Wuuuuuuuuuuuuuut
Not as good as mine? Yours is situated on a whole different level compared to my work, trust me. :3 I just read it, and it was extremely...
Excellent. Your prolouge was mysterious, intimidating, suspenseful, and you made no hesitations to draw the reader into the very-well structured plot line(from what I can see) And your writing style compliments this sensationally. I can't critique on that. It was just fantastic. I can't wait for more.
Ohai Skit.
Nancy The Tavern Wench - Alestorm
I lol'd. I'd like to see them do one of these for MGS4.
...Right. Okay then.
...That's sort've gotten Old.
Hai. Sorry about that thing I just did in the spam thread. xD Sort've went overboard.
Because...Um...Uh...Well now. *flees.*
I saw that coming. xD
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I really should post some of A.C.'s lyrics just to show that MSI are complete pussies who think they're cool
Wait...what.
My beautiful childhood has now been ruined. Baaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Please don't tell me that's supposed to be pikachu.
It's a conspiracy, I tell you.
Okay, It's time for critique-speculation-language-mode. o.o The entire banner has a lot of contrast, but too much of that can be a pretty bad thing, which is why you need to find a happy medium when making transitions to different colors. I see completely different colors on each sides, and then white and blue at the bottom, which shows variety, but really does not blend very well whatsoever. I suggest you find ways make the render blend into the banner, as all the colors surrounding it really do not go consistently. Also remove that spot of white light at the top. That just looks strange above all things. Needs improvement, but has potential. 6/10
We can all sleep easy now, knowing that we can take advantage of you yet again next year. <3 EDIT: Hell, we would even if you were a lesbian
And that is what your future daughter will look like if we don't abolish this world of Hannah Montana, and Zac Efron.
