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  1. valorwithinchaos
    "YUM! thanks cloud" she started eating her ramen,"this is good" she smiled
    Post by: valorwithinchaos, May 19, 2007 in forum: Retirement Home
  2. valorwithinchaos
    Hana stopped and laughed at Cloud and Quid, then noticed the ramen was falling through the sky, "NOOOO!" Hana jumped and catched the Ramen just before it hit the ground, she slid across the floor when she came to a stop she picked herself up, "the ramen is OK!" she annoced!
    Post by: valorwithinchaos, May 19, 2007 in forum: Retirement Home
  3. valorwithinchaos
    Axel used his chakrams against the Xemnas data but it wasn't helping much "Sora I think it is up to you!" he called to Sora
    Post by: valorwithinchaos, May 19, 2007 in forum: Retirement Home
  4. valorwithinchaos
    Hana looked blankly at Darkstar, "What was that!?" but before he could reply her stomach grumbled, "Let's go get something to eat guys.." she walked out from the cave and ran over to were Quid was standing with ramen
    OOC: ramen!:D
    Post by: valorwithinchaos, May 19, 2007 in forum: Retirement Home
  5. valorwithinchaos
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    Hi!!!

    Axel grabbed Yuuka before she hit the ground, still holding her he turned around to the hooded figure, "Your her brother?" he said stunned, "but I thought you died protecting Yuuka..." Axel trailed off
    "I lost my heart.." he said sadly
    "Everyone, meet number fourteen in the organisation" Xemnas smiled coldly at Yuuka, "hmph..that girl faints way to much,"
    Axel bit back a sharp reply, he better not get himself into anymore trouble. Xemnas walked out the door leaving the newest memeber standing there with them.
    "What's your name?" Roxas asked kindly
    Post by: valorwithinchaos, May 19, 2007 in forum: Retirement Home
  6. valorwithinchaos
    ...i LOVE your stories even the confusing chapters! :p must have more! i wish mine were this good... oh well pratice makes perfect... XD
    *patiently waits for nxt chapter*
    :D:D:D
    Post by: valorwithinchaos, May 19, 2007 in forum: Archives
  7. valorwithinchaos
    Hana walked next to Cloud and Rix, they were following Darkstar to a door he was talking about that could only be opened with fire.
    "We might need your magic to open the door" she said to Rix. She glanced over her shoulder to the hotel wondering if the other's were up
    "Hmm...I smell ramen" she smiled at Cloud.
    Post by: valorwithinchaos, May 19, 2007 in forum: Retirement Home
  8. valorwithinchaos
    Hellooo :D thanks for the comments they are much appreciated :D anyway here is chapter five within the next day as promised! i can't believe I was acctually able to keep that promise:p
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    Chapter Five: Befriending the Islanders

    Ashia followed Toru down the beach. They had finished breakfast and were now going to meet the islanders. The sun shined on Ashia’s shoulder length brown hair, it was such a nice day but Ashia didn’t notice, for some reason she had a weird feeling inside. She clutched her stomach. Toru heard her moan,
    “Are you ok?†he said turning back to face her
    “Yeah... Just nerves I guess.†She looked down at her stomach. “I don’t know whyâ€
    “You should be nervous...†he said uneasily.
    “How come you are so concerned about us meeting them?†She looked into his eyes, “What is it that you’re not telling me?†she said troubled
    “It’s just that were not like them so they may...be...uh...hostile towards us.†Toru looked at his feet then back up at Ashia.
    “Hostile?†Ashia laughed, “What’s not to like about us?†Ashia said making the freakiest face she could.
    Toru laughed, “I guess you’re rightâ€
    They walked on the water’s edge, the waves washing up over their feet.
    “Even if they don’t like us we still have each other, remember our destinies are intertwined?†Ashia said splashing Toru with water.
    “As if I could forget†He said splashing her.
    They walked in a comfortable silence, just enjoying each other’s company until Ashia spotted two figures a little further down.
    “Look!†Ashia pointed. She started running towards the figures, Toru close behind. She stopped running when she could she them properly, Toru almost ran into the back of her. The two figures were sitting on the edge of the pier; she approached them, the wood from the pier creaking underneath her shoes. They were both guys, about her age. One had spiky brown hair and the other had long silver hair. She walked closer, her heart racing. The brown haired person turned around and jumped up with a loud scream, the other one turned around too.
    “Don’t scare me like that!†The brown hair guy said puffing trying to catch his breath; he looked at her realising how regretful she looked, the other boy got up smiling.
    “Don’t listen to him, he is just a big baby†He said pushing the brown haired boy out of the way. He put his hand out to shake, “I’m Riku and this is Sora†Ashia shook his hand. Sora, recovered from the fright now had a large smile on his face. He shook Ashia’s hand.
    “Sorry about that, you just gave me a surprise...†he said laughing. Ashia laughed too.
    “My name’s Ashia†She said grinning, she didn’t understand why Toru was so worried, she looked around for him, she noticed him at the end of the pier hiding behind a bush.
    “I’ll be right back!†she said then ran over to where Toru was hiding, she pulled him out from behind the bush, “What are you doing?†she asked
    “I...uh dropped something.†He said lamely noticing Sora and Riku’s gaze. They both walked over to Ashia and Toru.
    “Hi there†they both said in unison.
    “Uh hi...I’m Toru†Toru said cautiously.
    “You been here long?†Riku asked eyeing Toru
    “Well I’m not sure about Toru but I’m new around here, only a couple of weeks†Ashia smiled, “It’s nice to finally meet some new people besides Toru.â€
    “Hey! I’m not that bad am I?†he said sticking his tongue out at Ashia.
    “Of course not! I was only joking†she laughed
    “I’ve never seen you around here so you must be new, right Toru?†Sora asked Toru
    “Yeah...new†Toru looked at his feet nervously; he wondered if they could sense how different he and Ashia were to them.
    Riku sat down at the end of the pier and Sora joined him,
    “Come sit guys!†Sora shouted over his shoulder. Ashia moved to sit next to them but Toru caught her arm and looked into her eyes, his eyes reflected a warning to Ashia but she just smiled and pulled him over to sit. The four of them sat there for the rest of the day talking but Ashia didn’t mention the fact that she had gone through darkness to get here to Toru’s relief. The sun was just setting when Riku stood up
    “It’s getting late, we better be off.†He said looking at Sora
    “Awww...do we have too?†Sora complained
    “Yeah do you really have to go?†Ashia chimed in.
    Riku looked out across the ocean to the main island, “We better be home before someone gets worried...†He said anxiously.
    “Okay....I guess we better go...†Sora whined, “Tomorrow we’ll bring Kairi to meet you guys.†He got up and they both waved goodbye and walked off down the beach towards their boats. Ashia turned to Toru when they were out of hearing range,
    “See that wasn’t so bad, I don’t know what you were so worried about†Ashia punched him softly in the arm, “Let’s head back†She said getting up and running down the beach, Toru followed. At that moment Riku turned to Sora,
    “Something just doesn’t feel right about those two.†He said plainly. Sora nodded and they travelled the rest of the way home in silence.
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    That's it.. hope you enjoyed it! :D :D In the next chapter they meet Kairi, Toru gets to bond with Sora and Riku, Ashia remembers more about her grandfather and she has a mysterious dream with a hooded figure! wow so much is happening.. don't miss it!:D
    Post by: valorwithinchaos, May 19, 2007 in forum: Archives
  9. valorwithinchaos
    Axel pushed ahead of everyone growing impatient, "So marluxia we meet again, will I have to try and rid the organistion of you again or are you willing to join us?"
    Post by: valorwithinchaos, May 18, 2007 in forum: Retirement Home
  10. valorwithinchaos
    Hana smiled at Cloud, "Nope...what was your dream about?.. that is if you want to talk about it" she hoped to get to know Cloud better before she found her way home..if she ever did. Darkstar appeared in front of them asking if they wanted to explore with him, "I'm up to it if Cloud is.." she smiled
    Post by: valorwithinchaos, May 18, 2007 in forum: Retirement Home
  11. valorwithinchaos
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    Hi!!!

    Axel was becoming nervous, if they were going to leave they would have to soon.
    "So Namine will you come with us?" Axel sighed
    Outside he could hear muffled talking, he strained to hear who it was, it was Xemnas ... Axel looked around for a way to block the door but before he could Xemnas flung the door open,
    "Hmm...how did I know I would find you all in here?.." Xemnas frowned at them then he turned to Yuuka and smiled evilly at her, "There is someone you should meet Yuuka"
    A hooded figure stepped out from behind Xemnas, he took of his hood to reveal...

    OOC: I thought that it would be an interesting twist to bring back her brother as a nobody...but it is up to you so I'll let you decide who the hooded figure is;):p
    Post by: valorwithinchaos, May 18, 2007 in forum: Retirement Home
  12. valorwithinchaos
    "oh ok!" she turned to go back to her room but decided that it was a waste since she couldn't sleep anyway so she went out and explored the town
    Post by: valorwithinchaos, May 17, 2007 in forum: Retirement Home
  13. valorwithinchaos
    Hi everyone I'm sooo sorry it took so long to post this but anyway here it is finally: chapter four:D oh and please comment/pm me thanks!:D
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    Chapter Four: Intertwined Destinies

    A few days had past, Toru had insisted on showing Ashia some basic fighting techniques before they went to meet new people.
    Toru huffed, “I think that’s enough for today, you’re really becoming rather good!†Toru lay in the warm sand, catching his breath.
    “Finally!†Ashia collapsed in the sand exhausted, “Does that mean we can meet the islanders soon?â€
    “Alright...we’ll go tomorrow†Toru got to his feet and walked over to the fire place. Night was just beginning to fall and it was growing cold. Ashia came over and rested on a plank of wood.
    “Can you use your trick to light the fire?†She looked at him blissfully.
    “I don’t know....â€Toru said teasingly
    “Oh c’mon!â€
    “Ok ok†Toru closed his eyes concentrating. He opened them suddenly, training them on two sticks; they lifted off the ground and began rubbing together rapidly. Sparks flew all around until a fire started, he slowly hovered the sticks back into the fire place.
    “Awesome!†Ashia said impressed. Toru just smiled and sat down. Ashia looked at the flickering fire.
    Unlock it...Unlock it.
    Ashia gasped.
    “What’s wrong?†Toru looked at her concerned.
    “Oh...nothing†Ashia looked away nervously. Am I losing my mind? She thought to herself. Toru and her sat by the fire talking until they both fell asleep under the stars.
    Toru squinted, it was morning already, today he promised to take Ashia to meet the islanders; he regretted that promise. He sensed movement beside him. He rolled over as Ashia opened her crystal clear blue eyes. He smiled at her; he was glad that she was the first thing he saw in the morning.
    “Good morning†he said
    Ashia smiled, “Morning†she sat up in the sand yawning, “We get to meet the islanders today†she spoke suddenly coming to life, she jumped up. Toru got up slowly.
    “Yeah...first let’s have breakfast...†Toru said trying to delay the meeting.
    “Ok, I’ll find something for breakfast!†She shouted over her shoulder as she ran down the beach looking for food. Toru sighed, she is really excited for this meeting but she doesn’t understand the danger, Toru thought to himself, I’ll just have to protect her if anything happens. Just then Ashia came running back.
    “I found some fruit!â€She held out a star shaped fruit to Toru.
    “Uh Ashia...that’s a paopu fruit...†Toru trailed off
    “So...what’s a paopu?†she asked confused
    “Nothing...†Toru looked at his feet then back at Ashia, “It’s just that it is said if two people share one their destinies become intertwined...they’ll remain a part of each other’s lives no matter what.â€
    Ashia laughed, “What’s so bad about that? I happen to enjoy your company but if you dislike me that much then I’ll have it all to myself†she said teasingly.
    “Uh...†Toru sighed, “I guess you’re right, and I enjoy your company too†Toru stuck his tongue out at Ashia and took a bite of the fruit.
    “To intertwined destinies!†Ashia smiled and took a bite.
    “To intertwined destinies†Toru agreed and they both finished the paopu fruit together.
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    hope you enjoyed that.. sorry it was so short... they haven’t even met the islanders yet but don’t worry they will in the next chapter!:p please comment /pm me thanks:D oh and I promise to post chapter five within the next day :D
    Post by: valorwithinchaos, May 17, 2007 in forum: Archives
  14. valorwithinchaos
    Hana lay in bed wide awake when she heard a crash from the next room (cloud falling out of bed) and cloud's muffled voice. She went and tapped on his door, "Cloud, are you alright?" she called through the door.
    Post by: valorwithinchaos, May 17, 2007 in forum: Retirement Home
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    Hi!!!

    Axel looked at Namine then at Yuuka, "I'll let you explain..." he said standing in the corner of the room with Roxas..
    Post by: valorwithinchaos, May 17, 2007 in forum: Retirement Home
  16. valorwithinchaos
    "Ok so everyones got their room" Hana said watching Rix give them some munny. She walked into the two bedroom apartment and went to her bedroom, she was exhausted after battling the heartless but she couldn't sleep so she just laid there waiting for morning...
    Post by: valorwithinchaos, May 17, 2007 in forum: Retirement Home
  17. valorwithinchaos
    Axel followed Zexion down the stairs and stopped at the locked door, "Now what?" axel said growing impatient and he was also nervous that Marluxia would show up any minute wanting revenge...
    Post by: valorwithinchaos, May 17, 2007 in forum: Retirement Home
  18. valorwithinchaos
    OOC: ive got to go sorry! :p

    BIC: Hana looked at the bag of cash shocked "Uh..ok but we should see what everyone else wants to do.." she turned around to the others
    Post by: valorwithinchaos, May 15, 2007 in forum: Retirement Home
  19. valorwithinchaos
    Hana looked down, "Yeah..." she said doubtful. She got back up and headed for the hotel calling over her shoulder for darkstar to join. When they got back to the hotel Hana collapsed in a chair exhausted.
    Post by: valorwithinchaos, May 15, 2007 in forum: Retirement Home