I'm a Moogle.......Fear my ability to create you items using waaaaaayyy too many synthesis items *cackles maniacally*
I like it, Very Detailed, very interesting, you did good for a first time fanfic. Idea here, for future chapters, probably closer to the end, you could include what happened to him with a little detail from KH2, Like when he decided to leave orginazation XIII and his fight with Riku. but that's just a idea... First comment! huzzah!!!!!!
I noticed the poll on the front page, decided to check this out... I'm in awe, this is completely awesome beyond all recognition...you're doing a awesome job I may be new here, and I may not have read many of the other stories around the forums, but I'm keeping my eye on this one, I like it :)
