Serioulsy. It'd be like, nobody dies. And people live 4ever.
I GUESS.. Well, everyone makes mistakes.
Okay it's gone. But, I did warn you, and it's not even that important. It wasnt going to be the main event of the next part.
Who said you were stabbed, who said it was your blood?
Thats not what I meant. And, nobody said you were dead, so you never know what could happen. Oh yeah, Phoenix Down does exist, but it only raises a character if they lose their HP, not if they are killed outside of battle, so it's ruled out here.
Oh, dont be so sure about that. There's other characters, you know.
Well, I spent almost all my 'ICTX11' class time writing these stories, and guess what, I have 36% in the class. The good thing is the semester is almost over, so I dont have to worry about trying to pass, because it is inevitable that I will fail. Oh well I guess. Pre-Story Part One Part Two Part Three Part Four Part Five KHViFFaNSSSbS Color Codes: Red = Notes for the readers convenience. Blue = Narration Regular = Dialogue Green = Other Characters: Warrior: Roxasvsriku Thief: Shadowjak Monk: Rosey White Mage: Catch the Rain Black Mage: Vivi's Dark Side Red Mage: Darkandroid King of Cornelia: no-reality_allowed Princess Sara: Mish Garland: Rat (Noobish boss that thinks hes amazing but he sucks) Matoya: Misty (Blind witch that need her crystal eye) Nerrick: kitty_mckechnie (Dwarf that needs TNT) Bahamut: Sara (Upgrades the party to their pwnage forms) Lich: ! (TCO) (Boss) Marilith: K a i r i (Boss) Kraken: Split (Now Pepto Bismol) (Boss) Tiamat: Laurence_Fox (Boss) Chaos: Deathspank (Tribute) (FINAL Boss) When I refer to THE PARTY that means RVR, SJ, ROSEY, CTR, VIVI, and DA --------- We left off again right after Vivi and Rosey officialy got together. The party just got kicked out of the Elfheim inn. RvR: Okay you two, dont let your relationship interfere with our quests here. Vivi & Rosey: We wont. SJ: So where to? RvR: How about that castle, lets see whats up. CtR: Lets go then. The party travels to Elfheim castle, and goes into a room where a young boy is in bed and a nurse is taking care of him. The entire time, Rosey and Vivi are holding hands. RvR: What's going on here? Nurse: This is the prince of Elfheim, he is under Astos curse. CtR: Is there anything we can do? Nurse: There is a cave to the south, and Astos hid the Prince's crown and Matoya's crystal eye there. SJ: Who's Matoya? Nurse: A blind witch that could possibly provide a herb to heal the Prince. RvR: So if we get the Prince's crown, and Matoya's crystal eye, we could cure the prince? Nurse: Yes. SJ: What would we get in return? Nurse: I dont know, but the Prince would be very grateful, and would give you something worthwhile. CtR: Lets do it! RvR: Okay. Rosey: As long as I can be with Vivi. SJ: Yeah, yeah, lets go find this cave. Nurse: Its called the Marsh cave, be careful. RvR: Dont worry, we're professionals. The party stops by the inn for a quick heal, but Rosey and Vivi decide they dont need it, so they stay up while the rest of the party has a quick nap. CtR wakes up before the rest of the party and sees Rosey and Vivi making out, but she pretends not to be awake, just so they could have their time together. By the time the rest of the party has woken up, Rosey and Vivi have stopped. As always, the party gets forcefully kicked out of the inn. RvR: Okay guys, lets head to the cave. SJ: Yeah, no time like now. The party leaves Elfheim. Rosey: Hey...guys... Rosey looks around 360 degrees. Rosey: Where's Vivi. A tear appears in Rosey's eye. RvR: I think we should go back, we need to find Vivi. SJ: Yeah, he wouldn't want to miss the fight. Rosey: Where's my Vivi? As the party traces their steps back to Elfheim, Rosey is frantic and she is turning a very pale white. CtR: Rosey, are you okay? Rosey: No, I..I dont know whats wrong with me, but I feel like I'm going to pass out. CtR: Just come over here and sit down. CtR and Rosey sit on a town bench. CtR: Whats wrong, Rosey? Rosey: Just the thought of Vivi missing makes me feel horrible. CtR: Dont worry, Vivi is fine. Just relax. Rosey: Okay, okay, I'll be fine now. Meanwhile... RvR: Vivi! Vivi? Where are you? SJ: I'll check the inn. RvR: Okay, me and Darkandroid will check the dark magic shop. At the inn. SJ: Hey, have you seen a guy wearing a yellow hat and blue robes? Innkeeper: Yeah, he just left. SJ: Did he say where he was going? Innkeeper: No. SJ: Oh great, better go tell the others. Over at the dark magic shop. RvR: Hey shopkeep, have you seen a guy wearing a yellow hat and blue robes? Shopkeeper: Yes, he's in the back room, but you might not want to go in there, he's in a meeting. RvR: Oh, really. With who? Shopkeeper: I dont know. RvR: Hmm. I think we need to go in there. Shopkeeper: I'm sorry, he has the key and I cant unlock it from this side, you'll have to wait until they come out. The door to the back room opens, and a character walks out, wearing a hooded black robe. RvR: Who are you? The person disappears in a cloud of black smoke. RvR: Oh great...now can I go into the back? Shopkeeper: Sure. RvR steps into the back room, and runs out screaming. DA: Was it something I said? Back with Rosey, CtR, SJ and newly arriving RvR and DA Rosey: Well? Anyhing? RvR: You...you dont want to know, its so, so bad. Ah... Rosey: WHAT? What happened to my Vivi?? RvR: I..I'm sorry Rosey, but you have to come with me. The party goes to the dark magic shop. Rosey: Whats going on here? RvR: In the back room, he's there. Rosey: Let me go in alone. CtR: No, let me come with you. Rosey: Okay, okay. RvR: I'm sorry Rosey... Rosey and CtR walk into the room, and Rosey looks down to see Vivi, on the floor, in a pool of blood, eyes rolled back into his head. He isnt breathing. Rosey: VIVI! No... Rosey quickly goes to Vivi's side. Rosey: What happened, who did this, I'll kill them... CtR joins Rosey at her side. CtR: Rosey, I dont know what to say, I'm sorry. Rosey: Vivi's dead, I..I...I cant...I dont know. CtR: Sorry, Rosey, there's nothing any of us could do. Rosey: But, what happened. Rosey is now crying full on. CtR: The only person who might know is Roxasvsriku. RvR walks in. RvR: What about me? Rosey: What happened to Vivi? RvR: The shopkeeper said he was in a meeting someone, and he couldn't get in, so when the door opened, a person emerged and disappeared, then I went in and saw Vivi. Rosey is hyperventilating. CtR: Rosey, calm down, please. Rosey: I..I cant...I need to find...this person...I have to kill him... RvR: He just disappeared, I couldnt do anything... Rosey: I will find him, I will have revenge.. To be continued...
On its way. >> << There may be an unexpected plot twist.
Sorry to burst your bubble, but Mish is only part of the storyline at the beginning, she doesn't show up again at all. Do I sound angry? Cause I'm not.
In all reality, there is no real reason for you to do these things, because I never broke any rules, and you cant Ban/Warn just because you want to. There's a little thing I like to call the Ignore List. You can legally do that once or twice, if you use mod powers to change my rep, then it becomes bad. All in all, I am not too scared. Just wait for the plot to thin out, or thicken. I dont know whats going to happen later in the story, you might break up next chapter, or something else could happen... Think SJ and Mish. It all depends on how I feel then.
Pfft Rosey, what are you going to do...ban me? ....... Oh snap, you can... ..... CHEESE IT! *Trail of dust appears when I run away*
One word to describe it. Insane. P.S. More epic than 300.
You cant steal MP but you can steal HP with Drain.
This looks shopped. I can tell from some of the pixels and from seeing quite a few shops in my time.
I was writing it next to my friend, and when I typed the "AWWW" I couldnt help but laugh because I knew thats excatly what you would do. He was like. "Why you laughing" So I told him and now its hilarious, and I'm going to stop typing now.
Let me correct my statement. I dont see you writing a story for free that I read. Also, I meant, LONGER than the other ones.
Hey, I dont see you writing a story for free.
Characters + Prep Part One Part Two Part Three Part Four KHViFFaNSSSbS I am giving you free entertainment, I wonder how you could repay me.... Color Codes: Red = Notes for the readers convenience. Blue = Narration Regular = Dialogue Green = Other Characters: Warrior: Roxasvsriku Thief: Shadowjak Monk: Rosey White Mage: Catch the Rain Black Mage: Vivi's Dark Side Red Mage: Darkandroid King of Cornelia: no-reality_allowed Princess Sara: Mish Garland: Rat (Noobish boss that thinks hes amazing but he sucks) Matoya: Misty (Blind witch that need her crystal eye) Nerrick: kitty_mckechnie (Dwarf that needs TNT) Bahamut: Sara (Upgrades the party to their pwnage forms) Lich: ! (TCO) (Boss) Marilith: K a i r i (Boss) Kraken: Split (Now Pepto Bismol) (Boss) Tiamat: Laurence_Fox (Boss) Chaos: Deathspank (Tribute) (FINAL Boss) When I refer to THE PARTY that means RVR, SJ, ROSEY, CTR, VIVI, and DA --------- We left off during a fight with pirates, at stake was a ship, 1500 gil, and DA. 4 Pirates are dead, and 5 are injured by lightning. Recently, Rosey has been embarrassed when her shirt fell apart, and she confessed to CtR about having a crush on Vivi. CtR: Okay Rosey, if you don't want, you don't have to fight the rest of the battle, we can take these guys. Rosey: Okay thanks, I cant go back out like this. CtR: Okay, well, before I go back...Cure. CtR places her hand on Rosey's wound, and it seals up, and stops bleeding. Rosey: Thanks, now go and kick some butt. CtR: We will. The REAL end between CtR and Rosey's personal conversation. Meanwhile, back in the fight. RvR: Where did CtR go? Oh well. The following is a battle, reader discretion is advised. RvR slashes a pirate to shreds. RvR: Hey hey, one hit kill. Vivi: No biggie, I've done that a few times. Fira. Vivi makes a dramatic movement with his hands towards the 4 remaining Pirates, and 3 get engulfed in flames and are reduced to dust. Vivi: Heh, three for one. SJ: I'll take the last one out. The final pirate jumps onto RvR and slashes his sword into RvR's back. RvR screams in pain and falls back. Then, SJ quickly slits the final pirates throat. CtR: Roxasvsriku! I'll help you! Cure! CtR waves her hands at RvR, but nothing happens. CtR: DANG, out of MP. DA: Dont worry, I can heal! Cure! DA touches RvR's wound. It stops bleeding, but is still open. End of Battle DA: See, I can help. Vivi: Meh, you barely did anything. RvR: Okay enough, lets just go to the inn. SJ: Okay Vivi, help me carry Roxasvsriku. Vivi: Sure. Vivi and SJ carry RvR to the inn, and the rest of the party follows. The party pays some gil, RvR gets healed, and they all sleep. The next morning, everyone wakes up and is shoved out of the inn. RvR: Thank you....not. SJ: Hah. Vivi: Can we get new spells and items now? RvR: Yes. Okay, lets go.. After a 20 minute trip they get new everything. RvR and SJ now wear Chainmail. RvR has a Rapier. SJ has a Short Sword. Rosey now has a new shirt, and its padded with leather, and new nunchuks. Vivi now has the power to cast Poison. CtR now has the power to cast Poisona. DA can cast Cure with no problems. RvR: So where to now? Rosey: Lets go check out our new boat. RvR: Good idea. They go to their new boat, just outside of Pravoka. CtR: Hey I can see a town from here. SJ: Where? CtR: All the way across the lake from here. RvR: Oh, I know that place, its called Elfheim Rosey: I say we go there. Vivi: Okay, lets set sail. After a long 6 hours of sailing, the party docks near Elfheim. Then they take another half hour to walk to the town. Rosey: I'm tired. RvR: Yeah, lets go sleep. SJ: Okay. As usual, they pay some cash, and sleep at the Elfheim Rosey cant sleep, so she gets up. Rosey: Ugh, whats wrong with me.. Rosey walks over to Vivi's bed and just stand over him staring down. Rosey: Vivi...wow, your so beautiful, why cant I talk to you. I...I lo.. Vivi calmly opens his eyes, and Rosey stops talking. They just stare into each others eyes. Rosey: Vivi, I.. Vivi uses his arms to push himself towards Rosey, and he kisses her. Then Rosey climbs into Vivi's bed and lays with him for the rest of the night. They SLEEP ONLY! Next morning, the party is awake before Rosey and Vivi, and they are all stareing at them. Then Vivi wakes up. Vivi: Why are you looking at me? Vivi sees Rosey next to him. Vivi: Oh, uhhh, oh. Rosey wakes up. Rosey: Whats going on? Vivi: I guess..uh..we are...uh... Rosey: Vivi, be my boyfriend.. Vivi: Oh, okay... CtR: AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! To be continued...
Saix: Tell Rosey just to let the story go on, and if she REALLY wants the relationship with Vivi to not exist, then she should PM me with a good reason why. Otherwise, it goes on. Romance always adds to the plot juicyness, and it makes people want to read on.
EL. OH. EL. Now I feel sorry for her, I mean, who would like Vivi....jk Just give the story a chance.
