Larxene flirted with Axel in Re:CoM and he didn't seem to respond. So I don't think it'd work out. Besides that, they both have strong personalities. It would be disatrous.
What do you mean, the spinning thing? The enegry core thing at the very last part? You are talking about "Assault of the Dreadnought," right? Well, if I assumed correctly... Here's my advice. Make teeny ships equipped with slash gummies. Make sure your slashes are charged up before you get there and let loose on the energy core thingy. I've only destroyed it once in about five or so tries, so good luck.
I'm going to love the multiplayer. Not only because I can play with my friends, but because it involves Organization XIII.
Yayz for happy endings! Yayz for Luxord/Xigbar stalker crack! :D
:bounce: AWESOME! *Watches three more times.*
Please, please, please, please, please, work on your spelling and grammar. It's difficult to read and understand the story because of it. Pretty much follow any direction silverhikari gave you, because I agree with that. If you fix up the spelling and grammar, I'll tell you what I think of the actual story. And I hope I don't sound mean, because I'm really not trying to be.
Ones I liked: The World That Never Was Twilight Town Hollow Bastion Ones I hated: Atlantica Hundred Acre Wood Pride Rock Halloween Town Space Paraniods Ones that aren't mentioned are somewhere in the middle. I really hated the Disney worlds in KH2, they really detracted from the plot.
I absolutely love Kairi and Namine's talks. Cracks me up every time. You're really good at this, and I'm still amazed at how you update so fast. Keep up the good work.
Sounds pretty cool, but you'd need some Organization cards to go with it.
I don't know exactly what we're choosing characters for... but I was overcome by fangurlishness and voted for Riku.
Well, I'll have to agree with Ryuuga for the most part. Nice job on thinking this all over, but there's really not enough facts to support Aqua as the 14th member. Besides, I really want some new female characters. There's not enough girl power in Kingdom Hearts. How can you explain that the 14th member looks younger than Aqua did 10 years before the Organization was created? And I also think that the Keyblade thing is starting to get overused. They're handing out Keyblades left and right now, and the game needs to keep the number of weilders down. Also on the note of Keyblades, why would Xemnas induct Roxas into the Organization if he knew that he was getting another Keyblade weilder sometime soon? It's stated that Xemnas only let Roxas in because he could slay Heartless and help with the completion of Kingdom Hearts. Anyway, sorry to ruin your work, but I really don't think she's Aqua.
LOL, this is a good one, Foxxie. It's nice to read more awesome Luxord/Xigbar crack hilarity. Wow, that was a lot of adjectives.
The skateboarding just takes some practice, it's the easiest. Cargo Climb also just takes practice. And it doesn't hurt to have Negative Combo. The one where you hit the ball, just have Aerial Sweep and Aerial Spiral. For Junk Sweep, you have to have Negative Combo and Fenrir equipped, then it's a piece of cake. Bumble Buster just takes practice. I used Thundaga a lot. And I still haven't beaten Poster Duty, so I can't help you there... Sorry.
I loved the gummi ships. A definite improvement from KH1, and fun enough to have a game all to themselves.
Nice job. There's some plot development in here. Marluxia let a few things slip. ;) Nice job, like I said. No big grammatical errors. Keep up the good work. And just a little note--WOW, you're fast with teh updatez.
Nice job. The only major error I noticed was the last paragraph. It was in present tense, which didn't fit with the rest of the chapter (which was in past tense of course.) Great job, though. This is one of my favorite fanfics.
Ultima Weapon. Fenrir is nice, but I don't like the ability it comes with as much.
Ugh, not a keyblade. I'll agree with you there. It would just be overused. KEYBLADES FOR EVERYONE!
Ah, the PSAT. I'm taking it too. Good luck with History. [/spam]
Lessee... This is of course after I get over my initial "O.o" reaction of seeing a fictional character in real life. Sora-I'd yell "SERIAL KILLER!" and run off Roxas-Meh, I don't like Roxas that much Riku-*Glomps.* << >> Kairi-I dunno, say "Hi" I guess Namine-Compare drawings Axel-Follow him around saying "Got it memorized?" constantly Umm... am I forgetting anyone important? I think that's it.
