Jayn

Finished my lines:
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=66X3IA5I

Just tell me if anything needs to be improved or re-sent.

But Jayn, my love... You are the only thing that makes mine eyes shine bright, but not as bright as your radiant beauty~

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Only for you Jayn~

O, how much more doth beauty beauteous seem
By that sweet ornament which truth doth give.
The rose looks fair, but fairer we it deem
For that sweet odour which doth in it live.
The canker-blooms have full as deep a dye
As the perfumed tincture of the roses,
Hang on such thorns and play as wantonly
When summer's breath their masked buds discloses:
But, for their virtue only is their show,
They live unwoo'd and unrespected fade,
Die to themselves. Sweet roses do not so;
Of their sweet deaths are sweetest odours made:
And so of you, beauteous and lovely youth,
When that shall fade, my verse distills your truth.

Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
Thou art more lovely and more temperate:
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
And summer's lease hath all too short a date:
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
And often is his gold complexion dimm'd;
And every fair from fair sometime declines,
By chance or nature's changing course untrimm'd;
But thy eternal summer shall not fade
Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest;
Nor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade,
When in eternal lines to time thou growest:
So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this and this gives life to thee.

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Just so I need these are appropriate timing and volumes, I'm attaching 2 lines for you to check.
If they are fine, I'll send the rest maybe tomorrow or the day after.
If not, I'll redo them.

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=MD81CBFZ