mouse or tablet? because this is actually pretty dope. the lighting really makes it. drop like, eight photo filters and a color balance with cyan/blue highlights and red/magenta/yellow shadows (because dropping said color balance would make the colors way terrific) and this could be reallllllly good.
some parts are too sharp, some are too blurry. you really need to fix that.
if it weren't for the stock, this would be like... the best signature ever. but I mean hell, I would wear it. also, cocohints is wayyy right.
Dark navy blue and sky blue gradient map set to multiply with opacity turned down a bit would totally make this into gold.
Colors are ugly, it looks like a sewer. Just drop a color balance on it. Everything else is great, though.
Looks nice. Doesn't really flow though, that's my only real problem with this. Also, I might consider leaving the border on only one side.
I made this last summer, it came out decent. Response was generally good, but it's obviously got problems. The main points I was trying to get across were how to create a general sense of flow in choosing how and where to place C4Ds, as well as various methods of touching up a sig.
I don't like the symmetry much in the first one. add something, probably in the middle, to blatantly (or at least not so subtly) disrupt the symmetry. colors are great though. text in third is reallllly good, grats.
Top one is nice, but you either need to make it more saturated or less saturated. It's at this awkward phase now, like a teen with pimples. And that's WAYYYY awkward.
WHERE IS THE CONTRAST. Honestly, this might be better if I could tell what the **** was going on.
Girls in general don't seem to like that. NOT THAT I'VE TRIED IT. ...but I watched it on youtube.
Way too much going on, no real focus, and the render doesn't really show :( As a result, there's no lighting or flow. Both are essential to all art. The text is pretty awful as well, but it's not as important. Sorry, not a fan of this one. :/
It's very nice. It's not oversharpened, by the way, most art is just undersharpened. Although, you do have some glaring small artifacts on top of the render, though I'm guessing it was just a low quality image in the first place. Kudos for using a light orange hue to match the purple, I love it when people know what they're doing with colors. I feel like there could be a bit more going on in the left, but still, once again, very nice. Side note: If you put a light white dot on top of his hand with a soft white brush (about 35px would probably do) and cut it up to make it look natural, that would probably be pretty amazing. ...y'know, like, he has this ball of... power.
Oh my god, very sharp. But there aren't any artifacts or discolorations, so that's good. Anyway, work on smoothing out the oversharpened parts of it and then work on adding some lighting and depth. A light color balance wouldn't hurt either.
It's nice. I mean, it could use some improvement. NO I'M KIDDING, it's very good. It could probably use some duotone though. I'm thinking dark red or magenta shadows?
this is actually pretty good for a first, looks like you have a good idea of rule of thirds and of lighting. the colors in regards to the render versus the sig itself contrast nicely, as red and green compliment each other well being opposites on the color spectrum. the text is subtle, and although it doesn't necessarily fit, I still feel obligated to give you some credit for that. honestly, I really think that you have potential. good luck in the future :)
I'm sure it's just a coincidence. OR IS IT?
Not so much a band; a friend of mine has a small studio set up down the road from where I'm at, we occasionally record some session work. We're going to put up some of our material. Thanks for all the comments, guys :)
Nice, vintage, I like :) I'm a huge fan of the whole dark solid color set to exclusion thing that's been going around.
As a sexy alien sent back in time, I find your baggage quite erotic.
