Comments on Profile Post by Loxare

Good start so far. What kind of prosthetics? Kind of FMA? And how did he get into Hunting?

Cybernetics, specifically a pair of older model combat ones.

I'm still working on him. I'm thinking he got into hunting because he just wants to help people. He likes to style himself as knight. He's also not exactly the sharpest tool in the shed.

All good things. Wait, so kind of Ruby without tactics and strategy?

He can do tactics, just not plan them ahead of time. He's a sort of an "in the moment" planner and makes it up as he goes.

Ah, makes sense.

He's also partners with Jing.

That only makes sense. Since Ebon and Irvin are probably partnered.

Yep. Imagine, a nice, chivalrous, not all to bright, knight wannabe and the gangster with a massive ego. CAN SOME SAY SHENANIGANS?!

SO MANY SHENANIGANS!!!

Jing is honestly my favorite of the four.

I can see why. Since she's the only girl, does she kick butt and keep the boys in line? Also, are you keeping away from any and all romance?

Well her arrogance has to come from somewhere, but Ebon is the one who keeps everyone in line. He's the most level-headed of the group.

Probably no romances with Jing and other characters. I can't exactly see her making any sort of romantic attachments beyond anything physical.

Neato. Anything else interesting?

Irvin's a dandy.

Those are always fun. Does he have a hat and everything? Actually, what do they look like?

His main attire doesn't have a hat, he does however own a large amount of hats.

I'm still working on their appearances.

He needs a hat.

Like what?

Dunno. Top hat. Pin hat. Bowler hat. Fedora hat.

He'll have s fedora in his casual wear!

Unofficial Irvin Theme!

Maybe he can have a battle hat that turns into a shield. Actually, have you even read Looking Glass Wars? Do so. Hatter kicks butt with his transforming top hat.

I've already have a weapon for him.

And no room for a at that transforms into a shield? Or a hat that transforms into an anything?

No, sorry. He has a sniper rifle that turns into an assault rifle.

Hat that turns into scope? Hat that turns into emergency close range weapon. Hat that just looks darn awesome.

New chapter of my fic by the way.

Just awesome looking hats. Irvin's a clothes man. And a ladies man.

Cool.

Ok, but think about it.

Also, is Bezhevyy the leader? Because someone with no planning is an interesting leader choice.

Bezhevyy is the leader.

Cool. How does that work out for him?

Pretty well. He gets along with all the members of his team (especially Irvin) and he's quick on his feet so his improved plans typically go well.

That's good to hear. And he's good with taking suggestions when a long range plan is needed? Also, you never said what all their weapons were. Except Irvin. But I still think he needs a hat.

Yes. Especially from Jing who he made second in command.

Well Bezhevyy has two swords that can turn into tonfas and be combined into long bow. Ebon has two different weapons, first he has a pair of gauntlets that can use dust from the palms and the second is a collapsible Sex Harmony Spear. Jing has a guandao that can turn into a flamethrower.

A collapsible what Harmony Spear? Also, "use dust from the palms" like, shooting fire or the lighting gloves in Korra or what?

****! SIX IS WHAT I MEANT! WHY DIDN'T I CATCH THTA?! OH! MY! GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD!

Sort of. It has a limited range.

*posting again so I don't have to see my mistake anymore*

Haha. I laugh at you. And screenshot the thing.

Ok, but what does it look like when it does things? Like, does his hand get encased in fire or what?

>:C

When the gauntlets use dust they manifest in the palms of his hands with a foot long range.

:D

As a short sword? A beam? A cloud of smoke? What are we talking here?

*bites your head* >:

More like a short ranged flamethrower (or icethrower. Or electricitythrower. Or whatever kind of Dust.)

No BIU. My head is not tasty.

Neato.

*noms* Your brains will be.

Yep.

But my skull is solid. You will break your teeth before you get in there.

If I gnaw on it enough it'll get weaker.

So any more questions?

It's self-healing.

Not particularly.

You can't make up new powers! That's cheating! D:

It's not new, it was there. You just never asked.

HAX! I call HAX!

Nope. Self-healing skull. Always had that.

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