I'm not a pro at poetry and writing but I do know that this could use work. As for the negative comments, it's really only best for you to see what people have to say. I have received not so great replies on my work. I took into consideration what people said I needed to improve on. Thats clearly the only way to get better at anything. Listen to what people have to say. Their criticism should really help you improve. So don't get mad when they are just trying to help.
Tis you! Tis really you! -hugs- =^_^=
Molli kept her head down. she remembered Rhys mentioning him once. And how it was rather a sensitive topic. Molli just crossed her arms to keep at least slightly warm and refused to make eye contact with any body.
Definately the Nobodies. Unlike yhe Heartless, Nobodies are a lot more expierianced in fighting and are a lot stronger than the Heartless. Thats my opinion at least.
Its always worth the trouble to have the strongest weapon in the game.
While Roxas is amazing. I had to go with Axel. Gotta love the fiesty ones :3
I chose the sword. Always. Attack and Magic, I can aleays improve on myself. When I need some defense, you better best believe that I will choose the sword.
It was very frusturating to fight Xaldin. While Xenmas was difficult, I had more trouble fighting Xaldin.
I loved fighting Cerberus. The three headed dog was always my favorite.
I've never heard/seen Bleach so, I don't know if my post counts but, eh. I just love DeathNote! No "ifs" , "ands" , or "buts".
I'm going to bed. . . Sorry. I was up at 6 am and I am tired.
-Ohhkay den!
Oh. I had something else in m*shot* . . . So, whats up?
Hmm, Spotify? I've never heard of that.
But what if he does? Like during his show, you're the only thing in his mind!
I'm not gonna ask what you are thibking through the process of that. . .
If you have a grey then I would use that. Then I would use a dark dark blue. Atleats thats what I did -.-
Annah - I said leave me alone. . . . . N. Link - Why so blue? -I don't know! Thats why I asked you!
If you had to ask if you did something wrong, then you must have been guilty or something.
Nothing. Why do you ask?