ShibuyaGato

Yeah I know, but I like some funny parts here and there haha :D. I tried to make some funny moments in the story, I hope I managed to do that :). What are your expectations for the next chapter if I may ask in terms of story? (sorry bout all the questions but yeah, me likes feedback haha xD).

Well, now you have the answer why the story's called like that ;D. Although I'm wondering, the first chapter was funny in most parts, was the 2nd chapter also funny or not and do you like the characters that are in the story? n.n

Yup, I didn't want that. Even now it's a little long but this part was kinda necessary. What do you think about the 'plottwist' a.k.a. the ending of the 2nd chapter?

You think it's good? Thanks n.n. So you don't have a problem with the story or something?

Yup very true :D. I hope the 2nd chapter is good

Haha, I get what you mean. Technically, this is all one big conversation or something like that. I don't have much to talk about....okay, well, I guess I can let you in on something. I like this girl at my church. We were worshiping on Sunday, and I saw her, and there was something about the way she worshiped that seemed sensere and real. Right then, it was like God was telling me to ask her out. There's only one issue: Her parents are youth pastors. XD I haven't done anything to make me seem like a bad kid, but that's kind of scary in its own sense. She's a really cool person though.

Haha xD. I'm almost done with the second chapter, I only have to write the climax now. The second chapter is more focused on the characters though, I hope it isn't too boring at start but they need some personality right n.n

Yeah, I remember that scene, I thought it was pretty cool actually haha good riddance though, that guy was a real *******.

Yeah, so true and it's a very good movie, Russel's acting is marvelous in that movie. Already writting one page of new material now :p

Hehe well, I saw the most recent Robin Hood movie last weekend (with Russel Crowe) and well, that probably will be the inspiration I needed to write this story :p. Not that the story will be anything like that, but it made me think :D

Hehe thanks n.n. And you can be sure to find alot of subtle hints to the original robin hood story, similiar names and characteristics will appear :D

:why?: *hugs*

It's not about being funny. It's about feeling the lol-ability of the picture. You don't make 'em, you just place 'em.

Hehe well, not planning to do a 'Nomura' to you guys xD. But I AM gonna give you some new details next chapter and this should somewhat point out how the story will unfold later on and I will clarify why for example Robin Hood was that good at shooting bow and arrow.

Even in the first chapter there are alot of hints to the story element I'll put in next cause that already thought of since the very beginning n.n

well somtimes okay

Well, I don't really like giving to much details away just yet but I can say it isn't the last that you heard of the robin hood story but most of the robin hood elements are kinda little details, not really relevant to the story, but I can say to you that there WILL be elements of the robin hood story that will be kinda relevant to the story. I have a big (not talking about the lenght but the story itself) story in mind so be sure to look forward to that (haha I sound like Nomura xD).

Anyways, I'm gonna write a bit further on it since a lot of ideas are coming in right now haha xD

OMG!!!!!! that is so funny

yah i guess so :)

Thanks, I'll try to make it a good story :). I don't know when the next chapter will be posted because I still have to think some things through but I'll be sure to keep you updated when I post the next one. Do you have some kind of advice for me on how to make this a good story or like things I could use to make the writing style more intense or something? :D

oh i get it lol

well i am not.guess not very many kids at school are sick for me