OH MY GOD! I effin think this is epic. Artstyle is handsome as ever. You really, honestly rule KHV graphics art section. +Reprepreprep
Oh my god. I am going through spasms. Vexen + action = elicits extreeme fangirl mode from me. Fangirl XTreme Mode Initialized. SQUEAL! You are GOD!!11111one....oh wait, you can't be God cause Vexen is....You are JESUS!!!1!one!! Okay, you go break now. Don't make me have to tuck you in....Loverboy. Haha. EDIT: I'm featuring this fic in my sig for awhile. Okay?
I'd love to see Rammstein or Moi Dix Mois.
Layout is beautiful. Colours are nice. It needs a picture that isn't so blurry and thi sis a pretty good sig.
I am now going to reserve the use of the name LoverBoy, when directed from me to someone, solely for Roxas, even in the clean fact that I barely know the guy. But once I get to know him, LoverBoy he shall be donned.
Person....
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So unfathomably adorable. Must....resist....chibis....
This is truely an epic signature.
VEXY! <3 Love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love... (x's infinity + 1). This story is amusing quite frankly. So much personality going on. Continue!
'I Can Eat it All' http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lRPPrS7kCVQ Wonderful funy song. "Mein Teil" http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QYsRCp6vWCw Beautiful video, beautiful lyricks. Wicked, strange, twisted. But beautiful.
Those colours really match well and have a definate direction. The text just screams at you while complimenting the focal point. Light source is very well placed. Keep it up.
Agreed. The rest of it is very pleasing to the eyes, but to make it more dynamic, place the stock off-centre just like was said.
Actually this is genius. It doesn't feel too top or bottom heavy due to the balance. The text is bold, simple, and gets a point across. The only thing I can truely say is perhaps do something to make the image or text pop out a bit, which can be easly done with some nice effects( nothing too over the top, though). Wonderful job.
Amen. The text is very hard to read. Other than that it looks fairly good.
The second one is definately your best of the three. Awesome job. No complaints here.
I rarely say this, but I actually do not like this one. The effects are too overdone and so it makes it a complete mess of sorts. Leave some of it alone with the smudge effects, quit playing with the sharpness of it and it will look decent.
You. Officially. Rule. Vexen did not deserve to die at all.
Doesn't matter to me. I have a kanji to romaji translator. I know some japanese, but the grammar transliteration is terrible with my knowlege and with most engine-translations. Ugh. I want this translation to stay as pure to the actual meaning as possible. With an engine translation and limited knowlege, I can't seem to quite get that. Which is why I need help. I'll gladly split up people by songs if I get more than one person who wishes to help.
NOT ENOUGH ACTION!!1!1!!!!1!one Just kidding. Great start. and i envy how godly you write dialogues I saw Vexen's name in there so I'm excited already. I hope he will make more appearances in this fic.
