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  1. DiZ The Wandering Soul
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    I got bored......yay for boredom
    Post by: DiZ The Wandering Soul, May 20, 2007 in forum: The Spam Zone
  2. DiZ The Wandering Soul
    both Dead Man's Chest and At World's End would be awesome, I wanna fight Will, Jack, Norrington, the indian people, and Davy Jones, Davy Jones would be Awesome to fight.

    Maybe Meet the Robinsons... the heartless would at least be futuristic...maybe fight that giant robot...

    umm................I can't think of much else, Bug's Life or Maybe Cars......Sora as a Bug or a Car would be pretty cool...
    Post by: DiZ The Wandering Soul, May 20, 2007 in forum: The Spam Zone
  3. DiZ The Wandering Soul
    If you can, I'd like it to have DiZ in it, with a blue and black background. Any text you want to put in there you can, but, somewhere in it, prefrebly somewhere in the corner in small cursive text, my screename. I'll give credit to whoever makes it...so in advance Arigato ^_^
    Thread by: DiZ The Wandering Soul, Apr 29, 2007, 0 replies, in forum: Art Shop
  4. DiZ The Wandering Soul
    I always thought DiZ to be a cool charecter, always so enigmatic and mysterious...plus, I'm normally a wanderer, plus, I like the talk of souls and such so, I threw those three together and bam! DiZ the Wandering Soul
    Post by: DiZ The Wandering Soul, Apr 29, 2007 in forum: Discussion
  5. DiZ The Wandering Soul
    these poems...they're beautiful, yet oh so sad at the same time... they're beautifully sad (:

    you do good work ^^
    Post by: DiZ The Wandering Soul, Apr 28, 2007 in forum: Archives
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    I'm glad you enjoy it ^^

    If you read chapter 1 as well, you may get a better idea...
    Post by: DiZ The Wandering Soul, Apr 21, 2007 in forum: Archives
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    hey, it's your job to inform people when they're not following the rules ^^ completely understandable.
    Post by: DiZ The Wandering Soul, Apr 21, 2007 in forum: Archives
  8. DiZ The Wandering Soul
    oh...umm i'm sorry sir, I didn't know...my apologies
    Post by: DiZ The Wandering Soul, Apr 21, 2007 in forum: Archives
  9. DiZ The Wandering Soul
    eheheheheheheh....... well, what can I say, it's 1:00 AM, I sometimes mess up this early in the morning... this is actually the only time i've stayed up 'till 1:00 Am to work on somethin' >_>;

    and I'm glad you are enjoying this, as I am enjoying writing it. one question though, did I spell the first word to the Lucky charm Kairi gave Sora right?

    I spelled it Thalessa, I'm not exactly sure on it...


    nevermind, I was reading one of my Kingdom Hearts Manga books and found it, it's actually spelled, "Thalassa" I was off by one letter >_<
    Post by: DiZ The Wandering Soul, Apr 21, 2007 in forum: Archives
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    heheheheheh......gomennasai ^_^; I've been putting this off for waaaaaay too long. I've been up to my neck in all kinds of stuff recently, but now, at what? midnight? I finally have the time to get to work, I'm gonna hate myself in the morning for working on this at bloody midnight, but hey, might as well right? So, I hope you all enjoy this, tommarow though, I'm gonna be all like, "you better enjoy this!!!!!! :mad: :mad: :mad:" But, I digress, enjoy ^^


    Hating myself every second of this,
    DiZ



    Chapter 2: Jealousy



    Sora, after a nice hearty 3 plates of waffles, (AN: I still love waffles :D :p ) hopped into his boat and rowed out to the Islands. When he arrived, he saw Riku was already there, sitting in his usual tree.

    "Hey Riku!" Sora cried cheerfully from the pier.

    Riku simply glanced and continued to stare out upon the contently blue sea. Sora ran over from the pier, jumped into his tree and plopped down next to him. "Something wrong?"


    Riku shrugged, "Just thinking..."

    Sora shook his head and sighed, "I told you, you've been hanging out in darkness too long, you gotta start thinkin' positive." Sora smiled his pretty much trademarked smile (AN: I'm pretty sure Square Enix has the paperwork for it somewhere...:D ) Riku couldn't help but grin himself, "You're right Sora," Riku admitted.


    Sora grinned, then got serious, "So....what were you thinking about?"

    Riku shook his head, "It's nothing Sora, forget it." "Come on Riku! I wanna know!" Riku sighed, "Fine... It was about Kairi," As Riku began to explain, Kairi had just arrived to the Island, she ducked under the pier in order to overhear Riku. "Well, We both have kinda grasped the idea that Kairi like's us both yea?" Sora nodded. "Well, she has to pick one of us, and well, I was thinking about it, and she's probably gonna pick you." Sora almost jumped out of the tree, "No way Riku, you're just being modest." On the inside, Sora was practically screaming with excitement, If Riku thinks it, it's pretty much bound to happen! "No I'm being serious," Riku countered, "I mean, take some time to think about it. I turned to darkness while you stayed in the light, I gave myself up to Xehanort's Heartless, Then when she saw me, I always kept at a distance, to keep her from seeing my darkness. You were always on the side of light, she gave you her Thalassa Shell Lucky Charm, and you and her hit it off right after you first came to Hallow Bastion, you're pretty much bound to win her over."

    Sora sat in scilence as he took all of what his best friend said in. Kairi slowly crept away from the two and snuck into the Secret Place. She sat down under the picture of her and Sora giving each other Paopu Fruits and buried her head into her hands. This was becoming more and more complicated by the minute. Everything Riku said was true, but his darkness also made him so mysterious. Sure Sora was the Keyblade Master of the Light, and sure Sora kept true to his word about the lucky charm and coming back to her. She just didn't know who to pick. They were both great guys, it just made everything that much harder.


    Sora had taken his boat home to reflect on what Riku had said, well that's what he said anyway. Riku stayed in his tree, watching the tranquil blue waves lightly splash upon the shore. Why can't life be that easy? Riku thought. just splashing upon the shore, then leaving. It just repeats, nothing hurts, nothing changes, nothing confuses you, you just stay blue and do as life intended you for. He stared into his right hand, (AN: I think that's his sword hand, never could tell >_<) The hand that, under the influence of darkness, wrecked so many lives, killed so many, and destroyed so much. So why must I hurt? Why must I be confused? He sighed, Why Can't Kairi like me?



    She Can, A voice echoed out.

    Riku jumped up, his Souleater sprang into his hand, "Who said that? Where are you? Who are you?" He asked, halve controlled by hate, halve by fear.

    Merely one who walks the same path you do. It rang out again, One who walks the Road to the Dawn

    "What do you want?" Riku yelled, nearly blinded by fury that someone, or something was toying with him.


    You are Scared, One Can't be sure of what one is facing if one is blinded by fear. The voice chuckled, You Turned yourself to darkness, all in pursuit of escape, you escaped, and returned to your prison. So, what ambitions do you have now? hopes for Affection, for Friendship? For Love?


    Riku Growled, he could feel rage building up all in him.

    If one cannot have a ambition, a goal, if you will, then what is the point of existance? you have no point, no answer to questions if you have no leads to follow, no hope to obtain anything if you have no set destination. You have no chance of ever winning over Kairi...


    "Shut up!" Riku screamed.


    The voice chuckled, You may fear it, and refuse to believe it, but darkness still resides in your heart. You will hear from me again. A slight silouette of a figure appeared before Riku. In his rage swang his Souleater at the silouette, accomplishing nothing. He sighed as the Souleater disappeared from his hand. just who does that guy think he is!?!? Riku thought angerly, better question residing, who WAS that guy?


    Do you have a guess? betcha you don't!!! or do you??? ahh well, I'm done, and extremely tired.....*yawn* just use the poll, comment, and enjoy...


    I'm sleepy...
    DiZ
    Thread by: DiZ The Wandering Soul, Apr 21, 2007, 9 replies, in forum: Archives
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    Thanks ^^ I would've gotten out the chapter today, but I've been studying Japanese as of late, and I was copying some words for a bunch of my friends who wish to know some Japanese, I'm transforming them into little Japanese-Americans!!!:eek: :eek: :eek: but, never you fear, if I finish up tonight, I will try to get it done tommarow ^^:)


    Sayonarra! :D

    DiZ
    Post by: DiZ The Wandering Soul, Apr 18, 2007 in forum: Archives
  12. DiZ The Wandering Soul
    ahahahahahhaahaha!!! I like the end of the Second Secret Ending XD Wonder what he really WAS doing >_> ahahaha.... well all aside, you did good ^^

    also, if you could, keep a eye out for my chapter 2? I'm gonna try to get it out today...
    Post by: DiZ The Wandering Soul, Apr 18, 2007 in forum: Archives
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    sorry I never replied, it's been quite a while since I was last on.

    Ironic indeed, but your suggestion is greatly appreciated and I will be sure not to do that next time.

    thanks ^^ I'll try to get the next chapter up today ^^
    Post by: DiZ The Wandering Soul, Apr 18, 2007 in forum: Archives
  14. DiZ The Wandering Soul
    glad you enjoyed it, I intend to get a couple more comments before I begin to work on Chapter 2. Sora's Daydream is basically my every day dream, except not with Kairi, a Girl near where I live *blush*:o We don't know about Riku yet, and why should Kairi run? She has 2 awesome guys who like her, she's living the American dream! xD:D


    all aside, thanks, glad you like it so far! ^_^
    Post by: DiZ The Wandering Soul, Apr 15, 2007 in forum: Archives
  15. DiZ The Wandering Soul
    If it's ok, can somebody check out my new fan-fic? It's been 3 years since I've written one so I need to know how I can improve and if I did good.


    It's Called "A Kiss, a Lie, and a Deception"

    Here's the Link:http://kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9970
    Post by: DiZ The Wandering Soul, Apr 15, 2007 in forum: Archives
  16. DiZ The Wandering Soul
    glad you found it funny :p never meant it to though ^^;


    I never was very good at making it long, but i'm glad you like it :D:D:D
    Post by: DiZ The Wandering Soul, Apr 15, 2007 in forum: Archives
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    You're Awesome ^_^ Hope you like it ^^


    It's called "A Kiss, A Lie, and a Deception"
    Post by: DiZ The Wandering Soul, Apr 15, 2007 in forum: Archives
  18. DiZ The Wandering Soul
    It's Time I Reclaim my title as a Author! It's been about 3 years since I wrote a fanfic, and I say it's time I finally wrote another. So, now it's time for the usual intro, This is my first fanfic in 3 years so please, give me the straight facts, no being easy on me, I want true to heart feedback, Good and Bad right down to the bare bone.


    Disclaimer: I don't own Kingdom Hearts, Sora, Kairi, Riku, or ANYBODY, ANYTHING, or ANYPLACE from the Kingdom Hearts Universe. I Own the plot, and any charecter I make up. So no Sueing action, no flaming, and no "You suck, stop writing" Tell me what I'm doing wron please

    Arigato ^_^
    DiZ

    Chapter 1: Return

    ~Sora's Morning~

    Sora woke up that morning with a humongus yawn. It's so odd...being home, with no danger....and no Donald or Goofy waking me up with their usual nonsense. Sora chuckled, thinking about all the good and fun times they had on their quest. He jumped outa bed, looked in the mirror, and decided to leave his scraggly brown, pointy haired bedhead alone. He threw on his clothes that the 3 Fairy Godmothers gave him. He thought about all that had happened what Yen Sid had said. The Heartless and Nobodies were still around sure, they always will be, but as long as he was with Riku and Kairi, none of it really mattered to him. His next quest, he grinned, was to get his feelings across to Kairi, and maybe a kiss. Sora sighed happily at the thought of him and Kairi kissing.

    "Sora!" His mother called, "Breakfast is ready! Come on down my little hero!" Sora woke up from his little day-dream and rushed down the stairs to the inviting smell of waffles. (AN: yummy...I like waffles:p :D )

    ~Riku's Morning~


    Riku sat in his bed with a grimace. He had been up all night with the thought of darkness resting in his brain. So much had happened in so little time, He had opened the door to darkness, sided with Maleficent, Fought his best friend, Sided with the Heartless, Let Ansem take over him, Made Friends with the King of Disney Castle Got Trapped in the Realm of Darkness, Fought Members of the Orginazation, Captured Roxas for DiZ, Turned into Ansem, Turned back into himself, and Finally helped Sora defeat Xemnas. All that in 2 years (AN: I honestly don't know if that's correct....so don't blame me) He did a lot of bad, and a lot of good, turned from Darkness to Light, So what did that make him? Did it make him the like the Nobodies? Stuck in Twilight? He scratched his head confused. So many questions, so very little answeres...He looked at his Clock, 8:00 AM. He threw on his jacket over his shirt and walked outside to the Beach.



    ~Kairi's Morning~


    Kairi was a slow riser and woke up promptly at 8:00 AM. she rubbed the sleep out her eyes and smiled. Everyone was home at last, Sora and Riku were finally back at Destiny Islands with her. Tidus, Wakka, and Selphie were happy to see them back, but no more happy then Kairi. She was glad the two men of her dreams finally made it home, now comes the most difficult part, picking between the two of them. (AN: I know, I know, this is in most fan-fics, but it's a commen base, not my fault now is it ;)?) She Thought long and hard about their positive's and negative's. Sora was a righteous hero of the light, very laid-back, funny, and was always there for her, and when he wasn't, was searching for her. Riku was a mix of light and dark, making him very intruiging, was also looking for her when she lost her heart, was very stern and always stayed focus, and very deep. She liked them both almost equally, it made it THAT much harder to choose. She threw on her school clothes, grabbed her suitcase, and headed off. Just because she helped bring the two best friends who saved the world together doesn't mean she doesn't have to go to school of course.



    ~Somewhere Off~

    "Is it time yet?"

    "No Din, not yet, but the Orginazation will rise again, we just need to turn the Keyblade masters against each other."


    "How will we do that?"


    "We use the girl...of course, but we're going to have to have you start"


    "Yes Leader, of course."




    HAH!!! Chapter 1 done!!! please leave comments and feedback^_^


    Arigato
    DiZ
    Thread by: DiZ The Wandering Soul, Apr 15, 2007, 10 replies, in forum: Archives
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    I meant beside you -_-; but, your welcome ^^
    Post by: DiZ The Wandering Soul, Apr 15, 2007 in forum: Archives
  20. DiZ The Wandering Soul
    I like this Chapter as well, Roxas feeling bad though.....kinda weird for a nobody to FEEL anything :p well, you're doing good, keep it up!


    2nd Comment! WOOOOHOOOO!!!!!...sorry, i'm done now ^_^;


    Also, if possible, when i'm done, maybe you can check out my fic? I just need some run way, and maybe a good author's opinon will help ^^
    Post by: DiZ The Wandering Soul, Apr 15, 2007 in forum: Archives