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I was thinking the place Phisoxa and the others go and investigate is either one of the seals that keeps Ryan sealed away in the dark castle or the dark castle itself.

If you want, she was meant to meey Alastr in the messhall and thats were she is heading.

Well maybe Yjuna could ask Mia about her past, noy exatly forgive but she could try and understand Mia.

Maybe Yjuna shuld just try talking to Mia, you know find out why mia is the way she is.

Well seeing as Yjuna could always try and befriend Mia.

Well seeing as Tokyo is the Asia tower they have the advantage, as I told you before the planet is divided between zones or districts. One district is a contienant. Her family would be a promoted family then. Mia sees Yjuna useing her past as an exuse compared to Alastor who seems like such a normal person. And Alastor had it alot more rough then Yjuna.

Well, there are two ways to be a noble branch, being promoted to nobility or being a branch of Royalty. Its up to you which one Yjuna's family is. Also, Mia is on the verge of kicking Yjuna's face in, and Mia is trained to take down super soldiers.

Uaually distant until they are eighteen then they can do what they want, have wives from the noble families or wipe out a family if they wish, they mostly don't but they can. The distantance is more from jealousy then anything, any noble branch could have been the royal family, but their not. Not all families are like this but most are.

The current leader is picked from his parents children, when he becomes leader his siblings instead have noble houses created for them instead. If the current line ends one of those houses, usually the stronger is promoted to the new royal family. The current leader has four children, Lunaria, Erik, Mercenia and Martaria.

Sure I will tell you when its more solid, right now I'm still figuring it out.

Oh I see, well let me know when you have a idea for sure who you want the father to be.

I was thinking because the baby is adopted she would be an aunt, I was actually thinking for a plot twist later that John Ribber would be the father, that was going to be the reason he was trying to recruit her. I have been thinking of this from the start but havn't done anything towards it yet.

I agree, I'm very cautious to were and who I send my stories to. To actually get them should be an honour.

It s not a place to put stories, just how to write them, its been a better teacher to me then any english teacher I had, exluding one teacher at school.

Its like a wiki, but its a wiki for writings, its really good writers like me and you. I could give you a link, but be warned, it is adictive. You can look up shows and terms, like cliches but fun, its hard to explain cause there is so much, but its easy to use.
http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/HomePage

When it started the things that were certain was Alastor & Mia, Mecha, War, Death, Breaking Steriotypes, a crapsack world and a bittersweet ending.

Love have you ever been to TV tropes?

When I started this series she and Alastor were the only two certain points, everything else was made around those two.

Not to mention the Federation were once Imperials, that probably dosen't help.

Also what do you think of Mia as a character? Both Rp and Novel?

She fails at the concept of friend or foe, seriously threatning to break someones arms while surrounded by Federation soldiers. I couldn't help but laugh.

Well she is still an enemy soldier, also does she have a death wish?