DarKnight36

You guys have been working on that for a while huh? How's that coming along?

Awesome... Tired... Band is killing me with all the practices XD

Well you probably had things to do so its alright... I never stay on for long anyway XD

It looks awesome... and goth... O.o

good job...

you suck.....

reply to what i said below

Really? I'm on right now... XD

also, whats Scourges real name?

I know.
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dk
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pretty good i guess lol how 'bout you?

You still online?

Probably try and rewrite it, make it make sence, then post it here or something.

HE REVIVED IT WOOOOOOT!!! xD my life....has begun a new...haha jk but it's still pretty cool! xD

Agreed. Oh! In my last message i put, "I is" I know that's improper grammer. It's just the way i talk in Reality. I think it's funny! I like to think of myself a good RPer and i wont be writing improper stuff like that...unless it's OOC haha.

Ah sweet! I is kinda excited! I haven't RP'd in...well since the Enigmatic Knights! aaah...good times in that RP let me tell you lol! :D

Nice! Well good luck with that! xD

holy crap! Sounds...interesting haha! xD. What do you do for 2 years? Or do you not know?

Alright shweet. What "mission" do you speak of?

Shweet! I'll try and Find it! Thanks! Oh and another thing. When will the next RP be up? :)

Dk, look, I hate to be blunt, but your ending with his love actually being alive is just... well, stupid, childish. And I know it has to be good, thats what its hinging on. Thats obvious enough, right? Now, when coming up with the story you say is completely my piece of work, I thought, what made the first half of the UO rp good? (Because I can tell you right now it wasn't the story). It was the moments, Dk. We had a look of moments that were just fantastic to read. Then it was just a question of inserting the moments into a tangible plot. I did that, and while you feel its not the best, it is the best we have.

Now, I too have sent things for other people to examine, and while they were never crazy about the beginning up until Ceegum they did enjoy the rest. And then I sent them yours, which these people basically said was too confusing (the ending that is, and also the Mortlock Bonebrake thing, ;)). I understand what your trying to do with the ending Dk, you've explained it as well as you can.

But in the end, its Darxess finding out that the love of his life wasn't really killed but actually tricked into joining the Knights, and then she happens to go on the exact same planet twenty years later, as a Knight, where Darxess and Roka end up fighting, and she then gets called out to fight, finds Darxess, they kill Roka, and they live happily ever after.

Mine might not be the best, but its sure as hell better than that. Now, you say mine has no ending, and, in the tradition writing class sense I agree, its not a solid ending and thats the point. Its open, its optional, it allows the mind to linger, its not a shut case. Its a situation where they're really is no good option to take, and so they take none. Its interesting because the reader and anybody in the world who understands how stories are told expect it to be a solid ending. They expect the villain to die (whoever the villain may be), they expect some rigid finalization.

Also, you have to realize that Roka and Darxess are also not the key figures of the book, Wing and the idiots he picks up on the way are, and the book is with them most of the time, not Darxess in chains. Why? Because its not interesting enough, it gives us a nice moral bonus at the end but other than that its not really that in depth.

I'm sorry you feel that I'm excluding your proposals, especially since this is a collaborative effort. I'm trying to push for my ideas, not just call you unfair. You should push for yours if you truly feel they are important to the story, not just say I'm unfair because I push for my ideas more readily.

Man, this thing is long. But yeah, another thing is that while plot is important, writing is probably even more crucial. I have been furiously improving my writing skills lately, and, the things I've been writing (mainly the chapters we basically agree on) are going pretty good. And we all know what a fantastic writer you are.

So yeah man. I know we yell at each other a lot but thats how it goes. Remember, I am very reliant on you and the rest of the gang. I cannot create a book on my own. Peace.