ok, i absolutely HATE yaoi AND yuri
OoC: I am soooo sorry for not posting in a long time but i've been busy. sorry! ----------------------------------------------------------------- Wendy finally decided she was done eating her breakfast and got up. She enjoyed it even though it was burnt. Wow, I feel so happy today, she thought. Then she giggled, Too happy to even notice that I just ate burnt eggs. Then she realized that everyone had gone out of the kitchen. "uh...guys..?" she called out. She walked out of the kitchen and along the halls of the tremendous palace.
812 i'm sooooooo not bored
631 nope and nvm...i gotta get off the internet. WAAAAAAHH!!!! Dx
629 yeah, who is that?
597 yep...i agree
595 I don't
593 My PS2 memory card isn't working WAAAAAAA :(
I've never watched South Park, but I think Family Guy is better that the simpsons
591 I soooo don't wanna study...:(
apparently so... I'm guessing you're bored? I would never have the patience to do that
no, no i deffinitely win
499 i need microsoft frontpage
"yes, it's a pleasure," said Wendy. "wait...what's that smell?"
Wow, you're really nice, huh? good thing I'm not a fan
ok Sora's not that bad. He's actually pretty awesome! yeah, he can be pretty annoying at times, but overall, he's cool.
"yeah, I'm starving!" said Wendy, grabbing a plate and dishing some eggs up. "Well this is a surprise. I never expected to see you here!" Wendy then realized that Sora wasn't the only one in the kitchen. A tanned young man was also enjoying some eggs. "Who's he?" she whispered to Sora.
Wendy opened the large door leading out of her room. She walked along the hallway until she came upon a kitchen... "Sora!"
ok, that's good! i was totally freaked out...anyway good luck making progress!
Yeah, it's pretty good. And like Roxas said, you should use more adjectives. Describe the setting, the objects, feelings, characters, and such... I wanna read more!
