Comments on Profile Post by Technic☆Kitty

Oh--but wouldn't it not be harder to understand if I put in: The Doctor thought or did I already do that? I can't remember. CX

No I don't recall any predirection to the statement. I would suggest doing that even with the quotes. I'm simply trying to say that it would make the dialogue easier to see, and adding things like "The Doctor thought," would also help. It's your story and I don't want to tell you how to write it, i'm just giving some friendly constructive criticism.

Criticism would make my writing better--that's what I believe, so I'll take them. :3

Cool, i'll be looking forward to your future updates ^^

Yeah. :D I'll dedicate this story to Nights.

You know what? I like this one a whole lot better.

Cool, and you like what one better?

The story. I'm editing it a bit and it sounds pretty good. I'll post it later.

Cool ^^

Yeah. :D