Hearing the voice of a young man, Zexion turned his head to see a small boy, staring at him in confusion. Hearing the woman speak, he turned to look back at her, as she began to speak, while handing him a vial of green liquid. As he enclosed his hand around it, he placed his fingers over Vexen's, as he stood up straighter. "My name is Zexion," he answered, as a suave smile came to his lips. "A pleasure to meet such a beautiful lady as yourself..." Slowly, so their fingers would slide against each other, Zexion withdrew his hand, taking the vial with him. Glancing at it, he frowned. "Must I really drink this...?"
That's The Chosen One, I think? Well...um...happy birthday if it is!
Ah, smoking is so terrible for the health...no one ought to smoke, because it can give diseases, cancer, and damage to the lungs...I once saw a woman, whose lungs became so bad, she had to have an actual hole in her throat in order to breath...and I'm not kidding...
Aku...roku...ahh...I may be an (half) Axel fangirl...but I just don't like AkuRoku...
That's terrible...how could the government allow this...?
Thanks! And well, I do write a lot of depressing poems...at least I think so...I have to go check. XD But anyway, to me, I like depressing poems better as well...they just have more feeling and impact...but then again, happy poems cheer you up, and I like that a lot...lol Anyway, thanks, I'm glad you like it! :D :glomp:
Hmm...in Elfen Lied, Kouta can be a bit annoying sometimes...and Akane from Ranma 1/2, but otherwise, none of the characters from the other anime are all that annoying/frustrating. Although if you put together some of the English voices for the anime, they can turn annoying...like Usagi from Sailor Moon, the entire cast of Sonic X, most of the characters of Yu-gi-oh, etc. However, the characters themselves aren't really that annoying...although voice is very important, since it's the core of the character and really displays their personality.
I don't think it's ever too old to watch anime...I mean, why does there need to be an age limit on it? It's not like anime is childish...at least not all of them. lol
I suppose foxes are orange-red. lol Although they'd probably have to prey on their food, and run from hunters...even in the wild...
Well, take your time - as long as you don't just give up! :glomp:
You edit the post, and then "go advanced". It should be easy from there. :)
In the updates section, there's also some new scans of the manga, but if you pm eastercat, she can give some to you. :) Oh, and the link TF has is good too for the first chapter!
This is certainly interesting...at first, I thought the KHII manga wasn't going too be too interesting, since it'd be almost like an exact copy of the KHII game. However, seeing Vexen is a definite twist...although it's a possiblity it's just a sidestory, a past memory, an illusion, a replica, etc. However, I never know until I read to find out. XD
Hmm...actually...you ought to change this title...make it so that anyone depressed can go here, and anyone can cheer him/her up! :)
This is a good poem...but this was written in the past, right? Everything's okay now...?
Very nice..although you accidentally misspelled 'thought', and "eyes" and "kisses" shouldn't have an apostrophe...anyhow, this is a great poem. It was beautiful and very touching...I'm glad to see Dinesty liked it and feels cheered up. :)
Your writing was actually very good, with only a few corrections needed (which I modified, colored with white). Basically, be careful not to have run-on sentences, or end half of it with a comma. It makes the reader pause, as if the next part will be another sentence, but put by itself, it's not complete. Anyhow, as for writer's block...listening to music can help, and reading a book/manga, watching a show/anime, and playing video games can help jog the memory. As for some ideas...you'll have to tell me what you got planned so far... I hope that helps. :) And Kairi2011, give me some time, and I'll check out your fanfic to try to help!
Hmm...if I had to choose...uh...I guess a monkey. They have the most freedom (out in the wild) and they'd have fun...and I can hang out with you, TF! :D lol
Hey, I like the story...the grammar and spelling's pretty good, and the story's already intriguing. Please continue it. :) Don't let anyone bring you down...I mean, he might have said it harshly, but I think he was only trying to help...to fix it, just say this is Death Note in an alternate universe, it'll make more sense! So please...continue this. I'm sure MadiYasha and the darkness consumes you will want you to as well. :)
Thanks, glad you like it! :glomp:
