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I'd keep the ending the same, there's nothing that should be given or taken.

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It looks great! Your bus ride must be non-bumpy to be able to draw that on it.

No, more Square would make it too much like Final Fantasy. I would just like them to take out some of the cheesy Disney moments in the game.

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Not bad! The only things I can see are perhpas bringing the left side of her hair away from her neck more, and erasing the guidelines once you're finished. There's a part of her hair near the face that kind of looks like it's in her mouth, so maybe make that part of the hair shorter. Keep working on it =]

I remember reading that book, and I liked it. I've never seen the movie though.

Save the picture, then upload it on Imageshack. Take the code it gives you for forums and paste it into the text box in the 'edit your signature' page. It should work that way.

No, I think it's considered a wafer.

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The shoulders are off proportion wise, one is smaller than the other. Extending them out and making them not as sloped, more of a joint like cocohints said would help there. The sling looks too far near the edge of the shoulder, move it up towards the neck more. Her hand in the sling looks like it's been turned outwards, the thumb would be pointing towards the body, not down. The line of her body is a bit off, making it straighter would look good. Her hips are quite low, they would start around where the corset ends.
Finding a good referance picture of her would help so much with drawing it, make sure you have one if you plan on redoing it.

I used to watch Gargoyles and Pepper Ann, and I think there was a show about the little mermaid I used to watch as well.

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I see that you removed the lines around the picture, but you should still never draw on lined paper.

The head is much too big for the body. The shoulders should be wider, since he looks squished around there. The body should also be larger, make sure it's proportionate with the head and shoulders. The way he's holding the sword is awkward looking, it seems like he's turning his arm in towards his body. Try drawing it with the sword pointing out, or in a left direction, with the hand turned sideways. His legs are too small as well, they should be longer and wider near his hips. His feet are too small and too square shaped, they should be more of an elongated oval. Perhaps find some shoe referacnes you could follow. His eyes are very dark, the white reflection part should be bigger, and although it is supposed to be like an anime character, there should be more parts to the eye like in realistic eyes. Here's a good eye tutorial that you can follow or change to your preferance: http://www.geocities.com/omuniversity/eyes/eyes.htm You have a good start, keep practicing!

I'd love it if she could be in the party, since I'm sick of the 'damsel in distress' role they gave her.

It's not bad, but Axel does look too young compared to how he looks in the game. His eyes are smaller and not as young looking. You seem to have the right idea for thier hair, but it would help to find a picture of them in the manga and follow along with the way Shiro Amano draws it. His head is also too young looking, it should be bigger and slimmer. You have a nice start on the comic, but the hair and faces need some work, especially Axel's again. I agree with Cocohints about planning and organizing your comic panels, it would help with the comic, and writing out a storyline before drawing the rest would be very helpful.

The heartless and boss cards do different things to you or the enemy, for example the Vexen card gives you an extra life in a battle. You have to press select during a battle to show the enemy cards you have equipped.