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Hellow, this is called the Departed Souls, it is a small story i have been writing so tell me what you think, and i might continue on writing if you guys like, and if u havn't noticed i will use better grammer when writing the story... Ok here it is

Departed Souls​

Chapter 1=Giving up?/ Introductions ​

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Kiyoshi dodged to the left, right before the lazer blast burned a whole in the wall behind him. He quickly looked upward only in time to be hit in the head by a small rock. Stars ran in front of his eyes as he sat up, he rubbed his forehead where he had been hit. "Ow," he mumbled under his breath, he looked down and saw the rock that he had been hit by. He took it up and threw it at the Training Android that had shot at him. "Stupid Robots," he said, as the robot began to malfunction.

"Oh now, you aren't going to give up already Kiyoshi?" a voice said behind him. He turned around just in time to block the cardboard sword coming towards him. He unsheathed his fake sword also, swinging at the legs of the other boy. "Not a chance Leiko!" Kiyoshi shouted, nearly behing hit on the arm by the sword. He quickly jumped into the air doing a backflip off of the wall behind him landing behind Leiko. He quickly did a sidewards slash hitting Leiko making him fall to the ground. "You aren't going to give up already are you Leiko?" Kiyoshi had on a stone-hard face looking down at Leiko. They then both cried out in laughter, soon hiccuping so hard they felt as though they would puke. "You have been training haven't you Kiyoshi!?" Leiko remarked, "How did you possibly notice?" Kiyoshi said with a large smirk on his face. "Hmm, it might have had something to do with the fact that you did a backflip off a wall!"

Kiyoshi, a 14 year old boy had been best friends with Leiko since they were both in grade school, he was about 5ft 5 in, standing 3 inches smaller then Leiko. But that was only because Leiko was already sixteen, and more mature then Kiyoshi had been. Kiyoshi, had dark black eyes matching his somewhat lighter shade of black hair. It came down in small strands in front of his eyes, and almost in a spike at the top scalp of the back of his hair. His eyes, were very dark, almost matching his pupils. He had on a grey hooded sweater that also had black stripes crossing at his wrists. He had a checkered wristband and a black ring on his right hand ring finger. He had on baggy baige pants, with small cuffs at the bottom, becuase he would often step on them, and small brown skating shoes that were one size larger then he really needed, hence him tripping on them often. Leiko, had lighter brown hair but was much spikier and had a black highcollared longsleeve zip-up hooded sweater. He also wore baggy pants, but used his favorite color, wich just happened to be the same color as his hair (brown).

"Okay you ready to go, I'll pick up the cruiser!" Kiyoshi exclaimed as he and Leiko walked out of the training hall. "Hmm, I suppose but where is Mitsu?" "Whasn't she with you when I left to train?" Kiyoshi asked. "No!, she said she was going to find you and ask you something, we have to find her first before we leave!" Kiyoshi nodded and pointed to the left as if to tell him that he would search this way, and he should search the other. Kiyoshi walked to where he was pointing quietly sneaked across the metal floor of the warehouse. He slowly walked towards the shadow of what looked like 14 year old Mitsu. He slowly paced across and hid behind a stack of boxes, labeled " Souls Villiage." He slowly snuck up to the "shadow" and jumped out only to find that he had scared a pile of engines. Across the hangar was a starcruiser, able to transport anyone to any world that they would want to go. Kiyoshi, Leiko, Mitsu, and Suki had always dreamed of going to the different worlds, to have adventres in uknown vicinities, to meet strange and interesting people. Suki, the 17 year old girl, had stayed behind in town to help with the new shipment of lightREX, to add to the cities defences.

For the past 1000 years, they had been battling the darkness from taking the hearts and the souls of the citizens of more than 3000 worlds. But, the lightREX had been running out lately, the small white and silver orbs that protected just one huge world, was droping like a lead baloon in negative gravity. Soon, the dark would overtake all the worlds. The dark denizens had an endless supply of darkness as long as they controlled the world that held the light and the dark. As long as they controlled Rexus, they could develop any darkness they wanted. At the beginning of this war, the world Rexus was shared among all people, until a group of rebelious people, went anarchy and released all the darkness inside the world's core. Soon, all that was light, the people and the cities, were razed. But the dark ones lived on, the humans that used darkness to destroy the others were soon known as the Dark Denizens, or just the Dark Ones. Soon, the world was completely dark, there was no such thing as day-time,it was always night. Complete darkness hovered over the world. And now, the Dark Ones were spreading their darkness to the other worlds, destroying them one by one. But some worlds, such as "Souls Villiage," had no part in the war, or atleast so they thought......


Now as you may have seen, this chapter was just the introductions to the backgrounds of the characters, and the Dark Wars that have been going on. Yes, I promise you there would have been more action in the chapters to come but that is oly if you want me to keep going. have a few chapters saved in my folio, so just tell me what you thinkad if i should keep going ! Thanks

Hellow All!, I have made a few poems, so instead of having a bunch of poems spread out through the forums, I will have this small little, i dunno, "File" of my poems that I have written. I am a newer one of the poets with barely any experience with writing, but hey! I like writing my poems, so here is the one that I Actually submitted into the January Poem Contest, so I'll see how it turns out, this one is called "Hidden Love", and I hope you all like it! And if you have never read my poems they normally revolve around the life of teenagers around the world, so that the readers, (if teens) can relate easily, or if they are older!! Either way I hope you like 'em! Here it goes:

"Hidden Love"​

I want to tell you my feelings,
I guess I'm just too scared
Afraid of what you'll think
And say when I'm not there.

My love for you must stay hidden,
Behind the barred cage of my heart
Our friendship is just too important
My feelings can't be smart

The destruction of my love,
My heart is a battlefield
To tell, or not to tell
My feelings have got to yeild

Since we were born,
For, all these long years
I know what you could say to me
My eyes would swell with tears

I want to tell you how I feel
But what if you dont feel the same?
This deciscion bouncing back and forth
Its just like some child's game

My hidden love is killing me
Its like a gun is ravaging inside my heart
I start to gag, a feeling I can't shake
Then the pain begins to start

So I just let go, of all I feel
In my heart grows a kink
I want you to like me
But i'm just too afraid of what you think.....






Ok this is my first entry into my small little "File" of my poems.... tell me what uou us think and I might keep adding on to this file! L8er~ =P