king_mickey rule

lets trip out.

Thanks. ^^

Yeah, it was a great little thing to add in there. I liked it.

I'm expecting something big to happen between Robin and his mom (maybe news that she's going deaf?) and I would love to see some action between him and his catalyst (using Robin's foresight to save one of his friends or something). Maybe getting to dig deeper into who he was before. And it's no problem. I'm glad that I can help with something so awesome.

The characters are great. It wasn't funny (except for the classroom scene) but that's because it was dealing with the more important details of the story. It doesn't always have to be funny, just remember that.

It's unique and I didn't see it coming. Although I was wondering why it was called 'The Catalyst' in the first place. XD

No, the story's great. Also i'm just glad that the love interest didn't drag on. I mean they both love each other and it doesn't have to go on for twenty-five chapters before one of them dies...

I read it. It's great. I didn't expect anything like this but it makes sense and I can't wait for chapter 3!

Well let me see. I'm gonna read it now.

True, it may get boring but to play KH you've gotta get through Destiny Islands, right? :D

Yeahness! I'll read it shortly.

Well hey, it's not too late. :3 Maximum Ride is a fun one to read. And Percy Jackson and the Olympians. Trust me, they'll help you out with your story writing ten-fold.

True, true... very true... to be honest my mom only wanted to see it because of Russel Crowe. I didn't even want to but now i'm starting to think that it was worth it... XD

Wow... you work fast. And yeah but the one scene with the arrow through his neck kinda freaked me out a bit. I mean we get it already, he's an amazing archer. You don't have to go all graphic violence overload on us...

That's the one. And yeah it is some good inspiration.

Yeah, i've been able to see that already. Good thing I saw the movie... well I was forced to go see it but still. :D

Well, this just builds my anticipation. I hope your inspiration doesn't die on you anytime soon because this could be a great thing for a lot of people.

Well, i'm glad I could help.

I just hope you don't confuse us with pointless side-stories and twenty billion new details that answer one question only to bring up twenty more.

Well maybe we could collaborate on some things. I mean what did you have in mind for the beginning of the next chapter? You could put some good stuff in there but you can't have it be too crazy. I have a feeling it'll make him act more like Robin Hood or let him walk in his footsteps but this is just my theory.

You could always do collaborations with other people or just return to the source material (in this case the Robin Hood stories) to try and get some ideas/inspiration there.

You're pretty good though. I remember my first story. It was a Neku and Shiki fanfic and people responded pretty well to it. Anyway keep up the good work! :)