Hi. Hiya..Hey. ( And there's more greetings)
Ah I see. Now to say truthfully, that was a mean joke. Thing's could've gotten farther or serious. But glad you're back again.
It's good to keep yourself distracted. As did my parents split up a year ago, which I'm not forgiving nor' forgetting. But, keeping youself distracted could be good. Think about the postive side until your trip arrives. But because they're split up, life goes on. You may not forget what happened but still some have to move on. Thnik positive on other stuff.
This is good. After reading both chapters, I'm beginning to like this story you've created. Keep it up.
I see. It is hard hearing the loss of someone. So I hope the days get better for you, TK 421.
Still it's going good, I'm liking that previous chapter. :)
Not sure if anyone watched it but..it's a good show. I like the gun parts and action taken in. Get's me excited to see what'll happen next.
Well the first time I watched it, well I laughed because it was funny. But most of the skits sometimes went a little too far. But I still like the show, espically the star wars and gummi bear one.
Em...for today. Day one. All periods are an hour so..yesh. Period 1: Eagles Essentials Period 2: Core French Period 3: Math LUNCH Period 4: Music Period 5: Science But because it was the first day, all we did was introduce ourselves and talk about the rules and expectations.
Yay! They're coming in Canadian threatres, hopefully I'll get the chance to watch it.
Keep it up, Xaale. I'm liking this so far. Great work *thumbs up*
Um... I'd say in FFII the third boss you had to fight in the castle..when it was all fire-y. I forgot it's name but it freaked me out, my fingers were sweating from holding the DS, I was creeped out when the battle was beginning. o_O.
It looks pretty cool. I like it. (thumbs up)
Well this was good. This should be moved to the Original Section, but here in his section is good too. Hopefully this could continue, I'm wondering what's going to happen next.
I found nothing wrong with it. I could actually image this whole thing happening. Grammar and spellings were okay. I actually like the beginning. Seeing how it slowly paces itself in a scene, this is very good. Keep it up.
I'm back with the new chapter. Sorry for postponing the chapter to Sunday, I was lazy and tired of some complaints. So yeah, my apologies. Anyways, here is the new chapter and 1,000 views already. Thanks for viewing the thread KHRtE. Kingdom Hearts Returns to Earth Chapter 5: Far HB. Muxene landed on the ground, dirtying her shoes. “ Just got these today…†Muxene mumbled under her breath, she looked up ahead of her trail. Just plains pine tree’s and bushes. “ Oh well.†She grinned, holding her books in her hand she walked along the trail. As Muxene walked, the trail turned darker for some reason. Perhaps it was the heartless slowly approaching or maybe it just turned like that. “ No Muxene, it’s not really like that…†Hexia narrowed her eyes, looking at another direction. Muxene shrugged and then came to a complete stop. “ It’s not really like that?†she asked, Hexia nodded. “ I mean, it is a big deal for your shoes! Soon they’ll be ripped apart and who knows! Maybe we might walk over twigs and branches and you could get a splinter!†Hexia freaked out. Muxene laughed at Hexia, all talkative. Hexia glared at her dear friend and then laughed along. It was kind of funny, over reacting and thinking up ahead. “ Laughing much?†asked a deep robotic voice. Hexia and Muxene looked up. They saw a heartless, 5 foot tall and twenty inches long. Both females began to sweat from forehead to feet. The heartless had yellow bulgy eyes and metal arms . It’s chest has a heart mark with an X blocking it. “ Oh great, after fighting this many heartless back there…†“ We have to fight one more. The big boss.†Muxene sarcastically said. Hexia released her weapon out. She stared at the heartless, it looked pretty powerful. “ I have to let you know. You two females don’t know nothing about Kingdom Hearts-“ “ We’ve played the game.†Hexia said, tapping her index finger on her noggin. “ A game? Well, still… you two know nothing about Kingdom Hearts. I could tell you, but then that would give the surprise away.†He laughed. Hexia ran over to the heartless using the magic fire on to the enemy. Muxene followed, she ran behind, jumped in the air, spinning. “ Slam!†Muxene yelled out. Her body was still spinning but coming down. She was like a nail, drilled in to the wall. The heartless looked up, he felt some pain but then afterwards, he grabbed Muxene’s leg, throwing her in the air. “ Muxene-“ “ Quiet child. Your friend won’t be harmed anymore. Heck there will be no harm.†“ What do you mean!?†Hexia took a looked at her best friend laying on the ground, eyes closed. “ I mean that she’s dead.†He grinned. * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * A fifteen year old male, walked down the alley in the streets, lost and furious. He wore a black and red DC hoodie, ripped Hollister jeans and Etnies shoes. His hair was the shape as Riku’s except, black color. Down in California, is was beginning to get dark, perhaps it was going to rain. “ My feet are sore..†Kevin sighed. Kevin was his name. He came from another world, there in Earth. He came to seek for Maleficent. His world is gone, all his friends, hometown. It’s all gone. A year ago, when it all began… Kevin was sucked right in to the dark realm. He remained there for a year, he now returns but ends up on planet Earth. As Kevin walked a group of heartless’ appeared out from the ground. He gasped, quickly releasing his Keyblade: Acrossing two. Kevin jumped over the group, turning around he struck his keyblade out bringing the magic of darkness out. It warped out, shunning out some heartless. “ Hmm.. not bad..†Kevin said to himself. Kevin looked around, seeing more heartless appear. He double dodge the two heartless’ charging for him. Afterwards, threw his keyblade like a boomerang, making the two disappear. From the looks of it, there seemed to be no more but the Boss. The Boss was 8 feet tall, it’s body was colored green allover. Kevin looked at the heartless, he knew what his next move was going to be. Slowly he walked. Approaching the heartless slowly. The boss sniffed the air, it was sense of some sort of light wrapping around the boy. “ Double merge.†He clenched his fist. Four replica’s of Kevin appeared. One went to the back of the heartless, the second headed to the air, Kevin and the last replica stood together, forming a green ball. “ Charge!†he demanded, the one from the air came down, snapping the heartless’ head, the other came from behind knocking the heartless down. The last replica released out a strong green force fall. Landing on the heartless it exploded on to him. Right away is faded away. A weak boss is just a shadow. Kevin turned around, he heard a rattle from the roofs of the buildings. Kevin high jumped to the roof, finding a bum mooning him. “ Ha, Maleficent will be delighted to hear that I , Pete has planted all HB!†Pete laughed. “ Did you say… Maleficent?†Kevin walked closer to the dog. Pete stopped, his ears perked up, hearing the sound of a male’s voice coming from behind. He turned around and looked at Kevin. “ Yeah I said Maleficent now but out!†Pete said, brushing his hand in the air. Kevin shook his head, he walked up to Pete, smacking the back of his head. “ Where is she? And what’s HB?†Kevin asked. Pete grumbled and stood in front of the curious teen. “ Maleficent is out in Hollow Bation and HB stand for Heartless Bomb.†Pete answered quickly. “ And… HB does…what?†Kevin asked, smirking. “ It explodes after it’s set. Then they burst with millions of heartless flying out to Earth. It’s a perfect thing to do instead of summoning!†Pete grinned, rubbing his hand together. Quickly, Pete snapped his two fingers together, summoning seven shadows. Kevin steadied himself, he stood still. Waiting for a heartless to approach. Pete summoned some more heartless’, with that he took one heartless giving it something hidden. Kevin threw his keyblade out to the heartless, attacking them in a group, fading. Pete chuckled and gave a wave to Kevin, leaving him behind all by himself now. The teenager looked around, he bit his lips. Pete was gone and he didn’t received enough answers. ~~ ~~~ ~~~~ “ Fool! You gave him out answers! But, anyways… since you’ve already blabbed half did you place it on him?†“ Oh yes ma’m! A commanded a heartless to do the job for me.†“ Truly, that was smart of you, but not smart enough.†“Hmph†“ If he says a word about anything, hell receive the shocking of death… warning number one.†An electric wave came up from the wrist band, shocking Kevin as if he was a metal pole standing in the rain. Kevin’s eyes widened as he felt the pain surrounding his body. * * * * * ** * * * * * * A wave of musical notes pounded through the air, hitting the heartless’ with the off tune. The heartless’ fell to the ground, flat. As more musical notes, they began to disappear in the darkness. Although more heartless’ appeared still coming at the male. “ Take this!†he said, whamming his fingers on to his weapon, notes printed themselves out in to mid air, popping in the off tune line. All heartless disappeared, now it was silent and lonely. The teenage male wiped bits of sweat drops off his forehead, he smiled. " I'm finally finished." he happily sighed. Looking around he saw nothing but the darkness, disappearing. The first thing to notice the teenager, was hsis acoustic guitar. There in his hands, firmly holding it still and properly. His name was Omar. Omar has red hair and blue eyes. Omar has a white open blouse, matching his short, they were brown. He wore a bandana on his forehead. Behind that bandana was a scar and it was permanent. " I'm here to fight the heartless and shine them off with light. After all, I did defeat five bosses all on my own!" he lightened up, with his eyes glowly. " How about me?" said a dark voice. Omar turned around, standing five steps away from him was a man in a purple cape with dark green hair. " Who're you?" he asked, raising one side of his eye brow. " I'm 67. Created by Maleficent." he said. By the looks of him, he seemed to have no emotion running through his fake blood. " 67? That's a number." Omar pointed out, staring down at 67. " I know. And it's not my choice to choose my name, it's my master. Now-" 67 raised his arm, appearing came a metal three branched band, wrapping around his whole left arm. He jumped in to the air, a dark warp came around the background, changing the background to a dark place. It was all covered in purple and black. Omar couldn't see a thing, he looked around trying to get a view. He released his keyblade, charming melodies and acoustic. When suddenly, a warm air came up Omar's neck. " I'm here to eliminate you, Omar." he whispered. * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * " Ah!" the heartless screamed out in pain. Kathy walked up to the heartless, striking her oathkeeper to the side hitting the heartless. " You're not human!" the heartless yelled out. Kathy smirked and put her hand on her hip. " And what makes you think that I'm not human, huh?" Kathy asked, loading her hand for an up coming attack. " Why are you fighting me huh? Humans don't fight but fret and regret. What your doing to risking your life- you don't understand much feelings do you? I bet you never felt anything, with that stupid attitude-" Kathy, smacked the heartless across the face. Her eyes were filled with liquid, she held her breath for a moment. Both stared at eachother. " You don't understand my pain. I lost my mom! No one will understand. When you lose someone, a part of you breaks up. Your heart tries to keep you together, but you're just ripping yourself apart!" Kathy yelled with a struggled voice. The heartless looked away and then put his hand to the ground. "Rumble." he commanded. The ground shook like an earthquake. Kathy fell on to her bum, still the ground rumbled. " We used to have feelings, but darkness took over us-" "You had a chance. A chance to fight." Kathy said, throwing her oathkeeper on the heartless' back. * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * His name was Jerry, but most called him 'J'. It was much like a nickname. He had black spikey hair, blue eyes. The clothings he wore was a black t-shirt, grey army pants and black shoes. Down in NewYork's main, there was Jerry with his weapon.His Katana's. Swiftly, he slashed all the heartless' that his weapon met with. " Take that darkness." he said, burning one heartless in to failing ashes. Most heartless disappeared. All that was left was the boss. It was somewhere lurking around the buildings or streets. " Come on out. So I can fight you and win this damn battle." Jerry said, looking over his shoulder. " Heh, you're pretty brave to say that stuff." said the heartless appearing from the one of the buildings. " Pretty brave. I am. Now let's fight." Jerry said, calmly standing. He steadied his weapon, moving in to his position to attack the heartless. " If I win, you'll fade and never come back. And if I lose-" "You join us." the heartless grinned. " Yeah, your way." he grinned also. Jerry jumped to the other side. Quickly he ran over to the heartless beating his back with one hit. The heartless whined abit but stopped. He looked over at Jerry. The heartless scanned his body, glowing in his hand was a fire ball. " Use that to early and there's a possible chance of you dieing. Fire doesn't affect me." the heartless said. " tsk, tsk... I don't really mind that. I'm doing my own way of work." he said, throwing the fire ball on to one of the buildings in the main. * * * * To be continued. Sorry it was short. And then again sorry for postponing. To break out the news, there will not be a new chapter next week, because school's approaching so yeah. Please comment if you'd like. Thankyou for reading:)
Nope. Fun actually, but I really wanted to go on the Behemoth I couldn't find it T_T. But the Bat I didn't enjoy...
....Getting tickled means alot to me...I try not to bump into anyone or have anyone touch me...it hurts* Runs in tent*
I'm tickilish...alot. Poke me anywhere and bam...
Went on the Behemoth...my sis said it was fast and fun...and all over I couldn't find it...atleast Sky Rider was enjoyable...