OoC: A little unrealistic for Saw, but whatever.
OoC: I doubt Jigsaw would actually have separate rooms for his guests. Have you seen any of the movies? He would never be that generous. If any of them is ever alone in a room, it's only because they're trapped in another one of his 'games'.
A food section? Already a rejected idea, and shouldn't be brought back up.
"I'm Jake. Jake Masters." Jake said with a small grin. He looked at the girl who had been looking for Jacky. "Don't worry about it. It was no problem."
Darren followed as well, but didn't like the look of the room. The lights flickered, and the walls were stained. Not only that, but every time he breathed, he felt a little more dizzy. "I-I'm gonna get s-some rest." he said with a few coughs, leaning against the wall.
I like the colors, but it's a little too bright at her left. A big flash like that can be pretty distracting from the sig as a whole. A different font would be nice, too. All in all, it's a decent sig that could use a little improving. :)
This is pretty well improved, even though the other one was good too. Nice job. Keep working on your sigs, though. :)
A girl was running down the street, screaming out "Jacky". "I'm gonna guess that's you." Jake said with a chuckle to the little boy. He went up to the girl and handed Jacky to her. "I believe this little guy's yours." he said. Kneeling down, Jake spoke to Jacky and ruffled his hair. "Here's a tip, Jacky: Try not running towards gunshots. It'll do you wonders."
There was a knock at the door. "Guess who?" a voice said. The door opened and Michael stood there, not even showing a mark of the accident which had happened during the year. "Haven't seen you guys in...well...forever!"
Nice job. Simple, but cool.
That is pretty cool. As said by Renegade, empty top left corner is distracting, but that's small and it can be fixed. Good job. :)
5/10 I must say, I like the idea. The whole Roxas, Axel, and Xion thing intrigues me. However, the sig itself isn't all that great. There's a little too much red. It almost makes it seem as if you're saying Axel is more dominant. I can see a white outline around Xion, so you might want to fix that. As a matter of fact, try using another picture of her, 'cause that one doesn't work very well and it's outstretched. Use a different picture of Roxas, too. Not only because I don't like that picture, but because you already used it for one sig. Enough is enough. And the entire sig is way too wide. Shrink it to a normal width. Lastly, soften it up a bit. It'll look way cooler. Well, that's all I have to say. Keep trying. :)
OoC: Eh...perhaps a call from Jigsaw telling them that there's a secret passageway which will lead them somewhere else, but at a price? Well, that's actually basically what happens over and over again in every saw movie. xD How about our characters just rest like Azure's is doing?
Darren grabbed the antidote, his hand slightly shaking as he thought of the figure. They were being watched. "Well, what are we gonna do next?" he asked as he finished drinking some. "We can't stay here, that's for sure."
Darren leaned back slightly, then glanced at a dark corner of the room. He could see what appeared to be a cheek with a target on it. Narrowing his eyes, Darren could make out to dark eyes and a mouth... "G-Guys..." he stuttered, blinking a few times as the figure disappeared.
Darren sighed and stood up. "This has to be fast..." he said, looking around. "That puppet guy will make his next move at any time..."
Did someone say Jim Carry? I.Will.See.It. >> << I've seen all of his movies so far... =]
Darren was beginning to get tired of Jacob paying attention to no one but the girl. "And what about us, Romeo?" he asked, staring at the potions.
Three Days Grace, Kanye West, Rise Against, Lil Wayne, Linkin Park, T.I, Sum 41, Skillet, and much more... Yes, weird combination. ;)
"It's like a game of 'Find the Hay in the Needle Stack'" Darren chuckled to himself, preparing to go in. "Except, with a more important prize..." Quickly, he slid himself into the pile of needles and searched. Scratch marks were all over his arms, along with needles. When the girl found a box, he climbed out and laid down.
