Hmm I have been told that the original version was better too, do you think I should try to put it into the poem contest?
Oh yeah and buy the way.... In school I'm taking Home Ed. and we have to do Sewing... lol so im gonna make a pillow dedicated to our family its gonna have XII on one side and Misfits on the other LOL
Hey i gotta go, stupid Math exam tomorrow, L8er
Hey, im back... and I am crazy off of adrenaline, sorry im really hyper cuz i just drove for the first time and almost hit my mom, its scared the crap out of me
Hmm, I have been sitting here for a while, i think I was being a lil babyish. I mean it was ONE little thing, although it was my second post.... Anyways, I will stay I suppose and not take things so seriously, WOW i was stupid, soz i gotta go too, ill B back by 10 i think
um ok, This is to be taken to no offence to the whole family, It nice and put together well, but I think I am leaving.... And i know people are gonna blast me for this, but yeah after my second post on the whole thread i get told to get lost, so um, I guess I'll take your advice so, if there is something formal I need to do, or whatever just tell me. Ok then Bye, ok i really am sorry, It is nice, and i have only been here for a few days, but obviously im not the kind of person belonging here or whatever.... I dunno, but yeah, l8er
ok then..... Bye
Talking about cloverfield Hey everyone, speaking of cloverfield, i just saw it bought 4 days ago.... I personally hated it. And my friend that saw it love it, there really is a bunch of different ideas. I thought it was great at first, Action, and special effects were great but, if you haven't seen it yet you will see why i hated it.... the ending
OK THanks this is great! I am active alot and I hope to stay for a long TIME! Except for right now becuz i sadly must get off! But if you dont mind, if you want check out my poem I wrote, i watnt o find out what people think to see if i should submit it in the contest, it is a thread i started! so YAY and WOOOOOH Wow that was corny
Rank: Darkest Brother ( i dont think thats taken LOL) Personality: Dark, hence the name Reason For Being Here: I've seen this family and it looks realy cool!
Hellow, i did a latest poem and i have gotten some critism, some good, some... not so good. SO! I have decided to redo it, i have decided to keep some of the parts you guys enjoyed and put in a few newer ones. The things i write about is stuff that happens to most people, including me, so i really hope it relates! Ok here it goes again! Hidden Love I really do Love you, I know you dont really care I know you wish i would just leave And you pray I just wasn't there Or atleast that is what i think But what do I really know? I wish i was a mind-reader, To see if you love me so... We had grown up together, We've known each other for years I know what you could say to me My eyes would swell up with tears My love for you must stay hidden, Behind the barred cage of my heart Our friendship is just too important My feelings can't be smart I want to tell you how i feel But what if you dont feel the same This deciscion bouncing back and forth Its just like some child's game So I just let go of all I feel, My once raised heart begins to sink, I want to let you know my love for you I guess I'm just afraid of what you think..... Tell me what you think!! Do you think I should submitt it to the poem contest? I might make some more, but it depends on what you guys think! TELL ME, and remember i am a new at the Poem writing.....
lol that was a great video, the voices matched with the vid very well. great job!
Hmm that is very strange, I didn't seem to have that problem. My book doesn't glow green either... now this is probably going to seem stupid but i must ask... R U POSOTIVE that u did all then things it is very important, if not it wont let you, also, try going back through the world for your fifth page, go through your items and everything. CHECK EVERYWHERE!!!! I hope that helped at all PEACE dude and i hope you get it figured out, have fun!
Riku has grown the most, Maturely and physically, HE is Taller, Stronger, Faster, Wiser.... hahaha Sora is still way too goofy, what age is he like 15? and he is all "Harrdy Harr HAR!"
Thank you dude, i rarely get good critism on my work, yeah i will try to work on my capitilization more, My teachers are always naggin my on it lol thx dude!
Yes now, i know there are a bunch of poems like this out here, and i am a beginner but please.... dont post a bunch of trash about it. PLZ! i know im a beginner it will stink! "HIDDEN LOVE" I want to tell you my feelings, I guess im just too scared afraid of what you'll think and say when im not there. my love for you must stay hidden, behind the barred cage of my heart our friendship is just too important my feelings can't be smart the destruction of my love, my heart is a battlefield to tell, or not to tell i decide for them to YIELD i want to tell you how i feel but what if you dont feel the same this deciscion bouncing back and forth its just like some child's game My hidden love is killing me its like a gun is ravaging inside my heart i start to gag, a feeling i can't shake then the pain begins to start so i just let go, of all i feel in my heart grows a kink i want you to like me But i'm just too afraid of what you think..... Please tell me what you think!!!
