Hehe, thankyou everyone for the comments. I can see that there were suprised at the Tybic part. *snicker* Stay tuned for chapter 7 *thumbs up* I always want to say...I made a signature...and I'm proud of it.
Ooh sweet. I got my ears pierced when I was 2 or 1 but now they're close. Take good care of yer' ears.
It's good. Although you might want to break some more description, but that's up to you. Keep up the good work.
Well I don't play it as much now but. KH1: once. KHCOM (GBA): still working on ansem. KH2: three times. It takes me forever to play but it's worth it. I actually like taking my time through a game..yay for fighting heartless.
I'll be 17 in four more years or 3 1/2...
Sweetness! Thanks for the the scans.*thumbs up*
Well today is the new chapter. To tell the truth, I was lazy throughout typing this...I wasn't myself much. Anyways soon I'll be able to have more time on the comp...as soon as a I getmyself a laptop,solo. So, here's the new chapter, enjoy. Kingdom Hearts Returns to Earth. Chapter 6: Release of Power Mexony’s eye’s glowed. Seeing a character up close. Very exciting. “ Holy…†Rexmildd grinned. “ You two need help?†Roxas asked, brushing his fingers into his dirty blonde spiky hair. “ Um, we kind of already defeated the heartless.†Mexony pointed out. Roxas chuckled for a short time. “ Not necessarily.†Roxas said, throwing his keyblade out in the air like a paper place. Rexmildd and Mexony turned around, seeing the beast right behind them. Luckily, Roxas threw his keyblade out, stabbing the heartless’ chest. Both female’s eyes widened. “ Whoops.†Mexony scratched softly on her temple. Rexmildd laughed a little, seeming it was kind of funny that them two didn’t know what was going on. Roxas looked over his shoulder, he felt a breeze come onto his back, but from the three was standing- “ You feel that?†Roxas asked, his position in still. Mexony and Rexmildd shook their head. “ No.†Rexmildd narrowed her eyes. * * * * * * * * * * * * * * “ Well, certainly you have changed.†Saix said, poking his arm to the side. Tybic nodded with a smile. “ Got my own pirate ship, crew- never mind.†He lowered his head. “ What happened with your ‘crew’ ?†Saix asked, looking out in to the wide water ocean. “ They suddenly, disappeared. One moment we’re all riding the ship and then suddenly, everyone of us started to fade away in ashes of light.†Tybic said, crossing his arms, standing in front of the berserker. “W-Wait a minute! How’d did you fade away in ashes of light! You were here on this world…were you?†Saix cocked his head. Confusion was already brought up. “ Well… I thought I could go to the other worlds. Meet Jack Sparrow, become a pirate you know, follow my dreams. So I gripped on tightly to another character, fading along.†Tybic said. “ Do you even realize what you have done!?†Saix rubbed his nose in, furious. “ Yeah. I know what I’ve done. “ Tybic said. “ You interfered with other worlds! Human beings aren’t supposed to go to other worlds. It’s a rule, and you disobeyed that rule.†Saix pointed his index finger at Tybic. “ Listen, I only left for my reasons. You don’t have to…crash in. Beside’s even though the wisher wished this, that’s interfering In our world. Or planet I shall say, but- never mind. Thing’s are getting complicated.†Tybic said walking to the wheel. Saix shrugged and stepped down the wooden steps. “ This is like what Luxord said to me. Where ever we head off to sunset out keys will unleash a treasure.†Saix snickered. Tybic nodded. “ So, new weapons?†Saix asked, releasing his claymore out. “Yeah, new and sweet.†He said, with his hand sticking out, his weapon appeared. More shiny. “ How about we fight. For money. Gamble.†Saix said. “ Sure.†Tybic released out a freeze stick out, aiming for Saix. Saix cracked the ice in half. “ Just…try not to…hurt my ship.†* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * Zexion looked at Karla, wondering why she knew his name. “ I certainly didn’t tell you and I know that this is the first time we meet.†He said. Karla put her left hand onto her shoulder. She blushed with a chuckle and smile. “ I’ve seen you in the video game, Kingdom Hearts.†Karla perked up. Zexion nodded, he looked up at the sky, mixed. Sat there was a tiny shine of light. Karla looked up at the direction Zexion was looking at. “There’s a tiny light in the sky.†Said Karla, her eyes squinted from the bright sun that appeared, minutes ago. “ I can see that and I sense the light. Could be Kingdom Hearts or something else related.†Zexion said. “ Come on, let’s go.†Karla said, leaving Zexion behind on the path. He followed. “ So, you arrived here by fade of light?†Karla cocked her head, she stared in to Zexion’s eyes. “ Yes, I remember reading a very interesting book; The Study of elements. Suddenly, there was a sound of an earthquake outside the building. All members were curious, even I. We walked closer for the noise, but it kept changing it’s place. After walking for fifteen minutes, Axel noticed, that our bodies were fading in white ashes.†Zexion finished. “ And then, you arrive here?†Karla frowned a little. “Yes, everyone had thought that we would remain locked in our own world. But suddenly somebody must’ve wanted to have one more thrill.†* * * * * * * * * * * * * * “ Freeze!†Keath called out. A strike of blue silky ice came out, burning the flame down. “ You’re pretty good.†The unknown man said, releasing an energy of lightning. The lightning flowed across mid air, striking Keath on the back. “AH!†Keath felt the electricity shocking the back. The lightning was a huge sting of cuts, the light was shining in to Keath’s eyes. When the element finished it’s move, Keath was released. He fell flat on the front part of his body. Keath cringed, he felt a release of pain, sending out on his body. “ Painful, yes?†said the unknown, chuckling. Keath looked up, seeing the unknown man standing in front of him. He glared. “ No. That’s just…a light smack.†Keath struggled to stand up, his body was shaking. The unknown walked up to Keath, placed his to fingers, middle and index on his forehead. Then he smirked and gave him a push. Keath fell down, some more pain came. “ You don’t look okay, need a doctor?†he laughed. Keath was disgusted by the man, he raised his hand up, his palm facing north. “ Circle flame.†He said. A rapid circle of flames came around the man, slowly it was closing. “ This’ll keep your mouth shut.†He said standing up. His hands shook, he had bruises placed on his neck for reason: the lightning seemed to be attracted to his neck. It did real damage. The circle of flames came to a close, trapping the man in flames. Keath smirked, he felt a relief come off his back. He was gone, for now that is. “ He was tough, yet dumb. From the look’s of it, I don’t think he’ll return until he heals.†He rubbed his sore hand. “ Your wrong.†* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * Luke saw the look in his father's eyes. "Dad-" "What the heck was that!" his father was freaked out. He stared out to the spot where the heartless stood. " It was a heartless, dad." Luke said, looking away, digging his fingers in to his pockets. His father looked to his son. Why does he know about this!? And homecome Luke was carrying a over large knife? Questions went through his mind. " Where did you get all this information from. Luke, answer me." his father let out a soft sigh at the end of his words. From what he saw, things have changed. ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~~ ~ "So, heartless had appeared from last year? But I have no memory of it!" his father exclaimed, he stood up. " You have memories because they were taken away. People whom were not involved much have memories taken out. There was many destruction going on. You and mom were sucked in to darkness and kept in a cage until light reached out to the world once again." Luke said. Luke felt a breeze feeling in his eyes, his eyes werer stinging. He clenched his fists. " Dad, it was like the end of the world, no tomorrow. So many heartless' it's restarted again!" he pounded his fist. " Stay strong, Luke." his father placed his right hand firmly, on his shoulder. " I'm allowing you now. The only chance you'll have this time. I'm allowing you to fight, save people. After all, you were a hero before. You can be one again!" he smiled. Luke slowly smiled, his eyes wrinkled into bright light of happiness. "Thank you." * * * * * * * * * * * * " And what gives you the right to tell me!" Remoll yelled at Jorrell. Jorrell scoffed off at the troubled enemy. " Tsk,tsk. You know nothing. I already told you that covering yourself won't help at all! But since I'm kind enough to let you in on a tip. You might want to reflect it with Blizzard. It'll help." Remoll removed his arms from himself. He cursed Jorrell under his lips and then struck his hand out facing the ground. "Air sweep." he smiled. Remoll thought he was going to make the dodge, have Jorrell miss his opponent. "Well,you've been warned." Jorrell put his hands over his eyes, so the light won't sting his eyes. The lightning came over the Remoll, shocking him straight forward. "N-No!" he screamed out loud. The pain, it was hurting him. Jorrell kept his eyes covered, although he could vision the whole scene. Remoll tried to move but couldn't, the lightning kept him still. "Anytime now." Jorrell mumbled, he removed his hands away from his eyes when it hit him. The bright light that Jorrell had used entered his eyes. It shocked it's way in the eyes, electrifying the cords. Jorrell has his jaw dropped. There was no sound coming from his mouth, he was frozen. His whole body was asleep. IwishforKingdomHeartstoCometoEarth.Youwon'tdeafeatme.Mydreamcametrue!Whendarknesscrircles,light'llcomeshockingusallwithfear.You'renothingbutanimbecileyouareusless! The light stopped. Jorrell fell to his knees. Sweat was dripping down from his forehead, he was panting. "What..was that?" he asked himself. " It all came in a flash!" he gritted his teeth. Jorrell raised his head up, he saw Remoll. Blood stains on his cheeks and mouth. "Damn you. Your power is too powerful. I should've known." he began to disappear with his body shredding to the air. " I didn't know it was that powerful." he said to himself. * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * " I can fade away! Anytime, anywhere!" she teared up. Ginji looked at the palm of her left hand. Aswell she did to the right. "Soon my hands won't be in much use. Eventually they'll be weak and won't be in much use anymore." she had a deep thought in her mind. What was running was the sound of darkness taking over her. "Don't say that!" said a familiar voice. Ginji's eyes rolled over to the right. There she saw her, the red hair aqau-blue eye'd female. Kairi. " Kairi?" Ginji cocked her head, she wiped a dry tear off her cheek. " No matter where we had, light will be within us. Sure darkness can come over and rule our rights. But deep down we have a shell that holds the light." Kairi said, resting her hands in her pockets. " Light.." Ginji smirked. She laughed for a second. "You're right! I'm overreacting!" Ginji perked up. " Not overreacting, but thinking." Kairi giggled. Ginji nodded. She took Kairi's hand in hers. Her eyes glowed with shining light. " Thankyou, Kairi. I don't know why but you just bring some kind of light in everyone. Even Sora, not to say!" she snickered. Kairi slipped her hand away. Ginji looked down to her hand. She was holding a small bottle filled with purple liquid mixed with black ashphault. * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * The heartless' were suffering and yet, fading. Valerie's shield went away she jumped and cheered. Sora smiled and gave her a thumb's up. ~~ ~ ~ Eden's magic released, surrounding her. "What the!? It wasn't supposed to go on me!" she freaked out, her eyes popped. Eden felt a soft feeling when the magic landed on her skin and clothing. Eden began to fade away in the light, the heartless smirked. It came at Eden. "AH!" Eden closed her eyes, with her hand covering her head, making a x mark. But there was no pain. No claws digged on her. Eden looked up, she was surrounded in the place of unknown. ~~ ~~~ Valerie panted after defeating some more heartless. " Tired?" Sora asked, healing her cuts she recieved from the claw heartless. "Nope, just getting started." she smiled,"Ha!" she threw her weapon out, slashing another in half. After that heartless, there were no more. Valerie smiled but stopped the celebration. She saw a female standing, confused. "Eden?" she cocked her head. Valerie wasn't sure if she was just seeing things or if it was the real. * * * * To be continued. Sorry if the chapter was short. Well please comment if you'd like and I hope you liked it.
Kind of bothers me of Name talking to either Sora or Roxas. It was in the scene where Namine said "we'd meet again, like we promised." Was she talking to Sora or Roxas. Namine and Roxas promised eachother they'd meet again before Namine was taken away. Sora promised Namine that they would meet again before he went to sleep. ( I think) What are your thoughts? Anyone know who she was talking to? ( If there was already thread like this, please close this thread.)
Overall reading, it's pretty good. Sonic is a favourite show to me, still I watch it. Anyways- keep up the good work, I'm hoping to see more from you.
After recieving a new I'm reading, The Riddles Of Epsilon.
Hey *gives cookie*
Just 7 more peoples and I reach 100*thumbs up*
93 for me.
I will..if I knew your email *munches on cookie* *gives cookie*
Ok then...I'll add you. *clicks on addcontacts*
I would add you..but..I'm not sure if you'd accept or..something. *crunches on cookie*
...It's becoming alive now..
It's kind of alive I guess. Just talk to Ven only and a cousin....yeap everyone else seems to be offline. (The only they come on is at 5.)
Wow, we have a different time zone...yay.*thumbs up*
Nah, never saw you at a store, just a weird random stuff from me. over here it's 7:26.
