the intruder. "No way, Dimitri , it's you." said Lolita. "How've you been?" asked Dimitri. "How do you think I've been?" said Lolita. Lolita vanished and kicked him in his back, causing him to fly through the trees! Dimitri then appeared behind her! "Now now, that's no way to treat your older brother you haven't seen in awhile now isn't it?" said Dimitri punching her face. Lolita fell on the ground and then got back up quickly. She charged after him and threw fast punches and kicks but Dimitri easily evaded them. She then jumped back and fired off Ki blasts but Dimitri stood there and took them head on! He received no damage from them and smiled. "They had no effect?" said Lolita. "Ki based attacks have no effect on me, that's why I'm sent to handle missions such as this." said Dimitri. "So this is what Data XIII did for him, he isn't able to be defeated by Ki based attacks. Looks like I'll have to use Chakra then." said Lolita. "Yes, and my abilities have become three times stronger and more deadlier than before!" said Dimitri smiling. "I've become stronger myself, which you'll see right now!" said Lolita activating her Assassin Form. "Ah so you've learned how to use the Assassin Form eh.....hmph that's not enough to beat me." said Dimitri. "We'll see." said Lolita. Lolita charged towards him and drew her Keyblade! She slashed away at him as he kept dodging her attacks, then she used Chidori against him but he grabbed her hand and smashed it towards the ground! Dimitri then kicked her up towards the air, then he appeared in front of her and began to pummel her with a chain of attacks that were destroying Lolita! His body then became engulfed in fire and his eyes changed from black to orange and began to glow in a flame color! He charged after her even more! Meanwhile Demi was halfway towards the headquarters when David showed up. "Demi what's going on?" asked David. "You have to go and help Lolita, she's fighting a Data XIII member!" said Demi. "Right, where are they?" asked David. "Go to the Grassland Border and you'll find them there!" said Demi. "Right, thanks!" said David blasting forward using Kaioken. Lolita stood up battered up and on the verge of death, she looked up at her brother who was unharmed and smiling. She used Amaterasu on him but it had no effect because of his fire armor! "Sharingan won't work on me either, Tsukiyomi and Amaterasu have no effect on this Firaga Armor I have." said Dimitri. "If only I had Water Style." said Lolita. "You would need a lot of water in order to stop me, of course it has to be powerful enough to beat me anyways." said Dimitri. Dimitri charged towards Lolita and punched her towards the ground. Lolita struggled to get up but Dimitri lifted her up and continued to punch her stomach hard. David was closing in and could feel Lolita's life force decreasing rapidly! He turned into a Super Saiyan and increased his speed! Dimitri then kicked Lolita in her face making her fly towards a rock that was distant. Lolita stood up once more and thought about using Amaterasu but knew she would die if she used it again. Dimitri charged after her again and she tried to use Amaterasu but Dimitri was too fast........he stabbed her heart with a flaming sword. "Goodbye little sister, you fought hard but you lacked power." said Dimitri smiling. Lolita slowly fell to her knees and then fell to the ground. Dimitri reverted back to his original form and headed back to the castle. Five minutes later David arrived at the scene, he walked around the destruction and then found Lolita lying on the ground. He went to her body and listened for a heartbeat, but there was none. David picked her up and headed towards the headquarters, once he got there everyone seen her in his arms and knew that she was gone. He placed her on her bed in her bedroom and then walked away. He told everyone not to follow him and that he would be back. David was furious but didn't show it, he walked across the border and then used Instant Transmission to travel to Data XIII's floating castle! "So Dimitri how did it go?" asked Data Saix. "It went well, Lolita is dead therefore the Assassins are without a leader." said Dimitri. "Good work!" said Data Saix. "Thank you sir." said Dimitri. Suddenly the alarms went off! "What's going on?" asked Data Saix. "Looks like we have an intruder." said Data Xemnas. "I'll go take care of it." said Data Saix. "No, allow me." said Dimitri. "Yes Dimitri, go and dispose of the intruder." said Data Xemnas. "Yes master." said Dimitri. Dimitri then disappeared. "You and I both know that he won't be coming back." said Data Saix. "Yes." said Data Xemnas smiling. The Data XIII Recruits were trying to hold the intruder back but he quickly destroyed all of them! The intruder was David! David walked towards the center of the castle and destroyed every enemy that crossed him and showed no mercy! Dimitri then appeared in front of David. "So you're David huh, I take it you're here to kill me because I killed Lolita." said Dimitri smiling. David's Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan activated and it began to glow red! "It's funny, I killed my own little sister, and she didn't even put up a fight, but you, I'm positive you'll put up a better fight than that weakling." said Dimitri smiling. David stood there furious. He then started to smile. "So, you killed your own sister, called her weak, showed her no mercy. I think I'll give you a very painful death, and it will be slow." said David. David's Sharingan then changed from a red color to a golden color! "What's going on with your eye?" asked Dimitri. "Burn.......forever." said David. He activated his left eye and suddenly red flames began to surround Dimitri! He quickly activated his Firaga Armor to protect himself but the flames were extinguished instantly! "What is this? Amaterasu?" asked Dimitri being burned. "No, something much stronger than Amaterasu." said David. Dimitri screamed in pain and then was being lifted into the air, David used his Chakra to lift him and then opened his right eye! Suddenly black electric fields surround Dimitri and began to shock him! His body couldn't take it anymore and then David closed his hand and Dimitri's body then vanished! Shortly afterwards the recruits came running and tried to stop David until Xemnas showed up! "Leave him be! He's leaving now!" said Data Xemnas. David stared at him. "Now go, you've gotten your revenge." said Data Xemnas. "I will, but know this, I will not show any mercy towards anyone in Data XIII, all of you will perish by my hands." said David. Then all of the recruits charged towards David! David then used his left eye and black flames erupted from the ground! Everyone was lifted up by the flames and were trapped in a ball, then David closed his left eye and the ball exploded! He had destroyed twenty-four Data XIII Recruits with one Amaterasu! "Remember, I'm not gonna tolerate this foolishness anymore, when we finally fight, you can bet that Data XIII will end." said David in a cold voice. He used Instant Transmission and fled the castle. Data Xemnas began to smile. "Looks like the darkness in his heart has grown substantially, now our secret weapon will be even more powerful!" said Data Xemnas laughing. "Master, don't you think that his power is becoming dangerous to us?" asked Data Saix. "I'm well aware of that, he's definitely displayed a power that I didn't think was possible to achieve." said Data Xemnas. "But it doesn't seem as though he has control over it, it was only caused by rage." said Data Saix. "Then I'll aim for that." said Data Xemnas. "It's best if we wait till the day we battle, we lost too many recruits due to his visit." said Data Saix. "Yes, that's fine." said Data Xemnas. "Very well." said Data Saix. David appeared back at the Assassin Headquarters, he went to Lolita's body and summoned the Seven Chaos Emeralds, he placed them in a circle and activated them. "Lolita will be brought back to life with the power of the Emeralds, but it will take some time so be sure to check on her regularly. Also give the Emeralds power each visit as well." said David. "Alright, but wait you're leaving?" asked Jevin. "I have to go back to my friends back in Radiant Garden." said David smiling. "That's fine then." said Jevin. "Wait, if you knew that you could bring her back to life, how come you became so furious?" asked Demi. "I knew she was going to die, but the thing is when you lose someone close to you, even if you knew about it you'll still become depressed or angry at the fact that it happened." said David. "That's understandable." said Jevin. "In any case, no one should bother you now, I've made sure of it by enhancing the barrier, any intruder that's affiliated with Data XIII will be detected and destroyed by Amaterasu on the spot." said David. "Wow, that's amazing!" said Demi. "How'd you do that?" asked Jevin. "I may have gained another power within my left eye when I use Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan." said David. "I see. Well have a safe trip back and we'll join you in the fight against Data XIII!" said Jevin. "Good, but do that when Lolita wakes up okay? I don't want you guys to go out there and get killed too." said David. "Sure thing." said Jevin. "Alright then......I'm off!" said David smiling. "Bye!" said Demi. "Come back okay!" said Jevin. David raised his hand and gave a thumbs up, then he disappeared. The End and To Be Continued!!!! I decided to remove a few things in the chapter and kinda shorten it because I was about to get too carried away with what I was gonna put so I decided to save it for the main story. It would be better if it was explained. Also I think that this chapter was rushed, I don't know why. Hmmmmmm.......I'll probably do something to straighten out what happened in this chapter like do something more with Lolita's battle. Well anyways hope you guys enjoyed, like seriously I hope you all enjoyed it lol!
Gonna upload some more Naruto Storm then I'm gonna upload some MW3 but not all will have commentary.
My Apocalypse - Metallica What makes me drift a litter bit closer Dead man takes the steering wheel What makes me know it's time to cross over Words you repeat until I feel See through the skin the bones they all rattle Future and past they disagree Flesh falls away the bones they all shatter I start to see the end in me I love this part, makes me wanna go play some Guitar Hero lol
I don't know how long I can go on! It's just two much for me to take!
27! Kingdom Key!
25! You right about that
Twenty-One!!! Looks like you caught it huh lol! Aw what! Twenty Three!
Eighteen! 9v9 in Ground War for Call of Duty! It's fun from time to time, whenever players aren't worried about KDR which doesn't help out in life.
